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Eviledd1984 said
Done and done anything i need to change?


The rebel leaders just turned up IC and haven't been there long. It's also a bit short for casual, that's my only beef with it now.
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I changed it to not being a rebel leader,What else should I put it I the bio?
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I changed it to not being a rebel leader,What else should I put it I the bio?


I don't know, just flesh it out. We got the bare bones for Casual you gotta really expand to that. E.G. How did he become a bounty hunter, what training did he do? Why did he become a bounty hunter, what kinda jobs has he done? What is the biggest he has done? The Bio is used basically for me to see what kinda roleplayer you are.
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Done anything else i can change.
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The battle is more intense than I expected it to be, this is mad! I wanted to post when I was done traveling around, but I managed to find time, writing up a post now.
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The battle is more intense than I expected it to be, this is mad! I wanted to post when I was done traveling around, but I managed to find time, writing up a post now.


Hey Malikoy, the escape pod already hit the ground and Zirex is already out blasting Imperials. I just thought I'd let you know just in case you didn't see my post.
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Hey Malikoy, the escape pod already hit the ground and Zirex is already out blasting Imperials. I just thought I'd let you know just in case you didn't see my post.


Don't worry mate, I read Zirex's parts, they were my favorite so far actually. With the humor and all.
I only wrote that because what happened with Eric happened a few moments before Zirex's pod crashed down, I am kinda catching up, so that post took place a little while in the past.
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Will give Giesha today to post before I pm her and just move along anyway.
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Umm sorry to ask but is my character accepted?
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Umm sorry to ask but is my character accepted?


Going for a shower then I'll take a crack at it.
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Okay thank you....
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Name: Sirga UldinSpecies:HumanGender:MaleAffiliation: IndependentAppearance: Face-Armor-Equipment: DC-17 Blaster pistol,Double vibroblade,Hunting Blaster with wooden grip and sniper scope.Background: Sirga was born on Tatooine being born into a farming family but where murdered by some by Sand people when he was 8 years old and survived by hiding under the wooden panels of the house.After this incident he started wandering around the planet,Until he wanders into Mos Eisley meeting a older bounty hunter named Ishmael who taught him how to be a bounty hunter and the young Sirga thought Ishmeal of his new father figure and wanted to pleases his new father by becoming a bounty hunter.Before he became a bounty hunter for Jabba he was employed by a alien named Emelina who sent him to kill and bring crime lords and gangsters that were taking over rackets of Emelina.The biggest one he had done was killing a big crime group called Skeleton Crew that were based on Tatooine.After a while he came back to his home planet to be a bounty hunter for Jabba.He landed on the planet Belona to find a high bounty on his former master Ishmael. Reason for Joining the Empire/Alliance: Doesn't want to join either.


It still seems a bit short to me and Ishmael may be important but I can't tie him into the plot. I can see you want a bounty hunter but bounty hunters can be such important chars in a RP like this but I don't think you can manage it, no offense. So I'm going to have to say no for as long as you're trying to be a bounty hunter. Sorry man, I just can't see it working.
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I am trooper xXGF-344Xx my hobbies include, taking long walks on the beach in my armor, break dancing, listening to skrillex, and hashtagging everything i do. #The Struggle! #Rebuild the Death Star
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I am trooper xXGF-344Xx my hobbies include, taking long walks on the beach in my armor, break dancing, listening to skrillex, and hashtagging everything i do. #The Struggle! #Rebuild the Death Star.


Not been destroyed yet. Quit reading the future.
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Not been destroyed yet. Quit reading the future.


Fine #The Struggle #Sep is mean #I'm gonna cry in the closet # Hashtag
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Chev - Want to join up with the Rebels now? I can work it in with my plan.

Jax - I can chase you down soon as I have Giesha.

Enalais: Don't make us Cri evrytime.
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Chev - Want to join up with the Rebels now? I can work it in with my plan.Jax - I can chase you down soon as I have Giesha.Enalais: Don't make us Cri evrytime.


Sure.
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Well it will be done tomorrow, hectic day guys sorry and going out tonight.

I'll do it hungover tomorrow :L
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Sorry, been really busy today. Will get it going tomorrow.
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