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@Guardian Angel Haruki hm, out of those two I think Everything is a Nail definitely fits better--do you have any specific ideas as to how mastery of writing stories could help her out here? if not i have some thoughts, but if you already have something in mind i'd like to hear that first.
I was thinking her mastery of writing stories would help her communicate effectively on how the Agent is the bad guy here, even though he is the hero in his own story, by pointing out the following:
1) The creature he was chasing is clearly scared out of its wits, and the agent plans to kill it.
2) If the diners were still here, he would have killed them just to get at said creature.
3) If this is what his agency requires him to do for justice's sake, then what kind of justice is he fighting for? Is it really worth it to him?
I'm definitely interested in hearing your thoughts. ^_^