@Fallenreaper Still here, and yeah, I do am havign a bit of troubles getting my post started. SOrry for keepign yu waiting for so long Fallen
Ummm. Alright, my suggestion is work from when they arrived and they started to break off. Summarize it as it likely took only a few minutes at most, despite the text walls we're cranking out, the timing in rp is much faster as is the thought process. At least that's how I've usually understood it. In addition, I would suggest you focus on what your Batarian might've noticed or important to him, rather than try to include everything. Just because it's not mentioned, doesn't mean it didn't happen. Just means your PC, not you, didn't consider it important. Also, if you have to, make a small, short paragraph post to start off? I merely need your PC's intro on approaching Vellios and I can build on that from there. We're all about quality, not amount here. Even a small, 1 paragraph reply is worth much more than a mile page of fluff and rambling. Does that help some?