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@VitaVitaARI envisioned the Owl Folk as eschewing some of the more advanced tech due to their connection with nature. They prefer more down to earth things that rely less on magic and technology. But if that doesn’t fit your vision that’s fine. I’ll probably bow out.
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@Dead Cruiser: I'll have to see when it's a bit more fleshed out.

@NeverEnding: Unfortunately I think she won't quite fit then, sorry.
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Okay here's a quick sheet. I'll pretty it up once the kinks get ironed out.

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@Dead Cruiser: I can't help but notice all his equipment is fairly directly lifted from Bloodborne, and I think that should be changed up at least a bit before I look anywhere else.

Additionally, please don't involve any of the sages in a character's backstory without asking me first, as you'll need those details to know how to properly include them.
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@VitaVitaAR I just replayed it so that was my general idea. I could fuss with it but I find myself less committed to the character than I thought.

Might give my snakeman a go in a while.
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@VitaVitaAR

Alrighty, I feel like I might have gone a bit too fantasy with the idea, but here we go.

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@Rune_Alchemist: Accepted.
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Okay here's snakeman.

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Apologies.
Will write up a proper backstory for Leo when I can.
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@Dead Cruiser: Sorry, this doesn't quite fall in line with what I had in mind for the beastfolk. Appearances are meant to be more humanlike then that.
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Edited the background. Hope it's to your liking and please do notify me if there are still concerns to the character.
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@VitaVitaAR Can you describe what a snake person is supposed to look like then, so I don't have to guess at what you want? I'm fine with changing it as long as I can keep his abilities.
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@Dead Cruiser: Well, I thought my description was relatively clear but if it's not I'm happy to try and clear things up.

Rather then a humanoid snake creature, it would more be a human with some snake features. Fangs, a forked tongue, some scales, but overall more of a human appearance. I'm not decided if snake people would have legs or a tail actually, but regardless beastfolk are more human with some animal traits then animal in the shape of a human.
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@VitaVitaAR That's more or less what I intended to describe. He's just a guy whose face is all snake-ified. But I can just tweak it if that's the sticking point.

Edit: there, tweaked, have another look.
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Oh, well, this took me less time than I though, so here it's:


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@Dead Cruiser: You still went too far with the animal traits, he'd have a pretty normal face and hair. Fangs and some scales are fine, forked tongue is fine. Unhinging jaw not so much.

Additionally you mention him disposing of bodies by swallowing them? Sorry, while this RP can easily get pretty dark I would prefer not to have cannibalism in the main cast.

@KoL: Accepted.
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@VitaVitaAR Okay I'll go back for another pass. Have you read the whole CS yet? I'd like to just fix everything in one shot instead of going back and forth like this.
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@KoL I absolutely love your character art<3
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@KoL I absolutely love your character art<3


Thanks. It's supposed to be an Arknights inspired OC, I found while searching the dark corners of the internet. I thought this story would be a nice fit for such a concept.
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@Dead Cruiser: I'm still a little groggy from waking up late, but something else that immediately stood out to me was the mention of killing people from the Burial Agency.

They'd absolutely respond to that in force if they had even the slightest idea what was occurring and they're not a group you want as your enemies.

Also, I should have mentioned this but I struggled to fit it into the OP and forgot, but artifacts actually have a specific name system. It consists of "Title: Name", giving us things like Killing Edge: Muramasa or First Light in the Sky: Superbia.
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