> Well here's the thing. The family having developed a unique ability due to lineage involving a jinchuriki is fine. It isn't uncommon for the tailed beast to effect the blood line, though it is usually some sort of alteration in appearance. However, that can be overlooked. The problem is, even as a jinchuriki, the biju's blood would not play a role. Thus, while the CS overall, isn't bad in anyway (In fact I think it's kind of cool and great), I think maybe just swiping the biju blood part would be for the best. If you don't mind. Done and Done

Alright so now I am faced with a difficult decision. I have two teams so far comprised of Zarkun (Jonin Jerin), G3n(Jonin Aburame), Me, G3n(He also has a Genin because that is his primary character), Renny, Hebi, Jangel, FGVT Now I have Masaki, Patri, Slendy and Grandz. Now if one of you opts to make a Jonin that would simplify this and you could four create a squad. But aside from that choice either someone drops or I have to exclude a player from this. Grandz, I understood you were only joining to help out Patri and Slendy, so if you wish to opt out it's totally understandable since you originally wanted to just read the story as it plays out. Otherwise, I will get back to you guys as soon as I can.

Don't worry I'm perfectly willing to withdraw.

> Don't worry I'm perfectly willing to withdraw. > > Well that's good. Sorry you had to go through the trouble of making a character though.

so is in the new teams?

Can I join, even though I barely know about Naruto lol ?

Oi you, Lennon has been waiting for you to come XD

Jonin: Uchiha (Jerin) Genin: Nagato (Demon Shinobi), Ranko (Hebigami), Dango (FVGT) --------------------- Jonin: Aburame (G3njii) Genin: Morggo (Patri) (Pending Acceptance), Angelo (Jangel13), Nayto (Renny) --------------------- Jonin: Nara (Demon Shinobi Genin: Genji (G3njii), Akira (Slendy), Raima (Masaki) --------------------- > WIP > > Appearance > >  > > Name: Morggo Razuiki > > Age: 13 > > Gender: male > > Rank: Genin > > Skills: fighting and weaponry > > Specialty: taijutsu and ninjutsu > > Jutsu: He has learned all of the academy jutsu > > Ghost Release: Ghost Palm > > effect: Morggo summons large spectral hands that hits his opponents with incredible force. > > Rank: C > > Ghost Release: Spirit Clone > > effect: Morggo creates a spiritual clone of himself that can interact physically or non-physically > depending on how the technique is performed. He uses this technique for deception as well as surprise attacks. > > rank: C > > Ghost Release: Spirit Bond > > effect: This technique allows Morggo to summon a spirit and bond with it thus allowing him to share its mind and knowledge with his. When he bonded with the spirit, he can draw upon its chakra and use its abilities and skills. This technique takes up a lot of chakra and requires almost perfect unity between the host and spirit to work properly. > > Rank: A > > > Equipment: > he uses [boomerangs](http://www.crystalinks.com/boomerangset.jpg) as his main weapon and the standard ninja tools as his secondary weapons. Using boomerangs is something that is unique to the Razuki clan and by charging the weapon with his chakra he can make it fly farther and faster as well make it sharper. He keeps his boomerangs on sash. > > Kekkei Genkai: > > Ghost Release: This is the bloodline technique of the Razuki which allows them to manipulate spiritual chakra and see on the spiritual planes. Ghost Release allows the Razuki to summon spirits of all kinds to aid them in battle in several different ways. One of the most common abilities that Ghost release grants to users is the ability known as Ghost Hands which allows the user to move objects with spiritual chakra. > > Other Clan Traits: all members of the Razuki clan are mediums that can see and communicate with all kinds of spirits. The clan has a very strong affinity for spiritual types of chakra and very good at letting chakra flow through their bodies. The Razuki are very wise and can be very tenacious. > > Personality: Morggo is strange in many ways, he can be very serious at one point and then funny at another. He has very strange senses of humor and sometimes has a knack for talking about dead things and will randomly talk to a ghost out loud while people are watching, which makes him looks even more stranger. H likes to make jokes and is very tenacious which is fitting for his clan, and he is also wise. He and his clan follow a code that their ancestors made centuries ago, it is known as the Wisdom of The Ancestors. > > The code encourages the clan to pair their power with wisdom to help them make the proper choices and to not blindly charge into things. For the most part Morggo has learned this code, but he can be a hothead especially when someone is threatening his friends. He is incredible loyal and will never abandon his comrades and he always sticks up for his friends. He dreams of becoming a great ninja so that all can see how great the Razuki clan truly is. > > History: {I don't need much. Just a little something. Like a paragraph.} > > Other: he loves chocolate milk and if anyone causes his milk to spill then he will go into an intense rage and will try to beat up whoever was responsible for spilling his chocolate milk. His favorite food is chicken fried rice. There are a bunch of things that I need to go over with you. 1) Chakra is comprised of Physical and Spiritual energy. Essentially all chakra is spiritual. Even Sage Jutsu chakra which is chakra but just adds nature energy. There are other non-canon energy, but not much like Spiritual chakra as you called it. Well... Aside from Dark chakra anyway. So I'd say the best thing is for you to say that your clan's Kekkei Genkai is a dojutsu combined with an affinity to use a special release IE the ghost release. 2) I'm pretty sure there are not Ghosts in Naruto. Souls are real. So yeah, you could draw on the soul of someone who has yet to pass on. But no canon characters without permission. Okay Shaman King? >_> 3) Maybe instead of those boomerangs use something like [this](http://img2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20141122212537/arrow/images/7/7c/Boomerang.png) since the one I showed you looks like it could be made of the material used to make the [chakra blades](http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Chakra_Blades). 4) Also maybe revise the spirit clones... They either have physical form or they don't... It can't really be both otherwise it's be two different techniques. Like clone jutsu and shadow clone jutsu. 5) Try to finish the edits and the history quickly though so I can accept you lol XD > Can I join, even though I barely know about Naruto lol ? Sorry, but at this point I won't be accepting others. I think there are enough players as is and I just asked someone to drop after all TT__TT

You know, I just realized how OP the Uchiha and Hyuga clans are in Naruto.

Yeah... But in the end, The rinnegan is above all. lol

> Jonin: Uchiha (Jerin) > > Genin: Nagato (Demon Shinobi), Ranko (Hebigami), Dango (FVGT) > > --------------------- > > Jonin: Aburame (G3njii) > > Genin: Morggo (Patri) (Pending Acceptance), Angelo (Jangel13), Nayto (Renny) > > --------------------- > > Jonin: Nara (Demon Shinobi > > Genin: Genji (G3njii), Akira (Slendy), Raima (Masaki) > > --------------------- > > > WIP > > > > Appearance > > > >  > > > > Name: Morggo Razuiki > > > > Age: 13 > > > > Gender: male > > > > Rank: Genin > > > > Skills: fighting and weaponry > > > > Specialty: taijutsu and ninjutsu > > > > Jutsu: He has learned all of the academy jutsu > > > > Ghost Release: Ghost Palm > > > > effect: Morggo summons large spectral hands that hits his opponents with incredible force. > > > > Rank: C > > > > Ghost Release: Spirit Clone > > > > effect: Morggo creates a spiritual clone of himself that can interact physically or non-physically > > depending on how the technique is performed. He uses this technique for deception as well as surprise attacks. > > > > rank: C > > > > Ghost Release: Spirit Bond > > > > effect: This technique allows Morggo to summon a spirit and bond with it thus allowing him to share its mind and knowledge with his. When he bonded with the spirit, he can draw upon its chakra and use its abilities and skills. This technique takes up a lot of chakra and requires almost perfect unity between the host and spirit to work properly. > > > > Rank: A > > > > > > Equipment: > > he uses [boomerangs](http://www.crystalinks.com/boomerangset.jpg) as his main weapon and the standard ninja tools as his secondary weapons. Using boomerangs is something that is unique to the Razuki clan and by charging the weapon with his chakra he can make it fly farther and faster as well make it sharper. He keeps his boomerangs on sash. > > > > Kekkei Genkai: > > > > Ghost Release: This is the bloodline technique of the Razuki which allows them to manipulate spiritual chakra and see on the spiritual planes. Ghost Release allows the Razuki to summon spirits of all kinds to aid them in battle in several different ways. One of the most common abilities that Ghost release grants to users is the ability known as Ghost Hands which allows the user to move objects with spiritual chakra. > > > > Other Clan Traits: all members of the Razuki clan are mediums that can see and communicate with all kinds of spirits. The clan has a very strong affinity for spiritual types of chakra and very good at letting chakra flow through their bodies. The Razuki are very wise and can be very tenacious. > > > > Personality: Morggo is strange in many ways, he can be very serious at one point and then funny at another. He has very strange senses of humor and sometimes has a knack for talking about dead things and will randomly talk to a ghost out loud while people are watching, which makes him looks even more stranger. H likes to make jokes and is very tenacious which is fitting for his clan, and he is also wise. He and his clan follow a code that their ancestors made centuries ago, it is known as the Wisdom of The Ancestors. > > > > The code encourages the clan to pair their power with wisdom to help them make the proper choices and to not blindly charge into things. For the most part Morggo has learned this code, but he can be a hothead especially when someone is threatening his friends. He is incredible loyal and will never abandon his comrades and he always sticks up for his friends. He dreams of becoming a great ninja so that all can see how great the Razuki clan truly is. > > > > History: {I don't need much. Just a little something. Like a paragraph.} > > > > Other: he loves chocolate milk and if anyone causes his milk to spill then he will go into an intense rage and will try to beat up whoever was responsible for spilling his chocolate milk. His favorite food is chicken fried rice. > > There are a bunch of things that I need to go over with you. > > 1) Chakra is comprised of Physical and Spiritual energy. Essentially all chakra is spiritual. Even Sage Jutsu chakra which is chakra but just adds nature energy. There are other non-canon energy, but not much like Spiritual chakra as you called it. Well... Aside from Dark chakra anyway. So I'd say the best thing is for you to say that your clan's Kekkei Genkai is a dojutsu combined with an affinity to use a special release IE the ghost release. > > 2) I'm pretty sure there are not Ghosts in Naruto. Souls are real. So yeah, you could draw on the soul of someone who has yet to pass on. But no canon characters without permission. Okay Shaman King? >_> > > 3) Maybe instead of those boomerangs use something like [this](http://img2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20141122212537/arrow/images/7/7c/Boomerang.png) since the one I showed you looks like it could be made of the material used to make the [chakra blades](http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Chakra_Blades). > > 4) Also maybe revise the spirit clones... They either have physical form or they don't... It can't really be both otherwise it's be two different techniques. Like clone jutsu and shadow clone jutsu. > > 5) Try to finish the edits and the history quickly though so I can accept you lol XD > > > Can I join, even though I barely know about Naruto lol ? > > Sorry, but at this point I won't be accepting others. I think there are enough players as is and I just asked someone to drop after all TT__TT > > I would really like to keep the boomerangs, I just think they're cool and an interesting addition to Naruto. Also spirits do exist in Naruto and Morggo's technique is used to summon his ancestors or non human spirits.

> Also spirits do exist in Naruto and Morggo's technique is used to summon his ancestors or non human spirits. You said "spirits of all kinds" in your CS. This would include the ghosts of, say, the Kage. You didn't specify, and it would be a bit ridiculous if you were to use their power in combat. Also, please provide proof as to where exactly spirits are proven as real in the series.

> > Also spirits do exist in Naruto and Morggo's technique is used to summon his ancestors or non human spirits. > > You said "spirits of all kinds" in your CS. This would include the ghosts of, say, the Kage. You didn't specify, and it would be a bit ridiculous if you were to use their power in combat. Also, please provide proof as to where exactly spirits are proven as real in the series. The Bijuu are a kind of spirit. Demons are a type of spirit, and many characters have met the spirits of dead acquaintances like how Kakashi met his father when he was dead. Also the fact that there are techniques that can resurrect the dead prove that there are human spirits.

> > > Also spirits do exist in Naruto and Morggo's technique is used to summon his ancestors or non human spirits. > > > > You said "spirits of all kinds" in your CS. This would include the ghosts of, say, the Kage. You didn't specify, and it would be a bit ridiculous if you were to use their power in combat. Also, please provide proof as to where exactly spirits are proven as real in the series. > > The Bijuu are a kind of spirit. Demons are a type of spirit, and many characters have met the spirits of dead acquaintances like how Kakashi met his father when he was dead. Also the fact that there are techniques that can resurrect the dead prove that there are human spirits. 1) the bijou are not spirits. They are organisms made of chakra created by the sage of six paths. 2) So far in the series when somebody met someone who was dead it was generally the effect of edo tensei or they were also dead. Kalashnikov saw who father who apparently also stopped him from passing on. Obito met Rin in a similar place. It can be assumed this space is a point between the plane of the dead and a plane of the living. 3) I'm pretty sure the use of edo tensei explains that spirits are not used, rather the souls are. Souls and spirits are not the same. At least not to me. 4) if it's the souls of ancestors I'd like you to provide a list of a few, 4 or 5, that he can summon. While thigs like names and stuff are important I don't care about that. I want their skills clearly stated. Giving you free reign with this ability kind of gives you fair opportunity to be op. Sorry but it really is an overpowered skill. It'd also be smart to transition spirits to souls as it makes more sense with naruto lore. 5) Like I said with the chakra, the closest thing to it would be dark chakra and I don't think he's the evil type. So maybe his techniques are connected to the realm of the dead and he uses regular chakra. May be able to turn him into like the sage of the undead or a "ghost sage" but as of the undead there aren't really any real ghosts/spirits. 6) I think with the points I have mentioned not much is really changing. Just certain basis which essentially aren't very canon and we should attempt to be as true to the source. I do accept anime things and I will accept certain non canon ideas, but as far as I know there are not actually spirits or ghost apart from people's beliefs. However this can all be worked in. So please do not be discouraged.

OK souls and spirits. What's the big difference. Perhaps his clan calls them spirits. As for the boomerang thing. That picture demon suggested is still a boomerang. Just a metal bladed boomerang (much more like a ninja tool) just use it. Its a fancy weaponized boomerang so again no big deal.

Double post :p At least this character is manageable unlike diamond blizzard..... In my eyes he's just trying to tweak it just enough to prevent becoming op early on(mentioning limits for your abilities would assist greatly in that. As well as tweaking some terminology. Also if I may help, with spirit clone, perhaps they can interact with the environment on an intangible/spiritual level. Passing through obstacles repositioning etc. But upon contact with chakra(so any jutsu or trained taijutsu user) the clone takes on a physical form. Best of both worlds manageable it makes sense and its still your skill.

> OK souls and spirits. What's the big difference. Perhaps his clan calls them spirits. As for the boomerang thing. That picture demon suggested is still a boomerang. Just a metal bladed boomerang (much more like a ninja tool) just use it. Its a fancy weaponized boomerang so again no big deal. Well as for spirits it is kind of different. Definition wise they are pretty much the same. However, in writing it depends. As far as most anime goes a spirit is usually some kind of being comprised of the soul and other supernatural components. Souls are just souls. Generally they have no form, but they are the essence of what the person was. That's my opinion. It's not really even a big change, Also the boomerang was an idea. He doesn't need to change that. I just figured he might want something sharp. As of now his would be strong blunt weapons even with chakra enhancements. > Double post :p > > At least this character is manageable unlike diamond blizzard..... > > In my eyes he's just trying to tweak it just enough to prevent becoming op early on(mentioning limits for your abilities would assist greatly in that. As well as tweaking some terminology. > > Also if I may help, with spirit clone, perhaps they can interact with the environment on an intangible/spiritual level. Passing through obstacles repositioning etc. But upon contact with chakra(so any jutsu or trained taijutsu user) the clone takes on a physical form. Best of both worlds manageable it makes sense and its still your skill. Oh an yeah. I think the character is good, but I'm trying to just make sure he can't be too op. Cause otherwise he might as well be a jonin. Or Anbu... Point is I'm just trying to help fix it to fit the role play a little better. Hmmm that spirit idea could work... Possibly, if done right.

I'm gonna throw in my own 2 pence into this is stating that to further prevent that soul'spirit skill from getting to OP'd that it should strain the body of his char also as he would be using a forgein soul/spirit and the longer it's used the more strain his body goes through and the srain would weaken his body till he's had enough time to recover, and example would be 1 minute would = maybe 2-5 minutes to recover with repeated use above maybe 3 or 4 times a day would put him into the hospital from the strain put on his body as i think summoning up a soul'spirit from the pure world {The naruto verse heaven/afterlife} would tax their chakra but you also got to take into the shinigami also as i'm sure he/she/it wouldn't take to kindly to such a clan able to summon beings even if only from their past family from it's domain after all it is the GOD OF DEATH so you have to take into limits that the Shinigami would also put onto such a clan such as possible eternal pain in Yami {Shinto version of hell}

> I'm gonna throw in my own 2 pence into this is stating that to further prevent that soul'spirit skill from getting to OP'd that it should strain the body of his char also as he would be using a forgein soul/spirit and the longer it's used the more strain his body goes through and the srain would weaken his body till he's had enough time to recover, and example would be 1 minute would = maybe 2-5 minutes to recover with repeated use above maybe 3 or 4 times a day would put him into the hospital from the strain put on his body as i think summoning up a soul'spirit from the pure world {The naruto verse heaven/afterlife} would tax their chakra but you also got to take into the shinigami also as i'm sure he/she/it wouldn't take to kindly to such a clan able to summon beings even if only from their past family from it's domain after all it is the GOD OF DEATH so you have to take into limits that the Shinigami would also put onto such a clan such as possible eternal pain in Yami {Shinto version of hell} what are you talking about? the shinigami is a technique, never has it appeared as anything else than a technique. My character's spirit bond technique requires a lot of chakra and if he is not in harmony with the spirit then it becomes hard to control, that means if he gets into an argument with the spirit then the technique will falter and he will be vulnerable.

I edited my CS, Morggo can only bond with one of his ancestors' spirits right now, but he will learn more as he gets stronger.