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Hypothetically, a swarm of bugs that uses illusions to pretend to be human?


The issue with that is “one physical being” is being reincarnated.

I’d be cool with you coming back as a cockroach and having a super high Charisma score to make friends though!
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The idea I had was for a single initial bug, that ‘assimilates’ other bugs it comes in contact with, with the limitation that once assimilated the bugs need to stay in range of the swarm or fall comatose. I’m somewhat partial to the idea of something as universally unnerving as a swarm of bugs figuring out magic because it wants friends.

That said, if I am limited to a single bug, as much as I love cockroaches, I think I’d have to go with a spider instead. That fits the best in my mind.
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I have seen that isekai before.

If you wanted a swarm though, you could always go swarm mother isekai’d and then just start popping out child soldiers by the hundreds.
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I have seen that isekai before.

If you wanted a swarm though, you could always go swarm mother isekai’d and then just start popping out child soldiers by the hundreds.


I think I've only seen the premise once and it unfortunately wasn't very good.
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The idea I had was for a single initial bug, that ‘assimilates’ other bugs it comes in contact with, with the limitation that once assimilated the bugs need to stay in range of the swarm or fall comatose. I’m somewhat partial to the idea of something as universally unnerving as a swarm of bugs figuring out magic because it wants friends.

That said, if I am limited to a single bug, as much as I love cockroaches, I think I’d have to go with a spider instead. That fits the best in my mind.


We will still love you, even if you’re a worm.
Or in this circumstance, a spider.
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Have a big kitty. Hope you have a big yarn ready.

Will makes this pretty later, have errands and work and moar writing to do stillllll.

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Have a big kitty. Hope you have a big yarn ready.

Will makes this pretty later, have errands and work and moar writing to do stillllll.



A literal tiger joins the party, move them over when you’re done adulting.
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Here’s my hat to throw in, I look back and realize that it may be a bit off but let me know if any changes need to be made and I’ll fix it.

EDIT: Ok I fixed a couple of things, shaved down the sheet to fit the sheet and reworked his ability’s to be more in line with the basics
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Age of Death: — 29
Gender: — Male
Race: — Forsaken Revenant (Once Human, now something... else)
Psychology: — A mind frayed between genius and madness. Once an ambitious alchemist devoted to unlocking the secrets of transmutation, his obsession led him down a path of irreversible ruin. Now, in this new world, he struggles against the echoes of his past failures, torn between seeking redemption and indulging in the cold logic of experimentation. He is meticulous, his mind a labyrinth of equations and forgotten rituals, yet plagued by intrusive visions of those he destroyed. His hands tremble when idle, as if still mixing the alchemical catalysts of his past sins.



⑇⑉ What You Remember ⑉⑈


The Whispering Cauldron
The fumes were intoxicating, swirling in iridescent hues above the village square. Their bodies had contorted first—limbs snapping, skin peeling as their flesh rebelled against them. Their screams rang through the night, but you did not hear them. You were lost in the alchemy, in the equations scrawled across your mind. Perfection was within reach, you were certain. But then, silence. When you looked up, your people were not people anymore—only things, grotesque beings bound by pulsing sinew and raw agony.

⑴Alchemical Knowledge —Despite the circumstances that led him to this place it would seem that his knowledge of alchemy followed him. He still retains the basic knowledge of what once consumed the life he left behind.
⑵ Cold Rationality—A mind that prioritizes logic above morality, allowing you to make the necessary choices where others may falter.



⑇⑉ What You Don’t ⑉⑈


The Alchemist’s Folly
You should have died. You welcomed death. The blaze that consumed your village should have taken you, too. But something—someone—pulled you free. You do not recall their face, only the feeling of weightlessness, the wrenching sensation of being ripped from the ruin of your own making. The sky was wrong when you awoke. The air was thick with something unnatural. You were no longer in your world.

A mark on your forearm appeared when you awoke, its blackened veins pulsing with something deep, something alien. It reminds you that you do not belong here, that something beyond comprehension has marked you for its own purpose. But you do not remember why. Not yet.
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A little too much creative freedom taken on this go around. Undead Alchemist is definitely on brand for the setting and feasible, but the contents of the character sheet are strict for a reason.

Your character is being summoned with minimal to no memory from their previous life, so the focus is based on the rudimentary skills they would have innately even if they don’t know how to tie their shoes.

Not denying it outright, but I’d ask for a revision where you follow the layout I’ve made.
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No prob I enjoy the dark fantasy genre and I realized that I may have jumped the gun. I’ll fix it later and send the revised sheet back
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Going to post this now despite some of the writing being a bit rushed, since I can feel the exhaustion starting to kick in (I am going to extinguish the sun if it doesn't cool down soon). Hopefully this one is better than my last attempt, but tell me if there's anything I need to change or fix. Also, I refrained from including a picture because I know some people can't stand spiders, but on a scale of 1 to 10 does anyone here mind?

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Everything looks good other than her skills being far too powerful for someone with minimal memory of their previous life. If your character had a spell book with hundreds of pages, they’ll be brought back with some rudimentary knowledge of magic and sparse memory of what was on a few pages.

In the sheet layout it says “ In detail, what does this memory teach your character about themselves, and below in the bullets list what skills these are expressed as. Players will begin with one memory, and as they progress they will accumulate more.”

You’ll gain more memories and knowledge as time goes on.
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Everything looks good other than her skills being far too powerful for someone with minimal memory of their previous life. If your character had a spell book with hundreds of pages, they’ll be brought back with some rudimentary knowledge of magic and sparse memory of what was on a few pages.

In the sheet layout it says “ In detail, what does this memory teach your character about themselves, and below in the bullets list what skills these are expressed as. Players will begin with one memory, and as they progress they will accumulate more.”

You’ll gain more memories and knowledge as time goes on.

Fair point. That's my bad. I've paired back the spells to just the body double illusion, since using that is part of the character's core premise.

As for the other bullet, it was honestly only ever intended as a ribbon feature to explain how a spider managed to learn magic and to flesh out how exactly that worked, but being the genius I am, I apparently somehow forgot to actually write any of those details. I’ve changed it now, so it hopefully shouldn’t read as instant unrestricted conversion between human and spider spellcasting anymore.

Does the new wording fix the problem? In either case, I intend to do a proper editing pass once I've gotten some rest, but if there aren't any more necessary changes, that'll just be to make the memories read better rather than any qualitative changes.
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Much better, I typically don’t recommend putting all of your eggs into one basket but that’s dialed back enough for me.

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I’ll be putting the first post up for the approved characters by Sunday evening. I’m just giving some of the people who’ve voiced their interest time to get their sheets up.
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@Festive I never asked, so I hope you don't mind me stealing borrowing that code :P

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@Festive I never asked, so I hope you don't mind me stealing borrowing that code :P



Angel is good to go, move her over when you have the opportunity.
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@Festive I never asked, so I hope you don't mind me stealing borrowing that code :P


You're all good LOLL
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Much better, I typically don’t recommend putting all of your eggs into one basket but that’s dialed back enough for me.


In hindsight, perhaps waiting until I was once again tired before trying to fix up the writing wasn’t my best thought-through idea, but it’s done now, and I think it’s at least a little better. Was there anything else I needed to fix or am I good to move her over to the Characters tab?
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Much better, move them over.
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