Guess I'll do some Co-Gm stuff *clears throat* Just so you guys know, ViridianHue has final say on everything, so don't think that just because I like/dislike your character you're in/out. However, you should take my suggestions to heart if I point out something that needs to be changed.
Dead Cruiser: Regenerating super strong super fast dude with no outstanding weaknesses. I think you should add a heavier penalty to your guy. I understand the sunlight resistance *else you'd be stuck indoors during any form of daytime RPs* but at the moment, he doesn't have any flaws that can be used against him. He's just a super human with mild garlic allergies, the ability to control 'creatures of the night' which is a broad statement, and shape shifting. Explain the limits of his shape shifting, at the moment it feels way too vague, and if I recall *vamp lore is all over the place depending on where you look* they can only turn into a wolf or flock of bats. Consider something creative like removing the shape shifting or limiting it to only during the night. Instead of regeneration, he can only recover from any wound that doesn't pierce his heart provided he rests on grave-soil or in a coffin or even he's simply a tough human in the day, but at night he's super fast and super strong, so any daytime attacks force him to use weapons or think creatively to survive and keep his charge safe. Put simply, my problem with the CS is that he has nothing that can be used against him, he's just all around powerful.
Also, does he need to drink blood or does the half human part void that?
Redwing and Dead Cruiser: Play nice kids.
Boop_Im_A_Dragon: I like it. You crippled yourself well, but are still a dangerous threat in the proper circumstances. I am deeply saddened that you did not use this for a yokai form picture though
Blazion: First off, your human appearance picture is adorable, I love it. Secondly, I LOVE DULLAHANS, thirdly, I don't see any problems with your CS, you have an absolutely crippling weakness if someone gets your head, the gold thing can be used in combat, and the poor visibility makes ambushes a huge threat. However, she's a mounted death rider that can't be held back by locks, so she's still a threat. I think you did well. The bio is fine, though I think you should pull the "Other" part out of the hider, so it can be seen separately.
EDIT: Oh, also I don't think if anyone wants to be a villain they need to join Jaki, they could actively oppose Jaki and still be a villain, could make for interesting turf wars, politics, and alliances of convenience between the three factions depending on which has the upper hand at that moment in time.
EDIT 2: There's still an uncontested spot for tenants and of course, anyone who wants to be a member of staff *chef, bartender, another maid/butler, anything you can think of really*
Dead Cruiser: Regenerating super strong super fast dude with no outstanding weaknesses. I think you should add a heavier penalty to your guy. I understand the sunlight resistance *else you'd be stuck indoors during any form of daytime RPs* but at the moment, he doesn't have any flaws that can be used against him. He's just a super human with mild garlic allergies, the ability to control 'creatures of the night' which is a broad statement, and shape shifting. Explain the limits of his shape shifting, at the moment it feels way too vague, and if I recall *vamp lore is all over the place depending on where you look* they can only turn into a wolf or flock of bats. Consider something creative like removing the shape shifting or limiting it to only during the night. Instead of regeneration, he can only recover from any wound that doesn't pierce his heart provided he rests on grave-soil or in a coffin or even he's simply a tough human in the day, but at night he's super fast and super strong, so any daytime attacks force him to use weapons or think creatively to survive and keep his charge safe. Put simply, my problem with the CS is that he has nothing that can be used against him, he's just all around powerful.
Also, does he need to drink blood or does the half human part void that?
Redwing and Dead Cruiser: Play nice kids.
Boop_Im_A_Dragon: I like it. You crippled yourself well, but are still a dangerous threat in the proper circumstances. I am deeply saddened that you did not use this for a yokai form picture though
Blazion: First off, your human appearance picture is adorable, I love it. Secondly, I LOVE DULLAHANS, thirdly, I don't see any problems with your CS, you have an absolutely crippling weakness if someone gets your head, the gold thing can be used in combat, and the poor visibility makes ambushes a huge threat. However, she's a mounted death rider that can't be held back by locks, so she's still a threat. I think you did well. The bio is fine, though I think you should pull the "Other" part out of the hider, so it can be seen separately.
EDIT: Oh, also I don't think if anyone wants to be a villain they need to join Jaki, they could actively oppose Jaki and still be a villain, could make for interesting turf wars, politics, and alliances of convenience between the three factions depending on which has the upper hand at that moment in time.
EDIT 2: There's still an uncontested spot for tenants and of course, anyone who wants to be a member of staff *chef, bartender, another maid/butler, anything you can think of really*