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Prelude


The Silvestia-Anavia War

Originating from its namesake capital Arsodus on the homeworld Paradicial, the Arsodian Empire was originally a federation of Paradicial's collective population. However, over the first century of the Arsodian Era, the Empire grew rapidly as it took to the stars. From one planet to another, colonising each star system and the next, the Arsodian Empire dominated the systems in the galaxy of Silvestia. As it explored the stellar frontier, the empire grew in its belief that it was a supreme force to be reckoned with.

This hubris took full root almost six centuries since the formation of the empire, when the first xenos were encountered in the neighboring galaxy of Anavia. When the Arsodian Empire encountered the Terran Republic, the current emperor, Arcturus Arsodian, considered the stellar nation to be notably smaller in dominion to that of the empire. Pairing that with their animal-like appearance, it was a foregone conclusion that the terrans were beneath humans. To that end, Emperor Arcturus submitted his demand for the republic to submit itself as a vassal to the empire.

The terrans refused. After all, they did not form a republic as their galactic government, just to be sworn in service to a power-hungry monarch. Seeing that they would not submit, Arcturus reflected and showed understanding for their sovereign independence. Instead, trade agreements were reached between the two powers, and for a time there was prosperity to be found. However, this amiable arrangement was violated, and the emperor's feint was revealed for what it was; despicable treachery.

He used the trade agreement to determine what planet served as a nexus for the republic's economy. And on the next shipment to that world, he ordered cataclysm bombs to be planted in the cargo. That world was Juvia VII, and in a sudden act of terror, the inhabitants of Juvia were obliterated by engineered earthquakes that unleashed fissures of fire. Barely a portion of the population survived. This was the beginning of the Silvestia-Anavia War.
Story

The year is 573 Arsodian Era (AE), two years since the beginning of the Silvestia-Anavia War. The Arsodian Empire of Man is embroiled still in its conflict with the xenos of the Terran Republic, with both sides engaged on all fronts over key star systems between the Silvestian and Anavian galaxies. It was believed that with their superior numbers and military command that the Arsodian Empire's Silver Legions would emerge victorious. But the battles rage on, with no end in sight.

Moreover, the stalemate has caused bursts of infighting among the Emperor's Silver Legions. The 7th Legion, under command of general Vincent Roa, has defected from the empire to become their own independent military faction. Using a Terran BlackOPs research complex as a hideout, general Roa has made his intent clear in a manifesto that the Emperor is weak, and only under Roa's command will the legions find victory. Rhetoric or not, there are signs of dissent among the higher ranks, and the Emperor has thin patience for treachery.

But all the other legions are engaged with the Terran armies currently, and no lost ground can be afforded. As a result, an Imperial Bounty has been placed on Vincent Roa; a rich reward of 200,000 credits for any who bring him in, alive. And, bonus payments for badges of the 7th Legion. It is with hope that, although the basest creatures of Arsodian society was to be trusted, Roa will be returned to face justice, and to secure the sensitive military intelligence from falling into Terran hands.

Unfortunately, the Emperor's concerns have not escaped the notice of the Terrans, as they in turn place their own bounty of equal reward, and hope, contrary to the Emperor's own, that Vincent Roa's intelligence will be in their possession and in turn victory over the Arsodian people.

Ironically, the thing both sides have in common are bounty hunters; the scum of the systems, whose moral compasses are only defined by the money lining their pockets. And what doesn't inspire cutthroat fanaticism than a really good payday? Because if you can count on a bounty hunter to be anything, you can count on them to understand that a reward is best enjoyed undivided.
Rules

1) Behave politely! If things get ugly with one another, take it to PMs, or, better yet, consult with me.
2) Write well! You don't have to be the best, you should just want to be better. Proper grammar and spelling, but if you make mistakes, you can just edit and we move on.
3) Have fun! Listen, if I have to explain this 'rule' to you, there's something wrong here.

Furthermore, this is a Casual-Advanced roleplay. Which means-- Well, honestly, it means I don't expect any more of you than what I expect from myself when I roleplay.
If you can manage 1-2 paragraphs that are 3-5 lines long, then that's fine. What's not okay is fluffing up posts with paragraphs full of extracurricular information; stuff we don't need to know or are not relevant to us (eg: your character's tragic life story), which brings me to my next point.
Please don't bring shit-edgy anime tropes into this roleplay. I had it to my eyes in a past roleplay with a character having a mental breakdown/flashback marathon next to me for no reason when I just wanted to enjoy my coffee (honestly, I just glazed over it). Thinking about past sadness is fine, just don't dedicate more than a paragraph to it.
But moreover, focus on what needs to be posted. Action over detail. If someone has already described something, don't repeat it in your post; notice it and just focus on your character's reaction. Essentially, just think about others you're roleplaying with when you write, yeah?
Races & Genetics



Character Sheet

Name: What’s your name?
Age: How old are you?
Race: What are you?
Genetics: What are you classified as? (Coordinators and innovators for humans, modtypes and newtypes for terrans as equivalents)
Appearance: Describe what you look like.

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Important items: Do you have any possessions that are important to you?
Weapons: What weapons are you carrying?
Physical Abilities: State your capabilities.
Psionic Powers: Do you have any psionic powers? If so, describe what you can do.

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Personality: How would you describe yourself, what makes you who you are, mentally and emotionally?
Background: Briefly tell us your story up to this point.
Roleplay Sample: We'll just need some verification. (1 - 3 paragraphs of you roleplaying this character)
Theme Song: Got a song you like? (optional)

Summary

Too long, didn't read? Shame on you, but anyways:
Basically, inter-galactic war, general defecto-rebellio, emperor mad, bounty posted, but also enemy furries = detecto-dissatisfacto so post their own bounty. So now, bounty hunters from both sides, humans and terrans, searching for general defecto.
Oh, and you guys are the bounty hunters.
And you may or may not ally with each other.
But if you all ally together I'll be mildly surprised. I guess.

Any other questions, shoot! Otherwise, feel free to apply!
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So I'm gonna sound like a bit of an asshole here... But you realize Terra is the Latin word for Earth, right? Calling an inter-stellar species Terrans makes no sense. It would be the humans that should be called Terrans.

I also had difficulties following the outlined plot, since you bombard us with names in the first few sentences without really setting up who or what they are. Might be a good idea to make a small section before the plot outlining who the factions are and what their goals are. Unless this is base on a franchise or something and I just missed that, in which case it probably makes sense to the fans.

And one final note, coming from a graphic designer, your signature text could really use some contrasting outline. Yellow on a white background isnt the easiest on the eyes.

No personal offense meant of course, just some constructive criticism!
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Lit, will add more details. And yeah, but as far as I've considered, Latin isn't really a thing so I didn't think it'd factor into it.

And cheers, I'll adjust it.
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I have to back Clever bird in the case againts the xenos being called Terrans and coming from something called the Terran Republic as that is literally the human race in Starcraft, not that you cant take names from games, but having a xeno race be Terran and not something like Zerg (still from SC but I would have allowed it) is just a little weird. Please dont take it the wrong way
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I have to back Clever bird in the case againts the xenos being called Terrans and coming from something called the Terran Republic as that is literally the human race in Starcraft, not that you cant take names from games, but having a xeno race be Terran and not something like Zerg (still from SC but I would have allowed it) is just a little weird. Please dont take it the wrong way


Okay, I'll humour you. So am I supposed to also change 'bounty hunters' and call them 'morally bankrupt people finders' because bounty hunters is literally a profession in Star Wars? I'll confess, I'm being a little lazy in not coming up with a big alien name for these xenos. But I wanted to have human and terran feel remotely parallel, even if anything else physically about them are different.

Fine, it is weird. But I don't want to change it because I have decided on it for a reason, and I'll stick by it.
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If you read what i said you would have seen I have no problem
With names from games but when the names are backwards it becomes weird especially when Terra is a real thing in our world. For example it would be super weird if you had a xeno race called earthlings which is technically what you have here cuz Terra = Earth and Terrans = earth inhabitants a.k.a earthlings aka humans
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If you read what i said you would have seen I have no problem
With names from games but when the names are backwards it becomes weird especially when Terra is a real thing in our world. For example it would be super weird if you had a xeno race called earthlings which is technically what you have here cuz Terra = Earth and Terrans = earth inhabitants a.k.a earthlings aka humans


Again, thank you for your input. I'm not changing it.

If you're not here to join, please don't persist here.
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I also realized after I'd written it that my rp sample was set in a bar type setting too, didn't read yours until after I did mine... XD

I was tempted to change it but I like it so I didn't.
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Reserving my spot here. Character sheet coming today!


It'll be good to have you here. :)
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Name: Feraî Amkar
Age: 31 earth years
Race: Netixel - A smaller humanoid with wide feathered wings, four horns and a griffin like tail. The feet are clawed like that of a dragonian/dragonborn(D&D) and their hands are three fingered one thumbed, equipped with sharp claws. Their face has a line of feathers lining the eyes (on the cheekbones) and on the nose ridge, fading in to the hair. Gray-skinned, usually very dark and in some cases black and yellow speckles on the face and horns.
Genetics: Natural - She did go through 3 treatments, which enhanced her capabilities during a rage. However she's not fully a newtype.
Appearance: Feraî is a small being. Her skin is brighter than that of the common Netixel,a fair ashy gray, and her eyes are a bright-nearly white yellow color. Her wings are a specklede bright gray- to darker gray color, as well as her tail-feathers. And her facial feathers are only slightly darker than her skin-tone. Her hair is tied back in to dreads, and her horns are long, however the right main one is broken. Her lean body has been marred in her short time of life and she has many scars, burns and marks from a troubled past. She carries herself with pride, and while she doesnt have tattoos, the brilliant golden speckles on her horns, face,hands and tail-tip make her a notable figure. Ominous yet vibrant.

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Important items: A necklace - A tied ring with the engraving "Grievance lost", given to her by a former lover and fiancé.
An adorned dagger - Green sapphire pommel and black blade with silver markings of smithing. The hilt wrapped in purple stained leather.
Weapons: The adorned dagger held on a leg strap, two laser pistols by her waist through chest holsters, one sword by her hip belt, and one plasmasphere(extendable) (her favourite melee tool) and a long distance sniper-rifle both attached to a back-strap.
Physical Abilities: Agile, Swift, yet still able to take a beating. She has high endurance and nimbleness. She can see in the dark, yet her weakness lies in daylight as her sensitive eyes take on too much light and in her muteness.
Her silence is golden, but also a blade to her life, as deals seldom are brokered with those unable to communicate clearly.
Feraî’s incredible tolerance for pain and her ability to stay cool in heated situations makes her the optimal Assassin. However, her temper, once aggravated is what leads her to get in to sticky situations.

Psionic Powers: No psionic powers.

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Personality: She's cold, but proud. Feraî has been through a lot, and she is a pure survivor. When emotion overcomes her, it’s expressed in anger or violence rather than sobbing or apathy. In heated situations however, she appears to have calculated her movements beforehand, and she's a tough nut to break. Rarely has anyone ever come to call her a friend, and she has rarely ever considered another of equal worth enough to be considered friend. Perhaps this is a result of being a vagabond for so long, and in the profession of murder.

When on her own, and with time on her hands, she meditates. It seems contradictory for an explosive personality to be able to be seated in silence, but then again what sound could the mute one make? Better learn to like it, and appreciate the voices of her own mind.

Background: Feraî is the typically rumoured Netixel. Thievish, grim, and loud in action. Or so to speak, as she’s a mute, one of the reason she's been badly hurt multiple times in her past, mostly done to her by her own kind.

Born in the Netixel clan of Akren, in the temperate landscapes she was fostered to become a hunter, a warrior. However, the harsh treatment and exclusiveness made her turn isolated. This, not uncommon for netixels, made life harsh and her inability to communicate clearly made her choose to leave those lands.

Since then she’s been a vagabond, taking on jobs she can get in the shadier parts of towns, and slowly she built up a reputation as a most effective and entrusted assassin and thief. There was barely any place which Feraî couldn’t access, no person she couldn’t execute, and rarely any missions she declined.

A few times, she’s gotten in over her head. But still she’s completed her task, and then demanded double as the risk wasn’t fully disclosed by the employee. If they declined, she’d go after them too. It was such a case that landed her in one of the worse prisons she's experienced.

Through a couple of years of torture and with the ever looming threat of execution, Feraî was one of the lucky few who were chosen to undergo one of the testing treatments for Psionic enhancement. Against her will, but according to plan, she allowed herself to undergo one or two treatments with the intent of making them believe it worked, while she figured out a plan of escape. Not too long after the third treatment was started, Feraî's plan took action as one of the other subjects reacted badly (as she'd done the first time) to the toxin and caused a ruckus.

Utilizing the distraction she was quick to execute her plan of escape, and since then she's kept on the low side until the call for blood came to her once again. Back to the contracts she went, and now she's again an established Bounty-hunter playing for both sides.

Roleplay Sample: From Pandoras Ineritance (with HeySeuss)
Having kept to herself during the ride for the most of the time, with the occasional checkup by Cutter, Daina thought about the development of the situation. It was true what they had been talking about from time to time, that their vehicle was becoming more of a target the more time they spent on it. What worried Daina the most was how to get on with her life now that she was free. She was hunted and she couldn't really trust anyone aside from the other Emergents in the same situation as her. So when they crossed into Utah, she knew that she had to bring the question up, and moved up to the others.

"When we dump the bus, is it wise to stick together, or should we split up again? Finding a vehicle for the 11 of us will definitely be difficult, and the crowd may be suspicious.." she said. Then it dawned upon her. Even if most of them could pretend not to be Emergents, Daina's talon feet, and Simon's horns and tusks were near impossible to hide. They would definitely not be able to pretend to be normal, because of their physical appearance. “Not that me and Simon won’t be suspicious anyway..”

She sighed. She was scared, like the others, and she still didn’t know what use her talons were, aside from the strong grip they provided her with. Her wound was still trying to heal, but it was slow and still hurt, and she had noticed lumps on her back. And now, she couldn’t even be guaranteed food, or some relative safety. Perhaps it had been better to stay at Nellis.

Cutter spoke up with a dry voice. “I believe that we should stick together. Daina and Simon can’t publically display themselves without being noticed, and if we ever get into a situation where we had to pretend to be normal, they would be the first ones taken out. “She paused then looked at Daina with a spark in her eye. “We could use that to our advantage. Depending on how the town looks, and if we have to take the resort of stealing another bus, they could act as an distraction, until we get what we want, and then we’d come after them.”

“A distraction!?” Daina was surprised to have even heard what she heard. To be a distraction would put her at risk, and perhaps even force her to death if unlucky! And here she had thought all the time that they were allies.

“I refuse to be a target” Simon joined her with his deep voice. “We just got out from prison and I don’t have any plans on going back any time soon.”

“Oh, no. Me neither. Nu-huh.” Daina said, frustrated and confused by the thought of being captured again. Only a few seconds earlier she had let the thought pass her that staying at Nellis was a Good idea. Now she felt the complete opposite.
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So yeah, that's approved! And we'll be starting up soon, I'll be posting IC as early as tomorrow and as late as this coming Monday!
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It's done :) The image I uploaded appears broken?

Edit: Fixed, ty Andre.
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Perfect. You're good to go, just file your character in Characters with mine and Xiga's.
Like I said, I'll be kickstarting us from as late as tomorrow night. Get some rest, soldier!

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@Xiga don't forget to edit this typo in your post when you can (and anything else you spot):
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Not too much later she arrived at the Outer Oregon system,

Just so it matches up with @IronHeart's post:
Outer Orgon System

Conversely, if you spot mistakes in any posts, be sure to point them out. :)
Otherwise, fun fact:
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Okay after much agony and discussion with Andre, I have amended the sound of my Gauss Rifle after realizing the "Crack!" I initially put doesn't really capture what it would/should sound like very well.

I changed it too a "Pvew" in my post. Also threw in a clip that pretty much nails it. Except for how clunky and noisy the reloading sound is, ignore that part.



Also attached it to my character sheet.
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The Earth shakes and releases a spout of heated magma from a volcano, which forms into someone interested into this roleplay because of the fact it had been directed by @The Jest.

It was a bit dramatic of an entrance to this roleplay, but dramatic asides you can tell whom I got the knowledge of this existing. I will be working on my profile soon, since I have decided on the character I will be using. Therefore, that's always a good step in the right direction. My mind is full of so many things so its quite literally needed to think over that one little detail. I'll put my character sheet below this paragraph because that seems reasonable instead of using another OOC post to do that.
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Tentative tag for interest assuming it’s still open! What sorta roles are we missing?

(Also, Thanks @The Jest)
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Hey @Landaus Five-One @Smike! Glad to have your interest!
As for roles, it depends as since this is a PvP-encouraged roleplay (you're all competing against each other to score a payday). But, we have a fair share of Human and Terran/Other characters, mixed bag of Genetically-Enhanced / Psi-Potent, and I have a secret Bio-Weapon character I'm going to reveal when we reach the facility where our target is.

Long story short, safe to say you can pick whatever you like. And if you need help, just drop me an @ or a message; I can give you a hot link to our Discord server where Xiga, IronHeart, The Jest and myself already hang out if you like. :)
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@Andre Valias That'll definitely help in terms of a Discord link. Since that would be required to chat to everyone else. XD
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