[OOC] Naruto: True Peace. [ALWAYS ACCEPTING] [Cool guys club inside]

[Hatman1801]

Thank god, the Mikoto Melee is over. THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT YOU RED BASTARD.

[Weird Tales]

@Partisan I posted my second character

[Blue Demon]

@NeroAre you the only one assaulting the barrier at the moment?

I've looked over everyone else's posts and cannot find anyone else.

[Savato]

@Hillan Your totally original character is accepted.

[tex]

I'm a little perturbed that 90% of the people involved in Niro's mist clusterfuck have not noticed THICK, REFLECTIVE SILVER POOLING AT THEIR FEET despite walking through it freely for several posts. You'd think that'd be something to be cautious of, or at least y'know, acknowledge.

:/

[Partisan]

review in red

Here's my second character

Ozuko

“Stand down or you'll pray for death rather quickly”

Ozuko is about six feet tall and is of average build. He's has your basic athetic body for a shinobi, but his specialization in ninjutsu doesn't make him train as hard to develop muscle.

You'll need a bit more info than this, this is barely scraping the surface of more fine detail such as what his face looks like, facial features, etc.

Personnel files.
Access only by security personnel with a C3 clearance.

【Full Name】
Ozuko Matabi

【Alias】
G-unit

【Affiliation】
the Red Sages

【Age】
21

【Sex】
Male

【Sexuality】
straight

【Birthplace】
Amegakure

【Bloodline】
the Matabi clan

【Rank】
Jonin We don't really need a jonin right now, especially on the Red Sage side (since we already have Katsuko) so for that reason alone I can't accept it right now but I'll review the rest regardless

Psych. report.
Medical secrecy applies.

【Personality】
Ozuko is very tenacious and has a never give up personality. He can have a short temper and has on a few occasions gotten into trouble with his outbursts of anger. Despite these flaws, Ozuko is a very loyal friend and comrade, he would rather die then abandon his allies in a mission and he doesn't fear death. When he fights he doesn't fight to really defeat others, but tries to defeat himself in order to get stronger Why fight enemies then because you can get stronger by training with dummies?. Socially Ozuko can be rather friendly to those that he likes and will stick up for those he calls friends.

As a teammate he will work with others to get the best out of a team, but Ozuko can sometimes be selfish and rash in his rush to try and prove himself. Ozuko also views his clan and their bloodline technique as being superior to all others and will boast about it, especially to the Uchiha and the Hyuga clan members. Didn't you just say he was really social and nice? His ninja way is the idea of pushing oneself to their limits and breaking through them to get stronger and fight for what they believe in.

After his defection to the Red Sages, Ozuko's personality changed a bit and he became more weary of potential enemies. With the death of his mother and father, he now views the confederation as a bad system that he will oppose and brought down.

【History】
The Matabi clan was one of the greatest ninja clans of Amegakure and their Gravity Release techniques became known throughout the great shinobi nations. But beneath the legend there was turmoil between the village and the clan. The Matabi wanted Amegakure to advance and grow in strength to become a great nation, but the government decided on keeping a more neutral stance and refused to expand. This caused some bad blood between the ambitious Matabi and the rest of the village. I find it hard to believe that a clan that isn't part of the 'great clans' such as Sarutobi, Uchiha, Hyuga, or lately Uzumaki, holds great influence like this

It was during this time of an uneasy relation with the village that Ozuko was born and his childhood started in this division of clan and village. He could feel the tension, but he didn't let it get in the way of his dream to be a great Rain shinobi and he began to train hard to try and learn his family's bloodline technique. At first he didn't seem to show too much promise and was considered about average in ninja skill, but he didn't let it get him down.

And so Ozuko kept at it and wouldn't let his results keep him from improving his shinobi skills. When he was nine years old his training was paying off and he starting to show more promise, but that is also when relations between his clan and Amegakure worsened and finally his clan decided that they would leave the village and immigrate to Konoha. Ozuko was shocked at the news and didn't want to leave his home, but he had no choice.

When they got to Konoha they were at first treated as outsiders and viewed as a weaker clan compared to the Uchiha and Hyuga. Ozuko was determined to show them that he was great ninja and began to train even harder to obtain his dream. At age 10 he was enrolled in the Shinobi Academy and he tried to do his best at trying to graduate with flying colors. While he did manage to graduate with above average grades, they weren't the excellent grades of some of the other students. Ozuko was slightly disheartened by that, but he swore to himself that he would do better in the Chunin exams. I like this part

As he had sworn to do, Ozuko did do better in the chunin exams and his impression with Konoha elite saw eventually graduate to the rank chunin. As chunin his missions for the confederation were mostly against taking down rebels and those unwilling to submit to their authority. This never really sat right with Ozuko, but he followed their orders and little did he know that his clan was possibly planning a breakaway from the government. Unknown to Ozuko, his father and mother and the head members Why his father and mother if they weren't important? of his clan discussed the possibility of breaking away from the confederation since as the years went on they saw themselves disagreeing more and more with the confederations policies. It wasn't until he was had become a jonin that his parents filled him on their plans and Ozuko became conflicted.

He had grown loyal to Konoha, but he too had problems with the confederation. He wasn't sure of what to do, but his mind would be set when spies had caught wind of his clan's plans and the confederation attacked. They killed his parents and several of the elders and imprisoned the other conspirators. His clan was then disbanded and Ozuko barely managed to escape with his life. Now a rebel he quickly went in search of the Red Sages in the hopes of joining them and fighting the confederation. Now a member of the rebels Ozuko seeks to bring justice to his parents and clan.

【Family ties】
Before they were murdered, Ozuko had a good relationship with his parents and clan. He was loyal and was proud to call himself their son. Now with his mother and father dead, Ozuko still prides his heritage and hopes to one day reform the clan.

Rinno Matabi | Father | 42 deceased, Konoha [before death], Jonin, he was one of the elite members of the Matabi clan
What about mom then?

【Dreams and fears】
Ozuko fears that he will fail in his quest to bring down the confederation I'm sure he won't manage on his own and bring back his clan. His dreams are to once again ignite the age old glory of the Metabi clan.

Combat reports.
Gathered from evaluation reports after missions.

【Fighting style】
Ozuko is extremely skilled in the arts of Ninjutsu and fairly good at taijutsu, but his ability to use and understand Genjutsu is very limited and is his main weakness. He is very quick on his feet and uses agility over brute strength. *cough* pussy *cough* nah this is fine

【Kekkei genkai, or bloodline limit】
Bloodline limit name:
Gravity Release
Description:
Gravity Release allows the user to manipulate the forces of gravity through the use of their chakra allowing them to use ninjutsu techniques based around the manipulation of gravity.
Strengths:
With Gravity Release Ozuko is able to create effects such as lowering and increasing the gravity of objects and people through the use of placing seals on them. This bloodline technique can also change the flow of gravity to repel objects away from him, or draw things to him. He can also perform techniques that create attacks of concentrated gravity and even create spheres that can have a powerful gravitational pull.
Weaknesses:
This bloodline technique requires concentration and focus to be most effective and speed can be a main weakness when it comes to defense. It's offensive is excellent, but it's defense is not perfect.

Kekkei Genkai are to be made unique. If they are Sharingan with 1 minor edit made into a new KG, then it's a no-go.

Deva Path simply put. I can't accept this, above all because more or less it's quite a strong technique. You'd have to gain access to the Deva Path techniques ICly if you want to have it, similar to how we need people to prove worth ICly for Sage mode etc.

【Ninja techniques】

C rank techniques:
Whac-A-Mole Technique lol, this is a good one

【Custom made techniques】
Gravity Release: Giant Crushing Ball
Rank: B
Range: short
Description: Ozuko creates a large ball of glowing green gravitational energy in his hands and slams it into his opponent. The impact creates a massive amount of force and tries to crush its target. While this technique is powerful it is limited to short range and can be dodged by merely being faster than Ozuko. It also uses up a good amount of chakra to perform and he can only maintain the technique for a maximum of a minute.

Gravity Release: Master of Force
Rank: C
Range: short – long
Description: Ozuko places a seal on an object or person and he is able to then manipulate the gravity of the target for a variety of different effects. This technique however requires concentration and good focus and the bigger the object he manipulates the more chakra is required.

Gravity Release: Wall of Force
Rank: B
Range: short
Description: Ozuko shoved outs his palm and then releases a wave of gravity which hits anything within six feet of him with a large amount of force. This technique is used by him as more defensive measure and is able to defend against weapons and ninjutsu attacks. This move also uses up a large amount of chakra if used too much and it only defends him from the direction that his palm is facing. If he is speed blitzed or attacked from behind then he is vulnerable to their attacks.
Gravity Release: Flight
Rank: C
Range: supplementary
Description: Ozuko alters the gravity of his body and by changing its flow he is able to fly at very fast speeds, he can also use it to levitate around in the air.This doesn’t protect him from suffocating at high altitudes and it requires chakra to maintain this technique and the longer he uses the more chakra he has to use up.

Gravity Release: Destroyer Ball
Rank: A
Range: long
Description: Ozuko creates a glowing green ball of energy and fires it out of his hands. When it hits an object then it creates an extremely powerblast of energy than can blast apart metal. This technique is a one shot at a time attack and a single use of it requires an incredible amount of chakra and only used in situations where Ozuko finds it necessary.

JGravity Release: Crushing Impact
Rank: A
Range: short
Description: Ozuko increases his body’s weight while he’s in the air and comes down on his opponent with an insane amount of force in an attempt to crush. The weight of his body can well over a hundred tons. This technique does require great amounts of chakras to pull off and it will only last for about fifteen seconds. It also requires him to make physical contact with his enemy for it to be effective.

JGravity Release: Mighty Pull
Rank: B
Range: short – medium
Description: Ozuko extends his hand towards his opponent and they are pulled towards him forcibly with a great amount of force. This technique works best on a single target and requires focus to make it work at its best, also it can use up a lot of chakra if used carelessly.

Gravity Release Destructive Wave
Rank: A
Range: medium
Description: Ozuko shoves out his palm and unleashes a huge blast of gravitational energy that blows away anything in its path. In a wooded area it will knock down dozens of trees and hit with the force of a mighty hurricane. This technique however costs a great amount of chakra to perform and it can be best countered by a extremely powerful earth technique.

Gravity Release: Crushing Ball
Rank: C
Range: short
Description: Ozuko creates a small glowing green ball in his hand and when he hits an enemy with it, it creates enough force to send them flying and cause a good deal of pain. This technique has no long distance capability and he can only hold for one minutes before it disappears and he must focus to keep it from vanishing.

Can't accept these like I said.

Weapon, tool or object name: Ninjato
Weapon, tool or object type: a single handed shortsword
Description:

Theme Song:

@Weird Tales

[Partisan]

@tex it's because Tatsuya hid it for him, or atleast someone did I remember reading that very clearly.

[Raijinslayer]

@PartisanThat was Kenye's character, cause Tatsuya's shit at Genjutsu. I kinda forgot about that tidbit though.

[Hillan]

@Hillan Your totally original character is accepted.

@Savato

Good. Now, to avenge my clan, or whatever.

[Partisan]

@Raijinslayer Yeah, I thought so, but I wasn't sure because Tatsuya walked up to Silverboy once and said some stuff to him, so I got confused.

[tex]

@tex it's because Tatsuya hid it for him, or atleast someone did I remember reading that very clearly.

@Partisan

He edited that part of his post out after being reminded that he couldn't really see anyone in the mist, iirc.

Tanji Tsugiharu

Somewhere overlooking a skirmish, Konoha Ame-Suna Border, Harvest Festival

@Partisan@Hatman1801@tex@GrafRoy Zeppeli@Raijinslayer

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The situation was slowly spiraling out of control, more combatants meant more complications and risks, and Tsugi was the type of man to prefer his chaos organized. A heavy mist had cut into his visibility, making his useful rather hampered, what he would do for one of those special eyes the Uchiha or Hyugas have. He saw the Hyuga shove aside a Confederate Swordsman, yelling at him and Tsugi himself found humor in how despite the situation the pride of the big clans was put ahead of safety or efficiency. However that still didn't change the fact that from his vantage point the rising mist obscured the little arena that had formed, and would deny him from being useful if he stayed up there.

Tsugi jumped down to get within throwing range of the traitor red-head still under the guise of the Hyuga's form as the real one duked it out in the mist, he meant to prepare some roped senbon. He turned towards the mist. He called his clones to reform around him mimicking his movements. He kept it simple, he simply threw out roped and belled senbon into the mist, he knew the Hyuga could see them and dodge as needed all the while Tsugi himself doubted they could actually hit anything in there, they didn't have to. He just needed enough to be within earshot of the traitors as he formed hand-seals for Illusion Bells. In war, there needs some sacrifices to be made, and if the the Confederate Swordsman and the Hyuga get a nasty ear ache in order to incapacitate the traitors and hopefully dispel their jutsus in the process, fine by him. He'd be prepared to follow up with poisoned senbons if the mist fell.

@KenyeIsMyLife

It would be pretty to miss though.

[Partisan]

@Blue Demon I believe that he's not attacking the barrier but more so the people holding it up. And it's not a direct attack, he's shaking the ground and.. causing a collapse? I think? Regardless, he's ''alone'' but Katsuko is also out looking for the tags.

[Partisan]

@tex Oh in that case I missed that as I read it before the edit. It doesn't really matter, given the byakugan I can kinda cheese my way around it saying 'yeah I noticed it but I notice everything, so I didn't bring it up. Pfah.'

[Blue Demon]

@Blue Demon I believe that he's not attacking the barrier but more so the people holding it up. And it's not a direct attack, he's shaking the ground and.. causing a collapse? I think? Regardless, he's ''alone'' but Katsuko is also out looking for the tags.

@Partisan

That's what I went with.

Score

EDIT: And Umary's now a straight Confederate. She's chosen.

[Partisan]

@Blue Demon v. nice. Is the barrier still up or is it safe to assume the earthquake shook the tags loose and I can enter the rubble?

It's your barrier after all. Better to ask than to go full nazi-GM mode and just say I AM COMING IN.

[Raijinslayer]

@Blue DemonAs a clarification, Tatsuya doesn't act anything like his cloned for the most part, buuuuuuut, since he has a habit of abiding the jutsu by sending his clones one errands, it's easy to see how such a reputation could be gained. So no need to change anything, cause you gave me a pretty interesting idea to work with.

[Blue Demon]

@PartisanI'm also assuming the barrier would come down at this point considering the jutsu.

@Blue DemonAs a clarification, Tatsuya doesn't act anything like his cloned for the most part, buuuuuuut, since he has a habit of abiding the jutsu by sending his clones one errands, it's easy to see how such a reputation could be gained. So no need to change anything, cause you gave me a pretty interesting idea to work with.

@Raijinslayer

No, I understood that. But Noriko's still gonna punch him. :D She doesn't care. She still sees it as his fault.

[Hatman1801]

@Partisan@texConsidering it's a big pool of silver goop, I'm guessing that if anyone got within the fifteen yards of his thing would still feel "Oh hey, the ground isn't being very ground at the moment." It's why I was making the big subconscious deal about it and making sure I jumped away after putting up the mist. Our positioning wasn't 100% defined in the fight, but it's a pretty big area. It was just that you and I specifically were further away because I took our fight further away.

[Partisan]

@Partisan@texConsidering it's a big pool of silver goop, I'm guessing that if anyone got within the fifteen yards of his thing would still feel "Oh hey, the ground isn't being very ground at the moment." It's why I was making the big subconscious deal about it and making sure I jumped away after putting up the mist. Our positioning wasn't 100% defined in the fight, but it's a pretty big area. It was just that you and I specifically were further away because I took our fight further away.

@Hatman1801

Ehh, to be honest, it was one big clusterfuck, and it was hard to know what was specifically going on. Usually this is corrected easily in smaller fights. It'll be better from here on out.

[Raijinslayer]

@Blue DemonTatsuya will be sure to transfer said punch to his clones . . . with a lot of interest.