[OOC] God School

[KatherinWinter]

@Warlord297 your symbol isn't working. You either need a new pic or a written description. Once you fix that he's approved.

[Dcatanzaro682]

Well I got most of the application done. Still have to draw things up so they should be done by tomorrow. Hopefully. Now I'm expecting negative feedback but lay everything out there. If it's decent let me know, if its trash. I might have strayed from the norm of what people do on the site. I don't care that I've spent 2 hours writing it so please be brutally honest. I can't improve without criticism.

NOTE: All Work In Progresses are being hand drawn, please be patient I’m a little short on time.
Human name: Daniel and Scarlet Everon
God/Goddess name: Exerevniste and Storge (Greek)
Parents: Theoi (God of Exploration) and Aphrodite (Greek Goddess of Love)
Age: 12 (I know that’s young but read bio before rejecting)
Powers: Note: Because of age their powers are still being discovered by themselves. Therefore this list will be what they have already discovered.
Daniel: Animalia tongue, dowsing (ability to find hidden water with any random stick he grabs).
Scarlet: Love Powder (ability to make powder that if ingested turns people and animals in love)
Human Appearance: Work In Progress
God/Goddess Appearance: Work In Progress
Symbol: Work In Progress (will have deer in it)
Weapon: N/A
Followers: Mothers, Adventurers,
Animal: Deer (Love and Kindness)
Bio (aka the thing to prevent instant rejection): Exerevniste and Storge, Adventure, Explore, Exploration, Love, Sibling Bond, Family Love. These two gods and goddess are different but the same. They were both born from the Greek god Theoi and Aphrodite. They are both their own persons. Exervniste and Storage are neither whole when separate nor broken alone. They are the god/dess/es of the Family and Adventure.
These two are always found within the presence of each other. Some might call them anti-social because they tend to keep to themselves, but their love of adventure and each other balances them. They have never left the side of each other, and most likely never will. They have been separated from their parents many times in the past. Aphrodite lets Theoi take them into forests and Theoi then forgets about his children. They’ve spent over four years living off the wild of the land, not all at once but over multiple trips where they’ve been left behind. Exerevniste keeps them alive, while Storge keeps them sane. Although Theoi and Aphrodite haven’t been the best parents of these twins, the twins have discovered powers because of their careless parents. Upon discovery of their children’s power Aphrodite and Theoi begged for their children to be taught how to use their powers from the highest of the gods; even though their young age they were accepted to god school to be trained.
(I know this is a little out there but I have a feeling this can be pulled off and enhance the role play. I know most people only use one character when they role play, but Exervniste and Storge can be argued to be the same being, just one who split himself in two. They both think differently the way they’ve been “split” but they know each other so well nobody apart from them would be able to tell how different they are unless they became real close friends.)

Short Story Over =P

[KatherinWinter]

@Dcatanzaro682 I like it alot. I don't mind people having more than one character as long as they can keep up. I am looking forward to seeing them in action. Roxy is going to hate them. Let me know when your finished with it.

[jorthon]

@Saarebas
Of course your welcome
@BranchOfSin
Looks good move him to the character tab
@eemmtt
You'll have to come up with a history but I'm ok with it
@jorthon
Looks good. You do know he'll have a half sister right?
@Slendy
Looks good move him to the character tab.

@KatherinWinter

Yes i do know that i thought it would add a nice twist to it

[KatherinWinter]

@jorthon I'm fine with it. Adds tent ion and drama.

[jorthon]

And tension & drama helps the rp go round

[eemmtt]

Human name: Idor Nocturne
God/Goddess name: Qr'Ablaedaanooiianer (some horrible eldritch pronouncing)
Parents: Tzeentch
Age: 19
Powers: He is a Pysker exhibits the ability to use psychic powers. Psychic powers are most commonly drawn from the chaotic realm of the Warp. Psychic powers can take many forms, from predicting enemy movements to projecting bolts of devastating psychic energy.
Human Appearance:

look

God/Goddess Appearance:

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Symbol:
Weapon: a force staff that he can channel his power through.
Followers: Scholars, knowledge seekers, mages, psykers, and those who seek forbidden knowledge.
Animal: owls
Bio: He was formed when Tzeentch got one of his brother god Khorne to hit him. Once Qr'Ablaedaanooiianer was fully formed he was sent to the planet of sorcerer to train under the daemon primarch Magnus the Red to learn his Psyker power. When he was older he joined the Thousands Sons on raids into imperial space. Soon his father heard about the school decided to send Qr'Ablaedaanooiianer there to learn how manipulated and interact with other gods.

[KatherinWinter]

@eemmtt
You do realize that Nerva could mess with his powers some right?

[Saarebas]

"Give it your best shot, I look forward to stomping you into the ground afterwards."

Human name
Dominic or Dom

God name
Doviculus, The Dark Blade Of The Pit

Parents
Tartarus, the Greek primordial deity and embodiment of the realm of punishment and afterlife for monsters, and Nyx, the Greek primordial deity and embodiment of night.

Age
18

Powers
Enhanced Warrior Prowers- Dom had spent his entire life training in the arts of battle. He excels in up close combat, being quite the deadly force, though he is capable of long range attacks. His strength and endurance is amazing even by the standards of the gods.
Monster Control/Summoning- As all monsters find their way to Tartarus when they die Dom has a strong connection to them both in body in soul. This allows Dom to summon and control a whole variety of monsters.
Soul Punishing- Dom's father's realm is that of punishment of damned souls. This allows Dom to punish people who have committed a crime by making them feel the same pain they inflected on others.
Darkness Attuned- Being the son of night itself Dom is at home in the dark. He attacks harder and faster in the dark, he can see as clear as day in the darkest of places, he is even healed from the shadows as if his mother is treating his wounds.
Control Of The Five Rivers Of The Underworld- Each of the five rivers of the underworld pass through the heart of Tartarus itself, them actually being the god's blood. The five rivers are the Lethe, the Styx, the Cocytus, the Phlegethon, and the Acheron. Each of the rivers have their own magical effects that Dom can apply to people to a extent.

Human Appearance
While in his human appearance Dom looks like a lanky young man, standing at 6'5 in height and being on the thin side of the body build spectrum. His skin is unnaturally pale, as if he had never been in the sun a day in his life. He has sleeves of tattoos that run up both of his arms, one is full of symbols that represent justice and vengeance while the other is covered in symbols that represent night and the void. He has multiple piercings, such as one on his left eyebrow, one on his lip, another on his tongue, and three in each ear. His eyes are a deep blood red with the whites of his eyes being void black. His hair is long, messy, and pitch black save for on the left side of his head which he keeps shaved short. Though people rarely see it Dom's tongue is inhumanly long and pointed, it being about a foot long.

God Appearance
When he takes his godly form Dom's appearance changes drastically, so drastically that the simply name Dom no longer suits him. As Doviculus the once scrawny teen becomes a hulking, behemoth that stands at a towering twenty feet tall. He becomes clad in what looks like armor, but is in fact his actual skin, and his nails become razor sharp talons. But what is most startling of all has to be that he quite literally losses his head. When in his godly form Doviculus's head is replaced by a cloud of darkness where his multiple fiery eyes swirl around. If one would to look closely they would see that in the darkness the souls of both monsters and people drift around aimlessly, silently screaming in pain. While in this form his Doviculus's voice becomes a deep and raspy echo that seems to come from around all sides.

Symbol


Weapon
(See Picture above for appearance)
Doviculus's weapon is a giant great sword, it being about seventeen feet long and unimaginably heavy, that is named Succoria. Succoria appears to be made of the same material as Doviculus's armor and gives off a faint aura of darkness. The sword also has a fiery eye on its hilt. But what is most impressive is that Succoria is actually a sentient blade with a will all its own, it refuses to be used by anyone save for Doviculus.

Followers
Monsters, Those Seeking Vengeance, The Giants, Vengeful Spirits, Executioners

Animal
The Void- A monster that Doviculus created that can only live in the shadows and feasts upon the hearts of the wicked. The Void is a being made of darkness and consists of tentacles and serpent like appendages.

Bio
What would you get when you combine the darkness of night and the fury of the underworld? The answer is Doviculus. Yes the young god was born to the two primordial deities Nyx and Tartarus. He was raised in the realm of his father, a place so wrenched that it is used to punish immortals and mortals alike. Doviculus grew among the most wicked and vial monsters and gods the universe had to offer, forcing him to abandon the illusion that the world was a kind and good place others could afford to keep. He learned to fight more fiercely than any monster and how to strike fear so intense that it seeped into the hearts of the Titans themselves. Despite the harsh teachings of his parents Doviculus was content with his life of battle, but it seems even gods have to change with time. His parents ordered Doviculusto attend a school of young godlings, though they did not give him a clear motive why. Now the god is at this school that he would like nothing more than to burn down.

[eemmtt]

@KatherinWinter
Yes I do, but chaos manipulation was already taken. So I went with warp magic.

[KatherinWinter]

@Saarebas once again you have made an amazing character. Approved. Add him to the character tab and Ill start the IC

[Saarebas]

Woop woop! And thank you Miss Winter :)

[KatherinWinter]

@eemmtt Im fine with it. I just wanted to make sure you were aware
@Saarebas Your welcome.

[Dcatanzaro682]

It sounded like I got accepted, but if not ignore my IC post, all I have left to do is draw the characters and symbols.

[Kurai Assassin]

when you say gods/goddess do they have to be gods that real world Religions/cults follow or Video game gods. IE: Kratos from God of War

[Saarebas]

We have a war hammer god already so I think you are good

[KatherinWinter]

@Dcatanzaro682 your accepted ;)
@Kurai Assassin no they don't have to but Gods from real cults but if you make one up you need to have a detailed history.

[Kurai Assassin]

i was going to use Gods from Video games

[KatherinWinter]

@Kurai Assassin that's fine. If Im not familiar with them I can google them

[Kurai Assassin]

ok thankyou ill get a CS later