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@Zapdos

i have the power!
of swimming

i can-

i can swim
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@PKMNB0Y Let me address the cultural thing first. Duels among the kitsune rarely end in death. However, outsiders don't have the same dueling culture and will often try to turn it into a death match, which is what happened. I mentioned that when she was 14, she was upset with this, but the fact that it happened when she was so young is partly why, 8 years later, she is over it. She's not jaded by it, but she has accepted the fact that it is sometimes necessary to kill in self-defense. Also, I meant to imply that she had to kill to defend her home from outsiders, not other kitsune. I just opted not to write a novella describing her emotional journey.

As for the abilities, the ones you have problems with are based on folklore. I'm not sure why you find water-walking problematic. All it does is grant a mode of transportation in a specific situation. But, if it really bothers you I can do away with it. The foxfire, though, is integral to kitsune lore. I made it weaker because yukine is already a hand-to-hand fighter and I didn't want to imbalance the character. The practical function of it would be to augment her martial arts. If you think that the foxfire makes the character imbalanced, I'd be willing to alter it's function, but doing away with it is kind of a deal-breaker for a kitsune character.
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@Hayazo: My issue is more with the fact that she decided to make the snap decision to just kill the offender, but fair's fair.

The problem I have with waterwalking is that it also limits my ability to set up scenarios for the RPers. It had the possibility of limiting what I can do without trivializing stuff, so it's problematic.

Well, when you said 'control' I assumed something along the lines of firing off the fire like bullets at something, tbh. Fire is fire, after all, and even if the bullets don't kill something, the residual fire, smoke, and chaos might.
Fire fists is okay though.

Edit: Oh, shoot. Forgot Zapdos.
Look, humans can be just as useful because they have the wonders of technology. Don't worry about not being strong enough, because everyone will have something to contribute.
Hopefully.
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@PKMNB0Y Okay. Did away with water walking and altered the foxfire description.
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@Hayazo: Yeah, you're fine now. Accepted.

And that's another person in! Okay!
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Edit: Oh, shoot. Forgot Zapdos.
Look, humans can be just as useful because they have the wonders of technology. Don't worry about not being strong enough, because everyone will have something to contribute.
Hopefully.

Maybe so, but if you aren't at least somewhat near the level of everyone else in terms of combat, you can't really participate much at all in a good portion of the roleplay, and the impression I'm getting is this roleplay is going to be very combat-heavy. Maybe I'm wrong, but it seems to me that combat prowess is the focus of a lot of the CSes. And if technology is at a relatively rudimentary stage (according to the OP) compared to magic, mystical races, etc. that exist, it doesn't balance out. I could be reading too much into it, but my ideas so far (and I have a few) don't seem to mesh with the other characters. Maybe I'll think of a character idea in the next 12-18 hours that works, but it seems unlikely. I'm not writing all of this to be nitpicky or pointlessly critical, that's just what I see and where I'm at right now.
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@Zapdos: Good on your intuition, except... Not really. Combat will exist, but it's not the centerpiece. With the limits I imposed on magic, it's harder to let mages just... Do everything at once, I guess. The fighting is also more a byproduct of circumstances; a world filled with fighting up until recently isn't going to let it go just like that.
Also... Fear not the giant with the big stick, but the man with the open mind.
Don't think, just do. I'll find a way for everyone to have their place, even if you aren't going to be tossing blows out at the enemy.

Oh shoot, I forgot a person with the reminder flags.
@Savo, you're still a WIP, right?
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Oh shoot, I forgot a person with the reminder flags.
@Savo, you're still a WIP, right?


As far as I know, he is.

But he's being a lazy slow butt. I'll see if I can get his butt in gear xP
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<Snipped quote by PKMNB0Y>

As far as I know, he is.

But he's being a lazy slow butt. I'll see if I can get his butt in gear xP


There's a thing called college you know.

Unlike you, I haven't graduated yet and I'm going to at least attempt to get this finished after I'm out of class :P

Anyways, hope you guys appreciate a second hunter (merc of sorts) who is basically useless until he gets a few arrows in his crossbow xP
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@Zapdos: Good on your intuition, except... Not really. Combat will exist, but it's not the centerpiece. With the limits I imposed on magic, it's harder to let mages just... Do everything at once, I guess. The fighting is also more a byproduct of circumstances; a world filled with fighting up until recently isn't going to let it go just like that.
Also... Fear not the giant with the big stick, but the man with the open mind.
Don't think, just do. I'll find a way for everyone to have their place, even if you aren't going to be tossing blows out at the enemy.


Interesting stuff. I'll think a bit more on a character and we'll see if something comes up in my mind. I wouldn't wait on me or anything, but maybe something will come to mind that'll work.
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Hmm..seems interesting. I might think up a character, if there's a deadline let me know.
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I'm really sorry it's taking me so long, I've been busy these last few days, but I will try to get it up as soon as possible.
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Hmmm... So I think my main problem is that a lot of the ideas I'm coming up with would probably break the premise too easily from the getgo. ^^; They're not really good for a survival-type thing, since I always seem to default to high fantasy whenever I do fantasy stuff really. XD Hmmm.
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@NiceScourge: Well... We're probably starting tonight, if that counts? It'll be open a while after, more likely than not.

@Decker126: Alright, no worries.

@Rin: I mean... Just take into account the limitations of magic and you should be good to go, honestly.
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Okay here it is, I hope it's ok.

Name: Thanox

Age: 13 (Average lifespan of his species is only around 30-35 years)

Race: Exoian

Appearance: Like all Exoians, Thanox greatly resembles an insect, in his case an ant. He has a thick exoskeleton that is a rusty color. His species also has a small pair of antenna on their heads, as well as an extra pair of arms below the main arms. These other arms are smaller and not as strong, only being able to lift about half as much as the larger pair. His face is also very ant like with large compound eye, and a set of pincer like mandibles over his mouth.
Thanox is fairly tall, standing at around 6’5, although he is also strong, he doesn’t appear so. His body is thinner and he does not have as much visible muscle compared to other races. His body is also covered in various tattoos and ritual marks.

Personality: Thanox is above all loyal to whatever group he is in. This is because all Exoians strive to better the hive and put the good of many above the good of an individual. Even if the his new “hive” is made up of very different races, Thanox will still do whatever he can to help and would be perfectly willing to sacrifice himself to save a fellow member.
However, because he was raised in an environment where everyone works to help each other, he is completely unaware that people can act selfishly and try to only better themselves. This makes him a bit gullible since if some asks him to do something he would simply assume it is for everyone’s benefit.
Despite willing to help others, Thanox is distant from most people, and can come off as a bit cold. However he would open up to those he respects, mainly other hunters, and he would try to make some connections with people but it is a slow process with him.

Abilities: Thanox was a hunter from his hive so he has skills in tracking, and he is quite strong and skilled in his weapon of choice. He prefers to actively hunt his prey, but he can also make simple traps, provided he has the right materials.
To make up for their short lifespans, Exoians only require half as much sleep as most races, meaning Thanox could continue to work to finish a project or to hunt more food. Furthermore, growing up in a harsh desert environment has let Thanox develop a tolerance to heat and a lack of water, however he has never experienced a true winter before and he would be unprepared for it.
Lastly, an Exoians exoskeleton is fairly durable, giving him some natural protection.

Salvaged Item: A bladed boomerang, his personal weapon and a gift from his hive.

History: Ever since the day Thanox was born he knew only one thing, serve the hive. No matter what that meant, hunting for food, protecting his people from rival hives, or even raiding the caravans that the humans and elves sent through their lands. It was all for the greater good of his people and that was the only thing that mattered.
When war inevitably broke out and the different races can to pacify the Exoians, Thanox joined his people in defending their homes. However, despite their best efforts they were beaten and Thanox worked with the survivors to pick up the pieces of their old life.
When they received word of an expedition to a new land, the matriarch of Thanox’s hive decided to send him, seeing that he was capable but also expendable if something happened during the journey. Thanox accepted his new job as he always had and set off to the land in hopes that it would help restore his people.

Nation of Origin: The Desert Land Quroc.

Nation Lore: The Exoians do not have one central government, instead each settlement is a hive and each hive has its own ruler, a queen. Each individual is given a job to do and they are expected to fulfill this job to the best of their ability. Although the queen is above all others in the hive, other Exoians’ status is determined by how well they can perform their job. For example, a simple, yet highly skilled builder would be of more value than an advisor to the queen who only performed decently.
The various hives often fought one another for supplies or territory and alliances between them were rare, and often uneasy. However this changed when the various humans, elves, and other residents in Quroc united to put an end to the raiding done by the Exoians.
At first, the hives tried to handle the problem individually. However as more and more of the hives fell, the various matriarchs finally agreed to unite and defend all of their lands. For a while they were a formidable force. Life expectancy was low among their people, but they matured faster, and many were born at once giving them the advantage in numbers. Sadly it was not to last.
Due to the fact that alliances were rare among their people, and certainly never to this degree, the Exoian alliance quickly fell apart. The queens argued over how to proceed and which hives should be protected first which led to their armies receiving conflicting orders and only succeeded in disorganizing their forces. Their enemy on the other hand was performing very well. Early in the war, when the Exoians were still fighting separately, the humans and elves discovered the most effective ways to destroy the hives, mostly a combination of magic, and simple explosives placed at certain locations. This gave them the upper hand and allowed them to defeat the numerically superior Exoians.
After the war ended, the Exoians were forced deeper into the desert, with less supplies, and less land they became desperate to find a way to survive. The news of a new land sparked in hope in at least one queen, who hoped the land could be used to re-establish the Exoian people.

Other: He secretly enjoys poetry, something he discovered after he left his home, and occasionally tries to make some of his own. It is all terrible.
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Been a while since I've written an app, sooooo yeah. Sorry if a few things are lackluster and apologies for taking so long to finish one part of my app xD

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Well... We're probably starting tonight

WOOOO!
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I am excited at the potential of the starting.

But also not because its late and I am tired and really need to get off my lazy butt and post posts in things xP
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@Decker126: It's fine, save for the lack of any facial description (because you said antlike, I literally cannot see him as anything but a bipedal antman). Accepted once a face... Exists.

@Savo: Looks fine to me. Accepted.
(Protip: The past tip of 'slay' is 'slain'.)

Anyhow, I'm writing up a first post now. Spent too much time playing BnS with friends because of an update and rip.
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Well... We're probably starting tonight, if that counts? It'll be open a while after, more likely than not.

I'm actually writing up a CS right now, so I'm hoping it's still open after you make the first post. I might just skip the appearance part if the CS needs to be done sooner, but the CS is coming together.
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