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@Aristo shit, hold on.. This was sorta my bad. I forgot to mention the current year: the year is currently 2899.. II forget where I've placed ethe starting date of the war, but it's been going on for well over 20 years now. Also, roughly 60%-70% of UEE forces still pilot aerospace fighters, but more and more are shifting to MAS

Edit: also, I'm surprised you went for the external power cores, I mean, I like the addition, but since I know people like to add all this fancy ass equipment to their machines, I made it relatively easy to abuse the system(it's not complex, and some trends can be noticed) . A steel hunters enhancement plus a improved the reactor output would net you a total of +10 power for a cost of 3 weight.
Also, since you mentioned your weapon as having an external power system, I'd allow you to substitute the 2 power for an extra 2 weight. I take it back, most ballistic weapons are self powered, the power cost is supposed to be representative of targeting...? Eh, the power cost is arbitrary really, it's just for balancing purposes.

Also, that's a very nice take on the sentry, and I like it quite a bit.


Ah, I'll do some work on the backstory to make it fit, then. & I suppose I just might tweak the MA around before I'm finished - a few more bells and whistles couldn't hurt as long as I keep the theme.
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That's a fair point. I can only begin to wonder how much meat I've put on the bone of Falling Skies' naval structure. :D :D
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Scheming up a pirate turned mercenary, eta...some time tomorrow if weather is favorable?
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Edited my CS. Replaced Alex's picture with a significantly better one.

Lots of tough characters in here. Will be interesting to see how they all work together.
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Finally done. Noticed some flaws in my MAS's specs, so I fixed those, too.




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@EnterTheHero, don't forget to mention another character in your CS. :)
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@Whoami You mean your character?
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@Whoami You mean your character?


Perhaps.

Give the rules from the first page a once over. Wink.

(Also I edited my CS again with a better callsign this is the last time I swear)
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@EnterTheHero Notes about your character..
- The Reaper cannon can have more than 10 rounds- notice Sam's has like, 50. Its kind of hard to reload MAS weapons in combat, so they usually just use single large magazines. What makes the Reaper silent and untraceable? Its a large cannon, firing a huge shell, where would all the excess energy go?
- Also keep in mind that external power cores are by their nature rather bulky- which may effect your unit's aerodynamics.

Other then that, things look good- I like the take on the Stylet. Also, its ironic that you named it Sirius, because the Steel Hunter's Cruiser is was also supposed to be named Sirius.

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@EnterTheHero Notes about your character..
- The Reaper cannon can have more than 10 rounds- notice Sam's has like, 50. Its kind of hard to reload MAS weapons in combat, so they usually just use single large magazines. What makes the Reaper silent and untraceable? Its a large cannon, firing a huge shell, where would all the excess energy go?
- Also keep in mind that external power cores are by their nature rather bulky- which may effect your unit's aerodynamics.

Other then that, things look good- I like the take on the Stylet. Also, its ironic that you named it Sirius, because the Steel Hunter's Cruiser is was also supposed to be named Sirius.



Uh... good point. I'll change that. Thanks for the input.

EDIT: Fixed. Also, do you want me to change Adrian's MAS's name, so things don't get confusing?
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@EnterTheHero Meh, depends on how much you like the name Sirius, I can just find a new ship lol. Its not that big a deal
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@vietmyke Okay, Adrian's MAS is now the Blue Moon. Wasn't a big deal to me, either.
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Hey hey - I just stumbled across this RP, and it looks pretty much up my alley. I'd be interested in joining in if you've still got space. Might take me a little while to submit my char as I'm busy this weekend, and I need to read through everything in the OP in depth, but I thought I'd make sure to say I'm interested, and check if you still have space for anyone else.
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Oh, btw, I'm working on my CS, it's almost done.
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Finished! Tell me what ya think!

EDIT: I was kinda going for the "Was going to be the hero of a story, but failed," kinda vibe.
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@Athinar a couple points..
-it is unlikely that he'd get discharged just for having his machine destroyed. Especially in wartime, the only real ways that he would get discharged is if he finished his service tour and quit(which doesn't seem to fit his character), got injured beyond the hope of being combat ready, or was caught doing something illegal. Otherwise he'd probably just get reassigned to a new unit.
- I feel like I've said this before, but all shield generators have 5 wt, except for class 5 which weighs more and class 1 which weighs less. Also, how did he acquire a class 4 shield? That is a very expensive and very valuable piece of equipment.
- Also, how did he acquire a Sentinel to modify in the first place? One doesn't just find upper tier UEE mechs just lying around.
- Your missile launcher is mounted on the back, but the external power cores are also mounted on the back.. This is a conflict. Also for missile launcher list the number of munitions it holds
- Same goes for your primary weapon, rate of fire, magazine size, and caliber please
- Your MAS balance is off, it appears to be at 34/30 WT and 34/40 power
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Also @everyone, I hoped everyone enjoyed their Halloweekend. I'll be spending most of today studying and nursing this hangover, so I'll probably be available to answer questions all day.
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When do you suppose we'll be getting started? Not to rush or anything, it just seems like it'll be a lot of fun.
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@Oxenfree Still waiting on people to finish up character sheets. Once the interested people have left their characters, we can start moving on.
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