[OOC] Star Wars: Coruscant Sacked: Aftermath

[Sep]

Everyone, meet Guide. The most awesome PC in this roleplay.

Just saying. I mean he drugged a Krayt Dragon. TOP THAT.

He also deactivated Nyiss' lightsaber WITHOUT her killing him. How many people can boast about that?

[Sep]

-herpityderp-

[Ellri]

That character feels extremely rushed. You can do better, Sep... Remember, this RP is advanced, not casual.

During galaxy-wide war, people do not just "hear about the war". It is everywhere. As a child character, he hasn't even known peace. The war started some 15 years before he was even born.

Why would he fight for the republic? Cliches like the one you put up isn't a reason. Why?

A bit of description providing details not visible from image would be nice. (like height & such)

How did he learn piloting? When? Where? Why? Who taught him?

Etc.

Try again.

@FallenReaper, Frettzo & Sundered Echo: Post 58 is very hard to read after it was transferred here. You wrote it based on having access to such. Alas, colors have yet to be integrated into this guild, so now everything is white. It proved extremely hard to figure out who wrote what. We can't figure out who is PoV in a lot of the posts. Could you find a solution here? Even on the Doc, we do not know who is what color.

[Dervish]

I'm back!

How about that crazy long vacation. Kudos to you guys for everything you did to keep this thing going over the break! I'm amazed you guys came up with so many clever work-arounds.

[Frettzo]

Hey Guys! Just to let you all know, My PC's damaged and I've lost all information I had there, including links to the various collaboration docs and the like. I can still write, but I'm not sure when I'll be able to get my PC fixed, sadly.

[Sundered Echo]

Dervs good to see you back!

Frettzo, thats terrible to hear D:
Meet us in the IRC (link on the OP) and I can get you some of those links again if you like...

[Kentsukan]

Oh no, Frettzo! D:

[Sep]

He was a bit rushed, to be honest when I think about it I don't think I could play a character that young anyway.

Sorry for the waste of time :P

I have just taken on a whole lot more on my RP plate so I think two chars in this would be too much for now.

[Sundered Echo]

No idea is a waste of time Sep, but we understand if you want to withdraw him because of RP load in othe RPs.

[Ellri]

Indeed. Given the fair amount of polishing and extra research, that character could have potential. Its a decent base to work from. But of course, it is better to postpone it till later if you feel your RP plate is overfilled.

If you want a Jedi to play occasionally, you could always have an open NPC brought in that anyone can use. NPC sheets do not need the same level of detail as PC sheets.

[Fallenreaper]

Ellri said
That character feels extremely rushed. You can do better, Sep... Remember, this RP is advanced, not casual.During galaxy-wide war, people do not just "hear about the war". It is everywhere. As a child character, he hasn't even known peace. The war started some 15 years before he was even born. Why would he fight for the republic? Cliches like the one you put up isn't a reason. Why?A bit of description providing details not visible from image would be nice. (like height & such)How did he learn piloting? When? Where? Why? Who taught him?Etc.Try again.@FallenReaper, Frettzo & Sundered Echo: Post 58 is very hard to read after it was transferred here. You wrote it based on having access to such. Alas, colors have yet to be integrated into this guild, so now everything is white. It proved extremely hard to figure out who wrote what. We can't figure out who is PoV in a lot of the posts. Could you find a solution here? Even on the Doc, we do not know who is what color.

I believe Echo was green, Frettzo yellow, I was blue. I can't exactly edit it as of right now so I will try to do that later on or just shift each of the first He's in mine to Xid's name to help sort the PoV...

[Ellri]

We managed to figure it out, Fallen. Edited it all in now. Its not pretty, but its functional.

[Rtron]

Sep said He also deactivated Nyiss' lightsaber WITHOUT her killing him. How many people can boast about that?

Well, I know something Zanna can boast about.

[Dervish]

Rtron said
Well, I know something Zanna can boast about.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7TrZFxhrPUI

[Sep]

Rtron said
Well, I know something Zanna can boast about.

Well I don't really think Nyiss uncle would want to boast about that...

[Kentsukan]

Rtron said
Well, I know something Zanna can boast about.

Of course~!

[Ellri]

So, anybody working on posts, currently?

[Sep]

I keep trying to get onto with with Rtron...

[Kentsukan]

I'm also due to get a collab with Rtron as well.

[Ellri]

Our NPCs are all available for Collabs. None of them are busy. (well, Allende Laval is slightly busy, but not overly so)