[OOC] Blue Fog - A Survival and Society Building Game

[Piercing Light]

Blue Fog

You have no idea where you are. You have no clue how or when you even got here. There is a grassy field that seems to extend forever, you can't quite tell how far it goes due to a strange blue mist permeates the air. But that's not only thing strange about the field, there's also the fact that it is perfectly flat, with grass that looks as if it were cut evenly to the nano-meter. The lack of any clippings whatsoever suggests that it's always been this way.

You quickly noticed the moment you opened your eyes that you weren't alone. Thousands of people are also in this field with no one knowing what has happened to them. There are strange people all around, people you'd never have seen where you're from. Behind you is what should be an impossibility, a stone wall that extends so far up that it has passed the heavens. The wall's surface is unremarkable except for one thing at the base, a cave entrance.

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So this is Blue Fog, a survival RP. The player goals will be to survive and attempt to form some semblance of a functional society, and maybe figure out why they're here. But there is nothing in the field, and anyone that tries to venture into the fog always ends up back at the wall. The only option is to venture into the cave and hope to find what they need. But only a few people out of the ten thousand will be able to enter the cave, all others are repelled by an invisible force.

The only ones that can enter are those that have a symbol on the back of their left hand. This symbol will represent that character's given class, as everyone's is different. Because you see, people from many different universes found themselves here. One person might be an elf, another could be an alien. Those with a mark will each find themselves to have a 'gift.' A player's gift will be a unique power or trait such as pyromancy or enhanced strength.

The cave will effectively be like a video game dungeon, with multiple levels filled with all sorts of monsters (I'll be making a bestiary as new monsters are discovered) and on certain floors there will be treasure, usually something that will help them survive on the surface. Accomplishing certain goals will yield rewards as well.

Rules

• No Metagaming or Godmodding.
• The Character limit is 2 at the moment. If you want to create a minor NPC then let me know and we'll discuss the details.
• At the bare minimum I would like you to be able to post once a week, if you can't make a deadline for some reason then let me know.
• No controlling other people's characters without their consent.
• Romance is allowed, but anything sexually explicit is not.
• While I'm not strictly trying to go for a dark tone gratuitous violence can happen, just try not to go overboard. The same goes for swearing.

Character Template

Name:

Age:

Gender: (If applicable)

Race: (You may use a specific race from a series, however it cannot be a canon character, or one related to a canon character)

Appearance: (If you use a picture I don't mind where it's from, however I would like at least one paragraph describing what they look like.)

Personality:

Biography: (You don't have to give your character's entire life story, in fact you can just write what they were doing right before they found themselves in this world.)

Class: (Think of the role your character will best be able to fill and give it a name, also describe what the mark on their left hand looks like. If your character doesn't have hands, it can be somewhere else.

Gift: (A Gift is a power given to your character when they arrive in this world. Keep in mind that the power scaling isn't crazy high. Anything with the ability to level a building I won't accept. Also, if your character has healing abilities then their combat ability should be severely limited. Basically, I want you to keep balance in mind and not make a character that can solve everything on their own.)

Natural Powers: (If you are using a canon character keep in mind the same power limits as a gift apply. And you may only pick up to two different substantially powerful powers.)

Talents: (miscellaneous skills your character has, such as sewing, masonry, or cooking)

Weaknesses: (Either physical flaws, fears, or personality issues your character may have)

Other: (Things like theme songs or quirks your character has.)

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[GreenGoat]

Evfimiia

Name: Evfimiia Serdiatnitskiia

Age: 19

Gender: Female

Race: Arachne, jumping spider subset

Appearance:

appearance

Her spider half is that of a jumping spider with white coloring, and yellow dots on the back half. Her hair conceals her other sets of eyes higher up on her forehead. Height wise, she reaches up to about 5'2"(157cm) with a leg span of almost twice that fully stretched out.

Personality: Aloof and silent, both traits nurtured by her profession, though that did not mean she was unfriendly, just averse to much talking. After all, she lived in a library, where a wealth of knowledge could be found. Why speak when you can read and gain more knowledge? Most of her expressions and traits seemed muted, toned down leading to the impression of a demure librarian doing her duty, and image belied by her secret affinity for the more... raunchier of writings. She's helpful when she needs to, mindful of what people need, but if asked about her hobby, she will deny it vehemently.

Biography: The library was all she had ever known. The Great Arachne Library of Eros, that's what they called it. A library containing great knowledge, with some books in languages so old only the greatest of wizards ever asked for them. She was not the only one there of course, for it contained a whole lot of her brethren, hence the Arachne in the title. Books were exchanged, some were gained, a few were lost, but always the library remained the same to her. It was not unpleasant, for Evfimiia's liked the predictable pace of it all. Wizards and adventurers came in from time to time, bearing news of war outside the isolated mountain they were in. Some books were lost in those wars as well. Hence, there was no reason why she would go out wandering again, not when most people balked at her looks alone.

But, that very same predictable pace made her extremely curious when one day she had this feeling that made all her hair bristle. That strange feeling whenever she looked towards an aisle, one that had been there ever since she could remember. A normal aisle full of books on either side, yet suddenly so alien. Curiosity took over her and she stepped towards it, trying to shake off that feeling.

The feeling that she should flee immediately.

Class: Great Moving Library. The mark on her hand is a simple < rune.

Gift: Evfimiia's gift was the ability to record and document anything she could observe and perceive onto a book, or if she doesn't have any empty one, a scroll will manifest with the information recorded. This will not give circumstantial information like their past experiences for sentients, or their thoughts, but simply a record of what they are and their properties. This also gives her the ability to manipulate information(ie the letters and words) on a book or scroll. A very important ability so one book does not get cluttered up with various information with no apparent groupings, giving her the ability to classify them into different books should she wish to.

Natural Powers: Being a jumping spider, she naturally has the ability to jump really really good, from about 10 to 50 times her own body height, depending on the conditions of that jump. Fast in general, especially over level ground. Being a spider also gives her the ability to generate threads of silk she can hang on to like a rope. Hard chitinous exoskeleton covers her lower half, acting as a sort of natural armor. Does have venom in her fangs, though it is not extremely poisonous, it does cause some pain, though smaller creatures may find it deadlier to them.

Talents: Speedreading, great memory, well educated, able to write fast and precisely with good handwriting without blotting the ink with the quill, great manual dexterity with her hands, actually cooking, washing, and maintaining a book. To a lesser extent, hunting since that was something ingrained into her instincts, though she might balk at having to bite dirty unwashed animals.

Weaknesses: She can stand heat, but she's more susceptible to cold than most creatures. While her bottom half was tough, her upper more human part was still fleshy and easy to hack. While she can produce silk, being a jumping spider means she wasn't actually proficient at weaving anything with them. Has absolutely no real combat skill, preferring to flee instead of fight if she can. Has this curious impulse to stand on anything tall and flat at the top.

Other:

[Piercing Light]

Evfimiia is accepted.

[Lurking Shadow]

Aleksander Slavik

Name: Aleksander Slavik

Age: 47

Gender: Male

Race: Human

Appearance:

In armor(Large Image)

Outside of his armor, he is a clean shaven man of eastern European descent. Despite his age his constant exercise and meditations make him extraordinarily fit and appear youthful. He is 5’11” tall and has burn marks and scars in various locations around his body, a reminder of his victories in the Third and Fourth Tiberium war.

Personality: Likes to face problems head on with little regard for caution, though he will practice caution should an action be suicidal. Does not tolerate incompetent or useless allies and will try to alter this behavior through any means deemed necessary.

Biography: Aleksander has been with the Black Hand since nearly the start of his military career. His loyalty to the Brotherhood of Nod and his stamina made him an ideal candidate for the hazardous and extreme training required. Those that survived were deemed worthy of the elite status and gear provided to the devout. He first saw action in 2052 when the Black Hand aided the Marked of Kane with securing the Tacitus from the G.D.I. complex in the Rocky Mountains and succeeded despite facing fierce resistance and nearly a tenth of all G.D.I. armed forces being amassed in bunkers underneath the mountains. Since then he quickly rose to the rank of Archdeacon for his service and feats to the Brotherhood.

The last thing he remembers before waking up in the field was defending the last Threshold tower from Rouge G.D.I. in 2077. Aleksander fought viciously with his brothers as G.D.I.’s offensive crumbled, not even their prototype Arcus Bomber succeeded in breaching Nod’s defenses. Shortly after, with the tower fully powered, a massive anomaly appeared centered from within the tower creating a portal to an unknown location. The resulting energy caused a shockwave that rippled for miles knocking Aleksander into a wall rendering him unconscious.

That brings him to when he woke up. He found himself in a field surrounded by strange creatures he has never seen before. Some bears resemblance to humans in some way, others not so much. On his hand, he felt heat. This, on closer inspection, revealed to be a branding of the Black Hand insignia with a faint red glow. With little clue on why or how he arrived here, he is not keen on staying far from his brothers. For the first time in decades, even with these other beings near him, he feels alone.

Class: Black Hand

mark

Gift: Pyrokinesis- Though Aleksander has limited ability to create fire; he demonstrates extraordinary control over the physical properties of any flame. Which includes but is not limited to; extending the duration, size, and spreading the flames. As a side effect, he is more resistant to fire than a normal Black Hand operative, to the point of being nearly immune.

Natural powers: Extreme Stamina - Aleksander rarely tires from exhaustion
Heat resistance- Can withstand temperatures upwards of 4500 degrees centigrade
Durable- His armor grants great resistance to ballistics and heat based weaponry but a weakness to energy type of attacks. In addition it possesses a minor self-repair function though it is largely useless in combat
Extreme heat- His flamethrower is fueled by a specially modified ‘jelly’ mixed with liquid Tiberium. The mixture allows for a slow burn at temperatures exceeding 2500 degrees centigrade.

Talents: Can be inspiring to allies and cause fear in others. Adept in CQC and Urban warfare and can craft basic traps.

Weaknesses: Any type of energy based attacks or corrosive materials. He lacks the range to effectively engage distant targets. Though his armor provides protection against most environmental hazards, it does not completely protect against extreme hazards such as absolute zero or lack of oxygen.

Other:

[Piercing Light]

Aleksander is accepted.

[GreenGoat]

Sweet. Moved my CS into the char tab. We can explore the plains to see if there are other things out there yes? Or is it just plains everywhere? Or will the fog just kill us at a certain distance from the wall?

[Piercing Light]

Sweet. Moved my CS into the char tab. We can explore the plains to see if there are other things out there yes? Or is it just plains everywhere? Or will the fog just kill us at a certain distance from the wall?

@GreenGoat

There's nothing out there right now, if you try to go out too far you'll eventually end up back at the wall. The ground can be dug up, but there's just dirt.

[astralGemini]

Kaede

Age: 24
Gender: Female
Height: 5'5"
Weight: 116 lb.
Race: Kitsune (one-tailed)

Appearance: Her true form is that of a petite teenage girl with light auburn hair, warm brown eyes and a fox's ears and tail. She usually hides her vulpine features, though they tend to reappear when she is surprised, embarrassed, or concentrating. She wears simple and lightweight dresses, preferring freedom of movement to the protection afforded by armor.

Picture

Personality: Kaede is the type of girl that manages to leave everyone with a good first impression. Her cheerful and inquisitive attitude charms all but the most grizzled curmudgeons, and those meeting her for the first time rarely notice just how much lighter their wallets are upon leaving her shop. Her positivity is genuine, however; the people of her village treat her nicely with no manipulation necessary. Of course, it helps that she funnels most of her earnings back into the village through gifts and funding for community projects.

Biography: Kaede has lived all her life in a small village on the edge of a forest, enjoying the peaceful atmosphere and running a small general store, trading between the villagers, traveling merchants, and the occasional adventuring party. She has sometimes fantasized about joining with one, but always decided to stay with the life she had always known.

Class: Arcane Trickster
Mark: A smiling mask

Gift: Cover the Mind's Eye (Kaede's illusions replace sensory information in the mind of the target, rather than projecting information into the outside environment.)

Natural Powers: Shapeshifting (appearance only), Foxfire (small blue flames that can be controlled telekinetically; they do not burn living things.)

Talents:
-Convincing actress (and liar)
-Skilled and dexterous knife fighter
-Sharp senses
-Good cook
-Magical potential (illusion and nature magic, not yet learned)

Weaknesses:
-Below average strength and endurance
-Rather insecure, rarely opens up to others
-Unfamiliar with post-medieval technology

Other:

Theme Song

[Piercing Light]

Kaede

Age: 24
Gender: Female
Height: 5'5"
Weight: 116 lb.
Race: Kitsune (one-tailed)

Appearance: Her true form is that of a petite teenage girl with light auburn hair, warm brown eyes and a fox's ears and tail. She usually hides her vulpine features, though they tend to reappear when she is surprised, embarrassed, or concentrating. She wears simple and lightweight dresses, preferring freedom of movement to the protection afforded by armor.

Picture

Personality: Kaede is the type of girl that manages to leave everyone with a good first impression. Her cheerful and inquisitive attitude charms all but the most grizzled curmudgeons, and those meeting her for the first time rarely notice just how much lighter their wallets are upon leaving her shop. Her positivity is genuine, however; the people of her village treat her nicely with no manipulation necessary. Of course, it helps that she funnels most of her earnings back into the village through gifts and funding for community projects.

Biography: Kaede has lived all her life in a small village on the edge of a forest, enjoying the peaceful atmosphere and running a small general store, trading between the villagers, traveling merchants, and the occasional adventuring party. She has sometimes fantasized about joining with one, but always decided to stay with the life she had always known.

Class: Arcane Trickster
Mark: A smiling mask, located on her right shoulder

Gift: Cover the Mind's Eye (Illusions that replace the target's senses, making them very difficult to detect)

Natural Powers: Shapeshifting (appearance, not powers), Foxfire (small blue flames that can be controlled telekinetically; they do not burn living things.)

Talents:
-Convincing actress (and liar)
-Skilled and dexterous knife fighter
-Sharp senses
-Good cook
-Magical potential (illusion and nature magic, not yet learned)

Weaknesses:
-Below average strength and endurance
-Rather insecure, rarely opens up to others
-Unfamiliar with post-medieval technology

Other:

Theme Song

@astralGemini

When you say her gift can replace the target's senses what does that mean exactly? Can she cause them to go blind/deaf, does she create false images and sounds?

[Hammerman]

Here's my CS.

Illia Anastasia

Name: Illia Anastasia

Age: 300 years old

Gender: Female

Race: Magic-Touched Human. Far more long-lived than the average human.

Appearance

Her usual attire when she travels.


She is always seen wearing a long, flowing robe in public. She is quite the tall woman, being 6 feet tall. Her hair length is also quite extraordinary, reaching to her knees.

Personality:
Most people see her as a kind and caring mage, as she would happily mingle with the populace and even let children tug on her robes. However, that didn't mean she was naive, as her 300 year experience on life has made her a wise and knowledgeable mage. She knows when to hold back and when to act with her full strength. She is easily disgusted with any injustice. She will punish any evildoers and criminals she happens to find in her travels, sometimes in unpleasant ways. As a long-lived mage, she isn't bound by the rules and laws of society, and she will sometimes inflict cruel punishments into people whose crimes she finds most revolting.

Biography:
She was born as an illegitimate child of a local noble who forced himself into one of his powerless subjects. Her poor mother died when she was born, leading her to be sent to a local orphanage. At her early years, she had already manifested her affinity for the extremely rare force magic, leading her to be ostracized by her friends since in those days magic was something scary and odd to the common folk. When she was twelve, she learned about who her father was. At that time, her father had succeeded her grandfather to be the local lord. His excessive spending had led his house into a financial ruin, and he compensated with unfairly taxing her village, to the point of starvation. One fateful day, he visited the orphanage. There, he forced the owner to pay his due taxes with force, kicking the poor old man to the ground when he said they had no more money left. And then, when he laid hand on one of the older orphans, he said to the old man that he would take her as a replacement for his tax. The poor girl was dragged to his carriage screaming and kicking. Here, Ilia exploded at the display of injustice in front of her. With her magic, she controlled the guards' swords and made them stab their owners and her father. They all died that day. Of course, she couldn't live in the orphanage any longer after doing such a crime so she left the village. She travelled around aimlessly, not knowing where to go and what to do. She became an even bigger criminal with a bounty on her head after she killed more cruel and evil people with her ability. But eventually, the mages heard of her. And they came to her and explained everything about her power and offered her to go with them to their abode to learn its mastery. And she accepted.

She grew into a powerful mage. But unlike the other mages, who had accepted a life of isolation free from the rest of the world, she couldn't forget the terrible state of the human world. After becoming the leader of the mages in her 100-year of age, the previous one choosing her as his successor, she declared war on the corrupt human world. It didn't take much until all kings and queens on the world bowed down to the mages, thanks to the superior magical weaponry and ability her kind possesses and the fractured state of the non-magicians. Her one world magocracy had become reality. She then declares that all mages shall use their power for the benefit of everyone, and not just themselves.

The world soon transformed into a new era, where magicians freely mingled with the non-mages. The quality of life became much higher thanks to the magic freely shared amongst the populace. People who scorned and hated the mages for taking over soon was won over. And now, it was 200 years later and the magocracy was still going strong. And Illia still travelled amongst the masses, making sure that her subordinates didn't abuse their authority. Only a handful of people knew who she really was so most people only knew her as the kind-hearted traveller mage.

Class:
Archmage.

The symbol on her left hand is a complex magic circle.

Hider

Gift:
Telepathy. She could now converse to others without speaking. The other side can also respond as long as she hasn't closed the line, so to speak. Has a quite large radius.

Natural Powers:
1. Telekinesis
As a force mage, she could move objects without touching them. The heavier the object the harder it would be for her to move them, so with sufficient brute force, you could resist her spell. Has a radius of ten feet in a circle around her.
2. Barrier
Another application of her force magic was a barrier that repelled anything, even other magic. But once again, they are limits to its strength and like the above, it uses up her mana. The stronger the attack, the more mana it drains.

Her two ability can only be used at maximum strength with her staff. Without it, she cannot cast Barrier and her telekinesis only has a radius of five feet with its strength reduced.

Talents:
She is pretty good at sewing and cooking. She can also speak all the language in her world. And she is extremely knowledgeable in all things magical in nature. She's also able to make magical items if the necessary ingredients are available.

Weaknesses:
She has a weak physical strength and endurance. If she runs, she will be out of breath near instantly.

Other:
Secretly wish she can have a husband. 300 years of living and she's still a maiden.

Kinda want to make her able to cast various spells, but that would be too overpowered, I suppose.

[astralGemini]

When you say her gift can replace the target's senses what does that mean exactly? Can she cause them to go blind/deaf, does she create false images and sounds?

@Piercing Light

Currently, just the former, and she's not aware of it yet. Once she learns to cast illusion spells, she'd be able to make a target see, hear, or otherwise sense almost anything she wants without the target's actual senses getting in the way. It'll only reach its true potential if she learns how to create those illusions in the first place, though.

[Kazemitsu]

Is this still open for new people? o.o

[Piercing Light]

<Snipped quote by Piercing Light>

Currently, just the former, and she's not aware of it yet. Once she learns to cast illusion spells, she'd be able to make a target see, hear, or otherwise sense almost anything she wants without the target's actual senses getting in the way. It'll only reach its true potential if she learns how to create those illusions in the first place, though.

@astralGemini

The former, as in making the target blind/deaf? If it's just creating illusions that's fine, but making a target completely blind and deaf is a bit much.

Is this still open for new people? o.o

@Kazemitsu

yes

Here's my CS.

Illia Anastasia

Name: Illia Anastasia

Age: 300 years old

Gender: Female

Race: Magic-Touched Human. Far more long-lived than the average human.

Appearance

Her usual attire when she travels.


She is always seen wearing a long, flowing robe in public. She is quite the tall woman, being 6 feet tall. Her hair length is also quite extraordinary, reaching to her knees.

Personality:
Most people see her as a kind and caring mage, as she would happily mingle with the populace and even let children tug on her robes. However, that didn't mean she was naive, as her 300 year experience on life has made her a wise and knowledgeable mage. She knows when to hold back and when to act with her full strength. She is easily disgusted with any injustice. She will punish any evildoers and criminals she happens to find in her travels, sometimes in unpleasant ways. As a long-lived mage, she isn't bound by the rules and laws of society, and she will sometimes inflict cruel punishments into people whose crimes she finds most revolting.

Biography:
She was born as an illegitimate child of a local noble who forced himself into one of his powerless subjects. Her poor mother died when she was born, leading her to be sent to a local orphanage. At her early years, she had already manifested her affinity for the extremely rare force magic, leading her to be ostracized by her friends since in those days magic was something scary and odd to the common folk. When she was twelve, she learned about who her father was. At that time, her father had succeeded her grandfather to be the local lord. His excessive spending had led his house into a financial ruin, and he compensated with unfairly taxing her village, to the point of starvation. One fateful day, he visited the orphanage. There, he forced the owner to pay his due taxes with force, kicking the poor old man to the ground when he said they had no more money left. And then, when he laid hand on one of the older orphans, he said to the old man that he would take her as a replacement for his tax. The poor girl was dragged to his carriage screaming and kicking. Here, Ilia exploded at the display of injustice in front of her. With her magic, she controlled the guards' swords and made them stab their owners and her father. They all died that day. Of course, she couldn't live in the orphanage any longer after doing such a crime so she left the village. She travelled around aimlessly, not knowing where to go and what to do. She became an even bigger criminal with a bounty on her head after she killed more cruel and evil people with her ability. But eventually, the mages heard of her. And they came to her and explained everything about her power and offered her to go with them to their abode to learn its mastery. And she accepted.

She grew into a powerful mage. But unlike the other mages, who had accepted a life of isolation free from the rest of the world, she couldn't forget the terrible state of the human world. After becoming the leader of the mages in her 100-year of age, the previous one choosing her as his successor, she declared war on the corrupt human world. It didn't take much until all kings and queens on the world bowed down to the mages, thanks to the superior magical weaponry and ability her kind possesses and the fractured state of the non-magicians. Her one world magocracy had become reality. She then declares that all mages shall use their power for the benefit of everyone, and not just themselves.

The world soon transformed into a new era, where magicians freely mingled with the non-mages. The quality of life became much higher thanks to the magic freely shared amongst the populace. People who scorned and hated the mages for taking over soon was won over. And now, it was 200 years later and the magocracy was still going strong. And Illia still travelled amongst the masses, making sure that her subordinates didn't abuse their authority. Only a handful of people knew who she really was so most people only knew her as the kind-hearted traveller mage.

Class:
Archmage.

The symbol on her left hand is a complex magic circle.

Hider

Gift:
Telepathy. She could now converse to others without speaking. The other side can also respond as long as she hasn't closed the line, so to speak. Has a quite large radius.

Natural Powers:
1. Telekinesis
As a force mage, she could move objects without touching them. The heavier the object the harder it would be for her to move them, so with sufficient brute force, you could resist her spell. Has a radius of ten feet in a circle around her.
2. Barrier
Another application of her force magic was a barrier that repelled anything, even other magic. But once again, they are limits to its strength and like the above, it uses up her mana. The stronger the attack, the more mana it drains.

Her two ability can only be used at maximum strength with her staff. Without it, she cannot cast Barrier and her telekinesis only has a radius of five feet with its strength reduced.

Talents:
She is pretty good at sewing and cooking. She can also speak all the language in her world. And she is extremely knowledgeable in all things magical in nature. She's also able to make magical items if the necessary ingredients are available.

Weaknesses:
She has a weak physical strength and endurance. If she runs, she will be out of breath near instantly.

Other:
Secretly wish she can have a husband. 300 years of living and she's still a maiden.

Kinda want to make her able to cast various spells, but that would be too overpowered, I suppose.

@Hammerman

What is the maximum weight she can lift using telekinesis?

[Hammerman]

@Piercing Light
Around 500 kg.

[Piercing Light]

@Piercing Light
Around 500 kg.

@Hammerman

Alright, accepted.

[astralGemini]

The former, as in making the target blind/deaf? If it's just creating illusions that's fine, but making a target completely blind and deaf is a bit much.

@Piercing Light

I thought the same thing, so I gave the ability's description a tweak last night. Erasing a sense is best left to a specific spell.

[Piercing Light]

Yes that's fine, she's accepted.

[BayRat]

Space Dragon

Kriv 'Jackal' Westari

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Age

155

Gender

Male

Race

Gorgas/Gorgasi

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Appearance

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Jackal is a runt of his species, standing at 8'7" in height and 865 lbs in weight; he has a sleeker/less muscular build then what is typical of his kind. Keeled, Jade-green scales run along most of his body with a pale underbelly of softer leathery scales. He sports several horns on the back of the skull and a few armed at the tip of his snout, a row of spines run down his back and his tail fans out with several sharp spines and a spear-like tip. His long legs have an almost raptor-like structure while his arms and hands have an almost human appearance in design and proportion. Both his hands and feet possess sharp ruby claws, and despite his runt status, his body still retains compact muscles. Two white, feathery wings, an unusual feature for a reptile are sported on his back. The mark remains on his left hand, and has the symbol of three curved runes in a straight row surrounded by a hexagon with a yellow-gold hue.

His race usually possess six limbs; a pair of legs and two pairs of arms, with the second pair of arms positioned on the back and modified as wings. Jackal was born without that extra set of arms, in addition to his smaller then average size he was left without flight. The feathery, bird-like wings on his back are not natural; rather they are the gift he was given when he arrived in this world.

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Personality

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As typical with the Gorgas Race, Jackal has a reserved and almost cold-blooded demeanor. He rarely speaks his mind, and even when he does his tone and language have more or less a lack of empathy or emotion. His kind rarely retain ideas one could consider poetic or romantic; the closest form of 'affection' they'll show is one of brotherhood or comradery. Gorgasi are notorious for their codes of honor and their form of bonds for their allies. Loyalty is not easily earned, especially by strangers, but once ties are made they are expected to be allies for as long as they breathe; anything less is considered taboo or frowned upon. To dishonor one's comrade by betrayal, abandonment, or misuse is to betray one's own loyalty and honor.

Despite their loyalties, their other more cold-blooded behaviors may some contradictory to their code. Gorgasi have no qualms with eating the dead corpse of a fallen comrade, for to waste such food would be foolish. They are savage brutes when it comes to war, Jackal is no exception either. Like his kin Jackal is drawn to bloodshed and violence, be it from hunting wild beasts to dismembering armies War is what the Gorgasi Thrive on. Foes that have proof their worth in battle are worth remembering, there is a spark of admiration when one Gorgas combats what could be considered an equal. More often then not, the victor will keep a memento of the fallen rival or enemy, such as a finger or petrified eyeball.

Emotions beyond this are almost foreign to most Gorgasi. Jackal doesn't understand morality or law beyond his race's codes of honor, the strongest passion he can even comprehend is rage. He won't hide his lack of understanding when confronted with alien personalities and feelings, and his curiosity may cause him to break his own silence to ask questions on the matter, even though he will never truly understand. Jackal isn't necessarily smart, but having to survive as a runt of the litter he is very crafty when it comes to survival and battle tactics. He knows how to play dirty in a brawl or what ways can he track and kill a prey item. When it comes to subjects like math or art however, the reptile is utterly dull.

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Biography

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A runt is not common among the ranks of Gorgas, rarer still for a runt to survive into adulthood. The Gorgas race are primitive among a hostile world of dangerous monsters and environments; villages when not at war with each other are on a constant struggle for survival. Juveniles are fiercely protected and judged by their adults, as the slow reproduction and growth periods of their race are the main reasons to their low population. The weak are picked off quickly while the more able juveniles strive and push themselves ahead of expectation. This kind of survival of the fittest life-style made it nearly impossible for Jackal to survive. Not only was he far shorter and weaker then other juveniles he was also born with the lack of wings, the average height for an adult Gorgas is between 12-13 feet with a weight of over 1200 lbs. He was always outperformed by his more able piers, and had it not been a century of pure chance of luck and his experience he earned with close-death encounters he would not have survived to this day. Even in less dire events he was the subject of 'bullying' by his piers and adults a like. He was underfed, beaten by other juveniles, and constantly exposed to the dangers of his home planet Reijar. A whole century of surviving this ordeal has honed Jackal into a master of survival despite the hand he had been dealt at his birth. When he finally came to maturity he had become attuned to the skill of hunting, found a niche in combat of his fellow race by taking advantage of his small nimble size to outmaneuver and overwhelm combatants of his species, and gained some respect purely by the miracle of surviving to that point. He was by no means a champion of his tribe, many still outperformed him both in combat and in the hunt, even with his honed skills. His ability to survive against the odds however didn't go unrewarded, he was finally accepted as a true comrade of his tribe, despite his lengthy childhood of neglect.

It was more fitting for Jackal to stay at home then to go to war with his brothers; Most of Jackal's support was through handcrafting equipment and help building shelters despite how much he craved to drive an axe through the skull of a rival tribe. He had taken this frustration out on his prey, a mistake that had made him an insufficient hunter at the time as his angry, berserk nature failed the necessary stealth to catch a fresh meal.

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Class Berserker

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The Gift of flight

While feathery wings are not natural to his race Kriv's gift gave him one of the things he lacked at birth. With proper wings Kriv can be a nimble flier and can remain in sustained flight for 10 minutes before rest.

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Natural Powers

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• Monstrous Physique
  
  Even as a runt, Jackal is a ferocious beast of a humanoid. With scales as hard as stone, claws,
  a tail that can act like a spear, and horns on top a powerful maw, This 800+ pound lizard is built for the path of a brute. At his absolute limit he can lift up to 1 ton or 2,000 lbs at most, though he is far more comfortable moving 3/4's of that limit. He can deal bone-breaking blows and can smash a wall in with his fist rather then a tool.
• Born of fire
  
  Most reptiles of Reijar have a natural heat immunity, unable to be burned by even the most extreme of temperatures, including temperatures exceeding what they experience in the wild such as lava and the fire-breathing of other reptiles. This immunity does not apply to other forms of damage from fire-based attacks, such as explosive force or drowning in lava. The Gorgas race are walking flamethrowers, they have a sac within their throats that can exhale a flammable bio-gas at will. This gas can be ignited through sparks, which can be made by flicking the carbonized tips of their forked tongues against their lips which are also lined with a natural carbon-like substance which when struck together at the right angle can create sparks potent enough to set that ejected gas ablaze. Through this technique they are able to breathe jets of iron-melting fire from their maw with a range of 7 meters; however they suffer from a cool-down period for their bodies to restore their 'fuel reserves' for the fire-breathe, which typically takes about 2 minutes.

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Talents

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• Blacksmith
  
  Though the Gorgasi are primitive they are able to make metal equipment by handcrafting it. Using their firebreathe or an open pool of molten rock they can liquify iron and then mold the shape of the molten metal with their hands as if it were clay. This technique allows fast metal work, though the unique handcrafted designs are inferior to traditional blacksmithing. Blades are a bit blunt and the craftswork can be a bit sloppy.
• Handyman
  
  As a primitive race Jackal is used to the lifestyle of using thatch and stone for tools and shelter. He is an expert on making temporary shelters, keeping a fire going, building tools and repairing equipment.
• Predator
  
  Sharp eyes that illuminate in darkness, and a snake-like sense of smell with his tongue give Jackal the tracking tools of an apex predator. He has plenty of experience hunting wild animals and beasts for meat as that is the only source of food his tribe has. Unfortunately his race don't bother to cook their food much, but he can at least gather the meat for his allies.

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Weaknesses

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• Cold Blooded
  
  The hot and tropical world of Reijar rarely deals with cold or mild climates, save for cold deserts nights and the occasional mountain summit. Like most ectothermic animals, despite their heat immunity, Gorgasi are extremely vulnerable to the cold. They cannot produce their own body heat naturally, attempting to keep themselves warm with their firebreathing is inefficient and exhausting with its cool-down. They rely on heat to help digest food, keep their body active, and blood pumping. Even in room temperature Gorgasi tend to become lethargic and less energetic. Any colder then 70 degrees Farenheit is potentially fatal to a Gorgasi, left alone too long in such an environment will kill them.
• Primitive Mind
  
  The Gorgasi aren't smart when it comes to abstract concepts. They ore only smart when it comes to survival, and even then they may succumb to the wild thrills or rage of a berserker warrior.
• Berserker
  
  An enraged Gorgasi is dangerous not only to foes but to themselves. Their sense of danger and pain become subdued by their bloodlust and anger, a rage that can be triggered merely by being in danger in the first place, or say the loss of a trusted comrade. It is often for the Gorgasi to sacrifice themselves in combat both out of honor and through the sheer desire of blood lust. A Gorgas will gladly lose an arm or leg if it means that his foe will die.

Other

Jackal may occasionally make strange remarks either about his race's theology or acknowledging an 'alien' concept. Usually these comments are just him thinking allowed.

Although Jackal and the Gorgasi resemble dragons, they are purely biological creatures. Magic and similar supernatural powers are foreign to them, and the existence of such is merely fabled. Some may consider magic as both a real and a taboo practice in their home world, but others do not even acknowledge the existence of such.

Alrighty here is my sheet, let me know of any fixes or changes ya need.

[Kazemitsu]

Welp looks like my character idea is moot...

[Piercing Light]

Space Dragon

Kriv 'Jackal' Westari

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Age

155

Gender

Male

Race

Gorgas/Gorgasi

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Appearance

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Jackal is a runt of his species, standing at 8'7" in height and 865 lbs in weight; he has a sleeker/less muscular build then what is typical of his kind. Keeled, Jade-green scales run along most of his body with a pale underbelly of softer leathery scales. He sports several horns on the back of the skull and a few armed at the tip of his snout, a row of spines run down his back and his tail fans out with several sharp spines and a spear-like tip. His long legs have an almost raptor-like structure while his arms and hands have an almost human appearance in design and proportion. Both his hands and feet possess sharp ruby claws, and despite his runt status, his body still retains compact muscles. Two white, feathery wings, an unusual feature for a reptile are sported on his back. The mark remains on his left hand, and has the symbol of three curved runes in a straight row surrounded by a hexagon with a yellow-gold hue.

His race usually possess six limbs; a pair of legs and two pairs of arms, with the second pair of arms positioned on the back and modified as wings. Jackal was born without that extra set of arms, in addition to his smaller then average size he was left without flight. The feathery, bird-like wings on his back are not natural; rather they are the gift he was given when he arrived in this world.

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Personality

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As typical with the Gorgas Race, Jackal has a reserved and almost cold-blooded demeanor. He rarely speaks his mind, and even when he does his tone and language have more or less a lack of empathy or emotion. His kind rarely retain ideas one could consider poetic or romantic; the closest form of 'affection' they'll show is one of brotherhood or comradery. Gorgasi are notorious for their codes of honor and their form of bonds for their allies. Loyalty is not easily earned, especially by strangers, but once ties are made they are expected to be allies for as long as they breathe; anything less is considered taboo or frowned upon. To dishonor one's comrade by betrayal, abandonment, or misuse is to betray one's own loyalty and honor.

Despite their loyalties, their other more cold-blooded behaviors may some contradictory to their code. Gorgasi have no qualms with eating the dead corpse of a fallen comrade, for to waste such food would be foolish. They are savage brutes when it comes to war, Jackal is no exception either. Like his kin Jackal is drawn to bloodshed and violence, be it from hunting wild beasts to dismembering armies War is what the Gorgasi Thrive on. Foes that have proof their worth in battle are worth remembering, there is a spark of admiration when one Gorgas combats what could be considered an equal. More often then not, the victor will keep a memento of the fallen rival or enemy, such as a finger or petrified eyeball.

Emotions beyond this are almost foreign to most Gorgasi. Jackal doesn't understand morality or law beyond his race's codes of honor, the strongest passion he can even comprehend is rage. He won't hide his lack of understanding when confronted with alien personalities and feelings, and his curiosity may cause him to break his own silence to ask questions on the matter, even though he will never truly understand. Jackal isn't necessarily smart, but having to survive as a runt of the litter he is very crafty when it comes to survival and battle tactics. He knows how to play dirty in a brawl or what ways can he track and kill a prey item. When it comes to subjects like math or art however, the reptile is utterly dull.

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Biography

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A runt is not common among the ranks of Gorgas, rarer still for a runt to survive into adulthood. The Gorgas race are primitive among a hostile world of dangerous monsters and environments; villages when not at war with each other are on a constant struggle for survival. Juveniles are fiercely protected and judged by their adults, as the slow reproduction and growth periods of their race are the main reasons to their low population. The weak are picked off quickly while the more able juveniles strive and push themselves ahead of expectation. This kind of survival of the fittest life-style made it nearly impossible for Jackal to survive. Not only was he far shorter and weaker then other juveniles he was also born with the lack of wings, the average height for an adult Gorgas is between 12-13 feet with a weight of over 1200 lbs. He was always outperformed by his more able piers, and had it not been a century of pure chance of luck and his experience he earned with close-death encounters he would not have survived to this day. Even in less dire events he was the subject of 'bullying' by his piers and adults a like. He was underfed, beaten by other juveniles, and constantly exposed to the dangers of his home planet Reijar. A whole century of surviving this ordeal has honed Jackal into a master of survival despite the hand he had been dealt at his birth. When he finally came to maturity he had become attuned to the skill of hunting, found a niche in combat of his fellow race by taking advantage of his small nimble size to outmaneuver and overwhelm combatants of his species, and gained some respect purely by the miracle of surviving to that point. He was by no means a champion of his tribe, many still outperformed him both in combat and in the hunt, even with his honed skills. His ability to survive against the odds however didn't go unrewarded, he was finally accepted as a true comrade of his tribe, despite his lengthy childhood of neglect.

It was more fitting for Jackal to stay at home then to go to war with his brothers; Most of Jackal's support was through handcrafting equipment and help building shelters despite how much he craved to drive an axe through the skull of a rival tribe. He had taken this frustration out on his prey, a mistake that had made him an insufficient hunter at the time as his angry, berserk nature failed the necessary stealth to catch a fresh meal.

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Class Berserker

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The Gift of flight

While feathery wings are not natural to his race Kriv's gift gave him one of the things he lacked at birth. With proper wings Kriv can be a nimble flier and can remain in sustained flight for 10 minutes before rest.

---

Natural Powers

---

• Monstrous Physique
  
  Even as a runt, Jackal is a ferocious beast of a humanoid. With scales as hard as stone, claws,
  a tail that can act like a spear, and horns on top a powerful maw, This 800+ pound lizard is built for the path of a brute. At his absolute limit he can lift up to 1 ton or 2,000 lbs at most, though he is far more comfortable moving 3/4's of that limit. He can deal bone-breaking blows and can smash a wall in with his fist rather then a tool.
• Born of fire
  
  Most reptiles of Reijar have a natural heat immunity, unable to be burned by even the most extreme of temperatures, including temperatures exceeding what they experience in the wild such as lava and the fire-breathing of other reptiles. This immunity does not apply to other forms of damage from fire-based attacks, such as explosive force or drowning in lava. The Gorgas race are walking flamethrowers, they have a sac within their throats that can exhale a flammable bio-gas at will. This gas can be ignited through sparks, which can be made by flicking the carbonized tips of their forked tongues against their lips which are also lined with a natural carbon-like substance which when struck together at the right angle can create sparks potent enough to set that ejected gas ablaze. Through this technique they are able to breathe jets of iron-melting fire from their maw with a range of 7 meters; however they suffer from a cool-down period for their bodies to restore their 'fuel reserves' for the fire-breathe, which typically takes about 2 minutes.

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Talents

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• Blacksmith
  
  Though the Gorgasi are primitive they are able to make metal equipment by handcrafting it. Using their firebreathe or an open pool of molten rock they can liquify iron and then mold the shape of the molten metal with their hands as if it were clay. This technique allows fast metal work, though the unique handcrafted designs are inferior to traditional blacksmithing. Blades are a bit blunt and the craftswork can be a bit sloppy.
• Handyman
  
  As a primitive race Jackal is used to the lifestyle of using thatch and stone for tools and shelter. He is an expert on making temporary shelters, keeping a fire going, building tools and repairing equipment.
• Predator
  
  Sharp eyes that illuminate in darkness, and a snake-like sense of smell with his tongue give Jackal the tracking tools of an apex predator. He has plenty of experience hunting wild animals and beasts for meat as that is the only source of food his tribe has. Unfortunately his race don't bother to cook their food much, but he can at least gather the meat for his allies.

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Weaknesses

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• Cold Blooded
  
  The hot and tropical world of Reijar rarely deals with cold or mild climates, save for cold deserts nights and the occasional mountain summit. Like most ectothermic animals, despite their heat immunity, Gorgasi are extremely vulnerable to the cold. They cannot produce their own body heat naturally, attempting to keep themselves warm with their firebreathing is inefficient and exhausting with its cool-down. They rely on heat to help digest food, keep their body active, and blood pumping. Even in room temperature Gorgasi tend to become lethargic and less energetic. Any colder then 70 degrees Farenheit is potentially fatal to a Gorgasi, left alone too long in such an environment will kill them.
• Primitive Mind
  
  The Gorgasi aren't smart when it comes to abstract concepts. They ore only smart when it comes to survival, and even then they may succumb to the wild thrills or rage of a berserker warrior.
• Berserker
  
  An enraged Gorgasi is dangerous not only to foes but to themselves. Their sense of danger and pain become subdued by their bloodlust and anger, a rage that can be triggered merely by being in danger in the first place, or say the loss of a trusted comrade. It is often for the Gorgasi to sacrifice themselves in combat both out of honor and through the sheer desire of blood lust. A Gorgas will gladly lose an arm or leg if it means that his foe will die.

Other

Jackal may occasionally make strange remarks either about his race's theology or acknowledging an 'alien' concept. Usually these comments are just him thinking allowed.

Although Jackal and the Gorgasi resemble dragons, they are purely biological creatures. Magic and similar supernatural powers are foreign to them, and the existence of such is merely fabled. Some may consider magic as both a real and a taboo practice in their home world, but others do not even acknowledge the existence of such.

Alrighty here is my sheet, let me know of any fixes or changes ya need.

@dragonmancer

accepted