@ClocktowerEchosHow's my NS? I haven't seen you commenting much on it yet. Granted, I was pretty occupied with Key's new space NRP. Just asking for an update. Also yes, I'll work on the rest soon.
@ClocktowerEchosHow's my NS? I haven't seen you commenting much on it yet. Granted, I was pretty occupied with Key's new space NRP. Just asking for an update. Also yes, I'll work on the rest soon.
Yeah, I've also managed to make some wise life decisions to make two other NRPs, rip me @_@ Any who, just repost your NS here and I'll take a look at it.
Alright! I post you the skeleton of my NS for now. No unit profiles, spell lists and due to map fluctuations I currently didn't make a detailed map on where each place is located. I even need to expand a few section. Still, this should be enough for you to get a gist of what to expect with them.
THE GOLDEN HORDE
Overview
The Golden Horde is an emerging power in the southeastern corner of Salvus. Also referred as the Uruk Empire the chief power within these lands are the semi-nomadic Uruk people. Once split into numerous tribes the Uruks came united and began their conquest and still continuing. They are a warlike race and their raids already earned them dread and infamy along the borders. The territories of the Golden Horde are surprisingly diverse, mixing various races and cultures together. Unlike other nations the Uruk do not assimilate people into their culture and rather allow them to retain their integrity and safely continue their lifestyle as long they accept the rule of the Uruk. A strange approach without a doubt yet so far it works for the Golden Empire.
Geography
Yellow = Golden Horde Yellow = Golden Horde
1.) Plains of Viridia (Gijak'Tor) 2.) Khagan Highlands (Khagh'aan) 3.) Dwarven City States of Yngvar 4.) Sundaurdh Bay 5.) Llóthyen Martiarchy 5.) Kathíria 6.) Malibderan 7.) Jidor (friendly but not actually part of the empire)
Red dots denote capitals of each region. Blue dots denote one of the seven Cyclops tribes and the vague position of their territory. Purple dots are major Kashgar settlements.
History
Uruk were one of the numerous nomadic races living and traveling Gijak'Tor (also known as the Plains of Viridia). They were wanderers with no permanent holdings split into numerous tribes. These tribes were frequently fighting, both among themselves and in service of neighboring nations. That was until 300 years ago when a young and charismatic leader Orakgash Khagn united the Uruk under a single tribe, creating what would be latter be referred as the Golden Horde. Lifetimes of fighting and mercenary background steeled them and the Uruk began their long conquest. Their methods seemed savage yet hid surprising level of planning and discipline. The nations sharing the plains with the Uruk quickly fell to their might and became subservient to the emerging empire. The news spread like wildfire and the "horde of black orcs" were became known and feared.
Orakgash established the Uruk nation and set down the foundation of the empire. Yet his early death prevented him to see it reaching full maturity. In honor of him all supreme leaders adopted the title Khagn (often mistranslated as Khan) and continued to direct the Horde to their destiny of conquests. The Uruk also adopted a more sedimentary lifestyle with military leaders becoming nobles and owning lands gifted by the Khagn for their achievements.
[To be continued...]
Government and Society
The Golden Horde is a large empire of diverse cultures united under the Uruk's rule. They became the lords and masters of these lands, their chieftains and military leaders often gaining ownership over a piece of land. They demand money, resources and manpower while also having the ultimate say in any matter. This might seem pretty tyranical at first but in effect so long a community pays their tribute and don't resist the Uruk they are pretty much left alone. Indeed, practically every nation conquered by the Uruk kept their culture and resumed their lifestyle mostly unchanged. Rebellions do occasionally happen but these are quickly put down by the dreadful might of the Uruk army. In addition the presence of Uruk brought unified law and trade to these lands, making their economy flourish like never before.
As mentioned before the Uruk did not replace the existing governments more than they found necessary. Uruk generals and other nobles may have became their new masters but overall life went on as usual. What the Uruk changed was the elimination of borders and most internal conflicts. By the law of the Uruk all subjects were equal and must be treated the same regardless of their nationality (with the exception of the Uruks themselves). Laws that were imposed on the subjects are few yet violating any of them has severe consequences. Death penalty is common and certain violations may either risk killing one's entire family in retribution. This resulted in drastic reduction in crime rate as whoever foolish enough to disobey the Uruk were found dead. Of course the Uruk have their own laws applying to themselves. If anything these are even more strict, constructed in a way to both keep the hordes in the line and also to prevent the Uruk fighting strength to ever degrade. People are allowed to participate in any religion within the Empire. Not the Uruk, though. They traditionally follow their ancient shamanistic beliefs and unless one suffers through the difficult process to receive the proper papers they are punished under the threat of death if they are caught participating for other faiths. Shamans in general enjoy a particular renown within the Uruk. They are their religious leaders, magicians, scholars or even artisans.
The leadership structure of the Uruk nation is unique. First, they don't have a distinction between rulers/nobles and military leaders. A lord of a province is also the owner of the army of Uruks stationing in that region. The Khagn in particular is both the ruler of the Uruk Empire and the supreme commander of all the Uruk Hordes. Just like nobles for other cultures the right to be a commander is often hereditary. Those of higher birth are often guaranteed to lead armies by the time they reach maturity. Yet as practical as they are the Uruk does not bear with incompetence and those proven unfit to command are stripped of their rank and shame their family. In turn those with exemplary deeds can advance in ranks and further their family even if they were originally of "commoner" birth. There are even rare cases of members from non-Uruk races being granted the honor. Of course these "rulers" can't really spare much time to govern their country (barring a few exceptions). Instead there exist another social structure within the Uruk culture, the shamans. These people often belong to particular families and receive different upbringing from the rest. Shamans are all part of the religious caste of the Uruks but their duty doesn't end there. They are the scholars and intellectuals of the Uruk race. They can be teachers, healers, administrators, engineers and at times even the magicians of the Uruk. They keep records of their race and maintain knowledge. Shamans are a tightly knit society and perhaps the secret behind the Golden Horde's success.
Race Description
The Golden Horde encompasses multiple nations and thus sports a rather diverse ethnicity. As their rulers and conquerors the Uruk are the first among them. Uruk language is mandatory to learn for anyone within the empire. In the same language they refer to the subservient races as Snaga. While certain people make connection between Snaga and slaves the word long lost such meaning. Since the time of Orakgash the term Snaga referred to those non-Uruk who aided the horde, often in matters outside of fighting. Granted, this did not stop certain people to use Snaga as a degrading term, highlighting the part about them serving the Uruk. Unsurprisingly enough the Uruk are actually in relative minority compared to the total number non-Uruk races. There are a diverse number of human cultures, lizardmen, dwarves, cyclops tribes and even an elven forest. These societies are largely undisturbed by the Uruk.
Uruks are tall (2-2.5 meters at average) and muscular humanoid creatures with skin tone ranging from pale brown to pitch black. They have snake-like eyes which can see well even in low-light conditions and can sense infrared at short ranges to somewhat navigate even within the darkness. Their physique makes the Uruk considerably stronger than human and more enduring. On the other hand their powerful bodies require more food to be kept healthy. Uruk are omnivorous and their tough stomach can allow them to eat almost anything albeit they prefer standard cuisines. Due to their body makeup the Uruk are more resistant to poisons and diseases than humans. Uruk are unique in that they don't grow weak until they reach venerable age which is around 80 years. With some luck Uruks can even live for 120 years albeit a warrior is far more likely to die after half or even just quarter of that. Uruks have high birthing rates and reach maturity somewhat faster than humans. This leads to them currently struggling with rapid population growth, one of the main reasons for the Uruk conquests.
Uruks bear many resemblance to the Orruk and this lead them to be termed as "black orcs". Yet the Uruk are more somewhat weaker and definitely more humanoid in appearance. Some scholars theorize that Orruk and Uruk originate from a common ancestor but currently the two are definitely belong to a different species. Orruks and Uruk cannot interbreed. Albeit curiously enough Uruks can be crossed by other humanoid races, especially humans. Elf-Uruk hybrids are plausible in theory but the two races find each other mutually repulsive. Speaking of which while considered ugly to humans and number of other races, Uruks think the opposite and find certain "beauty marks" hilarious or disgusting. Uruk females are built as tough as their male brethren if not even tougher. They regularly fight alongside their male partner and only stop for the 4 months when carrying their child. Uruk male and female divide the job of rearing their child equally between each other.
Uruk religion is based on their tribal shamanistic roots. They believe in the "gods" representing the four elements as well as respecting the spirits of the land, the forest, the rivers and the mountains. Their religious figures are the Laguurz which roughly translates "to do magical". They were chosen from the brightest most gifted members of the tribe and aside from listening to the spirits they also conduct numerous studies and experiments.
They were priests, scientists and even magicians. Even in the present this didn't change. Laguurz are all taught in the Uruk religion of the four elements but then they specialize to study other arts. Not all Laguurz are gifted in the art of magic and rather most of them study as scholars, healers or even scientists. Laguurz represents the intellectual class within the Uruk society and indeed the word is used interchangeably with the meaning of genius. As such rather than shaman they are nowadays much closer to scholars and wise men who seek knowledge.
Wargs are ferocious creatures seemingly borrowing the characeristic of large bears and oversized wolves.
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Economy/Industry
As mentioned prior the Uruk conquests unexpectedly helped the economy on the long run. No borders, unified laws, streamlined trade and prohibition of enmities went a long way to boost the wealth of all countries involved. Being the main trading partners with the Yngvar's Druegar or the Nihongo from Jidor are also something which shouldn't be ignored. Altogether the Uruk's focus on stability and trade benefited the region tremendously. The Khagn's palace is famous for its luxury and there are numerous tales of how the rulers find more and more ridiculous uses for their excess gold (even if most of these are exaggerations).
Development-wise the Uruk Empire is far more mixed. Huge swathes of their area are rural lands with sparsely any towns or cities. Albeit there are numerous exceptions like the mountains of Yngvar or the port region of Malibderan. Also most Khagns (or to be precise the shaman advisors guiding them) took considerable effort at developing their domain and dozens of Uruk-founded cities exist thriving with life. Industry-wise they borrowed both from Jidor an Yngvar to further improve on their technology. Naturally their main focus was on military and war. Furnances are a common sight even in the rural settlements. Karikabuum (Uruk's own take on gunpowder) in particular went through a massive improvement from wet substandard burning oil to a decent rival to even the gunpowder made in Thudrim Kadrin.
Karikasard is the namesake of this mixture. As the young god of violent fires the entity is part of the Uruk Pantheon and can also considered a war god. His name combined with the word "Buum" (Herbs) can together be translated as "herbs causing violent fires of war" which is a rather apt description for an explosive. Karikabuum (alternatively Kabuum or Kaboom for the noise it generates) is an unique Uruk invention, a balm like mixture of certain herbs and soil with function similar to gunpowder. It was first developed by shamans in order to reach a closer connection to the spirits of fire but it soon found use as a weapon. With sufficient knowledge it's possible to produce low-grade Karikabuum (also called Palsvaj AKA Blasting Jelly) without any special equipment which made it popular and widespread by the time of Orakgash Khagn's conquest. Better mixtures are dried of water and formed into either grains, balls or stalks for better combustion while also using purer and more refined ingredients. While many other kinds of gunpowder mixtures are known the Uruk Empire relies the most extensively on Karikabuum.
Magic
The Uruk does not rely on the Winds of Magic like most other cultures do. Instead the most gifted of their shamans can communicate with the spirits, generally those attuned with the nature or the four elements. Rather than commanding magic by influencing the Winds they interact with the spits for their aid. The mechanics are starkly different but in general the effects are similar. By the very nature of this magic most uses are bound to be supportive. Also while a mage might need to worry about the perrils and exhaustion, a shaman has different worries and limitations. Shamans are only mediums to communicate and spirits aid the Uruk out of goodwill or at times for a certain compensation. Abusing the spirits might lead them to deny your plea or worse make them turn against you in their wrath. Thus every Kastuurz (magic-casting shaman) needs to maintain a certain balance and make sure to keep the spirits pleased. Due to this Uruk in general are actually less likely to rely on magic than other races do.
Albeit the Kastuurz are not the only source of magic within the Golden Horde. Dwarves and their rune-smithing is well-known so is alchemy. Albeit these effects are less prominent and generally not listed among spells. On the other hand Viziers from Malibderan are an example of classic mages even if they ask for a hefty price to be hired. There are also mystics from the far southern continent of Nippon who rely on an unique source of energy. This power is usually referred as "ki" and originates from the body alone. Their effects are less pronounced but unlike magic they are far less risky on the user and can be utilized more often. Mystics from the faraway continent can be occasionally hired from Jidor, the Nippon-owned colony lying on a large island next to the Uruk Empire.
[Spell List will be added later]
Military
The core of the Golden Horde is compromised from their Uruk warriors. They are trained in warfare from youth and traditionally fight on their dreaded Warg mounts. Even after numerous military reforms the Wargs are the most valuable asset to the semi-nomadic Orcs. In top condition the Warg and its rider can traverse over a hundred miles within a single day and can survive on almost anything. This kind of mobility allows the Uruk to choose their battles and strike the enemy before they could gather their troops. Uruk are also surprisingly disciplined, their raiders are well-trained and very well coordinated in their movements, utilizing their mobility to the fullest. They are well aware of the benefits of a good command structure and unlike other nations where the leaders seek glory and lead their army from the front, Uruk leadership is far more reserved. They are savage where it's needed and pragmatical where it benefits them.
That being said, The Golden Horde's reliance on cavalry has its own drawbacks. Uruks themselves don't have much culture on infantry warfare and must recruit other races to cover that. In addition the high mobility of their cavalry cannot be matched by the rest of their army. There are semi-effective methods to carry artillery with the raiders but in general if faced with castles or large armies the Uruk cavalry must retreat and wait for the rest of the army to catch up with them. That and while mercenaries or levies from other races can compliment their forces well the availability of these units fluctuates massively. You can recruit Bolters from Yngvar to invade the eastern borders next to their home but expecting a large force of dwarves following you to fight Orruks to the West is often unreasonable.
Pros: - Focus on cavalry and mobility warfare - Decent choice of firearms and artillery - Diverse selection of units from various races and cultures
Cons: - Light equipment for the raiders while the rest of the army can't keep up - Needs non-Uruk levies and mercenaries to make up for most of its unit types. - Availability of non-Uruk units depends on location and nature of the campaign
[b]Name:[/b] Whats the Unit called? [b]Type:[/b] What kind of unit are they? [b]Short Description:[/b] One or a few lines about what they are, what weapons they carry, Total War style if that makes any sense
[b]Name:[/b] Whats is their name/titles? [b]Position:[/b] What spot do they occupy in your faction? [b]Powers:[/b] Do they have anything of note about them or use any spells or carry any unique weapons? [b]Short Bio/Personality:[/b] A few short lines on why/how they came to power and how are they generally perceived.
Might want to recheck some terms like Nihongo. (Unrelated, but I'm curious as to what is Druger is. I keep thinking of Drauger from Skyrim).
Not quite sure on how I feel about Karikabuum "rivaling the gun powder of the Dwarves". You're free to have it of course but I'd prefer it you change it so that it doesn't rival something that the dwarves have been perfecting for a hella long time.
There are no "winds of magic", might want to remove mention of that in the magic.
As for the military, I'd say focus on either cav or artillery and not both, not quite sure how having a diverse variety of races as levies/mercs is an advantage though, if anything it might be a disadvantage as racial divides and stuff would flare up. Even if non-violent, it sew distrust and the likes. Might want to reword your disadvantages:
"Light equipment for the raiders while the rest of the army can't keep up" - Doesn't quite make sense to me, is some of your troops more lightly armed? Why aren't they just staying with the main army like most light troops.
"Needs non-Uruk levies and mercenaries to make up for most of its unit types." - Does this mean that the Uruk army by itself is small (of only Uruks) thus requiring other races to bolster the ranks? Why not just use professional soldiers of those races instead of levies and mercs that can be bought off.
"Availability of non-Uruk units depends on location and nature of the campaign " - Not as confused as I am a bit worried for a massive fucking roster list.
I guess my point is, why not just have a smaller, elite army instead of this massive collection of races with weapons.
Might want to recheck some terms like Nihongo. (Unrelated, but I'm curious as to what is Druger is. I keep thinking of Drauger from Skyrim).
Not quite sure on how I feel about Karikabuum "rivaling the gun powder of the Dwarves". You're free to have it of course but I'd prefer it you change it so that it doesn't rival something that the dwarves have been perfecting for a hella long time.
There are no "winds of magic", might want to remove mention of that in the magic.
As for the military, I'd say focus on either cav or artillery and not both, not quite sure how having a diverse variety of races as levies/mercs is an advantage though, if anything it might be a disadvantage as racial divides and stuff would flare up. Even if non-violent, it sew distrust and the likes. Might want to reword your disadvantages:
"Light equipment for the raiders while the rest of the army can't keep up" - Doesn't quite make sense to me, is some of your troops more lightly armed? Why aren't they just staying with the main army like most light troops.
"Needs non-Uruk levies and mercenaries to make up for most of its unit types." - Does this mean that the Uruk army by itself is small (of only Uruks) thus requiring other races to bolster the ranks? Why not just use professional soldiers of those races instead of levies and mercs that can be bought off.
"Availability of non-Uruk units depends on location and nature of the campaign " - Not as confused as I am a bit worried for a massive fucking roster list.
I guess my point is, why not just have a smaller, elite army instead of this massive collection of races with weapons.
Druegar are dwarves excommunicated for their heretical beliefs (they don't respect the ancestors and insted revere only one god) and overall being culturally different.
Karikabuum is not gunpowder but other explosive mix and you'd be shocked how many chemicals can be better than gunpowder. That and the Uruk can thank the Druegar to perfect their explosives. So it's ancient shaman secret plus dwarven expertise with gunpowders. Of course it's a match for dwarven gunpowder.
Mongol Empire was infamous for their cavalry AND siegecraft. I am basically fantasy mongols. So yeah specializing in artillery and cavalry/mobile warfare.
Uruk has a rather massive army since by culture most of their members also practice warfare. The problem is that all of them prefer to ride on wargs and Uruk have yet to form a decent infantry. So they instead rely on other races to do that. Artillery is an exception (barring some elite artillery manned by Druegar) and so are kinda ranged units since orcs can just dismount. But they have no spearman, heavy infantry nor more unique variations on a type like for example aving archers (Uruk abandoned archery for centuries now).
There are army lists with 30-40 units IIRC. Mine is likely going to be smaller than that. I am also far from the only faction with diverse races. Albeit probably mine would be the most mixed. And why am I doing this? Because it's both realistic and fun. I am a minor history geek and know that ancient warfare was far from clean nor armies were anywhere close to homogeneous/uniform. Mongol Empire was basically about their core army of nomads or those with nomadic past AND massive auxiliary forces recruited from all over the place. My army will reflect that.
As for raiders limited to light equipment or whatever. Basically you can't carry most artillery with you on horseback nor you can have infantry marching 200 kilometers a day. Nomadic cavalry can do that and how! But for the same reason they have strict limits on weight and size of equipment. They also need stuff which is easy to maintain and can readily found resupply for. It's quite amazing how Mongol raiders could maintain the kind of mobility they did. Amazing or not that's an obvious drawback balancing my mobility. I can either be fast as hell and ditch infantry and many of my equipment. Or sacrifice that for a more decent army lineup.
I thank you for the offer, truly. But I think that's a risky game, if he comes back.
He hasn't posted for 24 days and his last login is in 20 days. I think it's pretty fair if somebody else takes his claim. I was actually "victim" of such a fair number of times already. Don't see me defending him regardless. It happens. Being flexible is often preferable. You also don't need to take all his territories. You can carve the shape of your own nation here.
@LauderWhat kind of language Kashgar use? I use LotR orc speech for my Uruk so I wonder if I can give authentic names to Kashgar units. I am thinking of Kashgar spearmen, slingers and that special cavalry of theirs.
I'm sorry to say, but I think I need to drop this... I only joined because a friend asked me to, but I wasn't really thinking about what I would actually do. I'm very much a character roleplayer, and NRP is completely alien to me. Not only that, but writing just... Isn't working at the moment, and by that I mean I've lost quite a lot of motivation for it. I'm hoping its temporary, but I need to attempt to sort it out as best I can... And that means cutting the things I'm least likely to write in...
@ClocktowerEchosBTW, can I post my profile in the characters page, then? Makes it easier to track. I also made no less than 14 units already. And those are just the core Uruks. I think I'll get to roughly 30 once I add navy and auxiliaries.
@ClocktowerEchosBTW, can I post my profile in the characters page, then? Makes it easier to track. I also made no less than 14 units already. And those are just the core Uruks. I think I'll get to roughly 30 once I add navy and auxiliaries.
Honestly I am going to advise you axe some units unless you have a lot of units that are the same but with different weapons (ie Militia w/ Great weapons and Militia w/ shields). Also I still don't understand you naval fixation.
@TemplarKnight07So are the Uruk. Ratmen and beasts can be anywhere on the map so...just use that to your advantage. Where would the Vermintide strike next?
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Honestly I am going to advise you axe some units unless you have a lot of units that are the same but with different weapons (ie Militia w/ Great weapons and Militia w/ shields). Also I still don't understand you naval fixation.
Many of them are in the line of basi-advanced-elite development line. So I have raiders that are my basic units and then I have warriors with better equipment and skill. And then I get to the Royal Guards who deserve their status as Tier 4. Similarly I have light, medium and heavy rocket artillery. Or have artillery ranging from wooden cannons to Basilik-like Great Bombards. That's why I have 14 units types for the Uruk. And maybe 15 if I add their T4 elite monster which would be kinda like the K'Daai Destroyer.
@TemplarKnight07So are the Uruk. Ratmen and beasts can be anywhere on the map so...just use that to your advantage. Where would the Vermintide strike next?
<Snipped quote by ClocktowerEchos>Many of them are in the line of basi-advanced-elite development line. So I have raiders that are my basic units and then I have warriors with better equipment and skill. And then I get to the Royal Guards who deserve their status as Tier 4. Similarly I have light, medium and heavy rocket artillery. Or have artillery ranging from wooden cannons to Basilik-like Great Bombards. That's why I have 14 units types for the Uruk. And maybe 15 if I add their T4 elite monster which would be kinda like the K'Daai Destroyer.
Okay, I can sort of get the "leveling up" idea behind the soldier but I am going to have to stop you right there at rocket artillery. That is a flat out no. I don't care if you're "just being mongols who had good cav and rockets", that is just a no. Having both strong cav and strong normal artillery was already pushing it as was the all natural herbal gunpoweder and the navy.
Okay, I can sort of get the "leveling up" idea behind the soldier but I am going to have to stop you right there at rocket artillery. That is a flat out no. I don't care if you're "just being mongols who had good cav and rockets", that is just a no. Having both strong cav and strong normal artillery was already pushing it as was the all natural herbal gunpoweder and the navy.
Yeah, sure. And in comparison owning giants, flying machines, tanks, rifles and explosive shell raining cannons is suddenly a balanced nation? You may really need to work on your consistency here.
If you feel owning rocket artillery is OP then you may want to read the unit profiles in the characters page. Hell, historically rocket artillery were inferior to cannons and only used because they were much easier to carry to the battlefield. I think you confuse the Hwacha with a modern MLRS.
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