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Prologue
You slowly awaken to find yourself floating in a pitch black void. You gaze around only to find nothing but darkness. Death, is this death? You couldn’t help but ask yourself this question as you slowly continued to drift through the seemingly endless abyss. But, how exactly did you die? Was it old age? No it couldn’t be, you weren’t old enough to die just yet. Suddenly your thoughts returned to that strange purple rift you had touched earlier. Was this the cause of all of this? Taking a small breath you realized just how stale the air felt. This wasn’t normal at all, and a part of you felt a bit nervous out of fear as you had no idea what was going on. In fact you couldn't even feel your body, something which sent you into somewhat of a panic. Suddenly without warning a bright light appeared in front of you catching you off guard. The light itself was almost painfully blinding and every few moments it would get brighter and brighter before all you could see was white. You try to move, but again your body feels completely numb and sluggish. The light slowly envelops you before you black out.





Rules

1. Nothing is absolute, any attack can be countered, dodged, overpowered, or blocked. It is impossible to have an attack that always hits its mark or an attack that can pierce through anything.

2. No godmodding.

3. All the rules of this site still apply. (Obviously)

4. Suggestions for the game are allowed.

5. If you read what another character is thinking, but can’t form a connection between their gestures and actions to said thoughts, then don’t have your character figure it out. (e.g. if I spin around three times and shuffle my legs and I specifically state in my head that I want you to attack the undercarriage of our opponent, don’t have your character understand what I’m trying to say.)

6. Don’t post a character sheet in the character sheet tab until I confirm your character is good enough and not under/overpowered.


Feel free to state your interest in this game, and feel free to ask about any questions you have.

Note: I have added an example character sheet to the characters tab. Check it out if you're having trouble making a character. Also note that you don't have to make the character sheet as quite as detailed, and the biography can be much shorter.
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This is so Original count me in!!

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@BCTheEntity
Can't wait to see the rest of your character.

@Classpet
Just a few things. This takes place in a fantasy world, not on earth. Because of this you'll want to make up new regions to replace "North Africa" and "The Middle East". Secondly you'll want to increase the lifespan of your character, as well as potentially decide if you want to make your character more magical. (Though you don't have to)

Regarding your specialized body parts
Wings: Your wings should always work unless damaged or if your character is physically or mentally exhausted.
Stinger: You use the elements "Air" and "Healing". You'll need to either remove the poison from your stinger, or change one of your elements to poison.

Regarding Skills/Spells/tactics
Air: This is good, though you might want to change the name to something else (You don't have to though)
Stinger: Please change the name of this ability, and also remove the part about you dying from using this attack. (You can take damage from using a skill, but you shouldn't take so much that you potentially die)
Go for the eyes: Please remove the part about a swarm, as your character will largely fight without his/her own species. Also I meant your combat style to be something more like this. (It doesn't need to be as long as the example.)

Example: Overwhelming Pressure - The Cutter Leaf goes all out and attacks rapidly focusing solely on the opponent in front of it. This style pressures the opponent into having to focus on defense and evasion to escape damage. Additionally the Cutter Leaf gains a small bonus to dodging close range attacks by moving just enough so that its opponent is only able to graze or narrowly miss. While this is great for one versus one duels, this style of fighting leaves the Cutter Leaf open when dealing with more than one enemy, or when facing attacks coming from multiple angles. Additionally this style does not actually increase the strength of the strikes, it's actually the opposite as the strikes become slightly weaker. Likewise the Cutter Leaf must give up part of it's defense as well, leaving it especially open to strong hits.

Healing: I'll allow this if you remove another one of the skills above. Given you're a bee you can still make honey, it just won't have any healing properties until you gain more experience in this world, or replace one of your above skills.

Everything else is good.
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Two things worth noting.

1. I'm working on an example character sheet currently.

2. I forgot to add appearance to the character sheet... (whoops, my bad.)
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Changed the lifespan to 3 years, I hope that's long enough. And North African and The middle east are now The "plains lands" and The "spotted Desert". I think I fixed the other things as well.

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I have added an example character sheet on the Characters tab.

@Classpet Please remove the part about how your wings are immobile when the temperature or above or below a certain temperature threshold. Instead replace it with information on your flight speed and agility. (e.g. are you average in speed given your power? Faster? Slower? How good are you at changing directions?)

Other than that you're golden!


Sidenote: If we don't get very many players I'll probably just join myself and play as the Cutter Leaf.
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@gammaflux Congratulations on constructing this- It's an underappreciated idea and it looks like you've pulled off the mechanics really well. As much as I want to join, though, in the space between when I expressed interest and now, I've locked myself into some other roleplays that are unusually overwhelming.

I'll certainly keep an eye on this space, but alas I don't think it's meant for me this time. (ಥ﹏ಥ)
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Hopefully this fixes everything :D

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@Classpet Accepted, feel free to post your character sheet in the characters tab.

@Antarctic Termite Thank you, and no worries about not being able to join. If you ever do change your mind tell me though. :D
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@gammaflux Okay, I'm finally done with my character sheet. Take a look-see.
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@BCTheEntity Accepted, feel free to add your character to the Characters tab.
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Just a quick thread bump to try and get more players into this. Seriously, I'm going to vouch for @gammaflux here, being friends with him from another forum: he's pretty damn good at RPing, and he's pretty good at running RPs too. I think so, anyway.
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Name/Nickname: Scrx

Gender: Female

Age: 8

Appearance: An oversized cross between a bull ant and a bullet ant.

Personality: Anger issues. Psychopath.

Species/Sub-species Name: (gonna make it up as its a cross) Zrsk ant - elite

Species Biology: Zrsk ants eat a balance of both green vegetation and fresh meat. Between 5 degrees C and 35 degrees C preferably at the higher end. Devoted to the protection of the queen and getting food Zrsk ants have a strong hierarchy within their hives able to communicate within their species using pheromones they cannot disobey their superiors in the hive. Zrsk ants generally live around 15 years. One of the main threats to zrsk ants are birds as their mandibles and stings cannot penetrate the beaks. Zrsk ants normally use their larger than normal size to their advantage using their mandibles and powerful front legs to tear apart their opponents, if they are not successful in disposing of the enemy quickly they then use their poison.
The castes are:
Worker: The main body of the hive. Not much combat prowess but can take down enemies in great numbers.
Warrior: The next largest group, able to be created in bulk they are the army for the hives. Depending on their speciality they can come in different shapes and sizes.
Elite: These are one of the smallest classes of the hives. Advanced in combat they protect the queen.
Royal: Although there is only 1 queen royal eggs are laid. The queen always makes sure to have at least one in the hive so that in case she dies the next queen awakened by the pheromones released can take her place, any others are either sent away or destroyed to keep the queens hive from having contenders.

Magical power: Just below average
Offence: Very High
Durability: Above average
Speed: Average
Agility: Average

Zrsk ants are weak to fire, ice and water. Fire can burn their carapaces, ice freezes them to death and the water drowns them. They are strong against the earth, sonic and wind. Zrsk's are rare insects although they have large hives. They do not care the time of the day although on cold nights often stay inside cover. The warriors and elites have tough armour whereas the workers trade that for speed, they all are very strong as most ants are. They don't taste very good but give a lot of nutrients. They will attack anything that they believe they can beat, when going after larger creatures like mammals they often attack in large numbers.

Habitat: They live anywhere from grasslands to forests. Their hives are generally built with warmth in mind to keep them warm through winters.

Grouping: The species live in vast hive systems that sometimes have multiple hives under one queen, elites will sometimes go solo but most zrsk ants travel in large groups.

Elements: Fire. Poison.

Specialized Body Parts: Depending on what function they serve in the hive they will have different body parts. Scrx has wings to enable her to fly up to 15 miles per hour. They also have glands on their legs that allow them to release the pheromones that give them communication. They have stingers which they use to attack with their mandibles and front legs, the stingers allow them to poison their opponents.

Skills/Spells/Tactics:
Fire spray: This allows them to use their glands on their legs to also let out a mist that they can light on fire. It also allows them to heat their hives more easily.

Poison Spikes Linked to both the stinger and the wings Scrx can shoot spines of poison. When fired from the wings it is more an AOE attack and when fired from the stinger its more accurate.

Stats: Scrx is an average example of her species but has an advantage over most of her species in her speed and agility.

Biography: Scrx was hatched among 9 other new elites for the queens hive. Immediately her lust for blood and death kicked in, seeing the other strong bugs as a potential threat to a queen she felt devoted to protect she went beserk. Completely destroying her 9 elder siblings and drinking her blood she made a name for herself among the hive. Her violence was much feared by insects within the hive and in surrounding civilizations. Skip on a couple of years and Scrx is leading a hive army in battle against another strong colony of ant like creatures that was located dangerously close to the new hive her queen now ruled over. Charging through the base of the hill the hive killed colony members right left and centre. Immediately aiming for a chamber she hoped would hold the queen she was cut short. Suddenly a flash of purple light appeared and Scrx fell....
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@Minimum

Please go into more detail regarding your Appearance.

For Personality, just how different is your character than the rest of your species? Do all members of your species act the same way? (See Biology)

Biology - What is the personality of the average member of your species?

Regarding Specialized body parts - Please remove the "15 mph" flight speed and replace it with an adjective describing the speed relative to an insect of its "power level", as well as how much maneuverability your character has whilst flying. (Is it clumsy, barely able to turn in mid-air? Average? Above average?) Please move one of your body parts to the biology or appearance section. As it stands you have wings, glands, and a stinger. While you technically can have all three of these, only two of them can be specialized. The other body part will be considered part of your main body and will be usable regardless of how much damage you take. If they do sustain enough damage you will instead pass out.

Skills/Spells/Tactics -
Fire Spray: Is it a concentrated stream, a cloud that covers your body and the area around you? Also how does your species light the mist on fire?

Poison Spikes: Does the main source of damage stem from the poison itself, or the spikes? Is it mixed?

Combat Style - Please add a combat style to your character. I'd suggest looking at one of the other player's character sheet or my example character sheet for inspiration, though you don't have too. Also as a note, your combat style can have some form of magical or ranged attack if you wish. Please keep in mind to also list the weaknesses of your combat style if they aren't a given.

Stats:
Is it a large advantage? Or a small one? Is this only counting the elite caste, or does it also count the workers as well?


Everything else is good, but for now you'll need to do the above to get accepted. Nice to have you join though.
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Okay, so obviously this isn't really getting anywhere.

If you'd like we could just start like this, and I'd jump in as well. Hopefully there's a chance more people would join in later.

Either that or we try an wait a bit longer or something. Any suggestions?

@BCTheEntity@Classpet

@Minimum Also I'm still waiting on your edits, though it appears you're preoccupied with life.
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I personally think we should wait another couple of days, maybe try to talk about game-related stuff OOC so as to keep the game on the front page so that more people can see it. Half the problem is that it's getting shoved down to less-explored pages by other, more active games, which isn't helped by how few people are available to talk here. So, uh, that could be a fair bit of the problem.
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