[OOC] The Battle for Astrea [Always Open]

[TheWendil]

Does that make Solanne the over enthusiastic child?

[boomlover]

This looks Nice Will have a sheet up later this day

[Crimson Lion]

More cubs for mama bear Solomon to fuss over

@SwarthyBard126

Well my characters supposed to be a younger inexperienced character, so that'll be interesting

[Eleventhfret]

Oh, I'm a jicker, I meant Sky Kingdom. All apologies.

[Ruby Etra]

I'd like a basic description how magic *if any* work, and what kind of characters everyone wants to play if you don't mind me asking. Notables backgrounds would be nice.

Sorr just trying to not step on toes/get a feel for what i want to make.

[Animus]

Oh, I'm a jicker, I meant Sky Kingdom. All apologies.

@Eleventhfret

Format the CS neatly and fix it accordingly, you're missing out on the post example as well. Once you're done with these, I'll review the redone CS.

I'd like a basic description how magic *if any* work, and what kind of characters everyone wants to play if you don't mind me asking. Notables backgrounds would be nice.

Sorr just trying to not step on toes/get a feel for what i want to make.

@Ruby Etra

I'm not the kind of GM who is very strict on fixed rules regarding magic. I'll trust in the fact that people will know what is absurd and what isn't. So feel free to let your brain juices run freeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

[QT]

Thanks for the acceptance. All my pictures should work, I can see em guuuud.

And it's Skimpy just because he's a tiny doggie.

When will we get to see YOUR character oh so powerful GM?

[Animus]

Thanks for the acceptance. All my pictures should work, I can see em guuuud.

And it's Skimpy just because he's a tiny doggie.

When will we get to see YOUR character oh so powerful GM?

@QT

Doing him right now you 3.142.

[boomlover]

My Hider

Name: Sam Childgard
Age: 21
Gender: male



Appearance: This wide shoulderd man stand 2 meters tall. And weighs about 50 kilograms (without his armor).
He has blue eyes and short and never tended to blond hair his skin is rough and full of scars of the many battles this man has fought.
He is all muscle and always has the look of someone who is about to go into battle.

Kingdom: earth kingdom

Persona: Restless and brave Sam likes the noice of the war and hates silence. He values strength the most and has no respect for those who dont posses it. He is brave but loud and has respect for his teammates who he trusts his life to.
He hates liars and despises thievs and assasins.
Because he thinks they have no honnor. But his pure hatred is focust on monsters that have killed his family.
one of his big downfalls is that he rushes into battle. And that he never fully checks his suroundings.

Post Example: The Battle was about to begin. Two giant army,s faced eachother on a field. No one said anyhting it was as all men and women had lost their voice. It was the final moment before the battle. then the sound of a horn filled the air. And then the loud screams of men who started hacking into eachother. Guns fired Arrows flew spells where cast. Swords and shields colieded. And Sam was in the middle of it all.
He was one of the first to fight chopping and hacking the men who came to close to him.
He screamed" IS THERE NO ONE STRONG ENOUGH TO FACE SAM CHILDGARD!!!."
The respons was that of a few big soldiers who all came from all directions at once. They where no match for him. He then started hacking and slashing though the enemylines. The battle was starting to tip into there favour but they werent there yet. He heard the screaming of wounded and dying men those of farmboys who had never held a sword and where beging for there mother. those of veteran soldiers like himself who where still trying to stand up and fight. but failed and then started screaming in frustration and pain. and those of the highborn who where squeling like fat pigs beging for mercy. He then saw a big man in black armor a true warrior like him who had just hacked a man in two.
He looked at the man brave as ever and said.

" How about you face a real man". The man looked at him his two eyes burning with that of adrenaline. He laughed and screamed while he charged
at him." CHALLENGE ACCEPTED." As he swung his blade in the air. The two blades clashed with such force that sparks flew of and the men where pushed back. and so it went parrying slashing and again and again until they started to get tired. the black armored men rose his sword trying to crush him. He however was to slow and Sam aimed at his hands cutting one of them of the men screamed in pain and fell on hands and knees.
He tried to get his sword in a desprate way to defend but before he could Sam thrusted his sword on the mans chest going through meat and bone. He was just about to finish the job bye cutting his head of when he noticed that the man was still trying to reach for his blade.

Sam realized that this man also saw his blade as a friend not as a tool to kill. He quickly grabbed the blade and lay it in the mans hand saying. " you have fought well and is shall not let you die. your blade not in hand. The man looked at him and very weakly sounding said.
" Thank you you are a true knight." then his eyes went dark and he died. Sam closed the mans eyes picked up his blade and thought to himself.
" May his soul have eternal peace because this warrior brave and strong deserved his peace long and strong." He then picked up his blade and searched for his next enemy.

Equipment: Sams only true weapon is his blade. wich he named ravenguard. this balde has a unique metal that was created bye his family the steel cant bend break or melt and has an enchantment on it. That is able to make sure only a true Childgard may use it. he also has very strong armor that was created for him after a bloody battle.

magic/technology/abilty

Sam cant use magic at all but he is very resisten to it.

i hope you like it

[Ruby Etra]

I always try to balance this some.

So whats the male to female ratio looking like?

currently looks lik 3 male 2 female.

[Animus]

@boomlover Its full of grammar mistakes and some parts are weird like weighing 50kg when he's 250cm tall?? Currently, he's rejected.
@Ruby Etra Currently its 4 male (including my soon to be made char) and 3 female.

[Eleventhfret]

Name: Harley "Black Devil" Hapkins.

Age:17

Height: 62 inches.

Weight: 147 lbs.

Appearance: He is in his late teens. His youth evident in his flawless bronze skin, giving him the look of an immaculate bronze idol. His eyes are a deep sapphire blue, bright and curious, framed by long, thick eyelashes that are almost feminine. His features are like that of an expertly made statue, glowing and perfect. His black brows are arched and slender, shaped perfectly for his almond shaped eyes. His nose is small with a slender bridge, under it resides a pair of full lips, a shade darker than the rest of his skin. His cheekbones are, however, the main attraction, sharp blade-like structures that dominate his face, giving him an aristocratic, almost commanding look. His body contains no fat, so, though he is slim, he is pure muscle.

Kingdom: Sky

Persona: Harley is mentally...unstable. To say the least.Having lost his mother and father to bandits then having been beaten bloody and sold into slavery by said bandits, his charming grins and sly winks are nothing but gates closing off the bruised being inside. Harley is confident, as he was put through rigorous training when enslaved, and more after escaping at the age of 13, though he is given to depression and anxiety at any given time, especially when facing a foe far stronger than himself is he given to self-doubt, however, when not in battle, or a heavy depression, he is a charming, kind and loyal friend.

Post Example:Crack! The whip burned on his sweaty back, however he knew if he showed pain, he'd be kicked, and if he showed pain then, he'd be kicked more until he was half dead, and be forced to continue bricking, as he called it. Making bricks, inspecting bricks, moving bricks, removing bricks, damned bricks. He couldn't use his powers, he was outmatched. He might escape someday, today wasn't it though. However, after three years of this, in one of his rhyming sessions(it's easier to work when you're distracted by rhyming), a red mist started forming around him, and a demoness appeared before him, she eyed the boy carefully and said: "Hmm, usually don't see such young buyers, well I'm not here to judge, just sell." Harley stared rudely at her..ears, not noticing that everyone around him was frozen in time remarked: "Buying? I don't have any money, and I didn't ask for anything, who are you? Are you a real demon?" The boy's rambling slowly quieted as she silenced him with a glare. She then said: "Enough, the purchase is made, I'll be taking your joy now. Farewell." She blew him a kiss and the haze slowly dissipated along with the demoness and time returned to the area. Harley looked down at his hands and noticed two, very elaborate, very sharp, very magical looking sabres in his hands, rather, melded to his hands, and he noticed several guards approaching, "Now or never." said he, and within moments he'd dispatched the guards, then things went black. That was four years ago, now with the stories that he'd heard, he knew he'd have to do something, someone of his caliber couldn't sit around while this happened, so he prepared himself for the oncoming adventure.(Yeah, this sucks, didn't use proper story structure, but I tried to make it at least good enough so that it doesn't give everyone cancer.

Gear: He carries two sabres enchanted by a demon to give the user incredible acrobatic prowess and reaction time. Once wielded, however, he must take a single life before he can unwield them. And after prolonged use(more than 30 mins) they will begin to make him violently enraged until unwielded.
Magic: Harley has the ability to teleport within a small radius, and to, when high on adrenaline, focus so that his reaction time and perception is triple that of a normal human for brief bursts.(pretty much a spider sense type deal, or Sharingan, whatever makes more sense to yourself).

[Crimson Lion]

Our line up is looking pretty nice right now.

[wolverbells]

Thank you for accepting me! I've been meaning to say but I keep forgetting whenever I get on rpg haha

[Animus]

@EleventhfretHarley is accepted.

Thank you for accepting me! I've been meaning to say but I keep forgetting whenever I get on rpg haha

@wolverbells

Well, thank you for joining!

[TheWendil]

*reads the latest character*

Well now. The Crimson Hound and the Phoenix. Things are getting interesting real fast.

[Eleventhfret]

Thanks for accepting me, I'll do my best not to suck ass and give you all aneurysms.

[boomlover]

My Hider

Name: Sam Childgard
Age: 21
Gender: male



Appearance: This wide shoulder-ed man stands at 2 meters and 50 centimeters and weighs about 50 kilograms (without his armor).

He has blue eyes, short and never tended to blond hair. His skin is rough and full of scars of the many battles this man has fought.

He is all muscle and always has the look of someone who is about to go into battle.

Kingdom: Earth Kingdom

Persona: Restless and brave, Sam likes the noise of war and hates silence. He values strength the most and has no respect for those who don't posses it. He is brave, but loud, and has respect for his teammates, who he trusts his life to.

He hates liars and despises thieves and assasins because he thinks they have no honor. But his pure hatred is focused on monsters that have killed his family.

One of his big downfalls is that he rushes into battle. And that he never fully checks his suroundings.

Post Example: The Battle was about to begin. Two giant armys faced eachother on a battlefield. No one said anything. It was as all men and women had lost their voice. It was the final moment before the battle. Then the sound of a horn filled the air. And then the loud screams of men who started hacking and slashing into eachother. Arrows flew, spells where cast, swords and shields colided.

And Sam was in the middle of it all.

He was one of the first to fight, chopping and hacking the men who came to close to him.

He screamed "IS THERE NO ONE STRONG ENOUGH TO FACE SAM CHILDGARD!!!."

His response was that of a few big soldiers who all came from all directions at once. They where no match for him. He then started hacking and slashing though the enemy lines. The battle was starting to tip into there favour but they weren't there yet.

He heard the screaming of wounded and dying men those of farmboys who had never held a sword and where beging for there mother. Those of veteran soldiers like himself who where still trying to stand up and fight, but failed and then started screaming in frustration and pain. And those of the highborn who where squeling like fat pigs beging for mercy. He then saw a big man in black armor a true warrior like him who had just hacked a man in two.
He looked at the man brave as ever and said. "How about you face a real man".

The man looked at him, his two eyes burning with that of adrenaline. He laughed and screamed while he charged at him.

"CHALLENGE ACCEPTED." As he swung his blade in the air. The two blades clashed with such force that sparks flew of and the men where pushed back.

And so it went parrying slashing and again and again, until they started to get tired. The black armored men rose his sword trying to crush him. He, however, was to slow. And Sam aimed at his hands cutting one of them of the men that screamed in pain and fell on hands and knees.

He tried to get his sword in a desprate way to defend himself, but before he could, Sam thrusted his sword on the man's chest. Going through every meat and bone. He was just about to finish the job by cutting his head of when he noticed that the man was still trying to reach for his blade.

Sam realized that this man also saw his blade as a friend not as a tool to kill. He quickly grabbed the blade and layed it in the mans hand saying: "You have fought well and I shall not let you die. Your blade is not in hand."

The man looked at him and very weakly sounding said: "Thank you. You are a true knight." Then his eyes went dark and he died. Sam closed the man's eyes, picked up his blade, and thought to himself.
" May his soul have eternal peace, because this warrior was brave and strong deserved his peace."

He then picked up his blade and searched for his next enemy.

Equipment: Sams only true weapon is his blade of wich he named "Ravenguard". This balde has a unique metal that was created by his family. The steel can't bend, break, or even melt. And has an enchantment on it. That is able to make sure only a true Childgard may use it.

fixed most of it expect the weight and lenght. i dont know how to fix that

[Animus]

@boomlover I'm sorry but I'm going to have to reject your CS. You might have better luck searching for other RPs because I don't think this will be suitable for you.

IN OTHER NEWS, first IC post is up. Feel free to mingle around for the night (its currently night when Gregorias gives the announcement) because coming dawn we'll be dispatched immediately for some nice monster slaying action. And I really need to sleep now.

[boomlover]

well atleast it wasnt ignored so im happy could you explain why this isnt suitable for me besides the spelling and grammar mistakes