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Okay, here's the finished sheet. I know his strengths might be a tad problematic, and they were hard to balance since he's so damn broken, but to give you a good idea of how I plan to play him, think of how he is in Smash itself. He'll be fairly durable, fast, and strong, but not Advent Children levels thanks to Galeem nuking Gaia and thus the lifestream.

And yes that raises the question of how he can even use magic anymore, Materia or otherwise, but it's 4:31 AM and I'm not thinking of that right now. Anywhoo, let me know if I need to change anything.

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I appreciate all the effort put into your CS! It looks good, although the question of making Sephiroth 'level one' is a difficult one, to be sure.

You did mention how he performs in Smash. In Smash, he's got a lot of power and range, but while his movement speed is fast his frame data is on the slow side, and some of his moves have a lot of recovery. He's also on the lighter side, able to be launched without much difficulty. This could make him into a fighter in World of Light with obvious strengths but also obvious weaknesses, and maybe lead to a personal angle where Sephiroth is frustrated by the damage he keeps taking when he knows he should be better than this.

'Expert Combatant' and 'Superhuman' describe who he is, but not how he'll perform at the beginning. Levels are power for NPCs, so at the beginning, if Sephiroth were to fight, say, Tora and Poppi, two level eight characters, he would be trounced despite the incredible difference in their canon strength. As cool as it would be, he can't exactly make his entrance by slicing through a boss, either. If this if fine, then Sephiroth is accepted! Post the sheet in Characters tab and I'll send you a PM about an entry point.
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I appreciate all the effort put into your CS! It looks good, although the question of making Sephiroth 'level one' is a difficult one, to be sure.

You did mention how he performs in Smash. In Smash, he's got a lot of power and range, but while his movement speed is fast his frame data is on the slow side, and some of his moves have a lot of recovery. He's also on the lighter side, able to be launched without much difficulty. This could make him into a fighter in World of Light with obvious strengths but also obvious weaknesses, and maybe lead to a personal angle where Sephiroth is frustrated by the damage he keeps taking when he knows he should be better than this.

'Expert Combatant' and 'Superhuman' describe who he is, but not how he'll perform at the beginning. Levels are power for NPCs, so at the beginning, if Sephiroth were to fight, say, Tora and Poppi, two level eight characters, he would be trounced despite the incredible difference in their canon strength. As cool as it would be, he can't exactly make his entrance by slicing through a boss, either. If this if fine, then Sephiroth is accepted! Post the sheet in Characters tab and I'll send you a PM about an entry point.


This is indeed fine, and as a matter of fact my original plan as I had wanted his connection to the lifestream to be something he had to gradually rebuild by leveling up, how that works given its technically gone I suppose could be handwaved by saying part of it got put into the world of light? That or maybe all of it but again he can't just access it right off the bat due to Galeem.

Again though, I want to make it very clear that I will be doing my very best to display how he's not up to what he should be, which will help fuel his rage for Galeem even further, so hopefully no one gets too put off by his strengths and power as they are written. Especially since I did my best to hint at a significant decrease in ability throughout and imply that maybe most of his feats were merely the result of his puppets or illusions and not actually him.

But yeah, he's a fucking bitch to try and balance as far as writing goes.

In any case, I'll move him on over and start thinking on an IC post for when I can have him join in on the action.
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@ZAVAZggg TWO MASAMUNE? jk
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@ZAVAZggg TWO MASAMUNE? jk


nah, more just how he can make it appear and disappear at will, and how he carries it given the lack of a sheath and its incredible length.

Though again, I assume it was some lifestream shtick that let him do this, so how this all works with its yeeting I don't know yet.
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nah, more just how he can make it appear and disappear at will, and how he carries it given the lack of a sheath and its incredible length.

Though again, I assume it was some lifestream shtick that let him do this, so how this all works with its yeeting I don't know yet.


No Frog (My Character) owns the Chrono Trigger adaptation of Masamune.
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No Frog (My Character) owns the Chrono Trigger adaptation of Masamune.


Ah, I thought you meant how he could technically pull multiple 8 foot katanas out of his ass at his full power level. Completely forgot the fact Frog does indeed have the same kind of blade.
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Ah, I thought you meant how he could technically pull multiple 8 foot katanas out of his ass at his full power level. Completely forgot the fact Frog does indeed have the same kind of blade.


No biggie, the sword is different in the holy kind of way.
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@Dr Lovecraft Perfect Smash Intro: Ze Medic, Surgically Removes Ze Competition!
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@Dr Lovecraft Doktor? Ahaha! Heavy has his Medic!
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@Dr Lovecraft Doktor? Ahaha! Heavy has his Medic!


Oh no not the Invincible Tank!!
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I love this Doktor!
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The sheet looks great! All I can say is that the Engineer has already appeared in the story, and is currently with Blazermate as a Striker, so you could replace him with a different character to utilize that kindred spot. Otherwise, feel free to post the sheet in the Characters tab, and I'll send you a PM with your entry point.
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Thanks! I'll do that!
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Has Gordon Freeman appeared in the story yet?
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Has Gordon Freeman appeared in the story yet?


Nope, he has not.
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Whew! I do not expect the rest of my posts to be that massive, I just had a lot of catching up to do.
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