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Have a small Olivia post.

In other news, poor Bonnie...
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Niiice, keep 'em posts coming, guys.

@Ponn That ain't small, that's actually more than the default standard of the "Advanced Roleplay" section of two paragraphs. But damn, we've been writing good, you and everyone here. I'm in tears (of happiness). :')

@Lonewolf685 Oof, yeah, I figured, it's coincidentally a busy week for most of the players here.
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Being a Magical Girl is suffering.
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So who's making the final Pageless blow. Or will this be a team effort.
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So who's making the final Pageless blow. Or will this be a team effort.


Lumiere is basically asking the team to gangbang the Pageless into pieces. :P
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Roma be like:
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But isn't that the Grand Ministry.
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But isn't that the Grand Ministry.

UH... Oh dear.
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The moment you realize you're all fighting for the wrong side.
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Oh-hoh-hoh!
Finally caught up through, Olivia's post, lol. And that's sure a spicy take she's got at the end there.
Somewhere out there, Roma's eyes are glowing right now. XD
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Ladies and gents, Camelot is up, and for once? She's gonna suck it up and be a damn protector of Love and Justice.
Also, first post of the page pog! XD

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Be sure to let me know if anything seems off/overtly inaccurate about what Camelot perceived about Bonnie's life outside of fighting Pageless and/or the background between them, and I'll edit as needed. Just keep in mind her personal perceptions too. Ironically, she's guilty here -and realizing in hindsight- of the same thing she was getting angry at Bonnie over, not being perceptive till all too late and in hindsight.
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I haven't really gotten to that part of your post yet, as I'm trying to ponder how Bonnie wouldn't break down crying and run away after hearing this line. "Unfortunately, despite your impression to the contrary, not a one of us placed upon this team is friends, or even often comrades."

Because, that's like, literally her greatest fear preyed upon and exploited perfectly. Like, if you were Roma a supervillain trying to break Bonnie's spirit, that's better than anything I could have imagined to say. In I think Bonnie's third post I established her weakness being that she fears everyone is just acting like her friend to be polite but don't actually like her, and then after the slam dunks of the last two posts hitting her hard, she's emotionally compromised and then she hears this.... just... Oof.

I know that's not exactly what Camelot means by friend, and that she means something like "Hey, I like you, but we haven't gotten to know each other yet", but with Bonnie's definition of friend, what Camelot said sounds like "I don't like you and I was just pretending to be your friend like all your worst nightmares made real".

But of course, Bonnie running away would make the rest of your post very awkward, so I'm not quite sure what to do.
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I haven't really gotten to that part of your post yet, as I'm trying to ponder how Bonnie wouldn't break down crying and run away after hearing this line. "Unfortunately, despite your impression to the contrary, not a one of us placed upon this team is friends, or even often comrades."


Well, I could reword this part specifically. But I'd hope to be able to do it without altering the rest. Unfortunately, I can't think of many good ways for Camelot verbalize that the team isn't friends without letting Bonnie realize that's what she means. Camelot's typically kinda blunt. She believes in confronting these issues honestly, especially when politeness isn't on the table as much.

Edit: Edited that bit to be less brutally direct. Let me know if that fixes the problem.
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Or Bonnie could grow to resent Camelot for her words and become her Mordred.
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A shame it’s my turn to post next. Reacting to Lilac’s breakdown would have been good for Suzuya to react explosively in the name of love and Revengance.

Still gonna explode though, I just won’t be blasting “It Has To Be This Way.”
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A shame it’s my turn to post next. Reacting to Lilac’s breakdown would have been good for Suzuya to react explosively in the name of love and Revengance.

Still gonna explode though, I just won’t be blasting “It Has To Be This Way.”


Ah yes, exactly what this team needs in this incredibly delicate time: more emotional explosions. XD
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I think that level of softness, not directly saying the word friends, would soften the blow quite a bit. I'll try to get something up as soon as I'm off work.
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Sword: Unsheathes slowly.

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@The 42nd Gecko
Bonnie is such a precious woobie. Must protecc.
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I've edited my post, should move things along a bit more.
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