@darkred, some of the formatting on your sheet is still broken. That aside, I have a few tips:
-The personality section is mostly background. I would have the personality be the 'what' and then background the 'why' to clearly delineate the two
-A character's background, their history up to the point where Galeem destroyed everything, would typically end with some mention of the calamity
The main problems deal with the kit being extremely overtuned. No matter how strong a character was or what they had before entering the World of Light, they're reduced to a 'Level 1' strength, with powers and equipment missing
-You can start with a maximum of three strengths
-You can start with only a couple items. For Aloy, I would expect that to be her spear, her bow, and her tripcaster
-I see 'focus' mentioned everywhere. What is that? Is it some kind of ability? I would expect that Focus would be her Power
-The personality section is mostly background. I would have the personality be the 'what' and then background the 'why' to clearly delineate the two
-A character's background, their history up to the point where Galeem destroyed everything, would typically end with some mention of the calamity
The main problems deal with the kit being extremely overtuned. No matter how strong a character was or what they had before entering the World of Light, they're reduced to a 'Level 1' strength, with powers and equipment missing
-You can start with a maximum of three strengths
-You can start with only a couple items. For Aloy, I would expect that to be her spear, her bow, and her tripcaster
-I see 'focus' mentioned everywhere. What is that? Is it some kind of ability? I would expect that Focus would be her Power
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