cosmic adultery, YAY!
Bee stood ankle deep in the water, pant legs rolled up. His vest and tie were removed, and the top few buttons of his shirt were undone. The man stared at the ocean, letting the sea breeze fill his nostrils. "Guys, we should build a sand castle while we're here" he said, walking back to the group. Nonchalantly, he swung Korbo out, bisecting the puppet headed towards it friends. For a brief moment, holding it felt different, as if he were holding someone's hand. It was probably his imagination. "We might not get to come back soon anyways, so we should enjoy it now." he said, smiling.Speaking of page 20, I don't think that puppet should be much good for anything. Also Ajax wasn't at the igloo, since Cirno had to leave it to go meet up with everyone else. Right now pretty much everyone is just...standing around, some of them enjoying a drink, ankle deep in seawater and a ways off from both the igloo and Okuu's sand house. Bee wandered off to find icecream, Okuu's prolly hovering around her sandcastle and Rawk the character's hovering around her. And now we have Jerkchicken popping up too.
WEll, i can just delete that part of the post then.Bee stood ankle deep in the water, pant legs rolled up. His vest and tie were removed, and the top few buttons of his shirt were undone. The man stared at the ocean, letting the sea breeze fill his nostrils. "Guys, we should build a sand castle while we're here" he said, walking back to the group. Nonchalantly, he swung Korbo out, bisecting the puppet headed towards it friends. For a brief moment, holding it felt different, as if he were holding someone's hand. It was probably his imagination. "We might not get to come back soon anyways, so we should enjoy it now." he said, smiling.Speaking of page 20, I don't think that puppet should be much good for anything. Also Ajax wasn't at the igloo, since Cirno had to leave it to go meet up with everyone else. Right now pretty much everyone is just...standing around, some of them enjoying a drink, ankle deep in seawater and a ways off from both the igloo and Okuu's sand house. Bee wandered off to find icecream, Okuu's prolly hovering around her sandcastle and Rawk the character's hovering around her. And now we have Jerkchicken popping up too.
Well, he did just say "bisected" so maybe it can still crawl around as a torso or something. But then the puppet actually seemed, you know, agressive enough to keep attacking rather than just take to poking around an igloo so it'd just get annihilated by all the people there, or by Bee when he comes back and explains that it was put down by obviously evil guy that'd been harassing them before in Hyrule.make up your mind!!!!!!! i'll look into something XD
Ok, people, y'all said you were at the beach... I posted arriving on the beach... nobody's even mentioned Sonus or Steve.First off, maybe try reading the IC? Most people further up the beach and moving away from the water, whereas your guys are sitting down in the surf. Furthermore, you can't just come in and expect everyone to fawn all over you, especially when people are already interacting with other characters and your dudes have done nothing to approach anyone. Oh, and for the record, Zerohex's post mentioned your characters.