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@BrokenPromise

The deed has been done, now if only she can win a EVO title to live up to her lofty expectations.
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Hey, what are those suspiciously bolded letters in the bio?

o r o s t h e g r e e d y

I knew it! She's just another Oros!
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The Grand Magistrate has been aware of the situation. Though perhaps worse, so has she.
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That Junko avatar is gonna throw me for a loop just about every time I see it.

I'll be throwing up a sheet within the next 3 years, keep an eye out.
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Oh boy, that felt like starting a car that's been sitting out back all winter. But I did it!

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@TaintedMushroom I was aware of parts of this app, but I have discussed it with Majoraa.

There are a few similarities between Endless Eclipse, Oros's black starry katana and Secret Seeker, Bardo’s black starry katana. They even have the ability to divine information, albeit in different ways. But overall I think Bardo and Oros the Mad have enough differences that changes aren't needed. They're both occult themed, but one is a scholar and the other is a cultist that draws on the power of eldrich abominations. I only bring it up because I mentioned this was a concern of mine.

Secret seeker feels pretty loaded without the random "skill" increase. I'm not sure how long they would last or how we'd determine what to increase either. We feel like just knowing what the opponent is capable of would give Bardo an advantage he could exploit anyway. This next bit is more of a warning than a critique, but chaos damage does little damage to espers and is less impressive than arcane attacks vs monsters. Though it has some niche uses/advantages against non-monster magi and is effectively an anti-material weapon. Just making sure that's what you want.

The buff to movement notes is quite strong. A single rank increase would be fine but doubling it is effectively going beyond what an "S" rank note can do. If you need more oomph out of your notes, the [weightless] note triples the push distance by making your target unable to really "stand" on the ground.

If that all sounds reasonable to you, make the changes and fling Bardo into the dark abyss of the character section.

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@BrokenPromiseYeah I'll change those details, I wasn't super attached to em. Once I actually start to write out the character and get into his headspace even more I'm confident his own unique flair will stand out! His goal is to be less of a frontline fighter and more of an information seeker/skirmisher/wild card type of guy.
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Oh look, it's better Justin.

Far more deserving of the name than dead Justin.
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Reminder: His lightning is blue, not yellow, avoid this rookie mistake. 😒
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@FamishedPants Has the name of a character already in the RP, gold instrument's primary gimmick is just there to trigger the silver genre, misleading picture, not to mention better alternatives exist...

But you know what? This is one of those cases where somehow, despite everything, it's so bad it just kind of wraps around and becomes good again! Hot blooded anime protagonist #230613648 gets a pass from Majoraa and I. Though you might want to workshop your PR a bit more. Your PR special can do something a little extra since it's silver. Then again, it's just the PR.

Gunna see about getting the first post up next weekend. There's still time to make a character if anyone else wishes to join, but it's high time this bird spread it's wings.
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I have added a PR special. Let me know what you think. :)
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@FamishedPants Looks pretty bad. I'll accept it.
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Alright, we got all the presently apped characters in the character tab now. Work on the first post has started, but I have a lot of writing to do. Gunna be lit.

@TaintedMushroom@Nakushita Something I noticed going over your character sheets is that neither of your characters have an alias. It's not essential, but most espers take advantage of the magical-girl-like identity protection that being an esper offers. Marrie Knight doesn't have one because she's inexperienced and the Bates twins pretty much live as espers. They pretend to be traveling musicians and their secret became impossible to keep with their popularity. Point being, someone who pries into secrets and a mobster might want to keep a lower profile than that and hide behind an alias. Not necessary, but figured I'd mention it.

Also Himiko doesn't have a last name. Normally I wouldn't care, but given her wealthy upbringing it might come up. So it would be cool if you could add that for me.
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Oh good point, I'll come up with somethin
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@BrokenPromiseI may come up with something, if I find a image that I feel like it is similar enough but different enough to be a alias, but I had not seen anything that sort of fit that yet when I was initially making the CS, which is why I decide to go without it for the time being. But I'll keep on the lookout for something in the mean time.

As for a last name, I'll make sure to add one here relatively shortly.
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I clarified on the discord, but I more mean a name. Like how Justin Rufina's alias is "Noble Spark" or how Finn is called "Timekeeper."
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Hello! I was browsing the topics and came across this RP, and I really like the modern setting and the really well thought out power system on offer here. Is this still open for character submissions?
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Hello! I was browsing the topics and came across this RP, and I really like the modern setting and the really well thought out power system on offer here. Is this still open for character submissions?


Yes! 🥳
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