The Emperors Blade said
To many feels. I am gonna have to make a stone cold killer stormie commando officer with a squad.

Kinda like Loretta. She smiled at the ambush. None of this feeling sorry for the rebels.

Though with her experiments she doesn't really have much of a conscious... or not in the way everyone else does.

Sorry my post is long and all. I wanted to hurry through Loretta's mission so I could open myself up to other stuff in the story. That and I haven't been posting the past few days. Haha. If there are any problems just let me know. I realize it might be a little rushed and all.

Frontliner said
Sorry my post is long and all. I wanted to hurry through Loretta's mission so I could open myself up to other stuff in the story. That and I haven't been posting the past few days. Haha. If there are any problems just let me know. I realize it might be a little rushed and all.

It's fine, mine was a bit long and rushed too so I could catch up with other players to have fun being shot at TOGETHER.

Sep said
It's fine, mine was a bit long and rushed too so I could catch up with other players to have fun being shot at TOGETHER.

Yeah, same here. Just cause my guys in it for the money doesn't mean he can't have fun.

Well the fun being shot at is OOC. It isn't fun IC.

Frontliner said
Sorry my post is long and all. I wanted to hurry through Loretta's mission so I could open myself up to other stuff in the story. That and I haven't been posting the past few days. Haha. If there are any problems just let me know. I realize it might be a little rushed and all.

Well, yet another LAAT has suffered at the hands of gravity... :(

AdvancedJ3lly said
Well, yet another LAAT has suffered at the hands of gravity... :(

I'm starting to think that we got a bad batch of LAATs. We should sue.

Sep said
I'm starting to think that we got a bad batch of LAATs. We should sue.

Yeah! Our decade old and outdated ships are getting shot out of the sky easily, what gives?!?!

AdvancedJ3lly said
Yeah! Our decade old and outdated ships are getting shot out of the sky easily, what gives?!?!

You forget that this is happening during an ambush.

I think something is definitely wrong here, we should call the union.

Sep said
You forget that this is happening during an ambush.I think something is definitely wrong here, we should call the union.

What's happening is entirely normal it's even in the manufacturing specs, you do have those right?

JakeOzzy, tomorrow I shall PM you the start of a collab so we can get that dogfight done...

Sure thing. We'll set the sky on fire~

Don't forget that ISD sitting thar now folks.

Sep said
I'm starting to think that we got a bad batch of LAATs. We should sue.

They should have a warning label on the side: "Warning: May crash upon being shot."

BTW guys, you can continue. I'm just waiting on Geisha.

Frontliner said
They should have a warning label on the side: "Warning: May crash upon being shot."

"Warning: During ambush or other combat scenarios if hit the possibility of crashing with injury and/or death increases."

"Rothana Heavy Engineering is not responsible for any lost property or personal injury experienced while falling from the sky at high velocities."

Sorry I haven't posted yet will do tonight

Name: Sirga Uldin

Species:Human

Gender:Male

Affiliation: Independent

Appearance: Face-

Armor-

Equipment: DC-17 Blaster pistol,Double vibroblade,Hunting Blaster with wooden grip and sniper scope.

Background: Sirga was born on Tatooine being born into a farming family but where murdered by some by Sand people when he was 8 years old and survived by hiding under the wooden panels of the house.After this incident he started wandering around the planet,Until he wanders into Mos Eisley meeting a older bounty hunter named Ishmael who taught him how to be a bounty hunter and the young Sirga thought Ishmeal of his new father figure and wanted to pleases his new father by becoming a bounty hunter.Before he became a bounty hunter for Jabba he was employed by a alien named Emelina who sent him to kill and bring crime lords and gangsters that were taking over rackets of Emelina.The biggest one he had done was killing a big crime group called Skeleton Crew that were based on Tatooine.After a while he came back to his home planet to be a bounty hunter for Jabba.He landed on the planet Belona to find a high bounty on his former master Ishmael.

Reason for Joining the Empire/Alliance: Doesn't want to join either.

Eviledd1984 said
Background: Sirga was born on Tatooine being born into a farming family but where murdered by some bandits when he was 8 years old.So he started wandering into Mos Eisley meeting a old jedi named Ishmael who taught him on the planet Endor for 10 years.When he was 20 he returned to Tatooine to become a bounty hunter for Jabba by leaving the council for not unknown reasons but most likely leaved to earn a money.So for another 3 years he with his partner Terra hunted down people for Jabba even chasing and failing to nab Han Solo.He also had a friendly rivalry with Bobba Fett.Reason for Joining the Empire/Alliance: Doesn't want to join either.

I'm going to put my full on GM hat on right now and go at this a bit at a time, Ignoring everything else as that's decent (Hard to mess it up) I'm going to focus on the history you have given me.

Evil said
Sirga was born on Tatooine being born into a farming family

I like that bit.

Evil said
but where murdered by some bandits when he was 8 years old

Cliché but I can deal with it. How did he survive though?

Evil said
meeting a old jedi named Ishmael

How did he know he was a Jedi?

Evil said
who taught him on the planet Endor for 10 years

a) How did they get to Endor?
b) LolNope. On the original post "No Jedi" I would have thought that would indicate no other force users but I'll go clear that up.

Evil said
When he was 20 he returned to Tatooine to become a bounty hunter for Jabba

Okay. This is okay.

Evil said
leaving the council for not unknown reasons but most likely leaved to earn a money.

What Council? The Jedi Council? There is no Jedi Council.

Evil said
chasing and failing to nab Han Solo

Han Solo wasn't wanted by Jabba until after 2BBY, we're in 5BBY.

Evil said
e also had a friendly rivalry with Bobba Fett.

Boba Fett wasn't really friendly with anyone.

If you manage to fix all this, maybe make it a bit longer and then find a reason for you to be on Belona. S'all good. But right now, it's a lolnope.

Done and done anything i need to change?