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This might be the strangest idea I've come up with yet.

Well...maybe not THE strangest.

But its up there.

As always, questions, comments, concerns, bring them up. I'll work with you to make sure my character fit in your story.

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I have a few minor issues but nothing too big.

-Your true form would be the GMG form, so just get rid of the True Form bit and rename pseudo-human form to True Form.
-I think possession is too much, no matter how unlikely it is to ever come up.

Other than those two complaints I see no problem.
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@Crimson Raven

I have a few minor issues but nothing too big.

-Your true form would be the GMG form, so just get rid of the True Form bit and rename pseudo-human form to True Form.
-I think possession is too much, no matter how unlikely it is to ever come up.

Other than those two complaints I see no problem.


May I keep it in there as a beast form? It would be as a recognizable form of power.

If I may split hairs, the fox-human would be the True Form, while the human is her disguise.

Possession I see your point. That said, I’d like to emphasize how unlike it is. It’s mostly in there as it’s one of the common powers attributed to Kitsune. I’m reluctant to chop it off.

I could put other limits, like a time limit or specify how long it takes to take hold. Would that be more acceptable?
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@Crimson Raven

You can keep the beast form but know that most, if not all of the MFF, would know her only by her proper GMG/pseudo-human form so it wouldn't really be used throughout most of the RP.

Secondly, if she's a high-ranking official among the MFF, why is she acting as a front-line troop? I don't much like the idea of her having access to her monster powers and MFF technology so I'm willing to let you bolster the monster abilities in exchange for keeping her purely out of combat and more an overseer/commander for the MFF. Hence the proposal of making her a high-ranking official instead of a front-line troop.
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@Crimson Raven

You can keep the beast form but know that most, if not all of the MFF, would know her only by her proper GMG/pseudo-human form so it wouldn't really be used throughout most of the RP.

Secondly, if she's a high-ranking official among the MFF, why is she acting as a front-line troop? I don't much like the idea of her having access to her monster powers and MFF technology so I'm willing to let you bolster the monster abilities in exchange for keeping her purely out of combat and more an overseer/commander for the MFF. Hence the proposal of making her a high-ranking official instead of a front-line troop.


I figured she's still have the tech (and training) from her stint as a frontline troop, before promotion, hence giving her a class.

She may have some powers up her sleeve, but the MFF don't know that. She would be, in their eyes, defenseless.

And...it doesn't add too much to her overall power. She can replicate most of the abilities of the tech herself. The mask does come with some nifty perks, and the sword/gun gives her offensive options, but overall they only serve to emphasize her role as a fragile spy. In addition, the mask lets her use some powers and have some plausible deniability. Yeah, she'd stay out of combat unless necessary. But she's going to need some way to defend herself if (when) she gets in a sticky spot without blowing her cover the moment she does, or from a meta stand point, force an intervention.

Those were my thoughts as I was writing it.

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@Crimson Raven

So long as she's not recklessly throwing herself in combat, which shouldn't be the case for someone in her position, the sword and mask being used for self-defense and keeping her powers hidden is fine then.

As for the earlier point about possession, I'm willing to accept it if you put a hard time limit as you mentioned. Seeing as it's a power that needs cooperation to even pull off IC, I doubt it'll happen much anyway. Do that, and she should be good to go.
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So long as she's not recklessly throwing herself in combat, which shouldn't be the case for someone in her position, the sword and mask being used for self-defense and keeping her powers hidden is fine then.

As for the earlier point about possession, I'm willing to accept it if you put a hard time limit as you mentioned. Seeing as it's a power that needs cooperation to even pull off IC, I doubt it'll happen much anyway. Do that, and she should be good to go.


Oh, possession is not for against-player-use. Waaaaaaay too many potential issues there. NPCs only, if ever.

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-Change forms and names around
-Add hard limits to possession
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Have you made your edits? If so, you can place her in the Character Tab.
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Before I do, please check if the limits I set on possession are acceptable.
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Those limits are acceptable.
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Awesome. Now, let's see about a post...
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I live.

New MFF character is a WIP, but will still be prominent before her completion.
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I can't find a Weeb image that shows what my character looks like... could I put the appearance in a text description instead?
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You could, but honestly, I don’t think this RP is quite for you. Again, this is an anime RP with giant monster girls. I don’t think you’ll mix well with the premise given your WIP CS.
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Yeah... I fit more in the Sci-fi, Futuristic stuff. I might hop back in when I feel like I can... Bye for now.
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I wanted to find a proper suit of modern day pilots but god DAMN is that ever difficult! All I could find was the usual skintight gundam wing suits or mechs. Ill add on the comet moth ref image when im home under 'other' so you know what to expect.
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Is this your finished CS or are you still adding more?
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Hey GMs, is it cool if I drop a CS? This actually peaks my interest.
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Sure, just know we're looking for more MFF troops than GMGs at the moment.
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Thats cool! Playing females usually feels off to me anyway, since, yeh know, boy.
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