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When I tried asking people for a word instead of the generator, they gave me things like fishing, mammaries, and kumquat. And that definitely stole my focus from argh how to start, to uhhh sure, let’s just go with that.


They were out on the town, fishing for girls like they did every Friday night.

"Wow!" Riley exclaimed, extending a hand to stop Patrick in his tracks. "Look at the kumquats on her." He blurted excitedly drawing Pat's attention to the woman's generous mammaries.
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They were out on the town, fishing for girls like they did every Friday night.

"Wow!" Riley exclaimed, extending a hand to stop Patrick in his tracks. "Look at the kumquats on her." He blurted excitedly drawing Pat's attention to the woman's generous mammaries.


-Brian Jacques
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I know I've covered all the necessary information, but my mind is still telling me I'm missing all of the everything and I would like it to stop. That, or someone needs to tell me more specifically what I need to add, because ARGH! I just wanna write 'im!
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I... I managed... Guys, I think I managed to somehow avoid all mention of the fact that he is a mouse.
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I know I've covered all the necessary information, but my mind is still telling me I'm missing all of the everything and I would like it to stop. That, or someone needs to tell me more specifically what I need to add, because ARGH! I just wanna write 'im!


Another great character, Rigby is accepted.
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Yay! Now I get to badger people about character relationships!

Let's see... Agewise, it feels like it might be Ellis, Zaris, Rigby, Bancroft, but I'm honestly only certain about Ellis. >.> lol The other three all seem to be roughly in the young adult range. Or am I missing something?

@Lord Wraith Methinks Rigby is maybe only a season or two older than Bancroft, or maybe they're the same age... So I do imagine they might have played together when they were younger. So there could be a story or two there (I foresee them getting into trouble, yes, because Dibbuns). And if Bancroft visits regularly then it wouldn't have been that hard to maintain a sense of friendship, at the very least. Unless they started out disliking each other, lol, though they don't seem likely to. Rigby's probably bothered him with farming questions at some point and plied him with tasty food and maybe visited his farm? (so he could ask even more questions, obviously)

@Fading Memory Ellis is gonna be the grampa, isn't he?
I'll hazard a guess that Rigby was sore curious about Ellis' hogtwanger as a Dibbun... And he may have tried to wheedle out a taste of some of his brews once he was older (or well, probably as a Dibbun, too, but, y'know, he didn't know what he was asking for then), and his adventures and maybe asked if he could help make one of the ales or something.

@PrankFox Given as these two are probably in close proximity to each other for varying amounts of time almost every day, they ought at least know each other a little. Heh. My first thought was that Rigby absolutely asked if he could try out slinging and somehow managed to break a window, because this just seems appropriate. I'm thinking Rigby probably started, as per usual, with questions and friendliness, but he may have had a few too many questions about things Zaris didn't want to talk about and only apologised for poking at sore points after Bancroft dealt with that vermin attack and he learned first hand how horrible it feels just to hear the news that people you know might be in danger... He would also definitely have asked for help with the gate a time or two. And practiced composing snippets of prose to describe various events so he could have the judgment of a captive audience as to how flowery or properly descriptive his word choices are because unless Zaris makes it clear he does not appreciate the company, Rigby is gonna be spending time very adamantly helping the otter fight the boredom of nothing happening at the gate. Yep.
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I think I'm going to join, I'll be creating a hare character, wot. What's my deadline again please?
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Eulalia!
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I think I'm going to join, I'll be creating a hare character, wot. What's my deadline again please?


Hare frens!

I'mma slam out my sheet.
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I think I'm going to join, I'll be creating a hare character, wot. What's my deadline again please?


There's no hard deadline, but I'm hoping to get the IC started this weekend. You'd still be welcome to apply even after the IC is up though.
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@Nemaisare

Rigby and Banny are both probably just a few seasons younger than Ellis’ own son, Grant. This makes it so that there’s probably a decently personal connection between him and all the young folk of the Abbey; he certainly feels at least part the parent to all after the death of his Adelaide. So between growing up a little behind Grant, and the taking of Adelaide by the illness she got, there’s 10000% some grandfatherly vibes going on. I don’t think there’s a dibbun in Redwall who hasn’t been chased out of the cellar!

Grant probably is the one who, once he got old enough to begin learning, would be the one to sneak safer ales to the other friends. Certainly no longer does this- but those two are in the age group he’d probably have included in his mischief.

I like to imagine old Tybalt the Vole is still alive as well, but is blind and pretends he can’t do anything anymore because of it. Certainly a source of sneaky dibbun schemes, that one.
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Ahaha, Ellis is a good grandfatherly figure, he is. A source of inspiration for storytelling, a friendly obstacle/clue giver in the way of curious dibbuns trying to find all the hidden secrets of the cellar, and probably well aware of Grant sneaking some bottles to his chums. I can just imagine them being found sleeping in the orchard hidden by some bushes. Hahaha. The old folks reminiscing about their own sneaky trials of ale after rousing the lot and sending them hopping to dishwashing duty with banging heads.

So, probably a bit of grandfathering when Rigby was a dibbun, then mostly interaction through being friends with Grant, and then it's come back to Rigby being old enough to not have that separation between adult and kid awkwardness. Good times.

Tybalt just walking down the hall, minding his own business until he hears someone coming, and then he starts holding out his paws and looking like to walk into the furniture, and it takes a whole season for the young'uns to start wondering how they keep finding him in different places if he's so bad at getting around and doing for himself.
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@Nemaisare He'd definitely let Rigby try the sling though it probably would've taken a few times asking to actually get him to and it over. He wouldn't get anything out of him about his tribe and those kind of questions would probably lead to him avoiding Rigby until he'd apologized.

He'd be more than willing to help out with the gate even before the apology since the gate is his job. Once he's spent more time at the Abbey and got closer to everyone he'd enjoy hanging out with Rigby to deal with boredom
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@Lord Wraith Methinks Rigby is maybe only a season or two older than Bancroft, or maybe they're the same age... So I do imagine they might have played together when they were younger. So there could be a story or two there (I foresee them getting into trouble, yes, because Dibbuns). And if Bancroft visits regularly then it wouldn't have been that hard to maintain a sense of friendship, at the very least. Unless they started out disliking each other, lol, though they don't seem likely to. Rigby's probably bothered him with farming questions at some point and plied him with tasty food and maybe visited his farm? (so he could ask even more questions, obviously)


I definitely see them as being friendly and former trouble makers together. Makes sense the mice would run amok together. I'd imagine that friendship would continue into their 'adulthood'. Would be interesting to see Rigby out on the farm just watching everyone breaking up the earth with their tilling tools and plows and sort of shocked at the amount of work that goes into growing enough grain to keep the Abbey fed.
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@PrankFox Zaris regrets finally giving in... lol No more sling practice for Rigby.
Using Zaris as a way to teach Rigby to be more circumspect and thoughtful in his questioning curiousity. He'll probably still have a few moments of not quite thinking things through, but Zaris'll be one reason he considers time and place and how necessary the information really is, as well as being more respectful of the things other beasts may not want to talk about. So I can see them having had an awkward relationship for the first bit of Zaris's time at the Abbey, but maybe it's settled into a more pleasant association now Rigby isn't pestering as much and is just being companionable. ???

@Lord WraithGood mouse friends!
He'd definitely have wanted to tag along with Bancroft back to the farm fairly regularly, even as a dibbun since his friend is leaving! How often he's been, if at all before the start of the story, is up for debate though. And much as his parents trust him to look after himself, they'd probably be happier to know he has a destination and other beasts waiting there to look after him too. Though the first time he did/does go along I can just see him being so exuberant about the trip itself, excited to see everything, and then just very much wanting to help in whatever way they'll let him until it's time to head back. There's also the possibility that Lonicera and Rigby's mum became friends while commiserating over their dibbuns' mischievous ways.
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Not until he can not break windows. Maybe go out into the woods if they’re gonna be slinging rocks lol. I can see it. He was injured and distressed during that time so he’d not be inclined towards making friends. Once he stopped prying there would definitely be more of a willingness to be around him and have a friend at the gate
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Pending feedback from our fearless GM, I present to you the first draft of my character.

He be rootin' he be arrow-shootin' he be traumatized by race war, he's -



It's worth noting that I haven't read the books, only watched a couple of episodes of the TV-show, but everyone else's sheet was a huge help in figuring out the vibe I should pursue, so amazing job on that front guys!

I took some liberties with expanding upon the lore of our acorn-snacking friends, leaning heavily into more traditional wood/dark-elf relations, but I also didn't feel like it was worth it to write an entire bible on tragic history of race war.

Hopefully my rather outside perspective on Redwall will be more of an aid than a hindrance in this game. If anyone else but Wraith has any comments or feedback they'd like to give, I welcome it with open arms.

And yes, I know writers who use spellcheck on their first drafts. They're all cowards.

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I have always loved Redwall, though it's been awhile since I read the books. I have a couple ideas of the character I could be. But here's one that might with the party well.


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Happy Squirrel Day!

Really enjoyed both of these sheets and can't wait to see how they fit in with the cast. Both Ekko and Marigold are accepted.
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issa squiggel gon be los-los trougle? May be small sizewise, but bigbig energy!
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