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@Fallenreaper Still here, and yeah, I do am havign a bit of troubles getting my post started. SOrry for keepign yu waiting for so long Fallen


Ummm. Alright, my suggestion is work from when they arrived and they started to break off. Summarize it as it likely took only a few minutes at most, despite the text walls we're cranking out, the timing in rp is much faster as is the thought process. At least that's how I've usually understood it. In addition, I would suggest you focus on what your Batarian might've noticed or important to him, rather than try to include everything. Just because it's not mentioned, doesn't mean it didn't happen. Just means your PC, not you, didn't consider it important. Also, if you have to, make a small, short paragraph post to start off? I merely need your PC's intro on approaching Vellios and I can build on that from there. We're all about quality, not amount here. Even a small, 1 paragraph reply is worth much more than a mile page of fluff and rambling. Does that help some?
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Ummm. Alright, my suggestion is work from when they arrived and they started to break off. Summarize it as it likely took only a few minutes at most, despite the text walls we're cranking out, the timing in rp is much faster as is the thought process. At least that's how I've usually understood it. In addition, I would suggest you focus on what your Batarian might've noticed or important to him, rather than try to include everything. Just because it's not mentioned, doesn't mean it didn't happen. Just means your PC, not you, didn't consider it important. Also, if you have to, make a small, short paragraph post to start off? I merely need your PC's intro on approaching Vellios and I can build on that from there. We're all about quality, not amount here. Even a small, 1 paragraph reply is worth much more than a mile page of fluff and rambling. Does that help some?


Thanks for the help Fallen, will try to get the post up today.
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Thanks for the help Fallen, will try to get the post up today.




No problem hun and that's all anyone needs from you is your best effort. ^-^
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No problem hun and that's all anyone needs from you is your best effort. ^-^


Once again, thanks Fallen :)
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Expect the unexpected! Even explosions!!!
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@DearTrickster Aren't those expected by now?

As for amputation. ..Serena, Dex, and Iosif can all bond over being robotic arms!
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@DearTrickster Aren't those expected by now?

As for amputation. ..Serena, Dex, and Iosif can all bond over being robotic arms!


For us yes~ however for our dear spy explosions are just a bad time.

Amputee club meetings welcome all new members. If anyone loses a limb on the jalopey they'll have a rockin' support group.
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For us yes~ however for our dear spy explosions are just a bad time.

Amputee club meetings welcome all new members. If anyone loses a limb on the jalopey they'll have a rockin' support group.


and a chess tournament.
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Serena is all for the 'get the hell out of dodge before the Batarian with Rockets blows us up' plan of action.

*Looks pointedly at @Zombiedude101*


Aye. Rockets generally aren't good for one's health in the ME series.
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Since Morty was unable to get a post up today, and seems like he won't tonight, I'm going to have a Vellios one up by tonight latest.
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Since Morty was unable to get a post up today, and seems like he won't tonight, I'm going to have a Vellios one up by tonight latest.


Actually, I am woreking on a psot now Fallen, it should be up shortly.

EDIT: Post is up, Khosin delivered a pack of medi-gel to Kasyra and is hailing Vellios in the comms while heading towards him (once he is given Vellio's location ofc). If there's anythign that needs to be changed, do please tell me so.
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Actually, I am woreking on a psot now Fallen, it should be up shortly.

EDIT: Post is up, Khosin delivered a pack of medi-gel to Kasyra and is hailing Vellios in the comms while heading towards him (once he is given Vellio's location ofc). If there's anythign that needs to be changed, do please tell me so.


Cool, and YAY! ^-^
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Good job getting Khosin in the fray. Hopefully for the next time you post it'll be easier for you to start~
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Actually, I am woreking on a psot now Fallen, it should be up shortly.

EDIT: Post is up, Khosin delivered a pack of medi-gel to Kasyra and is hailing Vellios in the comms while heading towards him (once he is given Vellio's location ofc). If there's anythign that needs to be changed, do please tell me so.


Glad you managed to get a post up! Content wise, looks good, but a bit more proof reading couldn't hurt. Regardless, I'm glad to see you hoping in on your own initiative. :)
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Cool, and YAY! ^-^


Hope the psot is good, sorry it took so long to get it posted

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Good job getting Khosin in the fray. Hopefully for the next time you post it'll be easier for you to start~


Thanks, and yeah, hopefuly it will be easier the next tiem for me to get a post up
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Glad you managed to get a post up! Content wise, looks good, but a bit more proof reading couldn't hurt. Regardless, I'm glad to see you hoping in on your own initiative. :)


Ah, oops, will try to give it some proofread now. Sorry, this kind of htings always slip by me, even when I look on my psot backwards htey are painfully obvious, so thanks for bringing it up (and sorry for hte double psot)

EDIT: Alright, edited hte psot to correct some of those pesky gramamr mistakes. Ocne again, thanks for bringign this to my attention Dervs
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Aye. Rockets generally aren't good for one's health in the ME series.


*ME1 Rocket Drone flash backs*

INSTA KILLS INSTA KILLS EVERYWHERE.

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*ME1 Rocket Drone flash backs*

INSTA KILLS INSTA KILLS EVERYWHERE.


Naturally, watch Derv set some on the group now.

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Alright, correction it will be another day if I don't get it up tonight... my muse kicked in overdrive rather hard core. The scene went from barely a page into about 3 + now. A fair warning to @Heat, @Sundered Echo, and @Mortarion, I'm sending serious trouble your way and naming the NPCs. However, you can still manipulate, control and auto-hit them but I suggest you let these 'special' baddies give you a hard time since Dervish complained about us not making things challenging enough with our fights. I also liked the atmosphere a shooting game can have when done...in the dark.
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