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I'm thinking about making a telekineticist- probably an older student, but friendly and outgoing
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That moment when most of your RP characters tend to be Arslan's and find out they already exist in the world.

I do have a few ideas but they are currently wait and see right now, pending on further information.
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Excellent, that works pretty well with both ideas I had in mind and gives me a bit of a better idea on how to work things.

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Okay so, with a bit more thonking involved and reworking some old ideas for the same character, the idea I'm leaning more towards is this. Sixth or Seventh year at most, but right around 20 either way and someone quite specialized in artifice due to her mentor. Workshopping an NPC here, a rather old man who's been around the Academy for #awhile and for a brief time fought in the 72 Year Liberation Wars as Tyren the Boneweaver for his combination of in-depth medical and artifice knowledge, but he's not really inclined to speak about those times simply referring to how he helped put people back together after the war. He's basically teaching Corrine(Just the first name for now for convenience lol) everything he knows about artifice and doing his best to steer her down the path of building and repairing, though she's not even near his level yet. There's more to the relationship between the two, but most I'll say for now is that it was Tyren who brought her to the Academy after putting her back together from a rather traumatic event.

And on the other end of the character, aside from her skill with artifice and love for making her own replacement parts, I was leaning towards the idea of her being older for a bit of a theme I like for this one in particular. That idea being that she's got a bit of a reputation for heroics and taking on rather dangerous missions through the portals. All sorts of rumors about how she's done this and that, how each trip through the portal is some epic saga. In truth, she's an absolute disaster and is winging it. Which is why she's more artifice than person at this point and to those who really know her feel she's more of a bad luck charm than anything. Like, she's almost a magnet for bad stuff lol. But hey, she makes it work somehow.

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This is excellent, as I was going to rock a bit of a arcane/magitech gunslinger vibe with Corrine lmao. Also discord is pretty convenient, just to add in from above.


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Wonderful character concept. Very cool indeed! The ideas you have really help to flesh her out in this world and make her more well-rounded and real.

Although you won't be happy to read this lol But I only mentioned magical guns as an example of something that does exist in the world. Students at the academy don't use weapons. It's not an academy thing. Those weapons would be used by the Royal Guard, which is something a student might aspire to be after graduation. Now, if you're character's artificing skills help them, to say, create some kind of makeshift magical gun-like weapon for just herself, then I think that would be okay since she's a senior student and may have gotten permission from a professor to use it. Kind of like Forge from X-men uses his power to create magi-techy weapons for himself, but just himself. Weapons aren't something just readily available to students at the academy. They must rely on their magical gifts for combat and not everyone has a gift that is well-suited for combat. And that's okay. They can be useful in other ways.

It's funny, I went back and forth on whether or not students used weapons like guns, wands, swords, bow and arrows, etc. I even had created an Armory room and art for it at one point while drafting. Ultimately, I decided against it because I don't necessarily want this RP to be a fight fight fight fight fight kind of RP where everyone can run into any dangerous situation guns a blazing. I liked the more X-men approach, where students have to be more clever in combat situations because they are limited to the capabilities and weaknesses of their magical gift and nothing else. This also would require more thoughtful teamwork and would allow non-combat focused characters opportunities to shine in their own unique way. Guns and weapons and such kind of oversimplify any dangerous situation. So ultimately yeah, students don't use guns and weapons LOL



I can begin working on a character as soon as you have a sheet. Gonna have some fun with this one for sure.

Are you Discordly inclined, by the way?


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Wonderful. I'm working on the character sheet now. Repurposing one I created for a 1x1 RP I semi-started with someone a while back.

And I am considering a Discord. I'm not strictly opposed to it so long as everyone is Respectful of one another. That's REALLY big for me. I've seen Discords divulge into pettiness, personal attacks and really toxic behavior. Soooo, I'm not sure I'll start one for this RP, but I won't say no definitively. Giving it thoughtful consideration. Again, respect and kindness is KEY. Even if people disagree about something, it should be discussed with civility and maturity, no matter what.




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I'll be crossing my fingers that my idea isn't too similar to yours!

I'm probably doing a character who's not very useful in combat. Hopefully that's okay.


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It is totally okay for your character to have a non-combat-oriented gift. They can shine and be useful in other capacities. Combat is only one element of this RP, so non-combat-focused characters are just as important to flesh out this story. Also, it is okay for characters to have similar gifts, so long as they're not completely identical.



The moment I read that part about Psychiccers being mistrusted I knew I had to have my character being either a telepath or an empath, and have them be a friendless girl with a privacy-invasive power, who tries to overcompensate by being bubbly and agreeable.


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That is a perfectly plausible characterization for a Mystic Psychiccer and makes sense due to the cultural implications. Nuanced takes like this add to the dark undertones I mentioned will be present in this RP. Excellent. :)
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I was thinking of making a second year elementalist traditionally from an aeroflying daemon matriachy but is reforming himself as he grows out of his damilys shadow and learns his other heart is far more pyromatic. He fencces and looks up lyquistics alot in the library, if anyone needs a spitfire twerp around. Eagerly awaiting this I'll draw up a portrait in the mean time.

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Hmm I might go with a Somatic, I like shapeshifters. Thinking someone who can take on feline traits, and with training might even learn to fully turn into a wildcat. Kitty characters are a go-to thing for me.

They'd be curious and adventurous, and of course they'd have a pet cait.

As for Discord, in my experience RPs with them last longer than RPs without, but yeah toxic people are a concern. I RP with a few people here though, namely Crimson Flame, TheNoCoKid and Emeth, and can attest that they're respectful.
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The character I have in mind is a Light elementalist with an interesting relationship with their gender.

They come from a prominent noble family who are heavily involved with the church, they were bullied for being different, and found acceptance in the church. They think their gift is a sign from the deity that they worship that they were destined for bigger things.

They act all haughty and superior to mask their loneliness.
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I'm not the most active in group RPs but I've only ever seen one member of one Discord server from this site stir up trouble. They wrote some stuff that broke forum rules and kinda ignored the main plot in general, so I consider them a pretty special case. I've never used Discord for anything else except keeping in touch with a few RL friends, but I could imagine random servers for subreddits getting pretty toxic. It's not an issue I've run into with RPGuild though, but alas, I do a lot of lurking in the 1x1 section mostly, so my opinion might not be the most representative.

I'm working on my character now, actually. Her ability that falls in the telepath/empath category is something I've wanted to play for a long time but never found the right RP for it. Basically, she can see the connections between people, visually represented as threads of various colors, texture and thickness. By touching them, she can directly feel how others feel about each other, and by plucking them like a stringed instrument, she might hear a stray thought or two. By implication, she should be able to manipulate those threads somehow, like strengthening/weakening or outright creating/breaking them, but because of some childhood trauma, she has an extreme aversion to messing with them too much.

She has another ability which works kind of like a heavily nerfed version of Koishi's ability from the Touhou series. She can slip away from the collective consciousness of everyone around her and become imperceptible, but there's tons of limitations on it due to her inexperience. It's probably more comparable to being Anonymous/Blended in Assassin's Creed if you've ever played or watched one of those. Basically, if she does anything that's too high-profile (like tripping over her own two feet), her cloak fails and she becomes perceptible again. I have a cute idea that she could be using this ability to attend more than six classes on the sly, but let me know if that's chronologically impossible.

I currently have a half-baked idea that she has "The Kiss" but one of her aeonhearts is kinda funky, so she intermittently loses access to one of her abilities and a good chunk of her vitesse. She spends an unusual amount of time in the infirmary as a result, which could lead to some inconvenient questions being asked. I'm thinking she hasn't been found out yet since one of her abilities is an easily kept secret and the other helps her escape unwanted attention. I think making her a first year would be fun too so there's that in the cards.

So, a mixed bag of pretty powerful abilities with pretty powerful weaknesses, and unlikely to see combat (of her own volition).
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Wonderful character concept. Very cool indeed! The ideas you have really help to flesh her out in this world and make her more well-rounded and real.

Although you won't be happy to read this lol But I only mentioned magical guns as an example of something that does exist in the world. Students at the academy don't use weapons. It's not an academy thing. Those weapons would be used by the Royal Guard, which is something a student might aspire to be after graduation. Now, if you're character's artificing skills help them, to say, create some kind of makeshift magical gun-like weapon for just herself, then I think that would be okay since she's a senior student and may have gotten permission from a professor to use it. Kind of like Forge from X-men uses his power to create magi-techy weapons for himself, but just himself. Weapons aren't something just readily available to students at the academy. They must rely on their magical gifts for combat and not everyone has a gift that is well-suited for combat. And that's okay. They can be useful in other ways.

It's funny, I went back and forth on whether or not students used weapons like guns, wands, swords, bow and arrows, etc. I even had created an Armory room and art for it at one point while drafting. Ultimately, I decided against it because I don't necessarily want this RP to be a fight fight fight fight fight kind of RP where everyone can run into any dangerous situation guns a blazing. I liked the more X-men approach, where students have to be more clever in combat situations because they are limited to the capabilities and weaknesses of their magical gift and nothing else. This also would require more thoughtful teamwork and would allow non-combat focused characters opportunities to shine in their own unique way. Guns and weapons and such kind of oversimplify any dangerous situation. So ultimately yeah, students don't use guns and weapons LOL


Despite building what would otherwise be a fairly combat heavy character, there was actually the idea of leaning more on the artifice side of things for her lol. Like, yeah on one hand in my head there was the gunslinger with artificed revolvers and some kind of 1600's style magitech wheel-lock repeating rifle going on monster hunts with the class or using specialized ammunition during the magic duels mentioned in the OP for the Colosseum or Dueling Room. Then on the other there was the idea of exploring the entire concept of actually making these things and testing them in something like the Halls of Artifice or whatever kinds of workshops they may have. Things like building new arms and legs, new and hopefully improved tools for expeditions, and of course a vitesse controlled laser eye. You know, to replace the one she lost lmao.

But yeah, I totally get trying to lean more towards the actual school-life aspect of X-Men rather than what we usually get from it, though I would say that there could still be a place for things like weapons training and hunting classes. I mean, not every jaunt through a portal is going to be a nice and relaxing one, right?

And I am considering a Discord. I'm not strictly opposed to it so long as everyone is Respectful of one another. That's REALLY big for me. I've seen Discords divulge into pettiness, personal attacks and really toxic behavior. Soooo, I'm not sure I'll start one for this RP, but I won't say no definitively. Giving it thoughtful consideration. Again, respect and kindness is KEY. Even if people disagree about something, it should be discussed with civility and maturity, no matter what.

As for Discord, in my experience RPs with them last longer than RPs without, but yeah toxic people are a concern. I RP with a few people here though, namely Crimson Flame, TheNoCoKid and Emeth, and can attest that they're respectful.


Having been around the forums for a bit now, I do feel that while there is a downside to Discord in that it can direct more conversations away from the thread and present the appearance of inactivity, there is a much greater benefit to having it from the expedience of character planning, the ability to quickly and dynamically develop pre-existing character relations, and of course the most important thing of all... A place to shitpost without disrupting the thread lmao.

But also, while I don't really know many of the people who have expressed interest so far, that at least means that most of the people here are alright enough that they don't have a reputation for themselves lmao. That I know of...
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Great to see that you are back on your feet @Aeolian. Very impressive return. Keeping an eye on this for sure! :)
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I find that discords can be occasionally overwhelming- maybe its just a me thing (I need to clear out some of these old channels I'm a part of), but I think they're really good for communication. It makes it easier to coordinate collabs, or potential plot beats with others
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I was thinking of making a second year elementalist traditionally from an aeroflying daemon matriachy but is reforming himself as he grows out of his damilys shadow and learns his other heart is far more pyromatic. He fencces and looks up lyquistics alot in the library, if anyone needs a spitfire twerp around. Eagerly awaiting this I'll draw up a portrait in the mean time.

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I think that's a great concept. The son of a Daemon matriarchy would probably have to unlearn some things from their upbringing but remember, for his mother to have been classified as a Daemon, she has done some bad stuff and is likely a fugitive of the Royal Guard, as all Daemons are if they are not already being held in Cespheus Prison, some have just managed to avoid capture.

Also, I think it's great that you're drawing up a portrait, but I might ask you to use a more high-quality character art when it's time to submit your character sheet. I'm pretty flexible I think, but I tend to be a stickler for high-quality aesthetics, as you might have already guessed. lol



Hmm I might go with a Somatic, I like shapeshifters. Thinking someone who can take on feline traits, and with training might even learn to fully turn into a wildcat. Kitty characters are a go-to thing for me.

They'd be curious and adventurous, and of course they'd have a pet cait.

As for Discord, in my experience RPs with them last longer than RPs without, but yeah toxic people are a concern. I RP with a few people here though, namely Crimson Flame, TheNoCoKid and Emeth, and can attest that they're respectful.

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A feline-based Somatic shapeshifter totally works. She could be like the cat version of Rahne Sinclair from X-men, who could turn into a semi-wolf and full wolf form. Also, thanks for vouching for your friends. That does give me some reassurance. :)



The character I have in mind is a Light elementalist with an interesting relationship with their gender.

They come from a prominent noble family who are heavily involved with the church, they were bullied for being different, and found acceptance in the church. They think their gift is a sign from the deity that they worship that they were destined for bigger things.

They act all haughty and superior to mask their loneliness.


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That totally works. There are many religions throughout Lekë and each island has its own culture to a degree, so your character could definitely come from a noble family with heavy religious ties. Not at the level of the Royal Family of course, but I'm sure the aristocracy does exist to a lesser extent in certain places. Which means your character probably comes from money and certain privileges, despite the bullying. The overt personality traits represent that overcompensation as the spoiled, rich, but bullied, lonely noble child archetype. Delusions of grandeur perhaps? I like it. :)



I'm not the most active in group RPs but I've only ever seen one member of one Discord server from this site stir up trouble. They wrote some stuff that broke forum rules and kinda ignored the main plot in general, so I consider them a pretty special case. I've never used Discord for anything else except keeping in touch with a few RL friends, but I could imagine random servers for subreddits getting pretty toxic. It's not an issue I've run into with RPGuild though, but alas, I do a lot of lurking in the 1x1 section mostly, so my opinion might not be the most representative.

I'm working on my character now, actually. Her ability that falls in the telepath/empath category is something I've wanted to play for a long time but never found the right RP for it. Basically, she can see the connections between people, visually represented as threads of various colors, texture and thickness. By touching them, she can directly feel how others feel about each other, and by plucking them like a stringed instrument, she might hear a stray thought or two. By implication, she should be able to manipulate those threads somehow, like strengthening/weakening or outright creating/breaking them, but because of some childhood trauma, she has an extreme aversion to messing with them too much.

She has another ability which works kind of like a heavily nerfed version of Koishi's ability from the Touhou series. She can slip away from the collective consciousness of everyone around her and become imperceptible, but there's tons of limitations on it due to her inexperience. It's probably more comparable to being Anonymous/Blended in Assassin's Creed if you've ever played or watched one of those. Basically, if she does anything that's too high-profile (like tripping over her own two feet), her cloak fails and she becomes perceptible again. I have a cute idea that she could be using this ability to attend more than six classes on the sly, but let me know if that's chronologically impossible.

I currently have a half-baked idea that she has "The Kiss" but one of her aeonhearts is kinda funky, so she intermittently loses access to one of her abilities and a good chunk of her vitesse. She spends an unusual amount of time in the infirmary as a result, which could lead to some inconvenient questions being asked. I'm thinking she hasn't been found out yet since one of her abilities is an easily kept secret and the other helps her escape unwanted attention. I think making her a first year would be fun too so there's that in the cards.

So, a mixed bag of pretty powerful abilities with pretty powerful weaknesses, and unlikely to see combat (of her own volition).


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Interesting. So she's an Astra with a telempathy kind of power. Emma from Mutant-X had a telempathy power, so it could work. I think the way you described it is lovely and you'd be surprised what she could do in combat. She's a support role on the battlefield. She could use her telepathic threads to boost the teams morale, help two bickering teammates work better as a team, help someone whose given up to get back up and fight again. Don't shoot yourself short. :) In fact, with her spending so much time in the infirmary, maybe she can take up an apprenticeship under the nurse and become somewhat of the field medic during battles. But yes, I think whenever we're dealing with psychic powers that can influence others, we want to be wise and use that gift with caution if its to be used on other player-controlled characters. Perhaps getting permission on the front end is the best policy if not being used on an NPC.

The Second Ability is cool too. Reminds me of an X-men character called ForgetMeNot, who had the power of imperceptibility. Though I think it's good that you put some limitations on it to keep it grounded. :) And I think it's possible she could use it to attend more than six classes. What she'd be doing is similar to what Hermoine did with the time-turner. Yeah, most Mystic's with the Seraph's Kiss keep one of their gifts hidden, IF POSSIBLE. Some people can't due to the nature of their magic. The school staff and Headmistress would definitely know about one of her gifts (I imagine the telempathy), how else would she be at the academy right if they didn't already know beforehand? lol


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Despite building what would otherwise be a fairly combat heavy character, there was actually the idea of leaning more on the artifice side of things for her lol. Like, yeah on one hand in my head there was the gunslinger with artificed revolvers and some kind of 1600's style magitech wheel-lock repeating rifle going on monster hunts with the class or using specialized ammunition during the magic duels mentioned in the OP for the Colosseum or Dueling Room. Then on the other there was the idea of exploring the entire concept of actually making these things and testing them in something like the Halls of Artifice or whatever kinds of workshops they may have. Things like building new arms and legs, new and hopefully improved tools for expeditions, and of course a vitesse controlled laser eye. You know, to replace the one she lost lmao.

But yeah, I totally get trying to lean more towards the actual school-life aspect of X-Men rather than what we usually get from it, though I would say that there could still be a place for things like weapons training and hunting classes. I mean, not every jaunt through a portal is going to be a nice and relaxing one, right?

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Having been around the forums for a bit now, I do feel that while there is a downside to Discord in that it can direct more conversations away from the thread and present the appearance of inactivity, there is a much greater benefit to having it from the expedience of character planning, the ability to quickly and dynamically develop pre-existing character relations, and of course the most important thing of all... A place to shitpost without disrupting the thread lmao.

But also, while I don't really know many of the people who have expressed interest so far, that at least means that most of the people here are alright enough that they don't have a reputation for themselves lmao. That I know of...


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I definitely appreciate your creativity. And while combat is definitely a part of this RP, let's air on the side of nuance when it comes to what kind of artifice weapons she crafts for herself. She's still a school student after all. It'd be a bit odd to bring guns to a magical powers fight against other students, you know? LOL But if she does create a few weapons, she could probably use them during her portal missions or during combat against foes in Lekë. Again, she's an older student and experienced, so I imagine she might have permission to work on her craft. But yeah its true, some jaunts through the portal will be incredibly dangerous. But that's also the nature of X-men. The X-men are constantly put in perilous situations time and time again and they usually only ever have their teamwork and powers to rely on to get them through. I see those same struggles happening in this RP as opportunities for the characters to grow, rather than having weapons that, in some ways, may act as a safety net. Like with the X-men, life isn't always going to be easy or convenient. Sometimes you just gotta work with what you were born with. haha but yeah, there probably won't be weapons training or hunting classes and I want combat to be a nuanced addition rather than the center of it. But there is the General Combat Training class, Defense Against the Ni-Seraphi class, and Daemons class which are more combat focused and would help students prepare for combat situations. There's the Artificing and Magi-Tech Advancements class too, so I imagine there's a workshop in whatever classroom that class is held in where your character can artifice (maybe the Artificery Workshop or something. I'll figure it out lol). I like the idea of a vitesse-powered laser eye, very magi-tech :)



Great to see that you are back on your feet @Aeolian. Very impressive return. Keeping an eye on this for sure! :)

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Thanks babe. :) It's been a minute, but it's time to jump back into another story. Hope to see you hop in. You're the aesthetics queen, so I always appreciate your presence to elevate an RP.
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@Aeolian Thats fair on the art, it is more of an inspirational exercise than anything for me lol. As to his family, perhaps his moms locked away for killing his also unsavvory dad and he has been brought under the care of an elder in his linage(possibly being the only reason he has been allowed in). I fully expect his estrangement from toxic mommy dearest will be great for letters to the slammer, or his possible disciplinary future.

His gift would be like the air elementals from Riddick at high-tier usage; only as he grows older and more powerful his will ignite😎. Intangibility and AreaofEffect pyrotechnics maybe? Collaboration on backstories is always welcome btw

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All the character ideas so far sound so inspired :D

I think my character is going to be a son/daughter of the royal guard. Maybe an Illuminaire a year or two back, but since burnt out and stressed with their school load. Supportive and easy going, but likely battling feelings of inadequacy and the weight of familial expectations. Perhaps the equivalent of a teacher's assistant in one of the combat related classes, or maybe heads a practice club for dueling/training.

I'm thinking I'm locking in on a telekinetic, I like the idea of them carrying around a pair of heavy gauntlets to box from a distance, or carrying around a case of ball bearings to launch like shotgun pellets
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Looking through the list of classes and which ones my telepath character would take, I got hit with the brainwave that they're studying with an aim to one day join parliament as a politician. Despite her Mystic telepathy theoritally making her a good match for house Ivar, I think it'd be more fun to put her in Eusebia where she can *really* stand out
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Interesting. So she's an Astra with a telempathy kind of power. Emma from Mutant-X had a telempathy power, so it could work. I think the way you described it is lovely and you'd be surprised what she could do in combat. She's a support role on the battlefield. She could use her telepathic threads to boost the teams morale, help two bickering teammates work better as a team, help someone whose given up to get back up and fight again. Don't shoot yourself short. :) In fact, with her spending so much time in the infirmary, maybe she can take up an apprenticeship under the nurse and become somewhat of the field medic during battles. But yes, I think whenever we're dealing with psychic powers that can influence others, we want to be wise and use that gift with caution if its to be used on other player-controlled characters. Perhaps getting permission on the front end is the best policy if not being used on an NPC.

Officially she'll be a Psychiccer. I'm actually not sure what she should be. I think both of her abilities fit into the category, but you did say almost all Mystics with The Kiss end up classified as Astras, and maybe the musical Ephemera (they have a name now) qualify as abstract enough to make the grade. I'll leave it up to you. I wanted something more clearly defined in its limitations to not raise many concerns about metagaming. I don't like the self-inserty "my characters know everything that I've read in your posts" kind of mind-reading.

I actually hadn't considered the bard angle, which is weird given the musical inspiration of plucking the strings. True, if push comes to shove she won't shy away from using her power to avert a crisis of faith in the group's leader or stop some infighting. Convincing someone to get back up and fight is a bit harder since I hadn't considered the possibility of one's relationship with themselves being a visible thing Thanh (she has a name now) could interact with. I could make ideas like self-esteem and confidence valid targets, but then I think I risk trivializing entire character arcs with that, just by everyone knowing Thanh could just solve it if she really wanted to. Learning first aid is an option; I was going to have her apprentice with the librarian because cute bookworm but I'll have to consider it. Also, a school counselor NPC ended up in her backstory, so maybe she could apprentice under them if that's an option that exists.

Permission is definitely something I'm looking for. It's baked in to the ability description that she's not skilled enough to get a string to 'sing' a person's thoughts to her consistently, so whether or not she can actually shake anything loose from them is completely up to the player whose character is being probed for information. If Thanh gets approved, everyone else should assume their character's thoughts are private until they tell me otherwise. Emotions are much easier to get but that's okay, she'll definitely keep your unrequited love a secret.

The Second Ability is cool too. Reminds me of an X-men character called ForgetMeNot, who had the power of imperceptibility. Though I think it's good that you put some limitations on it to keep it grounded. :) And I think it's possible she could use it to attend more than six classes. What she'd be doing is similar to what Hermoine did with the time-turner. Yeah, most Mystic's with the Seraph's Kiss keep one of their gifts hidden, IF POSSIBLE. Some people can't due to the nature of their magic. The school staff and Headmistress would definitely know about one of her gifts (I imagine the telempathy), how else would she be at the academy right if they didn't already know beforehand? lol

The Erasure ability (it has a name now) is the second ability she developed, but the first one to be discovered and the only one known to anyone except her and maybe the aforementioned counselor, along with anyone else on the "need-to-know" list. It surely has to come out eventually, but maybe not before the RP. Erasure might actually have too many downsides so I'd be interested in your opinion on it.

Time-turner is exactly what I was thinking when I added that. Like I said, cute bookworm.

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@Emeth Thanh Nguyen is my aunt's name lmao
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@Emeth Thanh Nguyen is my aunt's name lmao


Oh my actual God. Uh, should I change it? xD
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Lol no worries, Thanh and Nguyen are both pretty common names lol
Hidden 1 yr ago Post by Force and Fury
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Force and Fury Actually kind of mellow

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Beautiful worldbuilding, I have to say! That art has a unity of design that's just... *chef's kiss*.
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Hidden 1 yr ago Post by Benzaiten
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Wow, this is impressive. I have not yet read through everything but I had to say

"harry potter, x-men, studio ghibli, light academia, boarding schools, fantasy, slice-of-life, romance, dark undertones"

this alone sounds great, coupled with the immense work you already put into this Interest Check I am sure this will be a very incredible story to participate in.

And that art is just gorgeous and so vivid! Where is that from? I am just impressed with the overall love and care put into this already.
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