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Okay then in the descriptions you also need to include that so it is clear because the way it is written it is not. I'll fix my post.
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@Wick I've added a thing to make sure no one misunderstands what I meant. Sorry Miss / Mrs. Wicked :)
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@Venku@Gareth@dabombjk@Caits@Shadow Daedalus@Wick I've added some things to the first OCC post.

Map Legend and the most important thing. The Timeline !
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you mean the OOC

OOC= Out Of Character

OP= Over Powered

IC= In Character
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@Wick True. True. My mind is not working. Somehow my mind thought that OP came from Opening Post xD
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I have to say, I really, really, like the map and the timeline and they are very well done.

It makes me excited to be in this story and hopefully I can contribute more than I have as it goes on.

I'm off to work again, have a good day everybody. :)

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@Ashevelendar Just to be clear, Everyone is rigged with a bomb? Including Non-magi?
I'm so breaking that guy's wrist
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@Wick I've realised something. Elyra works as a nurse, right? James (reluctantly) works as an combat instructor for the templars, so he's probably sent you a good number of your patients. They're probably already acquainted
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@Shadow Daedalus@Wick My character is probably familiar with both of yours as he was a healer at the training grounds
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Sounds good, I would hate to think she was being sent out not knowing anyone.
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@Shadow Daedalus@Venku You can have him talk to her when he gets to the meeting place. Any idea if we are walking or taking horses or what?
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Hi everyone! I Wanted to join up if their is room still.

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Hi @Thecrash20 I think you can join. but it is not my decision to make.

It's best to tag @Ashevelendar like this so he knows about it.
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@Thecrash20 What @Gareth speaks it's true.

So I looked over your CS. There are some problems in it.
  • All Dark Humans are born in the Dark Human lands. They are not "allowed" to go to other places due to people being afraid they'll get sick.
  • The spells. You have a basic spell and two complex ones. The first one ( the blade ) I can overlook but the second one is too powerful and if any Templar would see those markings he would kill your character when he was a child.
  • All Magi are sent to the Citadel as soon as they are born. There are devices that find magical energy in newborns so as soon as they are born Templar are sent either to kill or take the child from their parents. If the parents don't want to give the child they are killed. If they hide him , he is found ( the same way the Empire finds out that a Magi kid is born ) and killed.
  • All Magi are raised in the Citadel so they are all "strong" due to living in a prison all their lives.


I hope I don't sound too harsh but...edit in and tag ( @Mention ) me and I'll look it over again :)

@Venku Your turn to post and then I can continue.

@Shadow Daedalus Yep. Everyone has a bomb inside them. A way to make sure they don't kill each other or run away. Also a way to kill them all by killing only one of them if they disobeyed.
Thinking about it , this could be used in real life too. In prisons I mean. That way you can quell any idea of rebellion or killing between the inmates. A "cure" would be given to the ones that were on the death bed or those that had the idea to suicide. Like it would be a...time bomb ? 2 hours after the person dies , if the bomb is not defused everyone dies. This only could be used at Maximum security prisons where people don't go because they've stolen a car.

@gareth Thanks for the kind words about the map :) I'll try to update it as the RP progresses. Maybe even make a new one each time our party explores a location. Maybe make maps for each location ? Something like a map for let's say...one of the Magi towers.
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Are we travelling by horses?
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@Wick They will travel with a caravan 'till they reach The Field. From there they will go by foot into the Wasteland.

But I'll have Gregory tell them that. After everyone posts.

Also added some new things to the Timeline.
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@Wick They will travel with a caravan 'till they reach The Field. From there they will go by foot into the Wasteland.

But I'll have Gregory tell them that. After everyone posts.

Also added some new things to the Timeline.


I should have my post done later today I just have been kinda busy irl.
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@Venku It's ok. :)

Life takes priority always. After you write I'll write up a post :)
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Should I wait for @Shadow Daedalus to post, or can I post again?

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@Gareth
You should be able to post again without any problem.
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