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@Frater JeremiahThe Governor is accepted! Post him in the character section.

And with that we can finally begin the roleplay!

Everyone is free to post in the RP section now :)
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@DostHouBernard is accepted.

@veenknight343Your character sheet is full if misspellings. You get your own character name wrong, its Ayami not Ayame. Some proof reading wouldn't kill you.

Tekada's overall character is fine, a man driven to sorrow by the cruelties he experienced in his life and turned to Toland's writings as a means of dealing with everything.

However I feel how his son died is a bit nonsensical. Venusian habitats aren't located in space, they're located in Venus's upper atmosphere. So they're still under gravity, they're just above the thick corrosive clouds. If he fell off the colony or through a breach in the habitat, he would have likely just dropped miles to the surface below and died. Having the Martians shoot him thinking he was debris is a bit hard to swallow as well, the Martians are callous but not stupid or needlessly spiteful.

You need to rework how his son died into something that makes more sense.
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@Crosswire Holy crap, a cool Gundam RP! What gave you the idea for this RP's premise? :O

I am getting Zaku flashbacks looking here lol
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@Crusader LordIts been an idea that I've been kicking around for a few years actually. I just never really got the chance to develop it properly or try it out until now. Glad you think its so good :)
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@Crosswire No problem! Tempted to join myself, though i'd need to read everything over and such and make sure i am not overextending. XD

Hmm....but i will admit your username reminds me of someone i used to RP with on another site of the same username. lol

Anywho~

Time to go get something to eat! :P
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@Crusader Lord Well I've roleplayed for years on Fanfiction.net under more or less the same name. Maybe you know me from there?
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For transparency's sake an addition to Gaia's inventory added after the approval of the sheet also approved by Crosswire.

Terra-use Gas Mask (Custom): Face of Old-Man
The face of a Terran, the mask worn to face a harsh world. The solace from, and symbol that proves the dangers of the dead world. Black as carbon, the metal and plaisteel that forms the mask is painted and dyed by the years of ash and traces of soot. Two cylinders, filled with multiple layers of filters and mechanisms. Designed to be durable, with redundancy and reliability built in, it is well equipped for the daunting task of guarding a person throughout their life without ideally, too much maintenance.

An artificial lung-system helps pump air in, and waste and exhaust out. The smooth workings and constant flow allows for a more regular and easy breathing with the ability to compensate for any fluctuations in the wearer or a greater need for oxygen through ensuring an ample amount of breathable air.

Two cylinders protrude outward, containing the most of the mechanisms. The left contains the bulk of the breath-systems, while the right is dedicated primarily to an advanced heating system that was only improved by access to, and incorporation of Verogel. The well-quarantined heating system recycles and resupplies the carbon utilized as one of the filters. A contained for the most part self-sufficient system. The mask is powered by a battery that rarely needs replacing, and its filters are for the most part able to keep going for not just hours like most, but even months.

The exhaust that leaks out of the mask is dark, wispy strands of black smoke. Leaving the breaths of the wearer to look like that of a smoking demonic beast.

It has been adjusted so as to be able to be incorporated with a normal suit so he can wear it during piloting as well.

In times of need for whatever reason the heating system can be utilized through removal of the cylinder and a specialized exhaust as a release of extreme temperatures. Enough to more than set most things to fire, as the heat that almost completely burns and reforms the carbon with minimal waste is charged for a “blast”

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@Crusader Lord Well I've roleplayed for years on Fanfiction.net under more or less the same name. Maybe you know me from there?


....Wait just a dang second-

I was playing under the username "BloodlineInheritance" there a long time ago, then kinda fell off there after a time due to college. Were you the same Crosswire that was in the Worm-inspired parahuman/superhero RP i was in back then?! Cause i remember a Crosswire from that time. Are you the same person??? :O

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@Crusader LordYeah, I think I remember you! Wow, talk about a small world! :D
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@Crosswire Alright...i think i have the base form of this Tommy variant down pat! I think. Here it is for looking at and review! Plz be gentle tho, lol.




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@glwgameplayerEmila and Din are accepted.
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@Crosswire Alright! As requested, posting this app here so we can work out the rest of the issues! :D


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By the 9! A sci-fi roleplay that didn't die before even getting off the ground? What trickery is this!?

In all seriousness I'm very excited to throw my hat into the ring here and give this one a go.
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@Jarl CoolgruufNot to sound cynical, but I'm just as surprised as you are. Its all thanks to the wonderful and dedicated players that have decided to join me. If you're interested in participating then I welcome you with open arms. I suggest you hop on the Discord we have set up, makes discussing characters, plot, etc a lot faster.

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@Jarl Coolgruuf
I have to say I absolutely LOVE Dannie. I thought you were going to make a Lunite when you mentioned she was horribly injured, but having her wheelchair bound is a much more interesting and bolder choice. I have some comments to make:

General

-The reactor melt down and detonation is actually in line with COOL-Te's overclocked reactor. It provides more power at the cost of 'safety hazards'. I can absolutely see one going off like a bomb if not proper maintained or pushed too far.

-Void Dogs is a sick-ass name for a pirate gang. Just from that name alone I want them to have been part of the big deal pirate gangs that showed up at the start of the Rebirth of Piracy.

Background

My only issue with the backstory is how it abruptly ended. Dannie dueling her captain and then wandering off to join the Mekon Movement feels too sudden.

The Rebirth of Piracy ended very, very violently for a lot of pirates. Once Zern developed the ZIMS-01 Redcoat, the pirates lost their big advantage and it became open season on them. In five years they were reduced down to 1/10th of what they had been before.

I think it'd make more sense if, instead of Dannie's contract expiring, that Everest's pirate crew got decimated. Either suddenly or over the course of a year or two. Dannie saw the writing on the wall and wanted to walk, but Everest wouldn't have it. So they dueled and she walked away. She returned to Venus, but unwilling to make up with her family she instead decided to join the Mekon movement which had grown in the years since her absence.

Recompense:

-Fraken Reactor
Mobile Suit/Mobile Worker reactors might not necessarily be hefty, but sticking six of them into a single mobile suit would definitely force someone to make additional room in the torso area. I'd be fine with green-lighting this if you made the torso of the Recompense chunkier/larger as a result. That'd also provide an understandable trade-off to the large power supply advantage.

-Laser Glaive "Unmaker"
Laser weapons in this setting are (and this is normally a dirty word for me) 'realistic'. They have point-point accuracy and move at the speed of light (for obvious reasons). However they need to remain focused on a target to do any real damage and don't slice through stuff like they do in other series. I suppose you could add a contain laser to give an enhanced cutting 'edge' to a weapon but the boost wouldn't be as extreme as one would hope and the emitters themselves might make the weapon fragile.

In its current state I don't think the Unmaker will work. However since the Recompense has a fuck-load of reactor power to work with, why not make it into a shock weapon? Electrified weapons are much more in line with what's possible in the setting at the moment.

-Layered Shield
Nanocarbon, at least armor that can be used for armor, isn't available to most people at the moment. Only the very rich, very well connected, or researchers would have access to that at this point. If you take it out of the shield then it would be fine.
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