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So there are issues with your character's backstory and powers, firstly the backstory of your character is quite problematic. So I would appreciate it if you would be able to change your character's story to exclude the abuse and sexual assault. For the powers, I would like for you to pick another power. If you need help with writing up a power, please let me know and I can help you with that. You can DM me, and we can discuss what power you want, and how to balance it out.
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Name: Jenny Romano

Known Aliases: La Signora Oscura (The Dark Lady)

Age: 24

Appearance: 5'3" Slender and pale with really long black hair, mainly hiding her pale blue eyes. Usually seen with a blank yet dark expression


Psyche Profile: Jenny exists as two beings in one, La Signora Oscura and herself. Whom often refer to temselves in plural form such as we, our, us, ect. Jenny while quite and antisocial, seeks out anything that can make her adrenaline pump ams make her feel alive is much different from La Signora Oscura whom has a short temper, gets irritated with lights and feeds off of causing fear,anguish, and agony. While Jenny commonly has possession of the Vessel, La Signora Oscura must take control every now and then to maintain the vessel's balance.

Background: Jenny grew up believing she was in an Italian family with Wiccan beliefs, hearing stories about Paganism amd witch craft, all to hide the real truth from her. Her family was really cultist believing and worshipping the Primordial La Signora Oscura, Italian for The Black Lady. On her tenth birthday, her parents threw a sack over her head and they led her to her "surpise". Every generation, or more so every fifteen years a child must be chosen as a conduit for La Signora Oscura to exist in. They believed that if a child was given to La Signora Oscura, that it would repay the family with great hearth, health and fertility until the next generation.

It took her a while to cope with La Signora Oscura existing inside her, as a result she resorted to stealing, vandalism, picking fights, sneaking out, anything that could give her an adrenaline rush to feel alive, knowing her inevitable fate. She was even kicked out of school for badly hurting someone because they pushed her to far with the teasing and bullying.

Considering her rebellious record, they could of easily put Jenny in juvenile detention at thirteen but her statement "I had no control, La Signora Oscura got angry with him" referring to the bully she had put in the hospital, landed her in an Asylum for troubled children.

There is when she had a true connection with La Signora Oscura, though it was eating away at her. La Signora Oscura seed to be the only friend she had. This only made Jenny act out worse, constantly seeking adrenaline, longing to feel more alive. She attempted break outs, fought with the orderly, and caused roits on the floor. All so she wouldn't feel numb, feel the gloom that was her life.

Power(s) and Capabilities: While in dark areas, Jenny/La Signora Oscura can trap whoever is there with her in said darkness in an illusional dimension they call "The Game" in which they can absorb the surrounding darkness to create entities, shadowlings amd illusional effects to try and break the mind of her adversaries if not causing harm to them. She also weilds acut telepathy, mainly used to pop or shut off lights to add more to her darkness pool

Power Limits: In the light, Jenny cannot rely on La Signora Oscura and it's abilities. Their darkness pool os limited whatever darkness they have at their disposal around them. A small dark room has more of a pool than a a showdow measure out exactly as said room in a hallway because the presense of light. The less light, the bigger the pool.

Known Vulnerabilities: Not only is Jenny weak and frail, it doesnt take to hurt her as La Signora Oscura is slowly eating away at her, sometimes causing her aches that could make her limp or baby an arm. This is why she is called a wlking corps. Light also can ultimately nerf La Signora Oscura weather it be a light emerging from inside the illusional dimension or the glare of a flash light shining into the dimension causing La Signora Oscura to decimate back into Jenny letting her take control.
Motives: The Darkness knows all, Jenny is it's obediant shell. The Darkness is always there in her head and she only does what the Darkness commands.

Recommended Containment Procedures: Jenny needs to be held in solitary and under lights at all times. When she is permitted free time, she is to either be escorted or watched, especially is she mentions La Signora Oscura, at which time she needs to be back in confinement immediately for that's when she temds to act out.

Notes: N/A At this time
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@Eviledd1984 My edit and repost for Jenny Romano
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I had to do a minor late change I hope she meets regulations now
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So just a few things, You use the word game if describe it more aka likes to use illusions to play a cat and mouse game with her victims where she creates their nightmares or something similar. Also would you be able to correct the typos in your CS.
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@Eviledd1984 Yes that was the general concept, trap her mice(foes) in an illusion where Jenny can break them mentally at the cost of her sanity as well. Sort of like a mirror affect. In most cases her foesentally breaks before she does having being used to her own abilities. I went over the cs and fixed typos for you as well.
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Glad you got this going. I just got swamped with 60-80hr weeks on-call. Major Inc Management is a good gig though.
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heads up. my discord account got hacked (friend account was hacked and they got me through that). will not be able to access it for foreseeable future, might need to make new discord account
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ok. now that alt had it's email address changed. like fuck if i know what is going on but now it seems i have to burn the whole computer with a factory reset(?)
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