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Not sure how to go about the "special boon" for masters. Would this equate to just a really strong skill/spell they have, or should it be more specific? I was planning a rune user (not primordial) so would it relate to their area of magecraft or could it even be a really strong mystic code?


There's a list of suggested boons in the first post. Superior magical skills is one, as is a superior mystic code, but you are not limited to just things on that list as far as I can tell.
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@King Cosmos How did I miss that... I was so focused on the actual sheet itself I guess! Thanks!

@Idol Theory I see!

In either case I should have my CS up for review today.
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Not sure how to go about the "special boon" for masters. Would this equate to just a really strong skill/spell they have, or should it be more specific? I was planning a rune user (not primordial) so would it relate to their area of magecraft or could it even be a really strong mystic code?


Like the others said, it's a signature of your character. Old Runes could fit, if you wish, or even a copy/reproduction of a single Primordial one, like those owned by Touko.
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PS: I added an explanation on Agility and Speed to the 0th post, just in case it comes up in the RP, like it usually does.
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@Parallel Hearts

I tried something a little different with this one. I still need to add a couple more personal skills but I'd appreciate it if you could take a look and let me know what you think.

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@King Cosmos

You are missing Noble Phantasm in your parameters.

Also, not to say that you can't do it, but are you really going to play a character that can't speak? That's something very complicated to RP, so I would consider it well if I were you.
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For your consideration:


As for her divination ability, not to worry - it's just for fluff! But if people wanted to make use out of it I wouldn't mind.
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@King Cosmos

You are missing Noble Phantasm in your parameters.

Also, not to say that you can't do it, but are you really going to play a character that can't speak? That's something very complicated to RP, so I would consider it well if I were you.


Couldn't they communicate to their master via their connection without violating those conditions?
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Also, not to say that you can't do it, but are you really going to play a character that can't speak? That's something very complicated to RP, so I would consider it well if I were you.


I've done it before, but that was an insane Berserker so a little different than this. I'm willing to take on the challenge but it's more of a burden on whoever his Master is than it is on me.

Couldn't they communicate to their master via their connection without violating those conditions?


That's a neat work around that I actually hadn't considered. I'd say no though because I originally intended for him to be unable to communicate with his Master, whereas this just makes him unable to talk to his enemies.
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That's a neat work around that I actually hadn't considered. I'd say no though because I originally intended for him to be unable to communicate with his Master, whereas this just makes him unable to talk to his enemies.


Makes sense.
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I spent all night working on this sheet and I have an exam in about six hours, but it's fine now. Why? Because...

I am here.



please for the love of god do NOT summon him in russia

EDIT: Clarified some wording regarding Ilya's Noble Phantasms.
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Oh shoot, did nobody let me know this was happening? Shoot, I'm gonna be assassin.
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Hope this one works. Might need some edits.

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I think I've finished my profile. Have a link
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@heroic2019

Good thing I didn't go with my classic Atlas Alchemist idea for a master. I feel like she would be way too similar to what you have there.

On the other hand, I really like this idea. If she's approved, would you like to pair her up with Saber? I feel like having a Servant that basically is fighting in an armored wedding dress (because of Lohengrin being the source of the most ubiquitous Bridal March, she has a deep association with weddings), would work well with your Master's theme.
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@Parallel Hearts
90% of my Fate knowledge comes from the Type-moon wiki, so this guy probably needs a bit of fixing.


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@KoLOh. You bring up a good point. Yeah, I like the idea. Hopefully i get approved.
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So, good news, I have two possible assassins ready. I sent them to Parallel Hearts, and hopefully in the morning I'll know which idea I'll be going with.
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For something made from Wiki-stuff it's certainly not too bad. I've seen way way worse. Certainly it's messy and clunky in some aspects but the idea is clear enough.

Lancer is ready, but I'm gonna sleep since it's been a long day, before waking up to edit and quality check on things.

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@Yankee
Well, your character seems ok. I believe that she could be a little bit stronger of you want, but if you like her the way she's, you can go ahead and post her on the CS tab.

@Cu Chulainn
Your character is pretty much ok as well. However, reducing that Bravery to B would make more sense in my opinion. Bravery A is something that only a handful of heroes of Heracles' caliber have.

@SSW
Your character is basically alright as well. But I have to ask why does he get the benefits of being considered a rightful ruler by his NP of he stole it instead of being given it rightfully?

@heroic2019
Your character is ok. You can move her to the CS tab?

@Duoya
I don't see anything that wrong in your character. Magecraft powered by the Origin isn't very healthy to use normally, but if you want to, you can go forward with him.
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