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Hidden 15 hrs ago 12 hrs ago Post by CavnderOHeart
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I've decided to make a profile for my Wild. Which won't be until tomorrow as I'm about to start work soon.

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If I need to change anything lmk! Also I was in a rush. A paragraphs worth of data in coming for Gakushi's Wild gifted abilities.
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@Estylwen thought i'd mention for you; i left it vague for if the molotov breaks or not on Mimi's tail. I don't really know what would happen if it hit a hard yet padded surface such as a feathered tail.
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@CavnderOHeart Okay. So, I write on mobile as well. Which is why, looking over your post, this isn't something I can accept for the roleplay. Even with the edit, it is still riddled with spelling errors, incorrect uses of grammer and punctuation, and run-on sentences. There is an NPC that has no sheet with it. And just as an example, using 'swore' instead of 'swear', using past instead of future tense, and changing the tense throughout. Having access to hay and grannysmith apples, when most of the world is struggling with rations and stealing blue fruit from the spectral woods to survive - it doesn't make sense. Creating minions without thought, or exhaustion. Giving minions super powers, like echo location, which is a great way to Mary sue the roleplay.

The god-modding and lack of proper writing are reasons why I have to ask that you withdraw from the roleplay. I cannot continue with you. I apologize, as I know you put in a lot of work in your character, but for the reasons stated above, it is within my right to reject players I think do not suite my roleplay.

Good luck with your endeavors.




@SporkoBug It's fine, no worries. Thank you for the clarification.
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