[OOC] Blood Act I~ Ghosts of the Past

[Luna]

Oh Lucius I didnt get to check over the callab cause my internet shut off for hours so did you check it when you got back on

[Fallenreaper]

Freeshooter92 said
Seriously, any news on the potential acceptance of my character? I NEED SOME KIND OF FEEDBACK. AND NO I DON'T KNOW WHAT I HAVE TO DO.

Currently we're going over him since there's...many issues Freeshooter. Once we're done going over it, we'll get back to you and provide an IC excuse why Brandt wasn't there. Right now...just wait until you heard from me, Rtron or Lucius. Alright?

[Fallenreaper]

Character name:
Coco Bean

Accepted, post it in the CS.

Character name: Colette Filiatraut

One thing I would like you to do is to PM the good Attributes for the GMs, namely cause we can use them and personally aid in our movement of the IC. At least for me it does. XD You're writing and storytelling had drastically improved since Guild Fall and it was charmingly dark story Colette has. Also whatever happened to the vampire that bit her? Did he ever come back or was it a once bite and that’s it type thing? Another thing, which we’ve already talked about, is to add the present location as well to the history unless you and Lucius have plans I’m not aware of?

And, it's Accepted.

Character name: Aruna Mortista, Lady Mortista

One question, how does she know she has the bloodmage at all? She is a hybrid and might’ve not gained it at all, despite having Esyire father. Was there by chance an incident/moment that determined that or maybe she wants to discover if she has it? I would like a few more Good and Bad Attributes in the CS if possible, when unsure then list what ones are in her CS already like her slowness to trust, her paranoia, listening skills, etc. The bottom part is mostly a reference for what’s been said in the CS and what couldn’t be put in.

Character name: Shai Jaikes

Sad to say…yes it is. First off, what’s the favored blood? You left that blank as well as the training, not that it’s important, bit. Now to his bio, here’s some points to consider.

~ What was his childhood like? Was he born then abandoned to freeze or maybe his mother tried to protect him from a rival tribe but died so she never came back then raised by wolves? (Just an example, lol) Did his parents just let him be independent? Where did he grow up at?

~There’s something that don’t add up right with the reason he leaves his life. Namely his loner personality and suddenly, for what I see as no reason at all, he wants to leave his ideal world? Why, what IC reason would there be for him to do that?

~ Another point, what about his life as a thief? How did that come about, it seems slightly just tossed in there, and what reason is it to have it? If he’s only been around animals, I don’t think there’s much use for being a thief, unless he steals eggs or their kills (a dangerous notion). Not to mention that won’t work with Humans, Elves (Snow or Wood), Esyire, Naga, Dwarves, or anyone above animal intelligence…though I would admit it would be funny to see in action.

Final thing, a few more attributes for the Good and Bad section would be nice. Even if it’s been stated in the CS other sections. :p

Character name: Ponders. Mordent. The Twenty-seventh.

As I mentioned before, I trust you. And as agreed on, any OP stuff you know I, Rtron, or Lucius will pound your little PC in dust. :p Other than that, it looks good to me.

Character name: Harvest

I had a little difficulty in reading this, but I managed which I suggest using a spell check program. Unless, like me, it’s a piece of crap then it’s understandable...but still. One thing I would like is more Good and Bad Attributes, relist or make more up then add the reasons in the Bio is my suggestion. Speaking of Bio, I would like more details on her life like what her life was like before her village was destroyed or little something about how she learned of the College. Also, what type of Elf? Is she a Snow Elf or a Wood Elf? From the sounds of her description and evidence of Herbs, it sounds like she’s a wood elf but her height of 4’ 3” would suggest otherwise since most Wood Elves are rather tall when compared to Snow. Not to mention the appearance difference as Snow look as they have been ‘Touched by Winter’ look. Is she a hybrid of the two?

Character name: Jams

Details in the bio about the character’s life would be ideal. Namely why was he exile? Was it because he was half elf, his mage blood had rotted the village’s drying laundry, or maybe he just ended up causing some…unsavory accidents? Also, what was his relationship with Harvest and where does she come in to knowing him? I ask this, namely because they aren’t mentioned to having any prior connections or relationship of any sort. Was she even nice to him before? Another thing, can I request some periods? It’s a little hard to tell one sentence from another if you know what I mean? And little more on attributes, please?

Also fill in Username..

[Freeshooter92]

Fallenreaper said
Currently we're going over him since there's...many issues Freeshooter. Once we're done going over it, we'll get back to you and provide an IC excuse why Brandt wasn't there. Right now...just wait until you heard from me, Rtron or Lucius. Alright?

I was talking about Alaira...

[Fallenreaper]

Freeshooter92 said
I was talking about Alaira...

Sorry, little scattered brained. We've got an idea in the making for her. *unibrow*

[Freeshooter92]

IS SHE ACCEPTED OR NOT.

[Freeshooter92]

Im just gonna give you guys the benefit of the doubt and say the second post is a collab.

[Fallenreaper]

Freeshooter92 said
Im just gonna give you guys the benefit of the doubt and say the second post is a collab.

Yes it is.

[Fallenreaper]

Freeshooter92 said
IS SHE ACCEPTED OR NOT.

Free... don't scream at me.

[Lucius Cypher]

Luna said
Oh Lucius I didnt get to check over the callab cause my internet shut off for hours so did you check it when you got back on

Yeah, I looked at it, did some fixes. I'll let you have the honor of posting it. Just copy and paste.

[Freeshooter92]

Fallenreaper said
Free... don't scream at me.

But that's not an answer...
The suspense is killing meh!

[Fallenreaper]

Lucius Cypher said
Yeah, I looked at it, did some fixes. I'll let you have the honor of posting it. Just copy and paste.

Also, Lucius, when you get a chance would look at the Blood replies for the Plot PM? Please? Rtron's went to bed so I'm a little stuck.

[Fallenreaper]

Freeshooter92 said
But that's not an answer...The suspense is killing meh!

Screaming will not help.

[Freeshooter92]

:(

[Lucius Cypher]

Fallenreaper said
Also, Lucius, when you get a chance would look at the Blood replies for the Plot PM? Please? Rtron's went to bed so I'm a little stuck.

Yeah, I responded. One thing at a time, you know?

[Fallenreaper]

Lucius Cypher said
Yeah, I responded. One thing at a time, you know?

I know, sorry about that but I want to let you know before you went offline again. And thank you.

[Freeshooter92]

...
May I post pwease? I wub you...

[Lucius Cypher]

No.

Also, Fallen I need you to check on Annabeth's profile. Rtron is in the process of exploring the further reaches of his bum, but I only need you approval.

[Freeshooter92]

Lucius Cypher said
No.Also, Fallen I need you to check on Annabeth's profile. Rtron is in the process of exploring the further reaches of his bum, but I only need you approval.

:(

[Fallenreaper]

Lucius Cypher said
No.Also, Fallen I need you to check on Annabeth's profile. Rtron is in the process of exploring the further reaches of his bum, but I only need you approval.

I was sure I accepted it already. >_>

Also, Free look in your PM box.