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@Vongola_Hasayo@Rune_AlchemistJust to let you guy's know, I altered my CS a bit, adding a spell to the roster and finsihing up my possible secret arts. I also aged him up a bit, because I feel like an S-class should be a bit older.
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@Raijinslayer Okay, so looking it over I'm gonna have to ask you to rein in the spells. It feels like you're trying to cover every scenario which as smart as that is, is realistically not possible and a little overboard. My suggestion is stick with the theme of light and dark by limiting the spells to being offensive and defensive respectively. Get rid of Radiance, Penance, and Shadow; drop the hallucinatory effect on Haze of Nightmares; and the second Secret Art isn't acceptable. Like I said it just seems like you were trying to cover too much ground with the amount of spells and over variety of abilities they gave him.

@TheHangedMan As for Phoebe, just dial back the speed a lot. Light speed/faster than light speed attacks is very OP. Other than that I see no problems.
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@Vongola_Hasayo So I know I should read it over but it seems like a race against time. Do you have Fire Dragon Slayer? If not I'd like to make an app for one :)

Hey again by the way.
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@Vongola_HasayoOkay, no problem, anything else that needs to be changed?
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Oi is it to late to join?
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@Renny You've scooped up the last Slayer spot I'll accept, though that means it'll have to be for Harpy's Wing since I'm going with a 2 per guild and Raijin and Rune have nabbed both for Golem's Hand. Also, took me a minute to remember you. Sorry about that ^.^;

@Raijinslayer No, that's it.

@Rune_Alchemist If you could add something too her experience during the attack on Luna to justify why she thinks that Harpy is the kind to stand idly by. An event she witnessed that could be misread as them being passive since as stated they did defend the town to best of their abilities.
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@Vongola_HasayoCool. I've made those changes, so is he good to go? Also, you didn't answer if he could be an S-class or not?
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@Raijinslayer Oh, right yes that's fine and go ahead and move him to the char tab.

@kkbird123 Nope, get a char sheet up and I'll look it over.

I'm gonna stop allowing people to come in until we have everyone who's interested char sheets so I can see the numbers so far.
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@Vongola_Hasayo Dope. Let's see what I can create.
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@Rune_Alchemist If you could add something too her experience during the attack on Luna to justify why she thinks that Harpy is the kind to stand idly by. An event she witnessed that could be misread as them being passive since as stated they did defend the town to best of their abilities.


Ah? I thought they were late to the party or something, though I may be remembering wrong xD

I'll go ahead and change that, in any case.

EDIT: And done. Changed that bit.
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<Snipped quote by Vongola_Hasayo>

Ah? I thought they were late to the party or something, though I may be remembering wrong xD

I'll go ahead and change that, in any case.

EDIT: And done. Changed that bit.


Okay then, she's good to go~
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Also, Klisa looks good to me (obviously~)


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@Vongola_Hasayo Sure, though can I keep the speed for Sun Chariot the same and limit it by having a cool down time instead? Say 30 seconds between each jump?
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I am quite tempted to go back into another FT RP. Let's see if this one can hold. Also, familiar faces galore!

(Realizes the Statement: I'm gonna stop allowing people to come in until we have everyone who's interested char sheets so I can see the numbers so far.)

Uh... still ok for me to whip something up maybe?
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@TheHangedMan Right, forgot to mention that. Since it is primarily an escape move I'm fine with it having the speed it does.

@Lmpkio You are a returning member and I feel obligated to make up to you guys especially for dropping things like I did. So, you have a spot here for sure.
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@Vongola_Hasayo Oh thanks :) In that case, I'll either bring home a returning character and add a new one down the line, or maybe make a new one off the bat... I'll see what I can do.
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@Vongola_Hasayo Edited the CS, as for the exact speed of her spells, lowest as supersonic speed, highest at hypersonic, depending on the time of day and amount of light out.
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Definitely intrested in this, is it possible for me to join?
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Alright, I think I've figured out the numbers so I'm opening applications up again.
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