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@Prisk Thanks for the words of advice. I've made the necessary changes. Funny enough, Sinnu seems more completely with the poison attribute added to him.
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@Prisk Thanks for the words of advice. I've made the necessary changes. Funny enough, Sinnu seems more completely with the poison attribute added to him.


Awesome. I'm happy that it made sense to you.

So, last thing is to change 'Hydrokinetic' for another Water Attack. The reason for this is that I want to have a bit of progression of power for the characters. I will ask everyone to add more attacks at certain points in the story (one is very early). So, eventually, Simba will become Hydrokinetic in combat as opposed to being that from the get go.

When you're done, post the sheet in the character tab.
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@Prisk

I apologize for [yet] another question, but this one is likely to be the final one.

When it comes to the chronicle/origins, is there a preference of the length of the backstory as compared to the lack of length? Or is it up to us to decide that?
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No worries! Ask as much as you want. I answer questions for a living.

It's up to you entirely. However, if it is short or non-existent, I assume that we will learn more about the character's past in-game instead.
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That certainly warms my heart!

And okay! With that in mind, my sheet should be up within the hour. I have to double check everything just so it's presentable.
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As promised, my knucklehead-of-a-character, Mr. Jackson Drake, the world's leading expert in Bullshitology, with a minor in Cynic "the fuck is up with this relgion shit"-ism.




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Alright, awesome. I'll write some comments, and then you reconnect on them.

✣ The picture is very cool. Nice effects!

✣ There is one detail about the chronicle that I would like to change, and that is this line: "Jackson and Ifrit existed in the same body...". It sounds cool and all, but Archons would not 'possess' someone in this way (even if outright possession was or wasn't what you meant). So, instead, I'd like to change this to something like "Jackson's experiences with Ifrit made him very attractive to fire spirits". How you want to word it is up to you.

✣ The comments on the magical abilities are nice. However, it seems like 'Pyrokinetic Flight' is an application of 'Pyrokinetic Surfing', so you can remove the 'flight'-part from the links. While the speed, sliding, and leaping of Pyrokinetic Surfing is alright, I'd like to keep the flight as progression for Jackson—that is, he learns it a bit later in the story.

✣ I'm on the fence about 'Incineration'. It's good that you balanced it in the comments as being in the early, unstable stages. What we can do is to develop it over time rather than remove it altogether. Or, if you don't want to wait for that, you can go with an alternative that is a bit more low-key.

Other than that, this looks great! Post this in the character tab when you feel happy about the adjustments.
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I've fixed all of the points you suggested.

The line in the chronicle you pointed out was a great idea and allowed me to have a much better replacement.

I've also removed all mentioned about the Pyrokinetic Flight and kept the focus on the surfing.

About the Incineration, I feel as though it's the natural progression of Jackson's abilities (specifically his Fire Stream and overall fire manipulation capabilities), so if I can, I'd love for Jackson to have it over the course of the story. Would you find it acceptable if I put a disclaimer for that one as "not yet learned (or something similar)"? As for the comments, I can replace it with a simple "TBD".
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The comments about 'Incineration' are indication enough, so you don't need to add anything unless you want to.
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Okay, so I've given it a lot of thought. I think I'm going to opt for an alternate route for the 6th technique. Of the ideas, the one that, to me, seems more likely for the progression of Jackson's abilities and how it would show itself as the evolution of his techniques, Fire Aura seems to be the most obvious. I say this because, as I looked over all his techniques, Jackson is a manipulator of fire. I mean, if you look at his abilities, you can see where I'm coming from. Fire Stream Projection manipulates his fire capabilities to push forward flames from his hands. The burning touch takes the heat aspect from fire to induce burns into a target. As for his pyrokinetic surfing, it does the same the stream projection technique does just with his feet. Healing Fire is more of an inner-manipulation, though one could argue it takes the same properties burning touch has but inverse it somewhat.

So, I don't know, I'm thinking out loud here, but it does make sense to me that Jackson would've developed his abilities to the point where he can generate a flame-like aura. Plus, it does go along with Jackson's somewhat-mobile fighting style.

Lemme know what you think about this route, mainly if it would be a route you'd be willing to accept in incineration's place.
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Sure. That's perfectly fine. Good choice.

To give some more clarity on 'magic': think of it as spirits projecting their element in the physical world in order to protect their host sanctuary, the Guardian. When magic is used, it's more like "hey, look, here is danger to your sanctuary--attack it" rather than the Guardian him or herself creating or manipulating an element. Your 'Fire Aura' choice is much more in line with this thought.
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Then I shall work on getting a write-up for that as soon as I can!
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I still got to write the entry for Ausos. @Rockette is kind enough to do another entry for us concerning Juno. After that, all the regions are covered on the map.

I've got an idea for a second character that I'll put together. I'll also start writing the first post as we wait for other characters to drop into the character tab.
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I am proud to announce that the Fire Aura entry in Jackson's sheet has been added.
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Awesome. Post the sheet in the character tab at your convenience.
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Giving you guys a little bump before I leave you be. Would be awesome to have you, but it's totally fine if you've found other things. You're welcome to join at any time.
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So, it seems like we'll be 4 people that I know of, and we're just about ready. I'm aiming for this weekend as starting point for the story. And then we'll see how it goes from there.

The game will begin with the characters being retrieved or snagged (depending on willingness to come along), and then being brought to U.D.F. high command in Oakridge, where they will be debriefed. After that, they'll be shipped to a training facility at an unknown location, where they will receive a condensed package of all the training they need. This part of the story will be close to 'slice-of-life', as we'll simulate at least 3 months at the training facility.
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So in terms of powers, do you go with one element and then list their powers based on that element?

Or do you mix and match? I.E. If I wanted a Guardian who was an Earth manipulator would that be okay?
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So in terms of powers, do you go with one element and then list their powers based on that element?

Or do you mix and match? I.E. If I wanted a Guardian who was an Earth manipulator would that be okay?


Hi. If there is a focus on one element, the magic of that element can/will be more powerful. But, you can mix the elements for more versatility. And sure, if you want to focus on Earth, then that's totally fine.
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