[OOC] The Gifted: A Fast Paced Superpower RP (Relaunch)

[Letter Bee]

Edited the 'Powers' section!

[Letter Bee]

So, am I accepted?

[Blizz]

I'd like to join
Name:Apocrean(if it's allowed,his true name isn't known)

Alias's:unknown,other-ling and the apocrean

Age:12

Affiliations:none currently(May change)

Description:in human form-brown hair,left purple eye,white jacket
In apocrean form-twice as tall,wearing a grey hooded cloak with only three purple blank dot eyes piercing out,his legs and covered and his arms are covered by the sleeves

Faction:none

Powers:Nightmarish abilities of the monsters from which his blood was crossed with
Endless supply of tendrils(used in anyway thought he could think of)

Reality jumping:he can go to and from two worlds-ours and the world where his abilities come from,(I will add a description with history)

Short distance teleportation

Skills:impressive stealth(inherited):he could creep up on someone in a hall of mirrors if he wanted

Toxicological knowledge(learned):he has a small knowledge of toxins and their effects(in case it is ever needed or a poisonous animal attacks)

Cool(near emotionless)attitude(inherited)

Equipment:black pocket knife

History(instead I'm gonna add a description of the place where his inherited powers come from)

APOCREA
In the deep dark below, beyond the space where time wakens and yawns, beyond the shadows cast by the great leviathan of eternity, the Apocrea stir. Within cities where geometry and madness share meaning, constructed from thought, from unnatural impulse, the Apocrea dream dark machines into being.Only souls keep these engines roaring, heard screaming across distant stars. Only souls can fill their void, sublime in its vast emptiness. Oh such beautiful souls! Bright and vibrant like fruit warming on the branch from a summer’s sun, longing for the pull of the earth below, the chance to seed and grow and birth anew.

[TheWizardLizard]

@Blizz

I can see... a few problems immediately, chief among them being that you... appear to be trying to introduce your own personal story/setting/characters/whatever into an RP that has... nothing to do with it. Um.

[Blizz]

@TheWizardLizard-in head:that lizard though-what exactly do you mean?

[Raijinslayer]

@BlizzHe means what he said, you've brought in an entire world for this characters powers to come into being, but have explained little to nothing about it, and you're also bringing in a concept that is kind of skirted around in this RP. Alternate dimensions we can take, but I think you should talk to the GM's more about what this place entails. Also, infinite tendrils is probably know, all you really need in any battle is at most 4, maybe five.

[Blizz]

@BlizzHe means what he said, you've brought in an entire world for this characters powers to come into being, but have explained little to nothing about it, and you're also bringing in a concept that is kind of skirted around in this RP. Alternate dimensions we can take, but I think you should talk to the GM's more about what this place entails. Also, infinite tendrils is probably know, all you really need in any battle is at most 4, maybe five.

@Raijinslayer

1)even if I did explain apocrea,it wouldn't be easy,apocrea is basically a dark place where geometry and madness share meaning,to describe it in more detail would be difficult but I could try,

2)the limitless tendrils is a stretch,yes he can call on as many as he wants but he won't turn the world into a freaking octopus,mainly he would ensure people,

3)I'd be happy to explain more about apocrea to the GMs,or anyone for that matter

[c3p-0h]

wow a lot happened while i was away! ok, let's see if i can take this in order.

@lord coake: biggest issue is probably the age thing, but acer's already covered that. i am a little confused about the emotion thing though. so he's crazy except for when he uses his powers, which are triggered by emotions, but when he uses his powers, they automatically make him grim? so his powers are controlled by his emotions but then it becomes the other way around? and then he has to keep that all the time or he goes crazy again. hmm. maybe i'm just overthinking things. if acer doesn't have issue with it then i suppose you can just ignore this. maybe some further explanation for my benefit tho?

@letter bee: as always, acer has the final say, but from my perspective the revamped powers for lucas are looking better. could be interesting to see him and sebastian fight for control over a blood soaked environment (though from the descriptions of the characters, i think i know who'd win that battle).

@blizz: rai and wizliz have already covered the primary issue with this, which is that you seem to be adding entirely new lore to this universe – which isn't a bad thing per se. there's nothing wrong with coming up with history or relationships to help expand the world. the thing about metas though, is while they are all very diverse people with a wide range of powers, it's generally accepted that all their abilities come from the same source. i don't think acer has decided completely on what that source is yet, or how much we're going to explore it within the rp, but i'm fairly certain it's not a supernatural alternate dimension. that's not to say that this dimension can't exist via your character's powers, and maybe his ability to access it for example, but it can't be the source of his power. with the exception of characters like clementine, whose natural abilities are augmented with science, all characters inherited their powers without their knowledge, through no special means. please also include more details about this character's abilities and ranking, so we can understand him better and see if anything else needs to be edited before being accepted.

[Lord Coake]

@c3p-0hTo clarify on the grim aspect. The grim part was for his personality, how he acts, not what emotions he's feeling.

[Blizz]

@c3p-0hon a sort of technical term,his powers come from the nightmarish creatures called the apocrean harvesters,which is what gives him the power to use the tendrils and short distance teleportation along with the stealth

[Nytefall]

@c3p-0h How does your astral ability work? Are you and wizard just standing there?

[Archmage MC]

@Blizz, make your character's power his own instead of something from some dimension and that fixes the problems people have iwth your character, IE, making lore that doesn't exist. Though if the GM is fine with your char then there ya go.

[Nytefall]

@Letter Bee To put your super power into a scientific point. You can manipulate H2O so does this mean that heavily polluted areas where the water is covered in contaminates will be more sluggish to respond and control? Also blood plasma is 92% water.

[AcerRo]

@Weird Tales
Accepted

@Letter Bee
Lucas Abd-al-Yasu with a water manipulation is cool and accepted.

Eden is almost pointless. I can't feature a use for him. Past that you know how I hate child characters that don't act like kids.

[Nytefall]

@Savato Is it okay for me to teleport your human bombs into the air?

[Savato]

@Nytefall I guess? If you can teleport anyone to their deaths than I guess you can do that

[Archmage MC]

@Savato Is it okay for me to teleport your human bombs into the air?

@Nytefall

@Nytefall I guess? If you can teleport anyone to their deaths than I guess you can do that

@Savato

If he doesn't want to, Light can blow up a few of them by punching them, but I dunno if she can get them all. lol.

[Nytefall]

@Savato Well he can teleport them above the city. Or to the desert.

[Savato]

@Nytefall Can he do it to PC's?

[Nytefall]

@Savato He could if i asked the person before hand but I wont do it to PC as my own rule.