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Wormgod said
Name: Phoebe Jones...

Your biography is considerably short, and oh snap I knew there was something wrong with the OP.

Everyone go state an ability or something. Not if you're a human.

Point is, while the content is right, it's how much there is that's the problem. Add another paragraph and I'll be willing to accept.
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Hm...
well, I'm not exactly 100% sure, to tell you the truth. I was thinking of these two characters, but now that I realize it, this character seems like the one I would drop.
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Hm...
well, I'm not exactly 100% sure, to tell you the truth. I was thinking of these two characters, but now that I realize it, this character seems like the one I would drop.

Is that a 'yes' or a 'no'?

Also, dis:
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Hm...
-words-

You're just Lugia in disguise.
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Went ahead and edited my app to include the 'Hydration' ability... decided to go against some odd-ball ability that would have come from left field.
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KaBling said
Is that a 'yes' or a 'no'?


it's a maybe. Or a 'Probably no'. Most likely a 'probably no'. Um... hm. Let me think of characters.
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it's a maybe. Or a 'Probably no'. Most likely a 'probably no'. Um... hm. Let me think of characters.

*Rolls eyes*

Lugia, go help him out.
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Um... hm... let me think of characters...
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Edited some more. I ain't too good at dem explaining historiez an stuffs.

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Name: Phoebe Jones...

If the biography scares me, then you're doing a good job.

Accepted, although for some reason I can't shake off the feeling of 'Mary Sue'... er, probably just me not eating.
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I didn't notice any 'Mary Sue' in there... either way, it looks much better to me, you're in!
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Still not starting. Technically, my app isn't finished. Heck, it's missing.
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Possible pokemon characters:
Scraggy/Scrafty
Flaafy
Espurr
Smeargle
Slurpuff
Heliolisk
Cubone
Top priority:
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Scraggy
Slurpuff
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Well, I added new stuff to the Notes section.

For example, including the status effect Fear and some other gimmicks.
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If the biography scares me, then you're doing a good job. Accepted, although for some reason I can't shake off the feeling of 'Mary Sue'... er, probably just me not eating.


Mary Sue? No way. I have problems underplaying my characters. Phoebe just honestly thinks her way is the best, and will get quite the shock when her world-view is proven wrong.
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I never explicitly stated she was. I just had this odd feeling.

Anyway, now I've also added Panic to the notes.
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Mary Sue? No way. I have problems underplaying my characters. Phoebe just honestly thinks her way is the best, and will get quite the shock when her world-view is proven wrong.


She appears to be borderline sociopath. I find that fun.

Oh yeah I'm still joining this, making an application! I have two great ideas for characters, but I'll post one to start off. Let's go step by step.
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Yay. People are joinin', I finally have a RP to feel good about (even though it's really Lugia's RP)...

Anyway, I gotta do my app.
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Yay. People are joinin', I finally have a RP to feel good about (even though it's really Lugia's RP)...Anyway, I gotta do my app.


Do yo' app darn it!

Savato said
She appears to be borderline sociopath. I find that fun. Oh yeah I'm still joining this, making an application! I have two great ideas for characters, but I'll post one to start off. Let's go step by step.


LOL. Just a b****. It's fun to have annoying characters that grow into less-annoying people.
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I've decided my character will be a Smeargle.
App will be made in a couple hours.
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Name: Freddy Girault

Age: 29

Gender: Male

Species: Cinccino

Type: Normal

Appearance: When it comes to size Freddy is like any normal Cinccino, slightly larger than any chinchilla in the nature, however the difference he has from the traditional Chinchilla Pokemon would be its fur. Though grey, it is twice as massive in a whole, making him appear much large than he is. The fur itself is actually lighter than the usual, straight type, thus allowing more fluid movements in tight spots but also making it harder to move in open air due to his weight being easily beaten by powerful air currents. The other trait many could take note of is the fur on his tails and the strands on its head and neck as they are of a light brown instead of white as snow.

Level: 15

Ability: Skill Link

Moves: -Pound
-Baby-doll eyes
-Encore
-Tail Slap

Biography: Born in France, down at the city of Montpellier in a family of already one older boy, Freddy always considered himself lucky of having a family that was implicated in his life. Everything was great, even though an annoying younger sister came along making him the not-so-pleasing middle child. But at the age of 8 years old, his father had trouble with his job and eventually had to have his family move over in a nearby city, Marseille. Said to be a beautiful city known worldwide for its scenery and old customs regarding its port. But in France it was mostly known for harboring many immigrants and thus being a huge nest of social tensions and young delinquents. When turning 10, he was introduced to the little kids of the neighborhood. It didn't take long for him to root himself in a group he sympathized with the most. Though harmless at first glance, like many kids on the streets in such a city, trouble making was inevitable.

It started with pranks, and then when nearing strong teenage crisis, the boys of the group always wanted to appear interesting and the best, pushing them to perform stupid acts that could have disconcerting consequences. It started with intimating other people of their same age group on the streets and getting in pointless fists fights. Later it turned into mugging adults for a bit of money, though they kept some conduct by not attacking women and younger kids. Freddy had detached himself from education and the school system in general and focused more on his friends, along with their antics, and his family (mostly his siblings). Freddy had become a typical little shit in the street causing a mess when he and his friends were bored or got drunk. But his parents were thankful he was just sticking to benign things.

Everything fell over when a certain friend of his told him how he could get an easy buck for a simple task. And thus started his drug dealing adventures in the world of vice and gangs within Marseille. Luckily for him this only lasted for a year until his family once again moved, this time to Paris. This combined with a following traumatizing event had sealed the deal (although only temporarily). His muslim friend, Hakim, who was one of the first in his childhood group had died near the end of the Algerian civil war in 2001. He was born in Algeria and felt responsible in the rising of his people, hoping he could help his people, he died there. Freddy was nearing adulthood and such a choc coupled with a change of air knocked some sense into him. He promised to his mom he would study to become an engineer, despite his rough school years being filled with disappointing grades. Nonetheless the free education in France and his ability to convince allowed him to join a satisfying school where he studied until he got a master's degree four years later. He was an engineer and could work normally and win a good life.

But something was lacking. He felt underpaid despite his good job. It was only then that he realized how dumped he was by this society that he dropped everything. He had seen one of his good for nothing friends from his childhood, riding a sports car and an attractive woman with him. He wasn't intelligent nor interesting, yet he looked rich. An idiot like that could be so damn rich at such a young age. He worked his ass off every day to get things done and illegal assholes made thousands a day and unemployed parasites took advantage of the socialist-like system in France to get a huge amount of money every month for doing NOTHING. It infuriated Freddy, he would had a certain level of knowledge and intelligence would not use it to be great like that. Using the vast array of connections in the engineer department, he managed to link himself to shady individuals handling import/export systems. It was easy for him to use a little charisma and get a small job to start with. Such a shitty job got him more money than he did as an engineer and he rose up in ranks faster than he ever did with a good and honest job. Such a system made him completely cynical and opportunist, having risen at such a level that he was brought to the situation of killing a man more than once. Having only killed at the state of an adult allowed him to never really used to it, however. He is glad he feels remorse for his actions as he firmly believes he isn't a sociopath.

He is currently in America simply due to his position in the ranks of the diverse systems of Mafia running through francophone countries and organizations. He was also sent there due to his high level in the english language, which he gained thanks to his devotion to his education. At the time of the current events, he would most likely be handling a deal which would lead him to the events in the RP.

Differences: He is able to manipulate both his tail and both fur strands on his head to hold certain objects, more notably guns due to his experience with them. They can be considered as extra members, or very capable appendages.

Other Info: He has a very powerful bullshit detector due to his lack of ability to trust people, all this thanks to his lifestyle. His charisma also allow him to often have the upper hand in arguments and basic interactions in general. His Cinccino form coupled with his short temper would make him appear like some stereotypical Napoleon representation. He speaks fluent French (I do as well, so I'll be referencing the language accurately).
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