Scallop said
'Taste the rainbow'
I love you.
Anyway, I will immediately head to some feedback.
Darwin Indigo
- I commend you for using rainbows. lol
- On to some actual feedback, the lack of explanation on why Darwin has unicorn blood when his parents did not leaves me quite confused. Some background behind this will be nice, or a change in this particular part could suffice as well.
- Just a personal question, but does Darwin have any goals besides being able to use his powers and have fun? If he does, some clarification will be appreciated. If not, then leaving it as it is will be fine.
- What are the limits to his ability to fly? Details on this will be appreciated. Can he just fly away to seriously high heights, or is there a certain balance to it?
- I know I may be sounding picky, but I would also like to know the power of his rainbows (lol). Do the rainbow bolts do moderate damage? Or does it have any side-effects (like causing short-term rainbow visions :P). Clarifications on his more combative abilities will be appreciated.
- Rainbows.
I am freaking in LOVE with this character for the sole fact that he can fire freaking RAINBOW BOLTS out of his hands. And he's a unicorn. <_>
Some additional tweaking to his details will be greatly appreciated, but I am in love with what I'm seeing so far.
Gaming Crisis.