1 Guest viewing this page
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Avery Calhoun
Raw
OP
Avatar of Avery Calhoun

Avery Calhoun I pick things up and I put them down.

Member Seen 9 yrs ago

WORKING IDEA ADAPTED FROM A SHORT STORY OF MINE.


The Gates of Eden


What I have here is an idea for a science fiction thread based off a short story of mine that has the same title. This however, is not my short story... I have already written that. What I intend this to be is a collaborative effort, not only in the arena of character development but also concerning plot development and world creation.

For this recruitment thread I will post a series of bullet points and source material that will detail the broad brushstrokes of the story. From there it will be open to people who want to take a collaborative part in this world in order to create an OOC thread that contains all the information for character creation and world details. Once I have anywhere from 4 (min) to 10 (max) people interested I will create the OOC, once a body of info, to include characters, has been developed in the OOC I will turn it over to the thread. Any people that are interested please feel free to let me know here and voice your ideas.





That is the gist of it. Like I said before, I am open to and encourage collaborative world building so if you want to help fill in the holes and play a character at the same time then let me know here and we can get this thing started.

Also even of you do not want to join up feel free to send me a critique or advice via PM (when it works again) if you are so inclined.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Orion
Raw
Avatar of Orion

Orion

Member Seen 2 yrs ago

I am going to throw my hat in for this. It has been a while since I have done a proper Sci-fi and I know that you will be able to do this justice Avery.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Avery Calhoun
Raw
OP
Avatar of Avery Calhoun

Avery Calhoun I pick things up and I put them down.

Member Seen 9 yrs ago

Thanks for the vote of confidence Orion, great to have your skill, as always. Ill be putting up some info Tuesday.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by februari
Raw

februari

Member Seen 8 mos ago

It looks like there would be quite a bit to work with, so I'm interested as well.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Avery Calhoun
Raw
OP
Avatar of Avery Calhoun

Avery Calhoun I pick things up and I put them down.

Member Seen 9 yrs ago

Awesome, glad to have your interest Februari. Like I said to Orion, I will be posting some info (a timeline and a few vignettes from the short story) by Tuesday night. I am open to any type of character you are looking to introduce. Like I said above they would probably be highly trained and educated experts in an applicable field but outside of that feel free to brainstorm anything you want on world ideas and character ideas... this is an open forum as far as I am concerned.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Wernher
Raw
Avatar of Wernher

Wernher

Member Seen 29 days ago

I'm lurking.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Canoli
Raw
Avatar of Canoli

Canoli On a roll

Member Seen 16 days ago

Add another hat. This is a very appealing concept.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Zran
Raw
Avatar of Zran

Zran Ancient and Forever

Member Seen 4 yrs ago

This sounds like just the thing to jump back into RPing with if you don't mind me being a bit rusty. I'm thinking of a weapons engineer type character, We can hash out the available weaponry as we go I'm thinking not really too much more than today, but that's up to you. You wouldn't send a mission to colonize a planet with out sufficient armory to back it up. who knows what is on Gilese. even if there is nothing It would be interesting to explore a way to make the character useful in some other manner on a new planet.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Orion
Raw
Avatar of Orion

Orion

Member Seen 2 yrs ago

We still goof for this?
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Canoli
Raw
Avatar of Canoli

Canoli On a roll

Member Seen 16 days ago

I sure hope so!
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by shutupgravity
Raw

shutupgravity

Member Offline since relaunch

I'm interested, if you're still accepting people. Sounds like a fun Thread :)
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Avery Calhoun
Raw
OP
Avatar of Avery Calhoun

Avery Calhoun I pick things up and I put them down.

Member Seen 9 yrs ago

Yes we are still online for this. I am working out a few things but I will post that promised Tuesday info tonight. I also recorded myself talking about world ideas on my five hour drive back to VA. Once I find a way to upload that and link it I will post it so anyone who is interested can hear me blab about how I think the world should behave.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Avery Calhoun
Raw
OP
Avatar of Avery Calhoun

Avery Calhoun I pick things up and I put them down.

Member Seen 9 yrs ago

Okay, so for those of you that have expressed interest here is the basic character submission that I will be using for this story. The first three areas are self explanatory but here are a few notes. Please include first and last names and any common nicknames (not required) and as far as age goes I am looking at any young super geniuses being no younger than 25 and this will not be the common case. Only your crazy Spencer Reed, Beautiful Mind types would be that young and still skilled enough to be selected, most character will be 28-30+ at the younger end of the line.

Nationality and/or ethnicity is a bit different in this year 2400 world. I have already listed some of the new nations in the intro bullet points (Northern China Free State, the Mongolian Protectorate, and the Russo-Siberian Nation) and there are many new faces on the global stage. Besides those above established nations, The Confederated States of America (The U.S. East Coast from VA to FL and the "South" up to Texas), The Pan-Amerada Alliance (The North-East of the U.S. and Canada along with every State on a Great Lake), The Plains Nation (the U.S. Great Plains and north-central Canada), The new Japaneses Empire (the U.S. west coast... Japan is gone), The Republic of Texas (all of Texas, Oklahoma, Mexico, Guatemala, and Honduras), and The Greater Alaskan Free Zone (Alaska, western Canada, the Bering straight, and Russia east of the Kolyma river) are all new nations I want in the story. I will give a brief outline of all of these listed nations tomorrow. As for the rest of the world, divide it up as you see fit if you want to play with the NWO concept of new nations and such. If you create a place though just be prepared to post a paragraph or so of why this place came into being, if you do that we can edit it into the story concept.

For education and skills be specific and remember these people are the kind of people that make professors and other experts feel nervous. Your characters are the people on the cutting edge of their fields so be liberal with your qualifications but not super-human... just shy of that please.

Positive and negative qualities. Please find it in yourself to list at least two of each and make them playable qualities that will be present in a character's life. I find that laying these out on paper beforehand brings some interesting things into the story dynamic.

As far as the Vignette/audition goes it is optional but encouraged. Write a quick couple of paragraphs to strut your characters stuff and get a feel for how you will write them and how everyone else will write theirs. It doesn't have to be anything epic just a quick blurb, put your character in a situation and show us how they deal with it. Like I said it is optional but I appreciate them and if (it doesn't look like it will) we get more than 10 offers for interest, these auditions will help when making my final cast choices.

Lastly, concept pics are cool but not required.

Name:

Gender:

Age:

Nationality/ethnicity:

General description:

Education/skills:

Positive qualities:

Negative qualities:

History:

Vignette/audition (optional):
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Avery Calhoun
Raw
OP
Avatar of Avery Calhoun

Avery Calhoun I pick things up and I put them down.

Member Seen 9 yrs ago

Orion, everything is still here and kicking, I intend this thread to be a lot like Last Embers as far as the collaborative world creation goes so if you have any Sci-fi ideas you want to throw in feel free..

Wernher and Canoli thanks for stopping by and I hope I can make it interesting enough for you to stick around. Also Grav (is that fine for shorthand shutupgravity?) glad to see you too. If any of you want to mull over character ideas just shoot them to me here or privately, also feel free to ask any questions as we move along.

Zran, thanks for showing interest too and despite any "rust" I think you'll be just fine here. As far as a specific "weapons" engineer though I am not sure. You have a valid point about not being defenseless but I don't know if they would send someone that has that as a primary expertise. Now, expanding on your idea, someone who is an expert at Terran survival skills, possibly with a prior military or security contractor background, and has been studying the ecosystem on Gilese from a survivability aspect for years would be more like it. This kind of person could very well be a weapons expert and could have been pulled in to help the PCC develop defensive countermeasures and weaponry that would work within Gilese's atmospheric and gravitational confines... that would be good to go. Gilese has actually been studied by a good many probes and such so they have a good idea of what to expect (more on that soon) but there will be some X-factors that a character like that would be ideal at handling.

I will be posting an Earth history timeline and Gilese description here soon (by Saturday!) Any new notes, descriptions, or story points will be edited into the first post, so check it often. I want to load up the file with my spoken notes but I am having a tough time doing that. Anyone know a good program for uploading and linking audio files?

I know it may be hard to put together a character without the total world info up but feel free to create what you want and if it works in the story we will add it into the world.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Wernher
Raw
Avatar of Wernher

Wernher

Member Seen 29 days ago

WIP



Name: Dennis Serclaes

Gender: Male

Age: 43

Nationality/ethnicity: Ethnic German, Northern League National
The Northern league was named after the Italian party for independence of north Italy, Lombardy or 'Padania' that started the idea that the north was simply better than the south, which was a drain of resources. After victories of nationalists through Europe, especially in France, a new 'Clique' within the EU, composed of Northern Italy, France, Germany, Austria and the BeNeLux began to form, insisting that they had a 'Special Status' as the economic motor of Europe. When southern Italy, Spain, Portugal, Ireland and Greece would all default on their debt, the north, rather than throwing them out of the EU, left the EU, leaving the south (And Ireland) with the burden of sorting things out themselves. With years they would confederate and eventually federate under the Northern League, a rich but extremely closed society placing extreme value on assimilation and that tented to be extremely interventionist in Africa as to sustain its economy. With the rise of the PCC, the NL was forced to be more open in its politics but while it in theory went back to a more open society, no one named Mohammed would ever be able to find a job within the NL.

General description:

Education/skills:
-Biochemistry
-Virology
-Genetics

Positive qualities:
-Jovial, he knows how to lighten the atmosphere with a joke or how to laugh with people when he does something silly.
-Homemade chemistry, he can probably make a bottle of alcohol out of a fungal colony in your shoe, he doesn't need the fancy laboratory although it helps.
-Get dirty, he isn't afraid to do so.
-Guitar, he plays it decently.

Negative qualities:
-Drunk, he can make alcohol out of everything and will drink it to 'Taste if it's good'. He's generally drunk all the time unless he's working, and that's because he's so obsessed with his work that he forgets to drink and sobers up in the mean time.
-Slightly Racist, he wouldn't say a black person (As long as he isn't 'Gangsta like') is inferior to a white person, but he has a tendency to refer to Asians as chinks, blacks as niggers and so forth.
-Celibate, unless a woman is really drunk, Dennis is the kind of people that just can't get laid due to horrible pick up lines and a breath that stinks of alcohol, although he will try. Females beware.

History:

Vignette/audition (optional):
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Canoli
Raw
Avatar of Canoli

Canoli On a roll

Member Seen 16 days ago

I'm currently wondering what fields the characters might be specialized in? Some are obvious, I suppose, but others might not be (to me). I'll hold on writing up the character until I've decided what field(s) (s)he is an expert in.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Orion
Raw
Avatar of Orion

Orion

Member Seen 2 yrs ago

Quick questions just to help pad out my physicist/geologist, does the tech extend to cyberization? Drawing on everything from a Star Trek style data or Ghost in the Shell cyborg? I imagine that with a couple more centuries of warfare that prosthesis would have continued to advance quite quickly, given that we already have some devices that can replicate human movement even know.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Avery Calhoun
Raw
OP
Avatar of Avery Calhoun

Avery Calhoun I pick things up and I put them down.

Member Seen 9 yrs ago

~Wernher, I like the work you have done so far, seems like a interesting character and I like the NL background info. I will include it when I begin including nation descriptions in the OP and if anything else ever comes up that you want to add just send it to me and I will post it in. I like the flaws as well that was what I was talking about with making the characters interesting.

~Canoli, here are some example fields to get your wheels working.

Any of the sciences: Any branch of Biology, Chemistry, Physics, etc, etc...
Engineers, habitat specialists, gate tech engineers, naturalists, geologists, medical personnel, marine biology, cartographers, famous explorers, photographers, journalist, survivalist, microbiologist, etc, etc...

~Orion, Yes cyberization and bioware do exist but much more along the lines of Shadowrun than anything else. While tech is advanced, it is not Trek advanced because there has been no "first contact" to help things along. I have provided a few links to cyberware and bioware concepts from Shadowrun in case you are unfamiliar.

http://shadowrun.wikia.com/wiki/Cybertechnology
http://shadowlandsl.wikia.com/wiki/Cyberware
http://shadowrun.wikia.com/wiki/Biotechnology
http://shadowlandsl.wikia.com/wiki/Bioware

The general concepts apply but not necessarily the game mechanics or setting of Shadowrun (though it is similar). There are no "metahumans" or awakened magical characters. Things like essence still exist in the abstract, so you can't implant too much or the body dies.

Also, I will detail this more this weekend but I will give a blurb here before the main post Orion.

As the characters undergo their trip in hypersleep the ships AI at the direction of the PCC will be altering their bodies. Nano machinery will begin the process of making their bones denser, the muscular tissue more compact and efficient, cardiovascular, neurological, endocrine, and connective tissue will all be improved at the cellular and genomic level by nanotech and biological modification. Your characters will look no different they won't "mutate" or anything like that and when they wake on the ship and they are on Gilese they will feel like they did on earth, even with the enhancements, because the ship is programed to simulate Gilese. That is because the advancements were applied over the 100 year trip to make them feel that Gilese is normal and allow them to function properly without equipment. The gravity of Gilese is about 1.5 that of earth, the atmosphere is hyper oxygenated and pure and along with some other world factors, a bit different than earth. With these "improvements" the characters will feel normal on Gilese.

The fun will happen when and if they open the gate and return to earth. The atmosphere there will be near toxic to them but with the improved bodies they will be faster, stronger, have better reflexes, etc, etc all while looking the same. Breathing would be the only problem, but that is what re-breathers and such are for.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Avery Calhoun
Raw
OP
Avatar of Avery Calhoun

Avery Calhoun I pick things up and I put them down.

Member Seen 9 yrs ago

Also some WIP stuff has been added to the OP. The timeline, Nations, and Stories bit are all labeled as WIPs because I am still adding to them, if you guys want to add anything in please PM me or post it here and we can get it added much like the info on the NL was added.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Avery Calhoun
Raw
OP
Avatar of Avery Calhoun

Avery Calhoun I pick things up and I put them down.

Member Seen 9 yrs ago

Okay as this has sat for a little bit I want to get a "role-call" of who is still interested. If there are at least four or five left I will move the OP and info into an OOC so everyone that has not begun working on a character can go ahead and start.
↑ Top
1 Guest viewing this page
© 2007-2024
BBCode Cheatsheet