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[Venku]

@Caits Accepted. Move her over. She'll be a Templar ( rank ).

I've added basic rules in the first OCC post.

@Venku No magic is allowed in the cells. As I think I've mentioned , all cells have Magic-Dampering fields around them so they cannot use magic at all in the cells.

@Shadow Daedalus

@Ashevelendar

Oops let me rewrite that then

[Ashevelendar]

@Venku No problem :) It's ok ^_^

[Ashevelendar]

@Shadow Daedalus Damn. You sure play the part of the hating Templar guy. NICE ! But really...Holy Templar = more than 15 years of experience fighting Magi and another 10 just fighting. They are recruited ( promoted sometimes ) from the fieriest warriors in the Empire and they could easily take many warrior so maybe cut the " four Templar fight " , make it a 2 Templar fight and it's all right. Only if you want to , not trying to tell you how to roleplay :)
It just seems too...fairy tale. That's all :)

[Shadow Daedalus]

@Ashevelendar If it's a problem, I'll make it so he fought them two at a time, in separate 2-on-1 battles. He's had Holy Templar level training since he was a child, so he has the skill to do it.

[Ashevelendar]

@Shadow Daedalus I just didn't want him to be OP , that's all :)

[Gareth]

@Gareth I swear I like your character ! I mean it ! He looks great. Exactly what I would've liked to see when it came to the Kil'garen. They are afraid of the Empire and know better than to ignore their wishes.

"
Predisposition to the Magi:Razer is indifferent to the Magi, they are strangers to him as personally he has never gotten to know them that well. Probably because even while he was at Varillo, the magi, that may or may not have been there, didn't give away that they were magi. Those possible magi, definitely feared execution, imprisonment, whatever other cruel punishments there were for them. "

I don't like that part tho'. I probably didn't explained in OCC but I'll do it in IC for the others.

So...the moment a mage is born he starts to "leak" magical energy. The Empire has machines that detect any kind of magical energy ( no matter how small ) and immediately send Templar to catch mages. So...hiding Magi are a no-no. Also , the moment a Mage is caught and brought to the Citadel some blood is taken from him. That blood serves as a "tracking" device ( A phylactery is a vessel, often a glass vial, containing the essence of a magical being. The Templar use small phylacteries filled with blood—taken from a Magi to track down any Mage that somehow escapes ) so there are no hiding Magi. You are either caught and brought to the Citadel or you are killed on the spot.

Modify the part with hiding Magi ( etc ) and it's ok.

Also. Kil'garen themselves joined the Warrior Guild when the Magi War started but they've been able to retain their neutral status rather than be absorbed in by the promises of " protection and prosperity " like the other races.

Edit : Put your CS in a hider , please :)

@Ashevelendar

Thank you very much. :) I edited the part about the Predisposition to the Magi, saying that basically Razer is indifferent to them because he has never met one.

(For the history edit I thought I'd mention how I want to edit it 'before' I edit it. Because the history has so many paragraphs and that way its easier to see what exactly I did.)

As for the warrior guild and the Kil'Garen being a part of it, what if I edit it saying, 'that Razer's parents knew why the Empire took Razer away, for Warrior Guild Recruitment, but Razer and the Warrior who took him away were not told this. Razer wasn't told this by his parents because he was too young. And the warrior who took him away wasn't told because he 'doesn't need to know.'

(I'll be honest, I'm trying to edit this way, because I think its easier for me than swapping up a bunch of the history! xD)

Note:I have a doctor's appointment and then work, so I'll be gone the rest of the day. :(

[dabombjk]

Name : Darius Montgomery
Race : Human
Gender : Male
Age ( 18 - 30 ) : 21
Appearance:

My Hider

Fur Color ( only if Kil'garen ) :
Eye color : Brown
Height : 6'2
Skills ( Sword fighting , archery , cooking etc ) ( maximum 3 ( life skills ( cooking etc ) ) and maximum 2 weapon skills ) : Archery, Knife throwing. inventing, repairing, first aid.
History ( you have to write a reason why he/she is serving at the Citadel ( only those with decorations or from rich families are sent there ) ) : Darius is an assassin, and a very infamous one at that. He is known throughout the land as never missing his target, and never needing a second chance. Also he has never bene caught, so no one knows what he looks like. People have given him the alias, The Shadow, because he moves silently and discreetly. You know when the Shadow has made his move because he leaves a small calling card. He leaves a small card with his targets name x'ed out in red. Darius is in the Citadel because of a contract, and was able to get into the Citadel through his Employers connections.
Predisposition to the Magi ( he/she may hate the Magi with all his/hers being or he may take a pity on them and be friendly ) : Darius does not care about anything.
Personality : Darius is calm, cool, and collected. He thinks before he says anything and he cares not for the lives he takes.
Notes ( things purely for story ) :

@ashevelendar

[Ashevelendar]

@Gareth It's ok , it's probably day where you are. All of us have lives and they take priority.

Warrior Guild = The Empire 100 years ago. So there is no Warrior Guild right now.

So he was recruited in the Empire's Templar. How long ago this happened ? If less than 5 years ago then he would be a Templar if longer than that a Grand Templar.

@dabombjk Looks good but two things are not all right.

1. There is no picture ?
2. If he is an assassin , how would he join the mission ? It was a secret mission after all. Maybe they could catch him and the Ascended Templar employ his services or could he be called by the Ascended Templar to kill the one that stole the amulet ? Sending him on the mission ?

@Venku@Shadow Daedalus I'll continue the IC post after everyone writes their introductions.

[dabombjk]

ok i fixed the image issue, i actually did add a pic but idk why it didnt show earlier. and yea what i was thinking was that darius would finish his assignment, and not caught but he would be seen by the templar and the templar would contract him. make him work for him.

@ashevelendar

[dabombjk]

ok [ashevelendar] i fixed it. and i was thinking that darius would finish he mission, get caught by the tmeplar dude, then get contracted to work for him. yea i like ur second idea

[Ashevelendar]

@dabombjk Still no picture , my friend :)

So...it remains the second idea where he is employed by the Ascended Templar ?

[dabombjk]

@ashevelendar
Yea the second idea is good. I have to work now so after work I will fix the photo problem, tag you, then make a post

[Wick]

C.S. for Elira

Name: Elira
Race: Elf
Gender: Female
Age 23

Appearance

Fur Color: NA
Eye color: blue
Height: 5'4" 102lbs
Skills: archery, slingshot, cooking, healing/knows what heals in nature can sing like an angel
History: Elira is the child of very rich parents and is serving at the citadel at her father's request She has grown up very educated in all things nature and is expert in many areas of use such as archery and medicine. She is an only child and is said to have the voice of an angel. She rarely sings for anyone other than her family.
Predisposition to the Magi: Friendly
Personality: calm, kind, loving, nurturer, honest
Notes: loves animals, nature and music, and hates war

@Ashevelendar

[Ashevelendar]

@dabombjk Perfect. Have a good day ^_^

@Wick I think you are the first person to make a CS that is good from the start. Great job :) Move it over and write when you can.
Just make sure to write the introductions as the others did ( meaning the Holy Templar wake her up at 5 AM ) :)

[Venku]

@Gareth It's ok , it's probably day where you are. All of us have lives and they take priority.

Warrior Guild = The Empire 100 years ago. So there is no Warrior Guild right now.

So he was recruited in the Empire's Templar. How long ago this happened ? If less than 5 years ago then he would be a Templar if longer than that a Grand Templar.

@dabombjk Looks good but two things are not all right.

1. There is no picture ?
2. If he is an assassin , how would he join the mission ? It was a secret mission after all. Maybe they could catch him and the Ascended Templar employ his services or could he be called by the Ascended Templar to kill the one that stole the amulet ? Sending him on the mission ?

@Venku@Shadow Daedalus I'll continue the IC post after everyone writes their introductions.

@Ashevelendar

ok sounds good

[MarshiestMallow]

Working on my post

Just waking up

[MarshiestMallow]

@Wick
And so we meet again ^.^

[Wick]

@Caits

That's okay we handle it well :P

[MarshiestMallow]

@dabombjk isn't gonna be happy his mention disappeared again, @Wick so whose stalking who? At this point k think it's both of us XD

[Wick]

@Caits

Lol Ash came to find me and asked me to join. :) So I guess Ash is stalking us :p