Hidden 4 days ago Post by WSilversun
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I have been asked to join in, so here we go again xD Bit of an oddball concept, but Bee approved, so it just needs a glance over by the CoGMs

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@WSilversun, Provisional Approval Given.
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Hidden 4 days ago Post by Letter Bee
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@Sanity43217, Hmm, normally, 'Inheritance' is a randomized process, but it can be made to work if your guy has a similar enough personality to the original holder of Hope's End.

Also, if you can add your OC's apparent age in parenthesis to his actual age, it would be good.

Otherwise, approval one given.
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Overall I like it, a couple of things:

Duplicate isnโ€™t very clear,
does he need to land the killing blow to absorb an NAโ€™s energy?
if he uses that energy to replicate an ability, does he eventually run out?
what if he absorbs too much NA energy? maybe he never tried but what would happen in your opinion?

for stats
Precision in more like C, not like his ability can be controlled that finely
Powerโ€ฆ how much does he have without energy from other NA? take that as the base and he can reach A by absorbing, use B(A) or C(A) to indicate this
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Approved

after the stats adjustment and hider for explanation of energy points
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