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That's pretty much what I had in mind with the clothes, so that's great. On the job, he probably just wears overalls like everyone else.

Glad you like him.

Ty for pointing out the missing colour code. Don't think I missed anything in the rules, but hard to be sure, since well, you know, the nature of missing stuff.

Thank you. ^_^

Ah, sorry, he's from England. I'll try to remember to go back and find a place to edit that in later.

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I’ll post a CS by Saturday!
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Ah the midlands, where I was born.
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@Obscene Symphony Gimme those honest reviews please! I crave them!

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@Achronum Not gonna lie for a second there I thought I'd have to yell at you for using an IRL FC but then it was a painting and it's so pretty!

I love him! I assume he was born and raised in New York? Also, and this is probably just me not understanding music school, how long was his school career? Was it a 3-year major? If not, he might be a touch young to have already completed a 4-year program. Then again, you do get those students who were born late and end up being younger than everyone, so maybe it works? It's not a deal breaker or anything, but I'd like to know how that timeline fits together. Otherwise it looks great!
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@Obscene Symphony Isn't it such a pretty painting!

I adjusted his age because I can't do math but yes, he was born raised in New York. I mentioned it in the other section but I added the raised part for clarification!
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@Achronum Alright, looks great! Thank you for clarifying ^_^ It's a great sheet, I can tell a lot of love went into it. Good way to incorporate the Lost too, and Jacob really does come off as desperate to avoid that fate. Very depressing! Very nice!
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Oh, just to make sure I've made myself clear, your character does not need to know any English. You'll have access to universal translators at the event, so cross-language communicating won't be an issue. So if it doesn't make sense for your character to know English, just say they don't!
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@Hero Looks good! Just a couple things. Where does he live? (Where did he grow up, if it's not the same place?) How long has he been a police officer? (I assume that's what you mean when you say "officer"?) Is he a beat cop or is he administrative?
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@LadyAnnaLeeVery interesting! I do have some questions.

1. Right off the bat, and this is mostly just a technicality, I'm worried about Ashe's weight. For a height of 5'11, very tall for a female, Ashe is really straddling the underweight mark. At that sort of BMI, Ashe would not have anywhere near the energy to compete in Gamer's Nightmare as you've described it. If they're meant to be physically fit you'll want to up that weight a good amount; I'd recommend something like 160. Either that or make them about 6 inches shorter for a weight of 135.

(I know that seems like nitpicking, but I'm underweight myself and it sucks so I like to keep an eye on weights, lol)

2. I'm slightly confused about Ashe's personality. They come across as a bit contradictory; sometimes reclusive, sometimes not. Can you shed some light on that? Also, I'm a little confused about this splash of self hatred at the end of the bio. Where did that come from?

3. How/when did Ashe get into Gamer's Nightmare? I'm interested in the transition from passionate dancer to hardcore pro gamer. Also, how does she make her money? Twitch donations? Corporate sponsorships?

4. Oh boy, that's a rough story about poor Gregory. Was Navy a flight risk before she Reunited? The soul bond can make you do some crazy things, but up and abandoning your baby (not to mention locking it alone in your house, presumably to die) is pretty extreme. She would have needed to have that sinister side somewhere in her before Reuniting to stoop that low. Is that the case?

5. Where did Ashe grow up? Do they live in the same place now?

6. Maybe the heat tonight melted my brain, but how exactly does Ashe feel about this trip? Still unenthusiastic, or coming around to the idea?
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1. I've fix their weight. I've also dropped their height.

2a. If given the choice between staying home or going out Ashe will choose to stay home. If they have to go out they will be all smiles and laughter. They'll still be on the side lines, but they aren't going to be in a corner moping or complaining about going out. When their social battery runs out they just go home without bothering anyone. They'll stay out all night dancing if they get the chance. They only stay an hour at dinner parties or things like frat parties.

2b. I never said anything about Ashe hating themselves. I said they wouldn't wish themselves on another person. There is a difference and I will stand by that. Just because they like themselves doesn't mean they think they would make a good partner. They like everything to be just right to the point of perfectionism, don't want kids, and should a depressive episode strike it's not pretty at all. Ashe is self-confident enough to try and become a better person, but doesn't see why they should subject themselves to other person while on their journey.


3. That is a very good question. I hadn't thought about it. A friend introduced them to it. Ashe likes it because they can use their dancing skill It's a subscriber based game. The more people that watch your channel the more you get paid. It's not much. The real money is in playing and winning PvP matches.. Watchers will place bets on who is going to win, and if you win you get a percentage of the bets. Plus there is prize money. Ashe also makes more money when Noble_Dancer appears in ads both for Gamer's Nightmare and other product ads. Noble_Dancer is extremely popular, because they way they move is so unique. It's not just one style of dance, and watchers like trying to figure out what style they are going to use next.

4. It wasn't Navy. It was Margret. Navy was so desperate not to lose her soulmate once she had them that it was easy for Margret to convince Navy to leave. Margret thought they were leaving Ashe to die. Navy had complete faith that Gregory would break the window. Margret is an ex-drug lord, and needed to run from people tracking her down. Ashe doesn't know this. That's why it's not in the bio. I can put it in the bio if you would like.

5. Some city on the south coast of the United States. They have been there their whole lives in the same penthouse apartment with their dad. I'm not too sure what city. Will that be okay? I just know Ashe grew up going to the beach often.

6. They are excited for the chance to visit someplace new. They aren't really going to Reunite. Ashe just wants a chance to explore the mountains, which they have never even seen before, and the rest of where they are going to be. They are also excited about their first plane ride.

I hope this answers your questions. If it doesn't just let me know and I will be happy to try and clarify.
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I think I'm actually just gonna give the RP a miss after all, definitely interested to see how it goes though :)
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@blubirb Oooh, very nice! I assume he just finished his first year of his master's study? Also, what's the name of his parents' fashion brand? Finally, what does he think of the letter and the trip? What's the thing that pushed him to pursue his soulmate despite resenting being Fragmented?

I don't really have much else to say XD Well done! I really like him!
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@lunera That's no problem ^_^ I hope to see you lurking!
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@LadyAnnaLee Thank you for your answers!

Was there a reason that Navy didn't shoot off a text to Greg to pick Ashe up instead of letting him find them? After all, it would be hard to predict when he'd break that window, and babies can't go without food for very long. You don't have to put this information in your bio, it's just my curiosity.

I'll admit I don't know a ton about the geography of the southern States, haha. I suppose I don't need a specific city, but knowing the state at least would help, if you don't mind.

I suppose I have to ask, if Ashe would rather stay home than go out, then why dance the night away? Why not just dance at home, where they don't need to maneuver throngs of drunk people at dance clubs?
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Margret was in a rush. She knew Navy would try to call Gregory. It took Gregory two days to find where she had hiden the phones in an air vent. Margret is ... not a nice person, devoted to Navy, but that's just about it.

Corpus Christi Texas

Because they like to show off and dancing the one thing they're good at. If I said Ashe was an exrroverted introvert would that help?
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Name: Valeryia -(Always goes by Lera)

Age: 21

Gender: Female

Sexuality: Bi

Appearance: Lera doesn't have too much of her original human body left with her, with her right arm (Just mirror the picture) and both legs being cybernetic in nature. Her right arm is made with a rough and ready nature to it, good enough to be of service and make her life comfortable, but nothing beyond that. Her legs are of a similar nature, although they are slightly mismatched in design, with the left being smoother than the more angled nature of the right.

The rest of her body is left with the scars of the conflict too, with many old cuts or faded burns showing through the muscles on her rather pale skin. Her hair is mess of faded auburn strands, which she allows to just do whatever it wants. Cold brown eyes.
Height: 5'11 "
Weight: 172lbs

Personality: Scarred would be an easy way of describing Valeryia, the girl having gone through so much for her age. She has a rather sour outlook on life, seeing the worst out of most possible situations, yet despite this she is determined to keep on living pretty much fueled by spite.

She’s become twitchy and nervous and tends to place herself on the edge of any room she enters, only really feeling safe if she’s got solid ground against back. She can be extremely slow to trust, especially in many situations where there isn’t a clear-cut business deal and she can’t understand someone's motives. In fact she has a general trouble in understanding others, never really having grasped the subtleties which go into a lot of that in her time serving as a young soldier.

Lera can be extremely possessive sometimes, often baulking at the idea of letting anyone touch her things, even if there’s not much to protect. However when it comes to decision making she will often defer to whatever higher authority there is for her set of “orders”. Having spent so much of her life operating strictly on commands she now finds herself in an almost need for a structure to properly exist for her to function.

Biography: Valeryia grew up in eastern Ukraine, during the Donbass conflict with her parents serving as stringent separatists. Extremely early in her life, around the age of 3 the house they were living in was struck by mortar fire, severely disabling her. Afterwards she was found by more pro-sepratist militants and only saved and patched up on the persuasion of her parents, being given cybernetic limbs to account for her lost ones.

After a while of being trained with weapons till she was around 10 in a fight her parents were killed. In a spur of the moment desire for revenge she decided to enlist in sepratist paramilitary forces. There she served alongside other young soldiers for the next seven years, dancing with death several times, although rarely engaging in direct firefights with government soldiers.

During that time the others with her formed a relatively tight bond, one which came to an end when a frag grenade took out many of her comrades. - This mentally was the final straw of the conflict for her. She'd managed to get no revenge and only opened herself to horrors on a daily basis. Now the remaining people she cared about were gone too.

In the end she was pulled from the rubble after a ceasefire by workers from an international organization and taken away from the conflict to germany. It was during this time that she actually got a rudimentary education, the workers wanting to try and ensure that after she left their refugee camp she could have a chance at achieving as normal a life as she could.

Four years later and she has finally begun training as an engineer, mainly as a form of rehabilitation as a former solider to help her war-torn homeland. Although she is hoping to become experienced enough to work with cybernetics, especially in repair for people like herself.

Other: ★ code is D2691E

In her years of active service she has 5 confirmed kills and 12 unconfirmed, she only saw the face of one of the people she killed but their face still haunts her to this day. She occasionally tries to make up stories about him to make herself feel better, it never works.

Despite nights with almost constant bad sleep, she refuses to take drugs to make herself feel better.

Will bandage her cybernetic limbs up/ put a plaster on them when she scuffs them.

Doesn't know she's a fragmented, the little differences with her compared to those around her being chalked up to post combat trauma.

Likes to keep her hair long and messy after years of having to crop it very short.
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