@Rockin Strings Sorry for the delay, but I've taken a look at your sheet. Most of it seems to be in order, although it leaves me with a question that might be answered in his personality section: does Sora's nature mean he's naive, or does his experience mean he's not? Other than that, a couple things. The first is that, unless I missed it several times, it doesn't look like there's a Power section in the sheet. I would think that some sort of spellcasting would be his initial Power, although think about it carefully, since he won't start out with any magical abilities save what you choose for his Power. Second, his inventory. I would appreciate descriptions of any unique pieces of equipment (like the shadow anklet) and since a Kupo coin is a consumable extra life, it's an unnecessary advantage he shouldn't have over the others, and I think we can leave it out.