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• Name: Aki Yukimura
• Title: Snow Cat
• Age: 15
• Emblem: An old cat collar that she wears as a bracelet
• Devil Arm: Aki uses a pure white and pale blue katana of ice that can come and go as she wills it. It is decorated with ribbons and lace on its hilt.
• Magic: Obviously she has the ability to conjure and manipulate snow. Her magic snow can be used to break her fall, create cute snow minions, build defensive structures, and obstruct enemy vision.

• Background 2.0: Aki’s abilities came soon after her mother’s death. Her mother, Yuki Yukimura, was severely depressed and committed suicide when Aki was around 13. It was shortly after the funeral that a mascot came to her and granted her with her magic. She could have very easily become corrupted right away due to the bitterness that could've been in her heart; but instead of being bitter at the world though, Aki herself felt guilty for her mothers death, seeing herself as the reason. She decided she would use her powers to repent and smite the world of the evil that plagued it. She now lives with her grandmother, the only person who knows of her secret identity.

sample post 2.0: Cold, Aki was always cold both during and after her battles. Even when sweat dribbled down her brow due to exertion they would soon freeze into teardrop shaped crystals. She was covered in those crystals by the time she returned home, dawn just about to break as she entered his bedroom through the second story window.
She collapsed as soon as she touched the ground, magical form deteriorating as she did so. She was so tired, all she wanted to do was sleep; but she had school in less than two hours. And while a part of her didn’t want to go, a part of her just wanted to stay home and decompress after hours of midnight work. However a larger, stronger part of her new deep down that she do whatever she needed to do to be the best person she could be, no matter what the cost was to her stability.
After another moment of trying to control her ragged breathing the Albino hesitantly stood. Walking as best she could on her tiptoes, her feet screaming as she did, Aki made her way out of her room and down the rickety wooden stairs of her grandmother’s old home, wincing as the ancient wood creaked and squeaked. It was a blessing that her grandmother wasn’t waiting up for her, Aki couldn’t risk waking her up now. She was already such a burden to the aging women, she hated how she had to live there, hated how her grandmother was trying so hard to take care of her when the woman should be taking care of herself. Was Aki really worth that much? It didn’t seem likely. And sometimes the old woman’s way even angered her. Aki wasn’t her responsibility, why did she have to care so much?
Using her phone as a flashlight Akin maneuvered her way through the barely lit kitchen. If she was quick then she could make breakfast for herself and her grandmother before showering, and then making it to school on time. Then if she planned and worked hard enough she could get all her homework and studying done, followed by her chores, and still have time to surf the internet before going out for the night. It was a highly unlikely goal but it was the goal that got her by every single day. Vaguely, as she set the teapot on the burner, she wondered when her personal goals became so few and miniscule compared to her desires for the rest of the world; she honestly could remember. It didn’t matter though, none of it matter. All she had to do was keep doing the right thing.
Aki moved the teapot a second before it was about to let out its ear piercing shriek, making it so that the only audible sounds in the quiet house were her own sign-resigned sigh, and the beginning of traffic outside.

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@Compulsive86

First and foremost, the formatting for your CS is a bit off. I recommend either displaying your images in hiders or placing them in links, spacing out your paragraphs and overall CS, and maybe putting it in a hider. The actual CS itself only has a few issues.

Her background doesn't fit the world of the RP as all Magical Girls receive their magic from beings called Mascots. The second post of this OOC has a glossary of stuff regarding how the world works so you can find all this information here. Secondly, I would like to see more in your Sample Post as this is a Casual level RP. At least 2-3 paragraphs should be the norm for posting so I would like to see more, not just in length but in substance.

Tweak and edit all of these, inform us of them, and then we'll get back to you on her acceptance.
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@Compulsive86

First and foremost, the formatting for your CS is a bit off. I recommend either displaying your images in hiders or placing them in links, spacing out your paragraphs and overall CS, and maybe putting it in a hider. The actual CS itself only has a few issues.

Her background doesn't fit the world of the RP as all Magical Girls receive their magic from beings called Mascots. The second post of this OOC has a glossary of stuff regarding how the world works so you can find all this information here. Secondly, I would like to see more in your Sample Post as this is a Casual level RP. At least 2-3 paragraphs should be the norm for posting so I would like to see more, not just in length but in substance.

Tweak and edit all of these, inform us of them, and then we'll get back to you on her acceptance.


hmmmm, fair enough, i'll edit it right away
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Your character is ok. Just wait for @TheWindel's final words.
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Accepted. Place her into the Character Tab. Feel free to ask around if you need to know what's going on right now.
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Sooooo, where is everyone? I'm pretty sure we had more Dark Magical Girls raring for a fight then this.
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I'll post tonight, been kinda busy recently
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Here are the team match ups for the sparring session:

1 Roundtable: Twilight Knight & The Fallen Prince
2 Freezer Burn: Fortuna & Black Shot
3 Knightfall: Black Knight & Battoru
4 Dissonance: Wither & Discordia

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Sorry! Had a surprising amount of unexpected events happen this past week. Things should be solved now.
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Sorry! Had a surprising amount of unexpected events happen this past week. Things should be solved now.


No worries.
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For this tournament, every team match will be happening simultaneously, albeit in different locations from each other. Feel free to approach this through either collab posts among yourselves or the usual post by post process.
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Sorry for the delay everyone I honestly thought I posted until I just checked out of curiosity, I'll have a REAL post up tomorrow
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Hello people!
I'm just coming by to wave my greetings and say that I'm currently writing on a character to join this hopefully merry group. Currently going through characters and stuff, but I'll have it up soon enough.

Can't wait to bring light in those dark, dark hearts of yours.
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Appearance





Name Yui Murata
Title Gaia
Age 15

Emblem A flower shaped hairpin made out of a true white Emerald. Yui wears it at all time. Most people believe it mundane, and obviously a fake trinket. Upon her transformation, it glows with intensity and the light covers her body until the change is complete; not unlike the transformation of a butterfly.

Divine Arm Upon her transformation, Yui's costume bears butterfly-like wings that allows to fly. Also, they connect to a sash around her waist that has multiple ribbons descending from it. Yui can magically move these ribbons to defend herself or restrain foes.
That, however, is only the physical facet of her transformation.

Magic Yui's magic comes from her deep respect, and love, of all life.

At all time, even in her everyday form, on a small area around her things seem to flourish. As if she was emanating some life energy. Flowers bloom more easily, insects and animals tend to take interest in her and what not. Even regular humans, if long enough in her company, might see some part of their everyday gloom disappear.

Upon her transformation, she is gifted with flight.

Apart from her Divine Arm, Yui is able to call upon 'Flower Bombs'. Appropriately named after their appearance, that of an intangible ball of energy shaped like a flower. Once aimed and thrown at the enemy, it leaves petals in it's wake. After it exploded; grass, flowers and all things living seem to slowly grow on the location of the impact.

With her control of life energy, to a certain degree, Yui can call forth things like vines and overgrown plants to help her in battle in immobilizing her enemies. She cannnot so much create them as she can actually use what is already in the vicinity by injecting them with energy to make them grow and control them.

Background Yui lives in an Orphanage. She is unaware as to what happened to her parents or if they are still alive; but it never stopped her from enjoying life. Kind of shy, she was often bullied by other kids until they grew bored by her lack of reaction. Mostly now, she is left alone. In an abandoned building close by the orphanage, she built and grew a secret garden of flowers on the dirt beneath the broken floor (Aerith why did you have to die god damnit) helped by her magical girl powers.

One day, a cat came by her secret garden and personal hiding place - a cat with a television for a head. Somehow, Yui was not afraid by this apparition. She accepted the Mascot's offer of Magical Girl powers in hope of being able to help preserve life and bring hope to as many things and people as possible.

Weeks later, the Orphans she lived with became happier. The winds of luck seemed to blow in the Orphanage direction as it became more and more popular and known. One by one, the children were either adopted or grew old enough to leave on their own. Confident.

As of now, Yui is the only Orphan left in the care of Nan Yuri, as she was called. A true mother figure to Yui.



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Sample Post The bullying of the other kids was long since forgotten - and forgiven. They never quite became friends, but she remembers the laughter. She remember the smile on their face; and that's enough to put a smile in her heart.

The orphanage was once a gloomy place. Full of sad children that pinned the fault of their misfortune on others and expelled their anger in mischievous ways. Yui remember how Old Nan Yuri could hardly keep some of the older children under control. She did her best to help with the younger ones; taking care of them when possible, making them laugh and trying to keep them happy. She often try to take small jobs after school to help bring some money to the Orphanage, as well as sell flowers that she grew herself. However, it was never enough.

One day, she came back to her hiding place only to find it completely destroyed. Her secret haven, the place she considered like home the most. Destroyed. It was as if her heart was pinched within her chest and her vision clouded with tears. For a moment, she felt like Hope wanted to leave her. As if everything - whatever everything is - was for nothing.

Though, she did not cry.

She knelt over the countless dead flowers scattered across her garden and began the exhausting process of trying to see if any, with any luck at all, could be saved. Hours went by, and her efforts were only met with more deception and sadness. That is until Yui raised her head only to see a cat sitting among the dead flowers. It had a television for a head, but somehow it's appearance did not scare her.

A long moment went by where the two only stared at one another with nothing other than the ambient dust moving in the ray of the sun piercing through the old walls of the building. Then, Yui smiled. A true, honest and heartful smile.

The bullying of the other kids was long since forgotten - as was the sack of the garden. They never quite became friends, but she remembers the laughter. She remember the smile on their faces. She remember when they left for a new and hopefully happier life. She know that she had a part in it and, though the solitude at the Orphanage sometime weight heavy on her, the good outweigh the bad.

If nothing else; Nightmares need slaying, and flowers need tending. Selflessly defending what cannot defend itself as well as help whenever and where she can is enough to keep that smile in her heart.



• Other: Yui cherish life in all things and forms. Old nan Yuri often says that there is not a single spot of darkness nor evil in that innocent heart of hers...
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Your character is ok on my end. Just wait for @TheWindel's opinion.
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I like her. Accepted; place her into the Character Tab and post whenever you can. If you need a rundown of what's going on, feel free to ask around.
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Posting either much later today or tomorrow
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Cool ! Will do.
I would love to have a summary of the last events! Or, at the very least, a point in the IC where it would be good and relevant for me to start reading from?
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The start of the RP involved the Dark Magical Girls going on a hunt during the night for the Nightmares. The conflict escalated when two Light Magical Girls showed up: Mari (the Hag) and Tsukoyomi (Getsuga), and began their cleansing duties, with the former eliminating the Nightmares with a lightshow that'd make Pink Floyd proud and the latter getting up close and personal with Black Shot. During the fight between the last two, a construction site was brought down. That scene ended with the Hag and Getsuga eliminating a good deal of the nightmares, leaving the rivalling crew without the power they wanted from them.

After that came a meeting in the Detention Club to discuss christmas plans, which was soon interrupted by the Hag coming in and leaving some cookies for the club to enjoy as a way of paying respects to them. Besides the fact that it's a child of the light coming down to the meeting grounds of the dark ones, Ami got enraged over the Hag's high and mighty attitude and broke a desk. Another magical girl of the light that was looking for her backpack, Bastion, sensed this nearby conflict and came in, locking out our furious black knight and almost provoking a fight between the two of them and the entire Detention Club. The situation, however, was defused, and both the Hag and Bastion retreated and stumbled upon Getsuga, who goes to this same school. She chastized the two of them over this, talked with Bastion a little about the missing backpack deal and, after a bit of chatter over the matter, they agreed to meet at Getsuga's family diner.

In the detention club the matters of the christmas party were discussed once the two intruders left and it was quickly decided that they'd host a friendly tourney over it: the team that wins gets a gift from the rest of the club, the one that loses hosts it.
Currently, the two active magical girls are in Getsuga's diner (Bastion and Getsuga) while the Dark Magical Girls are about to hold their tourney at the local park.




That's more or less it. I suggest you go over it yourself as this may not be accurate and to see how your character'd behave with this kind of information in mind, just in case.

If I've got something wrong, feel free to point it out.

EDIT: Forgot to tag you @SimpleWriter
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The list of events that have happened so far can be found right here. Right now, all of the Light Magical Girls are eating out at a restaurant owned by @KoL's character. Feel free to join them since Magical Girls can sense each other. Meanwhile, the Dark Magical Girls are having a sparring tournament in Miso City's Park.
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