Eviledd1984 said
Background: Sirga was born on Tatooine being born into a farming family but where murdered by some bandits when he was 8 years old.So he started wandering into Mos Eisley meeting a old jedi named Ishmael who taught him on the planet Endor for 10 years.When he was 20 he returned to Tatooine to become a bounty hunter for Jabba by leaving the council for not unknown reasons but most likely leaved to earn a money.So for another 3 years he with his partner Terra hunted down people for Jabba even chasing and failing to nab Han Solo.He also had a friendly rivalry with Bobba Fett.Reason for Joining the Empire/Alliance: Doesn't want to join either.
I'm going to put my full on GM hat on right now and go at this a bit at a time, Ignoring everything else as that's decent (Hard to mess it up) I'm going to focus on the history you have given me.
Evil said
Sirga was born on Tatooine being born into a farming family
I like that bit.
Evil said
but where murdered by some bandits when he was 8 years old
Cliché but I can deal with it. How did he survive though?
Evil said
meeting a old jedi named Ishmael
How did he know he was a Jedi?
Evil said
who taught him on the planet Endor for 10 years
a) How did they get to Endor?
b) LolNope. On the original post "No Jedi" I would have thought that would indicate no other force users but I'll go clear that up.
Evil said
When he was 20 he returned to Tatooine to become a bounty hunter for Jabba
Okay. This is okay.
Evil said
leaving the council for not unknown reasons but most likely leaved to earn a money.
What Council? The Jedi Council? There is no Jedi Council.
Evil said
chasing and failing to nab Han Solo
Han Solo wasn't wanted by Jabba until after 2BBY, we're in 5BBY.
Evil said
e also had a friendly rivalry with Bobba Fett.
Boba Fett wasn't really friendly with anyone.
If you manage to fix all this, maybe make it a bit longer and then find a reason for you to be on Belona. S'all good. But right now, it's a lolnope.
