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Hidden 1 mo ago 1 mo ago Post by CavnderOHeart
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I've decided to make a profile for my Wild. Which won't be until tomorrow as I'm about to start work soon.

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If I need to change anything lmk! Also I was in a rush. A paragraphs worth of data in coming for Gakushi's Wild gifted abilities.
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@Estylwen thought i'd mention for you; i left it vague for if the molotov breaks or not on Mimi's tail. I don't really know what would happen if it hit a hard yet padded surface such as a feathered tail.
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@CavnderOHeart Okay. So, I write on mobile as well. Which is why, looking over your post, this isn't something I can accept for the roleplay. Even with the edit, it is still riddled with spelling errors, incorrect uses of grammer and punctuation, and run-on sentences. There is an NPC that has no sheet with it. And just as an example, using 'swore' instead of 'swear', using past instead of future tense, and changing the tense throughout. Having access to hay and grannysmith apples, when most of the world is struggling with rations and stealing blue fruit from the spectral woods to survive - it doesn't make sense. Creating minions without thought, or exhaustion. Giving minions super powers, like echo location, which is a great way to Mary sue the roleplay.

The god-modding and lack of proper writing are reasons why I have to ask that you withdraw from the roleplay. I cannot continue with you. I apologize, as I know you put in a lot of work in your character, but for the reasons stated above, it is within my right to reject players I think do not suite my roleplay.

Good luck with your endeavors.




@SporkoBug It's fine, no worries. Thank you for the clarification.
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@Estylwen I completely understand stand. If you find it necessary kill Gakushi. If not just delete my posts.
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Post will be up tomorrow, just ran out of time tonight
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@Herald Sounds good! No rush!
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Smaller post to avoid confirmed kills.
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Fire post. That means it's my turn again! I'll aim to have something up tomorrow or the day after. :>
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Got a quick action post up! Resist being taken to the Ghost Corp HQ or forever hold your peace! :>
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Got a quick action post up! Resist being taken to the Ghost Corp HQ or forever hold your peace! :>


"Getting shot or getting eaten... gosh, that's a hard choice to make,"


I refer you to my character's quote.
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I feel that. I feel that so much. xD
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What? Ferz' possibly caring for Wren? Madness uwu
Poor Mimi.
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I'll probably get a reply out on Friday <3
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Epic post, Sporko. And yep, that sounds good, Qia!
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Hey I'm interested in joining this if you'll have me, what kind of role or concept do you think I could fill in for this RP?

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Hey I'm interested in joining this if you'll have me, what kind of role or concept do you think I could fill in for this RP?


Hey Lana, good to see you again. You're more than welcome to submit a CS! We could use a Wild who takes orders directly from the Wild King. I could send you on a mission and get you into the main plot quickly. Or you could be a Lawless, or even an Umbra soldier. It's up to you.
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Posted. Happy Turkey Day all!
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The post looks great! Thanks!

Looks like it's just Qia now, and then I'll post for the next round. :)
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Hey Lana, good to see you again. You're more than welcome to submit a CS! We could use a Wild who takes orders directly from the Wild King. I could send you on a mission and get you into the main plot quickly. Or you could be a Lawless, or even an Umbra soldier. It's up to you.


Could I get your discord to discuss the idea more, or would you prefer PM?
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@LanaStorm I'm pretty active on RPG, so you're more than welcome to PM me. Alas, I don't have a discord.




Great post, Qia! Looks like it's my turn again! I'll aim to have something up tomorrow or the day after.
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