[OOC] Athalia Academy

[NaraK]

Scallop said
'Taste the rainbow'

I love you.

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Anyway, I will immediately head to some feedback.

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Darwin Indigo

• I commend you for using rainbows. lol



• On to some actual feedback, the lack of explanation on why Darwin has unicorn blood when his parents did not leaves me quite confused. Some background behind this will be nice, or a change in this particular part could suffice as well.



• Just a personal question, but does Darwin have any goals besides being able to use his powers and have fun? If he does, some clarification will be appreciated. If not, then leaving it as it is will be fine.



• What are the limits to his ability to fly? Details on this will be appreciated. Can he just fly away to seriously high heights, or is there a certain balance to it?



• I know I may be sounding picky, but I would also like to know the power of his rainbows (lol). Do the rainbow bolts do moderate damage? Or does it have any side-effects (like causing short-term rainbow visions :P). Clarifications on his more combative abilities will be appreciated.



• Rainbows.

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I am freaking in LOVE with this character for the sole fact that he can fire freaking RAINBOW BOLTS out of his hands. And he's a unicorn. <_>

Some additional tweaking to his details will be greatly appreciated, but I am in love with what I'm seeing so far.

[Kenshi Brett]

Keep kiwi away from Kenshi.

[NaraK]

Kenshi Brett said
Keep kiwi away from Kenshi.

Oh, you know what's coming at you, my friend. No point in running. >:D

On another note, don't feel pressured by who your character interacts with! Of course, it'd be weird to have him suddenly burst out of the principal's office and immediately end up in the gardens or something, but you get the gist of what I'm saying, amirite? :D

[Kenshi Brett]

I will probally make him have a accident when hes peeved off.

[HylianRose]

@ Animal, Done! ~

@ Scallop, I love it. xD
Can't wait to see him in there.

Scary Thoughts and a really bad League reference...

Kiwi sees who she pleases.

[NaraK]

Kenshi Brett said
I will probally make him have a accident when hes peeved off.

PAIN SUSTAINS ME

EDIT:

HylianRose said
@ Animal, Done! ~@ Scallop, I love it. xDCan't wait to see him in there.

That was quite disturbing Rose. ._.'

[Animal]

HylianRose said -snip-

[HylianRose]

Animal said

On another note, Allan wouldn't know who Bael is. One, I don't think they ever met. Two, he only knows Bael's demon form.

o-o;

[Scallop]

HylianRose said
@ Animal, Done! ~@ Scallop, I love it. xDCan't wait to see him in there.

[Ebil Bunny]

Postage Posted :D

[Animal]

HylianRose said
On another note, Allan wouldn't know who Bael is. One, I don't think they ever met. Two, he only knows Bael's demon form.o-o;

I know. It's always been a habit of mine to include character's names in there to let others know who I'm talking about. I just don't make my characters say their names directly.

[Scallop]

Finished ultra rainbow Darwin

[Ebil Bunny]

Scallop said
Finished ultra rainbow Darwin

Sorry, just had to use that gif XD

[HylianRose]

Animal said
I know. It's always been a habit of mine to include character's names in there to let others know who I'm talking about. I just don't make my characters say their names directly.

Alright. Now we're all on the same page. :P

Scallop said
Finished ultra rainbow Darwin

Lol. I approve and if NK does, I'll put you on the list.

His background is still a bit shakily worded, but it's optional, so I'm kay with it.

[Scallop]

Ebil Bunny said
Sorry, just had to use that gif XD

[Kenshi Brett]

Can I ask for a minor character. Just a garden gnome who goes mental when people go on the grass. Its part of a storyline for kenshi that I considering.

[Scallop]

I would be happy to do that Kenshi, I love playing comic relief

[Kenshi Brett]

No, I want to do it. I'm just asking for permission, also

Gaming Crisis.

[HylianRose]

Kenshi Brett said
Can I ask for a minor character. Just a garden gnome who goes mental when people go on the grass. Its part of a storyline for kenshi that I considering.

You can have three characters. The gnome would fill one of your three slots and you'd have to submit a CS for approval.

[Kenshi Brett]

Too much work for a time character.