[OOC] The Battle for Astrea [Always Open]

[TheWendil]

Seeing as we only have about 6-7 characters now, will we all be in the same team starting off?

[Animus]

@boomloverGrammar mistakes do play a big part. The CS is the part where a person typically puts the most effort into yet yours was initially rife with mistakes and still has some even after your editing. Decent grammar is critical for quality writing. It takes the joy out of rping when you're interacting with a person whose post is full of errors and poorly formatted. Second is the abnormal size/weight of your character. For example, a 190cm male has an average of 80kg. By comparison, your character makes no sense especially since he's buff according to your description. I do not understand what you mean when you say you don't know how to fix his height/weight when the values are obviously abnormal. Lastly, your post example simply did not pass the standard that I was setting for it.

I'm sorry if I come off as harsh or anything. I'm simply rejecting your CS because I see problems that are likely arise in future if I accept it that will make rping less fun for you and others.

[Animus]

@TheWindelI'm considering breaking it up into two groups. 6-7 characters all trying to fight one creature often ends up in some people left out or having a very long drawn out wait for everyone to post.

[boomlover]

Thanks for explaining it to me. also the reason my grammar sucks is because im dutch so sometimes i cant even see the mistakes i make. as for kicking me out i get why. it still sucks though XD

[Animus]

@boomloverDon't mention it. Grammar will improve naturally after time lol. Especially since you seem to be active in roleplaying it shouldn't take long for you to improve.

[boomlover]

thanks for the compliment i think im just gonna stick to free rollplay for now even though there isnt realy alot that i find interesting there.
since everybody goes to casual where im still not good enough for.XD it kinda sucks because im kinda in the middle of the two like that i have the creativity. but i dont have the grammar or spelling masterd. if some of you could send me some links how to improve it i would realy apreciate it.

[Eleventhfret]

@boomlover I kinda just prowl around RPs, silently watching and improving my form, silently siphoning.

[TheWendil]

@TheWindelI'm considering breaking it up into two groups. 6-7 characters all trying to fight one creature often ends up in some people left out or having a very long drawn out wait for everyone to post.

@Animus

Alright, good to know. I'll get a post up fairly soon.

[Aerandir]

thewindel what is your signature from?

[TheWendil]

thewindel what is your signature from?

@Aerandir

Which one?

[Crimson Lion]

@AnimusThank you for accepting my application, hope I don't let you down

[SwarthyBard126]

@Animus
Seo wre we forming out own groups, or are you gonna do it for us?

[Animus]

@Crimson Lionlul what is with people thanking me for accepting their CS. I'm the one whose glad this suddenly got a surge of interest.
@SwarthyBard126You can decide the groups in OOC.

[wolverbells]

did I hear groups?!

[Eleventhfret]

It's like a pickup game! ._. I always get picked last.

[Animus]

@Eleventhfretyou worry too much.

ALL THESE LURKERS ON THE THREAD, MAKE A CS AND JOIN US 555555555555555.

[SwarthyBard126]

@TheWindel@Crimson Lion
Want to form a group?

[TheWendil]

@TheWindel@Crimson Lion
Want to form a group?

@SwarthyBard126

Sure.

[SwarthyBard126]

@Animus
Is the IC open?

[Ruby Etra]

@TheWindel the one where the guy rips his shirt off?

Also I'm thinking of what I could make. We already have enough fire themed characters, and a enchanter/alchemist would be pretty pointless when everybody is already geared up.