@Achronum
First note: That would be my mistake and I can easily correct that detail.
Second note: He has plenty of motivation to take the risk in helping the rebellion, it's in his biography. Parents taken away when he was small child, and he hasn't been able to discern the truth behind that event yet. In all fairness I could have made that last detail a little clearer so that's probably my bad.
Third note: Yes, although in all honesty a face-reveal wouldn't exactly be earth-shattering. I'm not really not intending that to be some big mystery. Sune really is just some guy who put on a mask and took to thievery and information brokering.
Edit: I have changed the last paragraph of the biography. It now reads as follows:
He's heard of the Rebellion through his network, naturally. But he hasn't joined them, not officially anyway. In his own words, he's "waiting to see how serious they are" before he decides whether to commit to doing business with them or not. No sense in backing a horse if it can't even finish the first lap of a race, after all.
That should clear up the first note you gave me.
First note: That would be my mistake and I can easily correct that detail.
Second note: He has plenty of motivation to take the risk in helping the rebellion, it's in his biography. Parents taken away when he was small child, and he hasn't been able to discern the truth behind that event yet. In all fairness I could have made that last detail a little clearer so that's probably my bad.
Third note: Yes, although in all honesty a face-reveal wouldn't exactly be earth-shattering. I'm not really not intending that to be some big mystery. Sune really is just some guy who put on a mask and took to thievery and information brokering.
Edit: I have changed the last paragraph of the biography. It now reads as follows:
He's heard of the Rebellion through his network, naturally. But he hasn't joined them, not officially anyway. In his own words, he's "waiting to see how serious they are" before he decides whether to commit to doing business with them or not. No sense in backing a horse if it can't even finish the first lap of a race, after all.
That should clear up the first note you gave me.