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Riiight, so, almost done here. Just need to work on the number of spells she has but wanted to post what I had as it's late and I dunno if I'ma finish before I pass out. If there are any problems with what is currently had, I'll do my best to fix soon.
EDIT: Think that's it for now. Added a few spells and I'll add some more later but I think it works as it is. I'm gonna go pass out now. I'll look at everything/do stuff tomorrow.
"Eh? Fight me? Pfft...and you foreigners say I don't have a sense of humor...eerr, that was a joke right?"
Standing at five foot nine, with a muscular frame with obvious muscle making her weigh in around 165 lbs, Sihu can come off as more than a little intimidating. Her skin is a somewhat sickly seeming pale color all over, and with red eyes some might think she has a case of albinism but its only from long-extended use of darker magic which is well known to affect ones physical appearance at times. She has messy jet black hair, usually tied back into a long ponytail that falls to her shoulders.
Typically, she is seen wearing some odd black and red garb that is decorated, and seems to be made from animal teeth and skins of various kinds. Otherwise, she's seen wearing a simple robe when she's sleeping or not otherwise on duty or planning on doing much that day. Her guild mark is located on the inside of her right thigh, and is a dark blue in color.
Name::
Sihu
Nickname/Alias::
Dark Beast Sihu
Gender::
Female
Age and date of birth::
19, October 13th
Guild::
Golem's Hand
Rank::
S-Rank
Personality::
What would one expect from someone who's been practicing Darkness magic their entire lives? Cold and calculating? Cruel and merciless? Well, if you expect any of that from Sihu you'd be sorely disappointed. While she's certainly not the most welcoming or inviting and has a tendency to be much too serious, and jokes of many sorts tends to go right over her head, she's far from any of the typical traits associated with dark magic. Certainly she has a love of fighting and will be the first to accept any sort of challenge if it presents itself, she's far from stupid or foolhardy either. If something is obviously beyond her fighting ability or wouldn't prove an entertaining challenge, she likely wouldn't do much to try and fight.
Typically she's quite adventurous and loves exploring outside of the city. In fact, it's rare you'll ever find her within its walls unless she's looking for a job, resting after an extended leave or has been called back to the guild for whatever reason. She loathes to stay in one spot for long and often typically doesn't stay in any place longer than she deems necessary.
As far as her guild mates go, she's surprisingly protective of them and the people in Luna Crescente, and would be the first to shoulder any burden as far as protecting them goes.
History::
Sihu as one might expect, is a foreigner to Fiore and extremely far, far, away from home. Originally, she hails from a small clan of forest dwelling people far inland towards the mainland. While not as in touch with the rest of the world as places like Fiore and its surrounding kingdoms, it was like that because they preferred it. They considered themselves wardens of nature that lived in harmony with the forest and nature after all, and were reluctant to adopt any sort of large change brought about by outside magic.
Sihu grew up here, learning the ways of these people she was born into and learning to respect the earth, animal life, and magic itself. She was always a bit on the serious and no nonsense side. Always missing jokes and tended to take the things people said much too seriously, but for the most part she lived a fairly normal life among her people, until the day she stumbled upon a rather ancient shrine...and the beast within it.
It was an ancient thing. An ancient, dark thing that reeked of dark magic. Perhaps created by some old dark mage ages ago, or something that was naturally occurring. Either way, it was a place she was warned not to go near. The place was a seal, as much as it was a shrine. Well, being the curious and adventurous little thing she was, she of course ignored this. Her magic had always been based on learning and mimicking moves from the creatures of the forest, turning them into powerful magic attacks.
After seeing this beast, well, she decided that she had another source of knowledge for her attacks and decided to learn solely from this beast.
Of course, after learning of her little excursion she was kicked out. After, she traveled, refining this particular form of dark magic and eventually ended up in Luna Crescente and Golem's Hand.
Magic Name::
Dark Beast Magic
Description::
A magic she learned from studying a deceased creature her clan simply named the 'Dark Beast'. What it was in the past is unknown, but with her peoples magic already taking magic by learning from the animals of the forest and mimicking it with magic it wasn't particularly difficult to learn how to mimic the beasts abilities. Of course, the creature being a creature of dark has tainted the magic itself with that of darkness.
To learn this magic, one must first observe the beast they wish to mimic with magic. Unlike beast Soul, killing or defeating them is not needed nor necessary.
She still has some other magic she uses that she learned before learning this vein of it, but she for the most part wishes to further refine other skills.
Master of hand to hand combat
Pretty good at moving quietly
Extremely agile and flexible
she can't process sarcasm at all which leads to some hilarious (or terrible) misunderstandings sometimes.
Relatives::
Mother and father, though she doesn't see them any more.
Possessions::
Old suit of clothes from her home (What she's currently wearing)
Theme Song::
EDIT: Think that's it for now. Added a few spells and I'll add some more later but I think it works as it is. I'm gonna go pass out now. I'll look at everything/do stuff tomorrow.
"Eh? Fight me? Pfft...and you foreigners say I don't have a sense of humor...eerr, that was a joke right?"
Standing at five foot nine, with a muscular frame with obvious muscle making her weigh in around 165 lbs, Sihu can come off as more than a little intimidating. Her skin is a somewhat sickly seeming pale color all over, and with red eyes some might think she has a case of albinism but its only from long-extended use of darker magic which is well known to affect ones physical appearance at times. She has messy jet black hair, usually tied back into a long ponytail that falls to her shoulders.
Typically, she is seen wearing some odd black and red garb that is decorated, and seems to be made from animal teeth and skins of various kinds. Otherwise, she's seen wearing a simple robe when she's sleeping or not otherwise on duty or planning on doing much that day. Her guild mark is located on the inside of her right thigh, and is a dark blue in color.
Basic Info
Name::
Sihu
Nickname/Alias::
Dark Beast Sihu
Gender::
Female
Age and date of birth::
19, October 13th
Guild::
Golem's Hand
Rank::
S-Rank
Personal Information
Personality::
What would one expect from someone who's been practicing Darkness magic their entire lives? Cold and calculating? Cruel and merciless? Well, if you expect any of that from Sihu you'd be sorely disappointed. While she's certainly not the most welcoming or inviting and has a tendency to be much too serious, and jokes of many sorts tends to go right over her head, she's far from any of the typical traits associated with dark magic. Certainly she has a love of fighting and will be the first to accept any sort of challenge if it presents itself, she's far from stupid or foolhardy either. If something is obviously beyond her fighting ability or wouldn't prove an entertaining challenge, she likely wouldn't do much to try and fight.
Typically she's quite adventurous and loves exploring outside of the city. In fact, it's rare you'll ever find her within its walls unless she's looking for a job, resting after an extended leave or has been called back to the guild for whatever reason. She loathes to stay in one spot for long and often typically doesn't stay in any place longer than she deems necessary.
As far as her guild mates go, she's surprisingly protective of them and the people in Luna Crescente, and would be the first to shoulder any burden as far as protecting them goes.
History::
Sihu as one might expect, is a foreigner to Fiore and extremely far, far, away from home. Originally, she hails from a small clan of forest dwelling people far inland towards the mainland. While not as in touch with the rest of the world as places like Fiore and its surrounding kingdoms, it was like that because they preferred it. They considered themselves wardens of nature that lived in harmony with the forest and nature after all, and were reluctant to adopt any sort of large change brought about by outside magic.
Sihu grew up here, learning the ways of these people she was born into and learning to respect the earth, animal life, and magic itself. She was always a bit on the serious and no nonsense side. Always missing jokes and tended to take the things people said much too seriously, but for the most part she lived a fairly normal life among her people, until the day she stumbled upon a rather ancient shrine...and the beast within it.
It was an ancient thing. An ancient, dark thing that reeked of dark magic. Perhaps created by some old dark mage ages ago, or something that was naturally occurring. Either way, it was a place she was warned not to go near. The place was a seal, as much as it was a shrine. Well, being the curious and adventurous little thing she was, she of course ignored this. Her magic had always been based on learning and mimicking moves from the creatures of the forest, turning them into powerful magic attacks.
After seeing this beast, well, she decided that she had another source of knowledge for her attacks and decided to learn solely from this beast.
Of course, after learning of her little excursion she was kicked out. After, she traveled, refining this particular form of dark magic and eventually ended up in Luna Crescente and Golem's Hand.
Magic
Magic Name::
Dark Beast Magic
Description::
A magic she learned from studying a deceased creature her clan simply named the 'Dark Beast'. What it was in the past is unknown, but with her peoples magic already taking magic by learning from the animals of the forest and mimicking it with magic it wasn't particularly difficult to learn how to mimic the beasts abilities. Of course, the creature being a creature of dark has tainted the magic itself with that of darkness.
To learn this magic, one must first observe the beast they wish to mimic with magic. Unlike beast Soul, killing or defeating them is not needed nor necessary.
She still has some other magic she uses that she learned before learning this vein of it, but she for the most part wishes to further refine other skills.
Known Spells::
Claws of the Beast:
Strikes the target with a rending slash of light blue colored dark magic, often taking the shape of a three slashes in the shape of a beasts claw. Its her most often used attack, and considering she can chain this simple move together with consecutive punches and strikes, it can become quite devastating if she manages to get a couple of blows on the person. Can be made with either hands or feet.
Beast Fang:
The mage strikes forward with an open palm, sending a force of magic towards the target. while one of her weaker moves, it should be strong enough to send most weaker mages on a free flight somewhere.
Dark Beasts Shriek:
Placing her fingers together, Sihu creates a powerful blast of magic around her that can send most people flying. It's not particularly damaging in any way, but the shriek typically disorients foes, especially those unprepared for it and can easily leave someone open to an attack if they're not careful.
Beasts Charge:
Focusing magic power in the soles of her feet or other body part that is touching the ground, she is able to leap/charge/blast herself in a desired direction. Combined with her agility and physical fortitude, it can make her quite a problem to deal with since it'd be difficult to get a lock on her.
(Probably will add more later as time progresses/I come up with them, but I think you can get a good feel for what I want here)
Claws of the Beast:
Strikes the target with a rending slash of light blue colored dark magic, often taking the shape of a three slashes in the shape of a beasts claw. Its her most often used attack, and considering she can chain this simple move together with consecutive punches and strikes, it can become quite devastating if she manages to get a couple of blows on the person. Can be made with either hands or feet.
Beast Fang:
The mage strikes forward with an open palm, sending a force of magic towards the target. while one of her weaker moves, it should be strong enough to send most weaker mages on a free flight somewhere.
Dark Beasts Shriek:
Placing her fingers together, Sihu creates a powerful blast of magic around her that can send most people flying. It's not particularly damaging in any way, but the shriek typically disorients foes, especially those unprepared for it and can easily leave someone open to an attack if they're not careful.
Beasts Charge:
Focusing magic power in the soles of her feet or other body part that is touching the ground, she is able to leap/charge/blast herself in a desired direction. Combined with her agility and physical fortitude, it can make her quite a problem to deal with since it'd be difficult to get a lock on her.
(Probably will add more later as time progresses/I come up with them, but I think you can get a good feel for what I want here)
Other
Master of hand to hand combat
Pretty good at moving quietly
Extremely agile and flexible
she can't process sarcasm at all which leads to some hilarious (or terrible) misunderstandings sometimes.
Relatives::
Mother and father, though she doesn't see them any more.
Possessions::
Old suit of clothes from her home (What she's currently wearing)
Theme Song::
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"You thought you'd get away with hurting my friends? Big mistake."
"You just awakened the dragon."
Kurai is tallish. He stands on the edge of five foot eleven and still believes he has room to grow. He has a scar on his right cheek that he got from training with his dragon father. It's relatively small but the scar is a symbol for him. He wears a crystal earring on his right ear. His outfit isn't anything special. In fact he usually just wears a pair of fitted baggy black pants and a black sleeveless shirt. He keeps it sleeveless because he wears his guild mark with pride. He'll sometimes wear a black sleeveless jacket on top if he feels like it that day. He's always seen with his katana at his side. Whether it's on his hip or just besides him. He doesn't go anywhere without it.
Basic Info
Name::
Kurai
Nickname/Alias::
The Shadow Dragon
The Shadow Beast(Due to how he fights like a beast)
Master of Shadows
The Sleeping Dragon(Jokingly nicknamed by his guild mates because of his lame catchphrase and his ability to fall asleep anywhere)
Gender::
Male
Age and date of birth::
17, July 21st
Guild::
Harpy's Wing
Guild Mark on Right Shoulder
Rank::
A
Personal Information
Personality:: Despite his type of magic Kurai is anything but the dark and brooding type. He's actually quite the opposite. When it comes to magical combat you'll never find someone more interested. He uses each battle as a learning lesson even if it's easy. He's also smarter than he appears. He may be kind of lazy but it doesn't take him much effort to learn things outside of magic. He's usually always in a good mood when he's surrounded by his friends and guild family. He cares about them more than anything in the world besides finding his father. He says he cares about them equally but even he's not even sure of that himself. It takes a lot to push Kurai over the edge and hurting his friends is the fastest and easiest way. This is true to the point where he doesn't even go all out in a fight unless they or he himself is in danger. The only exception to that is if the fight itself is too enjoyable for him to not push himself and go all out.
History:: Kurai doesn't remember anything about his life before he met his dragon father. Because of that he doesn't care about anything that happened before it. He has fond memories of growing and training with his father. The time they spent together was the best times of his life. He doesn't know what happened but one day his father was gone. He searched forever for him but couldn't find him. His search lead him to the village of Luna Cruscente. He kept asking people if they saw a shadowy dragon but no one was any help. He walked to the outskirts of the village figuring that this was another dead end and cried. It was then that the guild master of Harpy's Wing found him and brought him into the guild house.
It was honestly the greatest thing that Kurai had ever saw. There were so many wizards and a lot of them were his age. He decided to stay and train so he could take on quests that could lead him to find his father. It's been about eight years since then and he's grown a lot over the years but he still hasn't found what he was looking for. But he did gain a new family that he wouldn't lose. He couldn't go through that feeling again.
Magic
Magic Name::
Shadow Dragon Slayer Magic
Description::
Shadow Dragon Slayer Magic
Known Spells::
Shadow Dragon's Roar
Shadow Dragon's Slash
Shadow Dragon's Waxwing Flash
Shadow Drive
Shadow Dragon's Vortex:(Unlike the original) Kurai's Shadow Dragon's Vortex is used when he creates a magic circle in front of him using his shadows and the technique absorbs whatever magic comes in contact with it. He uses this as a protective spell when he knows he or the ones he's protecting can't take the technique head on. Currently it drains a lot from him and he can usually only use it once or twice without replenishing his mana. He believes that he can redirect the magic with this technique but hasn't been able to do so yet.
Shadow Dragon's Luminous Shadow: Kurai joins together shadow balls from his left and right hand causing them to grow together and size. He then lifts it above his head before launching it at an opponent to cause a giant explosion. The technique get its name from how once the balls join together they seem to shine a bit with light.
Dragon Slayer's Secret Art Shadow Dragon's Blade: This is basically the beginning of his last ditch effort. He covers his katana in his shadow to increase its ability and his own through the blade itself.
Dragon Slayer's Secret Art Shadow Dragon's Blade Slash: This is a stronger version of his Shadow Dragon's Slash that he uses when he covers his katana with his shadow.
Dragon Slayer's Secret Art Shadow Dragon's Blade of Impalement: After covering his katana with his shadow he plants his feet firmly in the ground with his katana aimed at his opponent at his side. He can either turn towards them with this or stand his ground and thrust towards his opponent sending a piercing shadow beam towards them.
Other
Suffers from Motion Sickness while riding vehicles
Has an acute sense of smell and hearing
He isn't a formal master of unarmed combat but he considers himself a master in his own sense. He's mastered the art of fighting like a dragon. His moves tend to be wild and unpredictable
He is a formal master swordsman though choosing to use actual technique when using it
Relatives::
Possessions::
Katana of the Shadow Dragon: He uses a sword gifted to him by his father. It was forged out of his own scales and that's why it can be used to amplify his power for his Secret Dragon Arts. He uses those techniques as a last ditch effort but he's willing to use his blade without the shadows at any moment in battle.
Done with my CS though I haven't thought up a name for his dragon. I'll edit if I do.
@Vongola_Hasayo
Just gonna leave this here.
"I don't want to fight. "
Name:: Hans Grimm
Nickname/Alias:: "Rattling Bones" Hans, Grinning Reaper (old dark guild epithet)
Gender:: Feminine male
Age and date of birth:: 18-December 25th. "What? Did you think it was on Halloween?"
Guild:: Harpy Wing. His guild mark is cyan and on his left shoulder blade.
Rank:: A
Personality:: Hans is a pacifist. He dislikes senseless violence and would rather try to reason with people than use brute force even if he gets hurt in the process. More than that, he hates seeing others get hurt more than he getting hurt himself. If push comes to shove he'll fight, but he won't like it. The exceptions are just spars and for events like the magic games.
Hans is a goofy person who is not above playing pranks on people. He is someone that loves to make jokes and puns though they can be quite bad at times. The worst part is that he knows that his puns are terrible, but that's why he likes them. It gets bonely being the only one who loves bad puns.
He is a very kind hearted young man. His compassion to help others knows no bounds and is merciful to a fault. This can lead to him getting hurt as he can be easily taken advantage of. However if he is pushed far enough that kindness will give way to a more...unstable nature. Don't do anything to make his sanity snap if you value your life.
If asked about his past, he will start to scratch his neck nervously to the point he begins to draw blood. He doesn't like to dwell on the past.
History:: "I've done a lot of things that I'm not proud of. That's all I'm saying. This is my clean slate. "
Magic Name:: Bone-Make Magic
Description:: This is a type of Molding Magic which utilizes the element of bones. The user can create a variety of objects out of bones to be used for offensive, defensive or miscellaneous purposes. The bones that are created are extremely durable, capable withstanding forces that would shatter other bones. It can be used in both of their dynamic and static forms, allowing a wide arsenal of weaponry, dangerous attacks, and strong defenses.
Known Spells::
-Offensive:
Dynamic:
Weapon creation: Can make just about any weapon he can think of. Used to cover just general weapons.
Bone-Make: Rapier- Hans creates a rapier made of bones. The weapon is extremely sharp and much more suited for piercing attacks. It can be launched as projectile as well.
Bone-Make: Bone Cutter- Hans creates a giant sword made of bones with a long guard surrounding the hilt of the blade. Its attacks can leave wakes of cuts in its wake.
Bone-Make: Bo Staff - Hans creates a long bone to use as a bone staff. However, it can be turned into a three-sectional-staff as a way to surprise his targets.
Bone-Make: Brahmastra- Creates a an intricate bow made of bones and charges up a single, large arrow made of bones. The arrow is shot at high speeds and once it hits its intended target, it will explode into a spiky array of bones meant to pierce the target.
Bone-Make: Crushing Gauntlets - creates giant gauntlets with chains attached to them. They hover by his hands and can offer both protection and offense. The chains can be swung around as well. The impact is very dangerous.
Bone-Make: Demon Spear- Puts his hands together and one of his arms will be covered in a large mass of bones, creating a large spear head along his arm. It has high piercing power and is very destructive.
Bone-Make: Spinal Stab- Puts his hands together and slams his hands on the ground. Barbed, spiky spines shoot out of the ground beneath his opponents. It is meant to impale his targets and the barbs add extra damage.
Bone-Make: Schneider- Creates a powerful cannon made of bones that then shoots a mass of bones straight at its targets. The explosive attack of this attack is great and can be shot from long distances too.
Bone-Make: Cage- Creates a durable cage made of bones around his opponents.
Static:
Bone-Make: Vulture- Bone constructs that are able to fly through the air and are capable of avoiding attacks and obstacles due to their dynamic nature. They are swift and can deal blunt damage.
Bone-Make: Hedgehog- Creates a large hedgehog made of bones with a very spiny back of bones. It will curl up and then roll at his target fast. On contact, the sharp bones will shred the target's body.
-Defensive:
Bone-Make: Shield- Summons a large, durable shield made of bones.
Bone-Make: Spiny- Covers his body with large spikes made of bones. It is meant to deter others from using melee attacks on him or hurt them.
Bone-Make: Bone Chrome Dome- Creates a dome of bones to protect whoever is inside it from any attacks.
Bone-Male: Crypt Wall- Creates a huge wall made of bones. It's used to protect many people at once.
Bone-Make: Grand Crypt Wall- Creates many huge walls made of bones in a linear fashion. It is his strongest defense technique that can withstand extreme forces, but uses a lot of magic.
-Supportive:
Bone-Make: Juggernaut Armor- Hans creates a highly durable, yet light suit of armor around his body to offer both protection from attacks, but his physical attacks deal more damage due to the armor smashing against them. Another aspect of the armor is that it can be altered with his molding magic even after it was summoned.
Relatives:: Mom and dad, but they're in prison. He doesn't like to talk much about them.
Possessions::
His own apartment, a small one, but it's enough for one person.
Theme Song::
Man Man-Top Drawer
Just gonna leave this here.
"I don't want to fight. "
Basic Info
Name:: Hans Grimm
Nickname/Alias:: "Rattling Bones" Hans, Grinning Reaper (old dark guild epithet)
Gender:: Feminine male
Age and date of birth:: 18-December 25th. "What? Did you think it was on Halloween?"
Guild:: Harpy Wing. His guild mark is cyan and on his left shoulder blade.
Rank:: A
Personal Information
Personality:: Hans is a pacifist. He dislikes senseless violence and would rather try to reason with people than use brute force even if he gets hurt in the process. More than that, he hates seeing others get hurt more than he getting hurt himself. If push comes to shove he'll fight, but he won't like it. The exceptions are just spars and for events like the magic games.
Hans is a goofy person who is not above playing pranks on people. He is someone that loves to make jokes and puns though they can be quite bad at times. The worst part is that he knows that his puns are terrible, but that's why he likes them. It gets bonely being the only one who loves bad puns.
He is a very kind hearted young man. His compassion to help others knows no bounds and is merciful to a fault. This can lead to him getting hurt as he can be easily taken advantage of. However if he is pushed far enough that kindness will give way to a more...unstable nature. Don't do anything to make his sanity snap if you value your life.
If asked about his past, he will start to scratch his neck nervously to the point he begins to draw blood. He doesn't like to dwell on the past.
History:: "I've done a lot of things that I'm not proud of. That's all I'm saying. This is my clean slate. "
Magic
Magic Name:: Bone-Make Magic
Description:: This is a type of Molding Magic which utilizes the element of bones. The user can create a variety of objects out of bones to be used for offensive, defensive or miscellaneous purposes. The bones that are created are extremely durable, capable withstanding forces that would shatter other bones. It can be used in both of their dynamic and static forms, allowing a wide arsenal of weaponry, dangerous attacks, and strong defenses.
Known Spells::
-Offensive:
Dynamic:
Weapon creation: Can make just about any weapon he can think of. Used to cover just general weapons.
Bone-Make: Rapier- Hans creates a rapier made of bones. The weapon is extremely sharp and much more suited for piercing attacks. It can be launched as projectile as well.
Bone-Make: Bone Cutter- Hans creates a giant sword made of bones with a long guard surrounding the hilt of the blade. Its attacks can leave wakes of cuts in its wake.
Bone-Make: Bo Staff - Hans creates a long bone to use as a bone staff. However, it can be turned into a three-sectional-staff as a way to surprise his targets.
Bone-Make: Brahmastra- Creates a an intricate bow made of bones and charges up a single, large arrow made of bones. The arrow is shot at high speeds and once it hits its intended target, it will explode into a spiky array of bones meant to pierce the target.
Bone-Make: Crushing Gauntlets - creates giant gauntlets with chains attached to them. They hover by his hands and can offer both protection and offense. The chains can be swung around as well. The impact is very dangerous.
Bone-Make: Demon Spear- Puts his hands together and one of his arms will be covered in a large mass of bones, creating a large spear head along his arm. It has high piercing power and is very destructive.
Bone-Make: Spinal Stab- Puts his hands together and slams his hands on the ground. Barbed, spiky spines shoot out of the ground beneath his opponents. It is meant to impale his targets and the barbs add extra damage.
Bone-Make: Schneider- Creates a powerful cannon made of bones that then shoots a mass of bones straight at its targets. The explosive attack of this attack is great and can be shot from long distances too.
Bone-Make: Cage- Creates a durable cage made of bones around his opponents.
Static:
Bone-Make: Vulture- Bone constructs that are able to fly through the air and are capable of avoiding attacks and obstacles due to their dynamic nature. They are swift and can deal blunt damage.
Bone-Make: Hedgehog- Creates a large hedgehog made of bones with a very spiny back of bones. It will curl up and then roll at his target fast. On contact, the sharp bones will shred the target's body.
-Defensive:
Bone-Make: Shield- Summons a large, durable shield made of bones.
Bone-Make: Spiny- Covers his body with large spikes made of bones. It is meant to deter others from using melee attacks on him or hurt them.
Bone-Make: Bone Chrome Dome- Creates a dome of bones to protect whoever is inside it from any attacks.
Bone-Male: Crypt Wall- Creates a huge wall made of bones. It's used to protect many people at once.
Bone-Make: Grand Crypt Wall- Creates many huge walls made of bones in a linear fashion. It is his strongest defense technique that can withstand extreme forces, but uses a lot of magic.
-Supportive:
Bone-Make: Juggernaut Armor- Hans creates a highly durable, yet light suit of armor around his body to offer both protection from attacks, but his physical attacks deal more damage due to the armor smashing against them. Another aspect of the armor is that it can be altered with his molding magic even after it was summoned.
Other
Relatives:: Mom and dad, but they're in prison. He doesn't like to talk much about them.
Possessions::
His own apartment, a small one, but it's enough for one person.
Theme Song::
Man Man-Top Drawer
GM
Vongola_Hasayo
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@Rune_Alchemist Sihu is good to go.
@King Kindred Same for Kurai.
@hatakekuro I think I said it last time but just remove the simple weapon spells. Since it's maker magic we know that it's capable of creating pretty much anything out of it's element so having every single thing that could possibly be created as a spell just makes things look crowded. Only make the creations that have more function than just what the weapon is inherently into spells.
@King Kindred Same for Kurai.
@hatakekuro I think I said it last time but just remove the simple weapon spells. Since it's maker magic we know that it's capable of creating pretty much anything out of it's element so having every single thing that could possibly be created as a spell just makes things look crowded. Only make the creations that have more function than just what the weapon is inherently into spells.
Sweet, I would love to join this here is the character I want to sign up with
Name::Thane Ervin
Nickname/Alias:: The Crystal Dragon Slayer
Gender:: Male
Age and date of birth:21 and unknown date of birth
Guild:: Harpy Wing
Rank::A
Personality:: He is a friendly person talks a lot and jokes around just as much. Thane likes to fight, whether that be physically or verbally. Anything that can get him a challenge. He is very violent if one should anger him though. Insulting him verbally doesn't normally get a rise out of him though, things like attacking those he considers his friends or the guild he is part of or people that cant really defend themselves.
History:
Magic Name: Crystal Maker Magic/Crystal Dragonslayer
Description:: Crystal Maker Magic- it is quite similar to Ice maker magic, instead of creating things out of ice, creating things out of solid crystals. Give its nature, it can use the particles in the air, to crystalize nearly anything. From water and moisture in the air to other things. A very skilled Crystal maker user could crystalize elements creating lacerma out of them.
Crystal dragonslayer magic- The power to slay a dragon, or at least it is suppose to. In form using the power of crystals.
Known Spells::
Other- He eats crystals to boost his strength, from lacerma to just plain crystal rocks. Thane cant eat his dragonslayer crystals, but he can eat the crystal make crystals for only one fourth of the original boost
Relatives:: Unknown
Posseions:: He owns a handle to a sword that has long since broken. Focusing his magic into the handle, he can turn it into a crystal blade which always changes shape depending how Thane creates the blade.
Theme Song:: N/A
Name::Thane Ervin
Nickname/Alias:: The Crystal Dragon Slayer
Gender:: Male
Age and date of birth:21 and unknown date of birth
Guild:: Harpy Wing
Rank::A
Personality:: He is a friendly person talks a lot and jokes around just as much. Thane likes to fight, whether that be physically or verbally. Anything that can get him a challenge. He is very violent if one should anger him though. Insulting him verbally doesn't normally get a rise out of him though, things like attacking those he considers his friends or the guild he is part of or people that cant really defend themselves.
History:
: Thane's birth is rather unknown, just he appeared in a basket and given to the guild that he later became apart of Harpy Wing. When he was five years old he took a board job without anyone knowing and got lost. He was lost for four years, he was found wandering the out skirts of town. He was trained by a dragon in the art of dragonslaying or at least he claims it was a dragon, he was delirious when he was found. He was sick, and had been found eating strange mushrooms.
A year later he took up a sword handle as a prize, after completing a job. He had broken the sword in battle after nearly being skewered with it. For the next eleven years he improved his magical abilities and learned crystal maker magic with in those eleven years when he was sixteen years old his dragon slayer magic went nuts, he went under a little transformation that went wrong. He turned into a crystalized mixture dragon
with just primal instincts and no control.
In the middle of a job in a little remote village Thane's magic took over after he went too far. The village was devastated. Thane woke up a day later unknown what he did until a survivor told him so, a boulder had hit him in the head and destroyed the crystal dragon head that was covering his own head. Thane was devastated in what he did. He spent a year trying to put the village the way it was. Thane always forgets the name of the village though.
A year later he took up a sword handle as a prize, after completing a job. He had broken the sword in battle after nearly being skewered with it. For the next eleven years he improved his magical abilities and learned crystal maker magic with in those eleven years when he was sixteen years old his dragon slayer magic went nuts, he went under a little transformation that went wrong. He turned into a crystalized mixture dragon
with just primal instincts and no control.
In the middle of a job in a little remote village Thane's magic took over after he went too far. The village was devastated. Thane woke up a day later unknown what he did until a survivor told him so, a boulder had hit him in the head and destroyed the crystal dragon head that was covering his own head. Thane was devastated in what he did. He spent a year trying to put the village the way it was. Thane always forgets the name of the village though.
Magic Name: Crystal Maker Magic/Crystal Dragonslayer
Description:: Crystal Maker Magic- it is quite similar to Ice maker magic, instead of creating things out of ice, creating things out of solid crystals. Give its nature, it can use the particles in the air, to crystalize nearly anything. From water and moisture in the air to other things. A very skilled Crystal maker user could crystalize elements creating lacerma out of them.
Crystal dragonslayer magic- The power to slay a dragon, or at least it is suppose to. In form using the power of crystals.
Known Spells::
Crystal maker objects- Thane can create a varity of objects made out of crystal. All the objects are all objects that cannot move on their own or are tools that he has to use himself. The objects vary in how dense they are. The longer he takes to make the spells the harder they are.
Crystallization, Thane can crystalize things from the particles in the air he has limited to control over this though. He currently can turn water and moisture into crystals. Making him very close to an Ice wizard just its not ice it is
Crystallization, Thane can crystalize things from the particles in the air he has limited to control over this though. He currently can turn water and moisture into crystals. Making him very close to an Ice wizard just its not ice it is
Crystal Dragonslayer Crystal cloak- Rather defense spell but it is also used in offensively. Thane's body gets covered in crystal scales slowly. This is done in multiple stages.
First stage: it is only a small coat of armor that covers his skin which is only used for small defense. Able to protect himself from attacks at a small degree.
Stage 2: The crystal skin armor thickens and starts to grow sharp spine like scales. The scale armor is harder now and can be used as sharp weapons that are part of his body.
Stage 3: This next stage is a tricky one, Thane will start getting crystal dragon parts. Wings start to form and a tail. This stage is slow and often incomplete. The body starts forming slowly and uses a lot of magic power. It even will start to cover his head if he uses this stage too long. While it gives him a bit of power it also slowly takes control over him. This gives him the abilities to fly slightly and hit people with a tail
Full complete Stage 3: A full complete takeover form looks like a miniature humanoid dragon. Thane has no control if it gets this far as he turns into a feral like creature. Attacking anything and everything around him. Friend, foes, innocent bystanders. To break him out you have to smash the crystal armor that is covering his head. Which is like breaking a rock
First stage: it is only a small coat of armor that covers his skin which is only used for small defense. Able to protect himself from attacks at a small degree.
Stage 2: The crystal skin armor thickens and starts to grow sharp spine like scales. The scale armor is harder now and can be used as sharp weapons that are part of his body.
Stage 3: This next stage is a tricky one, Thane will start getting crystal dragon parts. Wings start to form and a tail. This stage is slow and often incomplete. The body starts forming slowly and uses a lot of magic power. It even will start to cover his head if he uses this stage too long. While it gives him a bit of power it also slowly takes control over him. This gives him the abilities to fly slightly and hit people with a tail
Full complete Stage 3: A full complete takeover form looks like a miniature humanoid dragon. Thane has no control if it gets this far as he turns into a feral like creature. Attacking anything and everything around him. Friend, foes, innocent bystanders. To break him out you have to smash the crystal armor that is covering his head. Which is like breaking a rock
Crystal Dragon Roar- A dragonslayer breath attack, mixture of magical energy and shards of crystal gets blasted out in a breath attack.
Other- He eats crystals to boost his strength, from lacerma to just plain crystal rocks. Thane cant eat his dragonslayer crystals, but he can eat the crystal make crystals for only one fourth of the original boost
Relatives:: Unknown
Posseions:: He owns a handle to a sword that has long since broken. Focusing his magic into the handle, he can turn it into a crystal blade which always changes shape depending how Thane creates the blade.
Theme Song:: N/A
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@King Kindred
Ho boy.
Sihu and Kurai are probably going to either get along really well, or spend their time beating the shit out of each other for funsies.
...would that be classified as getting along well?
Ho boy.
Sihu and Kurai are probably going to either get along really well, or spend their time beating the shit out of each other for funsies.
...would that be classified as getting along well?
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I've got an idea for a C-class Perfume Mage, but of course, I'll be resubmitting Pheobe. I love her too much to abandon her when she didn't even get that much time to play :(
Personality::
Silent and introverted, Phoebe does not care for the company of people and it shows from her attitude. She is indifferent to most all things, and generally seems totally apathetic to her surroundings. Though she does not talk much, when she does, she goes straight to the point and is painfully blunt, stating her opinions regardless of what other people might think or feel, in a way that often comes of as rude or condescending. She never displays extreme emotions and remains unaffected around others who do. Even with her life being threatened, she hardly seems to care.
She generally avoids fights, and seems to take no enjoyment in getting into battles, as a result, there are rumors that she does not actually deserve her spot as an S-class mage, and that it was given to her out of pity, favoritism, or some other base reason.
One thing she does seem to react to are demons. Though her demeanor does not change, she becomes sharper and more animated when they are mentioned.
History:
Phoebe was a prodigious mage, born from two prominent researches. She could grasp theories quicker than most adults could, and sometimes would actively participate in the research done by her parents. However, it could be said that she was too prodigious. She had unparalleled intelligence, but no wisdom to temper it, as that of her adult peers had, the likes of which could only be gained through experience. Her immaturity made her rash, impatient, and arrogant; made her question her parents methods, and irritated with the "sluggishness" of their research. It made her experiment behind their back, eager to show them that her methods were more practical.
Ultimately, it made her into an orphan.
Phoebe dove too deep into her research, without being properly prepared - or rather, she thought herself to be a completely full-proof person; even if the experiment did go awry, she would no doubt be able to handle the situation, is what she thought. By complete accident, she had summoned a demon that she thought to bind to her control. Her goal was to use this demon to study the nature of God Slayer and other lost magics. Upon its summoning, Phoebe established a contract that granted her complete immunity from the demon, making it so that it was unable to harm her, whether directly or indirectly, though the contract worked both ways, she benefited more due to the knowledge she gained and the fact that she was the weaker of the two.
The tragedy of her life began soon afterwards. Though it aided her, as per their contract, it slowly but surely began killing other members of her parents research team to feed its strength. The contract never specified what would happen to those not involved, after all. At first she was unaware of what was causing these deaths, and being unaware that she had summoned a demon at all, so were the rest of the team. Phoebe never even suspected the demon was responsible; she was positive that the leash she had on the demon kept it at bay, not to mention she kept a close eye on it at all times.
What she did not know was that the demon had a natural affinity for the darkness. It could kill silently and unnoticed, all the while appearing to not have moved. When Phoebe slept, its shadow traveled away from its body to act as assassin and reaper, gaining the souls of every person it killed and consequently added to its strength.
Once she found out, she attempted to put a stop to it, but soon found that the demon had become too strong for her to banish. Its power unleashed, it razed the town she lived in to the ground, and in the ultimate act of cruelty, killed everything in it - except her, due to their contract. Included among the dead were her parents. Afterwards, the demon departed, where it eventually encountered strong resistance, and subsequently driven into hiding.
Alone with nothing but her damnable research, Phoebe swore revenge. She poured countless hours into her research for ways to combat the darkness-aligned demon, and after four years, tracked down and faced it. Upon breaking their contract, the two could now face off against each other. In a brutal battle of attrition that lasted two days and nights, Phoebe finally won. The taste of victory was bitter, however, as once the demon was banished, she realized that her research had paid off, and gifted her with an absolutely unique and powerful magic - exactly as she wanted.
And all it cost was her parents, and everyone she loved.
Her appearance at the door of Harpy's Wing was mere coincidence. The broken light mage fell there in a daze after wandering for nearly a week with out food or water.
To this day, nobody is really sure what she wants, or does, anymore. She rarely hangs around other guild members, preferring to stay inside her room all day, or be outside. Nobody's even sure when she takes jobs. Perhaps the only one in the guild who is aware of what she does, and of her past, is the guild master, the only person on the guild she even attempts to talk with.
Magic Name:
Light Dominion Magic
Description:
Over four years of research and the sacrifice of precious amounts of blood has yielded a to Phoebe a light-based magic that is unique, and entirely her own. The first of its kind, Light Dominion Magic does not actually use mana to conjure light, but rather, uses mana to manipulate existing light, and light-based forms. In other words, her magic acts as finely tuned mirrors and magnifying glasses. The greatest aspect of this magic, however, is the fact that using actual light means her spells travel much quicker than other light-based magics, making avoiding her spells an absolute nightmare. When used to its absolute limit, Light Dominion Magic can actually divert light faster than it can travel, and as a result completely darken the atmosphere around the area it's being used in. Unlike most mages, Phoebe does not require the use of her hands for most of her spells, which is why she's earned the nickname "Untouchable Queen", due to her preferred method of fighting to just stand still and rain spells on her opponent as they blindly stumble towards her. She can even manipulate artificial light, and convert it to real light that she can use.
Relatives:
None.
Possessions:
Several lacrima filled with magical light, some meant for an extra range of sight and kept in a small satchel, while others fulfill a variety of other miscellaneous purposes; a lot of books, most of which she keeps in her room, and a pendant that she never takes off. Asides from that, not much.
Theme Song:
Long flowing white hair and fairly short, standing a bit above 5ft. Here eyes are a dull gray, and she is often mistaken to be blind. Her skin is pale white.
(Can I upload a picture later?)
(Can I upload a picture later?)
"Please, leave."
-A rare occasion in which her door was found unlockedBasic Info
Name:
Phoebe
Nickname/Alias:
"Untouchable Princess"
"Hyperion"
Gender:
Female
Age and date of birth:
16
Guild:
Harpy's Wing, the mark is located on her chest and is color black.
Rank:
S-rank
(Power increases and decreases depending on the amount of light surrounding her; if she's completely shrouded in darkness, her overall rank drops an order of degrees to lower A-class)
Phoebe
Nickname/Alias:
"Untouchable Princess"
"Hyperion"
Gender:
Female
Age and date of birth:
16
Guild:
Harpy's Wing, the mark is located on her chest and is color black.
Rank:
S-rank
(Power increases and decreases depending on the amount of light surrounding her; if she's completely shrouded in darkness, her overall rank drops an order of degrees to lower A-class)
Personal Information
Personality::
Silent and introverted, Phoebe does not care for the company of people and it shows from her attitude. She is indifferent to most all things, and generally seems totally apathetic to her surroundings. Though she does not talk much, when she does, she goes straight to the point and is painfully blunt, stating her opinions regardless of what other people might think or feel, in a way that often comes of as rude or condescending. She never displays extreme emotions and remains unaffected around others who do. Even with her life being threatened, she hardly seems to care.
She generally avoids fights, and seems to take no enjoyment in getting into battles, as a result, there are rumors that she does not actually deserve her spot as an S-class mage, and that it was given to her out of pity, favoritism, or some other base reason.
One thing she does seem to react to are demons. Though her demeanor does not change, she becomes sharper and more animated when they are mentioned.
History:
Phoebe was a prodigious mage, born from two prominent researches. She could grasp theories quicker than most adults could, and sometimes would actively participate in the research done by her parents. However, it could be said that she was too prodigious. She had unparalleled intelligence, but no wisdom to temper it, as that of her adult peers had, the likes of which could only be gained through experience. Her immaturity made her rash, impatient, and arrogant; made her question her parents methods, and irritated with the "sluggishness" of their research. It made her experiment behind their back, eager to show them that her methods were more practical.
Ultimately, it made her into an orphan.
Phoebe dove too deep into her research, without being properly prepared - or rather, she thought herself to be a completely full-proof person; even if the experiment did go awry, she would no doubt be able to handle the situation, is what she thought. By complete accident, she had summoned a demon that she thought to bind to her control. Her goal was to use this demon to study the nature of God Slayer and other lost magics. Upon its summoning, Phoebe established a contract that granted her complete immunity from the demon, making it so that it was unable to harm her, whether directly or indirectly, though the contract worked both ways, she benefited more due to the knowledge she gained and the fact that she was the weaker of the two.
The tragedy of her life began soon afterwards. Though it aided her, as per their contract, it slowly but surely began killing other members of her parents research team to feed its strength. The contract never specified what would happen to those not involved, after all. At first she was unaware of what was causing these deaths, and being unaware that she had summoned a demon at all, so were the rest of the team. Phoebe never even suspected the demon was responsible; she was positive that the leash she had on the demon kept it at bay, not to mention she kept a close eye on it at all times.
What she did not know was that the demon had a natural affinity for the darkness. It could kill silently and unnoticed, all the while appearing to not have moved. When Phoebe slept, its shadow traveled away from its body to act as assassin and reaper, gaining the souls of every person it killed and consequently added to its strength.
Once she found out, she attempted to put a stop to it, but soon found that the demon had become too strong for her to banish. Its power unleashed, it razed the town she lived in to the ground, and in the ultimate act of cruelty, killed everything in it - except her, due to their contract. Included among the dead were her parents. Afterwards, the demon departed, where it eventually encountered strong resistance, and subsequently driven into hiding.
Alone with nothing but her damnable research, Phoebe swore revenge. She poured countless hours into her research for ways to combat the darkness-aligned demon, and after four years, tracked down and faced it. Upon breaking their contract, the two could now face off against each other. In a brutal battle of attrition that lasted two days and nights, Phoebe finally won. The taste of victory was bitter, however, as once the demon was banished, she realized that her research had paid off, and gifted her with an absolutely unique and powerful magic - exactly as she wanted.
And all it cost was her parents, and everyone she loved.
Her appearance at the door of Harpy's Wing was mere coincidence. The broken light mage fell there in a daze after wandering for nearly a week with out food or water.
To this day, nobody is really sure what she wants, or does, anymore. She rarely hangs around other guild members, preferring to stay inside her room all day, or be outside. Nobody's even sure when she takes jobs. Perhaps the only one in the guild who is aware of what she does, and of her past, is the guild master, the only person on the guild she even attempts to talk with.
Magic
Magic Name:
Light Dominion Magic
Description:
Over four years of research and the sacrifice of precious amounts of blood has yielded a to Phoebe a light-based magic that is unique, and entirely her own. The first of its kind, Light Dominion Magic does not actually use mana to conjure light, but rather, uses mana to manipulate existing light, and light-based forms. In other words, her magic acts as finely tuned mirrors and magnifying glasses. The greatest aspect of this magic, however, is the fact that using actual light means her spells travel much quicker than other light-based magics, making avoiding her spells an absolute nightmare. When used to its absolute limit, Light Dominion Magic can actually divert light faster than it can travel, and as a result completely darken the atmosphere around the area it's being used in. Unlike most mages, Phoebe does not require the use of her hands for most of her spells, which is why she's earned the nickname "Untouchable Queen", due to her preferred method of fighting to just stand still and rain spells on her opponent as they blindly stumble towards her. She can even manipulate artificial light, and convert it to real light that she can use.
Known Spells:
Light Queens Canopy - An area of about ten meters in diameter is transformed into her territory, called the "Canopy". In the Canopy, light in an area of effect can be manipulated, and as a result, she can bend the image that light reflects on persons' eyes, causing her to look invisible, or to reverse ones' sense of direction, or even cause nausea by messing with a ones' depth of perception.
Javelin of Light - Her main offensive spell. The Javelin of light is a concentrated beam that travels quickly and silently, with terrifying piercing power. Objects too close to the Javelin may be set on fire due to the heat. Phoebe also has the ability to tag people with a magic seal. Said seal then becomes a homing beacon for the Javelin to close in on. She can launch it one after the other or in a barrage to fit her needs.
Star Princess' Veil - A barrier made of light that takes the concept of "offense is the best defense" to the extreme. Phoebe creates a wall of constantly rebounding light around her that evaporates whatever it comes into contact with. She can increase the range of the barrier for offensive use, though doing that exponentially decreases its power.
Hyperion Buster - Her most powerful attack. Hyperion Buster rebounds light against each other, and compresses it all into one spot so quickly and tightly that the area around her darkens completely, except for where the Hyperion Buster is. It is then launched towards her opponent. Hyperion Buster ignores all kinds of physical resistance, as the light passes directly through it instead, melting everything along the way. However, this spell has two major flaws: one is that it can only be used if there is a sufficient amount of light out - most of the time, this means high noon. Its second flaw is that after using it, the void of darkness it creates severely weakens the strength of her spells for a brief period of time. Another, though less notable, weakness, is that due to the intensity of this technique, Phoebe can only use it outdoors and in wide areas, or risk getting others caught in the blast radius.
Sun Chariot - contrary to popular opinion, it is not Hyperion Buster that got her into S-rank, but Sun Chariot. It is not even a spell designed for combat, but rather a spell meant for transportation, though that does not mean it doesn't have combat capabilities. Sun Chariot converts her entire body to light and transports her in the direction she chooses. Moving at the speed of light practically guarantees that no one can keep up with her if she wanted to run. This spell does have flaws, in that Phoebe cannot travel where she does not have vision. This can be remedied with sight lacrima, however. There is a half a minute cool down time between each use of the spell.
Light Queens Canopy - An area of about ten meters in diameter is transformed into her territory, called the "Canopy". In the Canopy, light in an area of effect can be manipulated, and as a result, she can bend the image that light reflects on persons' eyes, causing her to look invisible, or to reverse ones' sense of direction, or even cause nausea by messing with a ones' depth of perception.
Javelin of Light - Her main offensive spell. The Javelin of light is a concentrated beam that travels quickly and silently, with terrifying piercing power. Objects too close to the Javelin may be set on fire due to the heat. Phoebe also has the ability to tag people with a magic seal. Said seal then becomes a homing beacon for the Javelin to close in on. She can launch it one after the other or in a barrage to fit her needs.
Star Princess' Veil - A barrier made of light that takes the concept of "offense is the best defense" to the extreme. Phoebe creates a wall of constantly rebounding light around her that evaporates whatever it comes into contact with. She can increase the range of the barrier for offensive use, though doing that exponentially decreases its power.
Hyperion Buster - Her most powerful attack. Hyperion Buster rebounds light against each other, and compresses it all into one spot so quickly and tightly that the area around her darkens completely, except for where the Hyperion Buster is. It is then launched towards her opponent. Hyperion Buster ignores all kinds of physical resistance, as the light passes directly through it instead, melting everything along the way. However, this spell has two major flaws: one is that it can only be used if there is a sufficient amount of light out - most of the time, this means high noon. Its second flaw is that after using it, the void of darkness it creates severely weakens the strength of her spells for a brief period of time. Another, though less notable, weakness, is that due to the intensity of this technique, Phoebe can only use it outdoors and in wide areas, or risk getting others caught in the blast radius.
Sun Chariot - contrary to popular opinion, it is not Hyperion Buster that got her into S-rank, but Sun Chariot. It is not even a spell designed for combat, but rather a spell meant for transportation, though that does not mean it doesn't have combat capabilities. Sun Chariot converts her entire body to light and transports her in the direction she chooses. Moving at the speed of light practically guarantees that no one can keep up with her if she wanted to run. This spell does have flaws, in that Phoebe cannot travel where she does not have vision. This can be remedied with sight lacrima, however. There is a half a minute cool down time between each use of the spell.
Other
Relatives:
None.
Possessions:
Several lacrima filled with magical light, some meant for an extra range of sight and kept in a small satchel, while others fulfill a variety of other miscellaneous purposes; a lot of books, most of which she keeps in her room, and a pendant that she never takes off. Asides from that, not much.
Theme Song:
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@BladeSS4 Well, let's see...first off, this more of a personal preference when it comes to having two magics, I'm not really a fan of slayer/maker combinations. Just seems redundant to me. I'm not saying you have to change it but it is a little iffy for me. Second, your not just born with dragon slayer magic. Being born with innate magical ability has been shown ie Erza's sword magic but slayer magic is not one that you can just be born with. It's very well established that it is a taught magic and can only be learned/obtained from outside sources. So, either ditch the slayer magic or establish how he learned and/or obtained it. Finally, I know your going for the mysterious past thing with your char but your sheet is just too bare. I would like to see it more fleshed out.
@TheHangedMan Phoebe's good to go~
@TheHangedMan Phoebe's good to go~
@Rune_Alchemist Sihu is good to go.
@King Kindred Same for Kurai.
@hatakekuro I think I said it last time but just remove the simple weapon spells. Since it's maker magic we know that it's capable of creating pretty much anything out of it's element so having every single thing that could possibly be created as a spell just makes things look crowded. Only make the creations that have more function than just what the weapon is inherently into spells.
K, did it.
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@hatakekuro Well, first off, had my GM hat on when I first saw you show up so I was horribly blunt...ahem...how the hell ya been ol buddy ol pal ol compadre~? *Puts GM hat back on* You still have a shitload of spells going on here and it feels like your trying to cover too many bases by being overly versatile. It wouldn't be so much of a concern if it was only the bone-make but you do have a second magic and either he's dedicated to one or there's a better balance.
@hatakekuro Well, first off, had my GM hat on when I first saw you show up so I was horribly blunt...ahem...how the hell ya been ol buddy ol pal ol compadre~? *Puts GM hat back on* You still have a shitload of spells going on here and it feels like your trying to cover too many bases by being overly versatile. It wouldn't be so much of a concern if it was only the bone-make but you do have a second magic and either he's dedicated to one or there's a better balance.
I've been prety well. College is pretty crazy. And I can get rid of his other magic.
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@hatakekuro Okay, and I think I've figured a sensible way to cut the spells. Maker magic can be split into two categories--static and dynamic--it's not stated that you have to be one or the other but it's fair to reason that dynamic is more advanced. So, only have one or two of the creature makes. After that I'd say Hans is good to go.
@hatakekuro Okay, and I think I've figured a sensible way to cut the spells. Maker magic can be split into two categories--static and dynamic--it's not stated that you have to be one or the other but it's fair to reason that dynamic is more advanced. So, only have one or two of the creature makes. After that I'd say Hans is good to go.
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@King Kindred
Ho boy.
Sihu and Kurai are probably going to either get along really well, or spend their time beating the shit out of each other for funsies.
...would that be classified as getting along well?
That could definitely be classified as getting along well.
I have added more to the history and how he obtained the magic. Is that any better?
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@hatakekuro Well, besides the fact that you got the categories of static and dynamic backwards XD You're good to go.
@BladeSS4 I'm sorry but after mulling it over I can't accept the character. Besides the slayer/maker combo being redundant and unnecessary, your history is rather convoluted and incoherent. Honestly, I don't think you level of writing matches up with what I'm looking for here. I hope you understand and thank you for your time.
@BladeSS4 I'm sorry but after mulling it over I can't accept the character. Besides the slayer/maker combo being redundant and unnecessary, your history is rather convoluted and incoherent. Honestly, I don't think you level of writing matches up with what I'm looking for here. I hope you understand and thank you for your time.
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