Excellent! Then I have the perfect character in mind. Heh.
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~Reika Kuroke~
Age: 17 years | Height: 171 cm | Blood Type: B
Physical Description:
A girl with pale white hair, eyes, and complexion. Her short stoutness is nothing to concern herself with as she’s quite accepting of her stature as a whole. It is suggested that she was a much more vibrant person before the development of her powers but she’ll neither deny nor confirm these claims.
Biography:
What little Reika can remember of her past is nothing but a waking nightmare. She can recall that she once lived in a small town that convinced itself that the five year peace put in place would last forever. So determined were they to believe in these delusional lies that, like their ancestors before them, they were unable to detect the attack of the Moonmen until it was much too late.
Reika clearly remembers an average day at school turned twisted with screams and the sound of consumption echoing all around her…before a soothing blackness overtook her. When she woke up, the corpses of those she used to know along with some of the Moonmen surrounded her on all sides.
Naturally the Coalition arrived and brought her in. As the only survivor of her town, it was only obvious that they question the young girl, running various tests in an attempt to discover how she, an ordinary youth, had survived such a massacre. It was only through these tests that the first discovery of Reika’s powers were realized.
Reika clearly remembers an average day at school turned twisted with screams and the sound of consumption echoing all around her…before a soothing blackness overtook her. When she woke up, the corpses of those she used to know along with some of the Moonmen surrounded her on all sides.
Naturally the Coalition arrived and brought her in. As the only survivor of her town, it was only obvious that they question the young girl, running various tests in an attempt to discover how she, an ordinary youth, had survived such a massacre. It was only through these tests that the first discovery of Reika’s powers were realized.
Personality:
Outside of personal life, Reika is a powerful public figure and maintains that image rightly so in the presence of her peers. As someone that speaks only when needed, it’s quite obvious that she possess excellent public speaking skills and an ability to run entire operations to their course. As such, she’s often been called crazy not speaking her mind more often then she should.
Though closer inspection would reveal the façade Reika puts on for the people around her. Dig a little deeper, and one would find a girl brimming with apathy for others and has a tendency to wander alone. She’s not depressed and she’s not anti-social, but she does prefer to not be in the center of bustling activity.
Work as Limiter and her own real lack of caring have taken away many chances to actively integrate with those among herself, and she will often politely decline gatherings and parties hosted by other members of gathered Limiter group. But if, by chance, she does form a rare bond with another, then she will do all things in her power to keep said bond and never let it sever.
Though closer inspection would reveal the façade Reika puts on for the people around her. Dig a little deeper, and one would find a girl brimming with apathy for others and has a tendency to wander alone. She’s not depressed and she’s not anti-social, but she does prefer to not be in the center of bustling activity.
Work as Limiter and her own real lack of caring have taken away many chances to actively integrate with those among herself, and she will often politely decline gatherings and parties hosted by other members of gathered Limiter group. But if, by chance, she does form a rare bond with another, then she will do all things in her power to keep said bond and never let it sever.
Type:
Attack
Special Ability:
Reika can summon a cloud of black sand that works much like fire consuming all things in its path. The black sand tends to work better against living organisms as opposed to inanimate objects and is considered to be Reika’s most powerful ability. That being said, the cold girl tries to use such an effective power against the Moonmen sparingly due to its…unpleasant drawbacks inflicted on both her mind and body.
Skillset:
Reika excels in public speaking skills along with rallying up others with motivation and pitting them together for a common cause. It’s shame that she rarely puts this skill to good work, not caring enough for anyone else to be motivated herself.
Equipment:
Reika is often seen carrying around a small first-aid kit on hand at all times. It’s uncertain why she possesses this, though it might have something to do with her powers.
LostDestiny Goldfish Brain
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So. Many. Girls. I can change my character to a guy or make a male character if needed.
TheWendil The Wendil-Sama™ / ಠ_ಠ
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So. Many. Girls. I can change my character to a guy or make a male character if needed.
I thought we were supposed to only make girl characters <.<
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So. Many. Girls. I can change my character to a guy or make a male character if needed.
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I thought we were supposed to only make girl characters <.<
Windel is right you are only supposed to make girl characters, I said so in the interest check (but I think I didn't mention it in the OCC. But then again I didn't make you list gender so I thought it was obvious -_-. You know it ain't much of a exploration and subversion of the magical girl genere if they ain't well girls.)
Dead Cruiser Dishonour Before Death / Better You Than Me
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Windel is right you are only supposed to make girl characters, I said so in the interest check (but I think I didn't mention it in the OCC. But then again I didn't make you list gender so I thought it was obvious -_-. You know it ain't much of a exploration and subversion of the magical girl genere if they ain't well girls.)
You said "mostly girls, rarely boys."
If girls only is actually the case, you can count me out at this point.
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@Hexaflexagon
I apologize. I wasn't a part of the Interest Check and it wasn't mentioned here. I was not aware of this factor. The genre in which this was supposed to be in was unclear to me. And just because a GM doesn't make one list there gender does not mean that it is obvious that it is only supposed to be one gender. Especially to those who are not familiar with your style of GMing.
I apologize. I wasn't a part of the Interest Check and it wasn't mentioned here. I was not aware of this factor. The genre in which this was supposed to be in was unclear to me. And just because a GM doesn't make one list there gender does not mean that it is obvious that it is only supposed to be one gender. Especially to those who are not familiar with your style of GMing.
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He's my character, I hope she's good.
Physical Description:
Yuuna is a girl of average build for her age and ethnic group. Her body has been shaped by martial arts practice while she was young, which was only accentuated once her powers began to develop. If nothing else what call for more attention on appearance is Yuuna's pure white hair and icy blue eyes, a side effect of the power she wields and one of the main reasons why Yuuna was named the Saint of Winter over time
When it comes to clothing, usually Yuuna is seen wearing winter garments, like heavy coats and gloves, mostly white in color, with her main distinguishing characteristic is her hat which is a memento from a military unit Yuuna spent some time with and came to consider as a foster family.
When it comes to clothing, usually Yuuna is seen wearing winter garments, like heavy coats and gloves, mostly white in color, with her main distinguishing characteristic is her hat which is a memento from a military unit Yuuna spent some time with and came to consider as a foster family.
Biography/background:
Yuuna was born on Okinawa, and spent the best of her childhood learning the island's traditional martial art, the Okinawan karate as well as Soujustsu, the art of the spear, as a child from a respected martial artists lineage. It wasn't until Yuuna turned eleven and her powers first began to manifest, by an unnatural drop in the island's temperature, that her life would change forever.
After the first harsh encounter with 'them' and the advent of her unique ability, Yuuna began to roam the land as both a penitent soul and a bringer of hope, these days whenever she passes through, people can't help but call her by the name of Saint of Winter for both of these characteristics.
Okinawa fell to the demons mostly thanks to the untimely blooms of Yuuna's freezing powers that seriously hampered the efforts to evacuate the island, leaving only a few select survivors, herself included since no one knew she was the source of the sudden blizzard that caused so many deaths at time. After she came to know that Yuuna that whenever she stays at a place for too long the climate of the region shifts into a deep freezing winter, she began to roam the land and spent most of her days on Hokkaido where more snow and ice was not uncommon, specially on these days where the poles are slowly refreezing.
Not all on the young Limiter's life was tragedy, though, since it was on Hokkaido that Yuuna met her surrogate family, a broken detachment of the Russian armed forces Siberian troops that fought the beasts using equipment from the age of the Soviet Union. She spent a couple years with them, which earned her both a very good fluency of Russian and knowledge of survival in the harsh conditions she tends to bring with her as well as some human warmth amidst the coldness of her days.
It wouldn't last.
It turns out that the unit she lived in would be ambushed, even amidst the harsh winter conditions, by moonmen that somehow were buried under the earth. The ensuing battle was in truth a slaughter and once more all that was left of Yuuna was to survive alone. After this tragic outcome Yuuna traveled back to Japan on a relief ship and up to this day she spends her time traversing the countryside and salvaging whatever can be (canned food, bottled water, medicine, batteries, once in a while small luxuries like candies, books and toys) of villages that have been ruined and bringing it to those who would have better use for such supplies without asking anything in return.
There's about no one in Zone 2's countryside that doesn't know of the Saint of Winter's fame, her generosity and her cold, seemingly broken heart incapable of forming deep bonds with anything other than the music she came to love so much.
After the first harsh encounter with 'them' and the advent of her unique ability, Yuuna began to roam the land as both a penitent soul and a bringer of hope, these days whenever she passes through, people can't help but call her by the name of Saint of Winter for both of these characteristics.
Okinawa fell to the demons mostly thanks to the untimely blooms of Yuuna's freezing powers that seriously hampered the efforts to evacuate the island, leaving only a few select survivors, herself included since no one knew she was the source of the sudden blizzard that caused so many deaths at time. After she came to know that Yuuna that whenever she stays at a place for too long the climate of the region shifts into a deep freezing winter, she began to roam the land and spent most of her days on Hokkaido where more snow and ice was not uncommon, specially on these days where the poles are slowly refreezing.
Not all on the young Limiter's life was tragedy, though, since it was on Hokkaido that Yuuna met her surrogate family, a broken detachment of the Russian armed forces Siberian troops that fought the beasts using equipment from the age of the Soviet Union. She spent a couple years with them, which earned her both a very good fluency of Russian and knowledge of survival in the harsh conditions she tends to bring with her as well as some human warmth amidst the coldness of her days.
It wouldn't last.
It turns out that the unit she lived in would be ambushed, even amidst the harsh winter conditions, by moonmen that somehow were buried under the earth. The ensuing battle was in truth a slaughter and once more all that was left of Yuuna was to survive alone. After this tragic outcome Yuuna traveled back to Japan on a relief ship and up to this day she spends her time traversing the countryside and salvaging whatever can be (canned food, bottled water, medicine, batteries, once in a while small luxuries like candies, books and toys) of villages that have been ruined and bringing it to those who would have better use for such supplies without asking anything in return.
There's about no one in Zone 2's countryside that doesn't know of the Saint of Winter's fame, her generosity and her cold, seemingly broken heart incapable of forming deep bonds with anything other than the music she came to love so much.
Personality:
Yuuna is cold as the winter and snow she takes after, isolating herself behind a barrier of music and rarely ever letting anyone pierce through it. In her travels, after all the losses she suffered, Yuuna gained a deep appreciation of music (the only solace left for her) and almost never she is seen without a music player and headphones. Whoever this cold exterior is a cask needed to keep her powers under control, in truth Yuuna does long for closeness with others, but in opening herself she could bring disaster.
Best summed in the opinion of most who have met her on the countryside, "The Saint of Winter's smile, is beautiful, but painfully sad to gaze at, almost as if she was shedding all her warmth for you and keeping none to herself.
Best summed in the opinion of most who have met her on the countryside, "The Saint of Winter's smile, is beautiful, but painfully sad to gaze at, almost as if she was shedding all her warmth for you and keeping none to herself.
Type:
Speed.
Special Ability:
Yuuna is simply put, walking entropy, a heat sinkhole that steals the energy of the molecules around her, giving the impression that she has freezing powers, when actually what she does is redirect heat from a place to other to, well... freeze things. All that stolen energy can't simply disappear, for one can't simply break the ironclad laws of thermodynamics, so all energy that Yuuna steals ends up being shed deeply to the ground bellow her and to the sky high above by a strong convection force.
That said, Yuuna doesn't have complete control over her powers, and some of it "bleeds out" causing a constant drop in the temperature around her that's too faint to notice at first, unless the place has a complete still atmosphere, but soon enough it piles up and if Yuuna remains in the same place for too long winter will always come. The more unstable her emotional state the more powerful is this uncontrollable effect. Other consequences of a total loss of control might exist, but since Yuuna never has undergone them, there's no way to know what will happen.
As a side effect whenever Yuuna moves away from a frozen zone, life tries o bloom again, just like the Spring that comes after a hard, long Winter.
That said, Yuuna doesn't have complete control over her powers, and some of it "bleeds out" causing a constant drop in the temperature around her that's too faint to notice at first, unless the place has a complete still atmosphere, but soon enough it piles up and if Yuuna remains in the same place for too long winter will always come. The more unstable her emotional state the more powerful is this uncontrollable effect. Other consequences of a total loss of control might exist, but since Yuuna never has undergone them, there's no way to know what will happen.
As a side effect whenever Yuuna moves away from a frozen zone, life tries o bloom again, just like the Spring that comes after a hard, long Winter.
Skillset:
Aside from her martial arts, Yuuna also is proficient in Russian and can read Cyrillic, has a decent training from the soldiers she lived with, becoming an expert at old Soviet tactics and weaponry. She's specially proficient in sniping, to say the truth.
Equipment:
An SVD Dragunov sniper rifle and spare ammo that she uses primary for hunting the few edible game that still survives in the open world, Survival kits and items she carries from place to place, magnesium lighters to endure the conditions around her. And, if it can be counted as such, Grisha, a wolf hound that belonged to the soldiers she lived with and that somehow became very attached to Yuuna after both of their losses.
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Alright, I'm actually home now, so I don't have fifty five things bombarding me at once. So time to do some damage control.
@Dead Cruiser
When I said rare, I meant rare to the degrees of it's a statistical anomalies and they have no idea why. Of all limiters about 99.6 percent of them will be female about .4 percent of them will be male. In a world's whose human population is less than half of what it was twenty years ago at modern levels and then take the percentage of that from children twenty years or younger (which once again is going to be small, not a lot of people are concerned about the whole making babies thing or heck having children in the state of the world it currently is) that number is getting smaller and smaller. That being said some will exist. Meaning that I will probably accept one to two of the male gender to represent this disparity. With an acceptance pool this small, those are going to be reviewed and accepted on a much stricter and more harsher level than those of the female persuasion. There will be your Tuxedo Masks in the ranks but they will be small and limited if you know what I mean.
@LostDestiny
No need to apologize and I understand. I just stated that not really towards you but to everyone in general to avoid as much confusion then we already have had. lol Sorry if I come off as abrasive or anything, just tell me and I'll tone it down a little bit.
To everyone:
And on that note, fair warning I can be mean sometimes but that is only because I care. So I'll start reviewing CSs soon. Hopefully we won't run into any issues!
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Alright, that's basically in line with what I was expecting. I can try and draft up a male character if you're not opposed to it.
Quick question though: is the combination of telepathy and psychokinesis acceptable to get the point of a generally "psychic" character, or should I stick with either-or.
Also: given that our characters are mutated by exposure to alien biomatter, would other deformities (in this case, strange hair/eye colors) be believable? I may want to draw up some connection between my character and the Moonmen, specifically him having the "mind of a monster," based on this same logic.
Quick question though: is the combination of telepathy and psychokinesis acceptable to get the point of a generally "psychic" character, or should I stick with either-or.
Also: given that our characters are mutated by exposure to alien biomatter, would other deformities (in this case, strange hair/eye colors) be believable? I may want to draw up some connection between my character and the Moonmen, specifically him having the "mind of a monster," based on this same logic.
KoL Knight of Lorelei
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For those which it may interest, here's a subbed (and moefied) version of the song on Yuuna's CS:
@Hexaflexagon
Any news yet on those reviews. If possible I'd like to fix anything if needed (considering that Yuuna is a legacy character) to while I have some free time, which is exceedingly rare these days.
@Hexaflexagon
Any news yet on those reviews. If possible I'd like to fix anything if needed (considering that Yuuna is a legacy character) to while I have some free time, which is exceedingly rare these days.
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Alright without further delay it is now time for the Reviews!
@DontCallMeZelda
Looks pretty good. I really just want you to clean it up a little it up a little bit. Like the stuff in gray like Everyone has a history. I want a good idea of where they are coming from and where they are going are in erase those words and within the boundaries of that [indent][color=7d7d7d] ~~~~ [/color][/indent] In that space marked by the ~~~ You would place your information so that it becomes formatted properly. Once you do that I don't see any other problems of major concern.
@Fabricant451
Everything looks good on my end. Hmm never really thought about what would happen in Korea but it makes sense that I would fall relativity earlier since it's still attached to the mainland and thus experienced the full brunt of the assault. Anyway accepted!
@LostDestiny
It's a good start but I'm going to ask you to flesh it out just a little bit more. I'm going to ask that you add some more to the history and the personality sections give em a little bit more life to them look at some of the others that were accepted if you want a better idea of what I'm aiming for. I want to have a good idea of your character what makes them the person they are, and how their history has shaped them into what they are today. Beside that everything else is pretty okay, and I would probably classify her as Speed type as the teleportation sort of lends itself to that. Anyway once you flesh her out a bit more I'll look her over again and hopefully all will be well!
@Nerevarine
You know I really like the idea, I've read about the Dekasegi before but never actually seen anyone do anything with them before. Anyway everything looks good on this side of things Accepted!
@TheWindel
The only real problem I see is that she has well two abilities instead of one. Her counter act and the black sand. You either will have to cut one of them or figure out a nifty way of tying them together. Maybe like the sand sort of acts like a shield that when they hit it strikes back at them and if she wants she can expand it forward to do it's all devouring thing or something else or if you just want to cut one out. Whatever really suits your boat. Once you figure that little thing out all shall be well!
@KoL
Actually everything looks pretty good on my end! I like how her ice powers are different form the standard far in that you know it's terrible for everyone including her! I think that fits well with the general overall theme of suckiness that this is probably going to fall into. Just a quick question to clarify for me and then we will all be good. Where the Russian's a military detachment in Japan at the time or did she somehow cross the East China Sea? Just wondering for clarification purposes. Once you answer that all should be good!
@Dead Cruiser
Nope I don't oppose it just expect me to be a little bit more harsh in the reviewing process most likely. Just because of the rarity factor, I want to see a really good CS lol.
I would go with either or in terms of telepathy and psychokinesis. Powers are typically one thing so you can have psychokinesis but have layers within that psychokinesis as you can do more things with it and get more better trained with it. But I would considered telepathy and psychokinesis to be two different powers instead of under one banner if you catch my drift.
And yeah strange hair and eye colors could certainly be a thing.
@DontCallMeZelda
Looks pretty good. I really just want you to clean it up a little it up a little bit. Like the stuff in gray like Everyone has a history. I want a good idea of where they are coming from and where they are going are in erase those words and within the boundaries of that [indent][color=7d7d7d] ~~~~ [/color][/indent] In that space marked by the ~~~ You would place your information so that it becomes formatted properly. Once you do that I don't see any other problems of major concern.
Your Biography/Background section will now look something like this, which looks much neater.
Born in a small town in Zone 2, Jyne spent most of her early childhood wasting the days away with her lovable dog, Cho. Jyne and Cho were inseparable. Jyne did not know the full story of why she was given her best friend but as a small child she did not object to this. But, when Jyne was born, her mother actually passed away in childbirth due to other complications than her health. Her father raised Jyne and spent every day looking in her eyes and only seeing his wife. Due to this, her father never remarried and thus she had no siblings. In order to help her cope with this preemptively, her father bought Jyne the runt of a German shepherd litter and the two instantly became best friends. Her father homeschooled Jyne as he did not want her to leave his sight. However, the Moonmen would prove to complicate that. Or so she thought it was the Moonmen.
When Jyne was about 9 something attacked her town. The result was not pretty as most would have guessed. Her father got her to an safe zone but ended up getting himself killed in trying to save her. As a child, she was able to understand death as she watched her life shatter before her eyes. When she was extracted, she and her dog Cho were put in foster care. It was only then that things would prove to get complicated for her. Her body started to change and her powers started to show in great force. Due to her unstable powers, her faithful and lovable best friend Cho was taken from her. Cho was put down in front of her tear filled eyes as the parents believed her dog to be some kind of catalyst for the strange powers. She proved to be too unstable for her first foster family and they put her back up for adoption.
A second family took her in when she was about 14 and they proved to not want to handle her powers either. This family sent her to get tests and screenings as the people were afraid she was some kind of monster or a proxy of some kind. She tested negative for any kind of monster likeness but she did test positive for something else... Everyone has a history. I want a good idea of where they are coming from and where they are going.
@Fabricant451
Everything looks good on my end. Hmm never really thought about what would happen in Korea but it makes sense that I would fall relativity earlier since it's still attached to the mainland and thus experienced the full brunt of the assault. Anyway accepted!
@LostDestiny
It's a good start but I'm going to ask you to flesh it out just a little bit more. I'm going to ask that you add some more to the history and the personality sections give em a little bit more life to them look at some of the others that were accepted if you want a better idea of what I'm aiming for. I want to have a good idea of your character what makes them the person they are, and how their history has shaped them into what they are today. Beside that everything else is pretty okay, and I would probably classify her as Speed type as the teleportation sort of lends itself to that. Anyway once you flesh her out a bit more I'll look her over again and hopefully all will be well!
@Nerevarine
You know I really like the idea, I've read about the Dekasegi before but never actually seen anyone do anything with them before. Anyway everything looks good on this side of things Accepted!
@TheWindel
The only real problem I see is that she has well two abilities instead of one. Her counter act and the black sand. You either will have to cut one of them or figure out a nifty way of tying them together. Maybe like the sand sort of acts like a shield that when they hit it strikes back at them and if she wants she can expand it forward to do it's all devouring thing or something else or if you just want to cut one out. Whatever really suits your boat. Once you figure that little thing out all shall be well!
@KoL
Actually everything looks pretty good on my end! I like how her ice powers are different form the standard far in that you know it's terrible for everyone including her! I think that fits well with the general overall theme of suckiness that this is probably going to fall into. Just a quick question to clarify for me and then we will all be good. Where the Russian's a military detachment in Japan at the time or did she somehow cross the East China Sea? Just wondering for clarification purposes. Once you answer that all should be good!
@Dead Cruiser
Nope I don't oppose it just expect me to be a little bit more harsh in the reviewing process most likely. Just because of the rarity factor, I want to see a really good CS lol.
I would go with either or in terms of telepathy and psychokinesis. Powers are typically one thing so you can have psychokinesis but have layers within that psychokinesis as you can do more things with it and get more better trained with it. But I would considered telepathy and psychokinesis to be two different powers instead of under one banner if you catch my drift.
And yeah strange hair and eye colors could certainly be a thing.
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@Hexaflexagon
Hmm. The reason she has two abilities is because of your earlier statement concerning the drawbacks to the powers. Therefor, twice the power, the worse the drawback. In any case, I'm just going to get rid of the counterattacking and keep the black sand bit in since it fits better with the consequences Reika will go through.
Hmm. The reason she has two abilities is because of your earlier statement concerning the drawbacks to the powers. Therefor, twice the power, the worse the drawback. In any case, I'm just going to get rid of the counterattacking and keep the black sand bit in since it fits better with the consequences Reika will go through.
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@TheWindel
Ah all right! Anyway if you are just going to just keep the sand then everything else is good accepted!
Ah all right! Anyway if you are just going to just keep the sand then everything else is good accepted!
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@KoL
Actually everything looks pretty good on my end! I like how her ice powers are different form the standard far in that you know it's terrible for everyone including her! I think that fits well with the general overall theme of suckiness that this is probably going to fall into. Just a quick question to clarify for me and then we will all be good. Where the Russian's a military detachment in Japan at the time or did she somehow cross the East China Sea? Just wondering for clarification purposes. Once you answer that all should be good!
Thank you, Yuuna is a legacy character from a Madoka Magica RP, which is probably why she fits so well. In fact, the full scale of her misery can't be appreciated without the irony of the wish system. Anyway, enough rambling, if the issues that you had were only those, I've already fixed them (along with the typos from my hasty typing/as well as added some extra clarifications) and posted her already. I hope she's of your liking now.
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Took a while, but here is my CS.
It is a bit different, but I hope it is accepted.
I don't mind redoing it if I have to.
Name: Senri Nazumi
Age: 16 | Height: 168cm | Blood: AB
It is a bit different, but I hope it is accepted.
I don't mind redoing it if I have to.
Name: Senri Nazumi
Age: 16 | Height: 168cm | Blood: AB
Physical Description:
Nazumi is actually shorter than 168cm. But that is because of her "circumstances". Her skin and hair are fair, and smooth. At "full" height, she weighs over 200 kg, but normally, she weighs about 45 kg. If you pay attention, you can see scarring tissue around the limbs. She has no fashion sense, so she normally wears whatever is provided to her, given that she can freely move in it. Sometimes it looks like there are sparks coming out from her.
Biography/background:
The Senri's were a fairly well off family, with quite the influence in Japan. Nazumi was the only child of the family. She loved to learn and read, and was an honest child who loved playing around. Her life was mostly peaceful at first. However, as the "moonmen" attacks became more prominent and more alerting, she was unaware of what dangers it entailed.
It all changed so suddenly, as one day, a moonman destroyed her house, her family, almost everything. It looked like a pile of bones with rotting flesh oozing from the bones, with a shape that resembled a head/face of an alligator and a body resembling a spider. The stench, the sight, the feel, the noise, it was horrifying. Everything being swallowed, liquefying. It approached, melting away her legs, eating away her arms. Fear enveloped and she blacked out. At first she was sure she had died, but by what she thought was a stroke of luck, she had survived. The true reason she survived though, she found out years later.
Being found, without any limbs, an ambulance had taken her to the hospital. She finally realised the fear of the moonmen, the terror they caused and their strength. Weeks later, she had been given prosthetic limbs. Without any direct-family left, people were concerned about what to do with her, they also wondered how she had survived. However, she still lived, being rehabilitated with her new limbs. She was glad that she could walk again, and cherished it, learning to cherish every moment possible.
As her rehabilitation finished, she ended up living with her uncle. Technically he was a family friend, a close friend of her father. Nonetheless, she lived with her uncle, in the terror of the moonmen. She continued her somewhat ordinary life, with her new limbs. Until one day, she could start to see currents. It was odd. She didn't understand why she could see them.
As time continued, the circuits in her artificial limbs ended up frying. The doctors were confused. The damage suggested that there was an electric surge sent into the limbs. They couldn't figure out what was happening. As Nazumi got older, however, she realised, it was her ability, this was what had saved her that night. With new prosthetic limbs from the hospital, she sought out to make her own. She read up on how to make artificial limbs, weapon systems and many more. Eventually, she was able to make her own custom limbs.
About a year after that, the Coalition came about and news about the children known as "Limiters" came into existence. She knew what she was, and left her uncle's place, being tested and confirmed to be a "Limiter".
It all changed so suddenly, as one day, a moonman destroyed her house, her family, almost everything. It looked like a pile of bones with rotting flesh oozing from the bones, with a shape that resembled a head/face of an alligator and a body resembling a spider. The stench, the sight, the feel, the noise, it was horrifying. Everything being swallowed, liquefying. It approached, melting away her legs, eating away her arms. Fear enveloped and she blacked out. At first she was sure she had died, but by what she thought was a stroke of luck, she had survived. The true reason she survived though, she found out years later.
Being found, without any limbs, an ambulance had taken her to the hospital. She finally realised the fear of the moonmen, the terror they caused and their strength. Weeks later, she had been given prosthetic limbs. Without any direct-family left, people were concerned about what to do with her, they also wondered how she had survived. However, she still lived, being rehabilitated with her new limbs. She was glad that she could walk again, and cherished it, learning to cherish every moment possible.
As her rehabilitation finished, she ended up living with her uncle. Technically he was a family friend, a close friend of her father. Nonetheless, she lived with her uncle, in the terror of the moonmen. She continued her somewhat ordinary life, with her new limbs. Until one day, she could start to see currents. It was odd. She didn't understand why she could see them.
As time continued, the circuits in her artificial limbs ended up frying. The doctors were confused. The damage suggested that there was an electric surge sent into the limbs. They couldn't figure out what was happening. As Nazumi got older, however, she realised, it was her ability, this was what had saved her that night. With new prosthetic limbs from the hospital, she sought out to make her own. She read up on how to make artificial limbs, weapon systems and many more. Eventually, she was able to make her own custom limbs.
About a year after that, the Coalition came about and news about the children known as "Limiters" came into existence. She knew what she was, and left her uncle's place, being tested and confirmed to be a "Limiter".
Personality:
Nazumi has a kind heart and appreciates everything. Due to her loss of limbs, she has learned to appreciate every step, every breath and every word. In these dark times, she finds something to be optimistic about. Although not the best, she attempts to give everyone a smile and keep them from feeling good.
This all changes on the battlefield. Having faced the fearsome moonmen as a child, she is aggressive and harsh. Facing it head-on, she doesn't take her usual approach of appreciation. Instead, she only calculates how to destroy her target.
This all changes on the battlefield. Having faced the fearsome moonmen as a child, she is aggressive and harsh. Facing it head-on, she doesn't take her usual approach of appreciation. Instead, she only calculates how to destroy her target.
Type:
Attack
Special Ability:
Nazumi's ability is, in simple terms, controlling electricity. There are several parts to her ability. There is the passive component, which is always active. Her body produces more powerful action potentials than other people. It is not a lot more, but it leads to some consequences. She is also able to see the path of electricity within objects. Since she cannot turn off these abilities, her body is under a constant amount of stress, limiting her from using electricity directly to attack. If she uses electricity from an outside source, it does ease the stress she takes. Her body burns out from the amount of electricity running through it, leading her to possibly be electrocuted from the inside out and charred to ash.
This ability is often used to power her limbs and armaments. She has put in a lot of hours to create and calculate her limbs and armaments for fighting for long periods. She avoids using her armaments in quick succession, as that burns her out.
This ability is often used to power her limbs and armaments. She has put in a lot of hours to create and calculate her limbs and armaments for fighting for long periods. She avoids using her armaments in quick succession, as that burns her out.
Skillset:
Besides being a great mechanic and engineer, due to her circumstances, Nazumi is well read and has learned how to cook. She has also learned a bit of the way of the sword, but has yet to master.
Equipment:
Her equipment include her limbs, which can be changed over for different armaments and abilities. Her armaments include lasers, railguns, vision enhancement equipment (cameras, infrared, etc.) and an plasma shield. She also uses a set of katanas.
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Leeloo "Ladybug" Mari
11 years old| 4'2"| O Negative
Leeloo "Ladybug" Mari
11 years old| 4'2"| O Negative
Physical Description:
This four foot firecracker is a pale-skinned runt with big brown eyes and purple hair. Her fashion style is crudely tomboyish. She prefers comfortable sneakers and loose articles of street wear over sundresses, pretty shoes, and lip gloss. Whatever she has on is almost always stained with pastels or dried up streaks of clay and aerosol paint.
Biography/background:
Dear Penpal,
This is going to be my only letter to you. My name is Leeloo Mari. My parents named me after an alien from some old science fiction movie. Can you guess the name? I have my mother's hair and my father's eyes. I am 10 and a half years old. I was born and raised in Zone 2: Konan, Shiga Prefecture, Japan. My mother is a nurse at Tokai Central Hospital. My father works at the Kakamigahara Munitions Factory. He manufactures weapons and ammunition for the army. I wonder sometimes if any of the guns or bullets he made were used by my sister, Ruby. Dad likes to think so. It's why he works so hard - not just for my sister's sake, but for 'all of the other kids out there making their parents worried sick.'
We don't hear much from her, but she messages us whenever she can. The last time she came home was about a year ago. She only stayed for a week before the army shipped her back out. I miss her a lot. I have two younger brothers. Vito is 8 and Fog just turned 6. Oh yeah, I guess all of my siblings were named after characters from that movie too. Did you guess the name yet? You probably don't know it. It's pretty old.
I bet you think our family is weird. You probably think I'm weird. If you do, well... you don't know the half of it. I have moonmen powers and you'll never guess what kind.
Give up?
It's hard to explain. Let's just say my art literally has a life of its own. My parents found out about my powers when I was Fog's age. Dad wanted nothing to do with it. He even tried to stop me, but Mom was different. She was a painter before the government forced her to work at the hospital. She saw my strange talent as a 'gift, wrapped in a gift', and encouraged me to let my imagination run wild. So I practiced in her old art studio in the abandoned mall district. I got good, real good. And then I kinda got carried away.
I started making street art around town for scare pranks. It was fun until I scared the wrong people. One thing lead to another, and before you know it, I was in BIG trouble with the police. My parents had to explain to the deputy how their daughter made a three headed dragon with a snowman's body come to life and wreak havoc. The deputy didn't believe them (Do you blame him?) until I drew a portrait of his ugly face on my prison wall. I made it jump out at him, demolishing the wall and part of the police department's infrastructure along with it. I shouldn't have done that. That's why this is the only letter you'll get from me. I have to go away now. The Coalition wants to use me like Ruby - for the war against the Moonmen. Hey, maybe you have Moonmen powers too and I might see you. If not, take care and don't get murdered out there.
LM
P.S.: You can write back to my brother Vito if you want. He always wanted to know what kids from other zones are like. Just make sure you use small words because he has a small baby 8 year old dumb brain.
This is going to be my only letter to you. My name is Leeloo Mari. My parents named me after an alien from some old science fiction movie. Can you guess the name? I have my mother's hair and my father's eyes. I am 10 and a half years old. I was born and raised in Zone 2: Konan, Shiga Prefecture, Japan. My mother is a nurse at Tokai Central Hospital. My father works at the Kakamigahara Munitions Factory. He manufactures weapons and ammunition for the army. I wonder sometimes if any of the guns or bullets he made were used by my sister, Ruby. Dad likes to think so. It's why he works so hard - not just for my sister's sake, but for 'all of the other kids out there making their parents worried sick.'
We don't hear much from her, but she messages us whenever she can. The last time she came home was about a year ago. She only stayed for a week before the army shipped her back out. I miss her a lot. I have two younger brothers. Vito is 8 and Fog just turned 6. Oh yeah, I guess all of my siblings were named after characters from that movie too. Did you guess the name yet? You probably don't know it. It's pretty old.
I bet you think our family is weird. You probably think I'm weird. If you do, well... you don't know the half of it. I have moonmen powers and you'll never guess what kind.
Give up?
It's hard to explain. Let's just say my art literally has a life of its own. My parents found out about my powers when I was Fog's age. Dad wanted nothing to do with it. He even tried to stop me, but Mom was different. She was a painter before the government forced her to work at the hospital. She saw my strange talent as a 'gift, wrapped in a gift', and encouraged me to let my imagination run wild. So I practiced in her old art studio in the abandoned mall district. I got good, real good. And then I kinda got carried away.
I started making street art around town for scare pranks. It was fun until I scared the wrong people. One thing lead to another, and before you know it, I was in BIG trouble with the police. My parents had to explain to the deputy how their daughter made a three headed dragon with a snowman's body come to life and wreak havoc. The deputy didn't believe them (Do you blame him?) until I drew a portrait of his ugly face on my prison wall. I made it jump out at him, demolishing the wall and part of the police department's infrastructure along with it. I shouldn't have done that. That's why this is the only letter you'll get from me. I have to go away now. The Coalition wants to use me like Ruby - for the war against the Moonmen. Hey, maybe you have Moonmen powers too and I might see you. If not, take care and don't get murdered out there.
LM
P.S.: You can write back to my brother Vito if you want. He always wanted to know what kids from other zones are like. Just make sure you use small words because he has a small baby 8 year old dumb brain.
Personality:
Leeloo is unusually mature for her age, which is often juxtaposed by her rebellious, non-filtered brashness. In fact she's quite the prankster, but her handiwork is never aimed at anyone that didn't deserve it. Most of the time. She possesses a certain confidence in her identity and is fairly secure for a 11 year old. At times it almost appears as though the weight of this grim world has no bearing on her, and it is often mistaken for naivete of a child menace.
Type:
Support
Special Ability:
Leeloo has the ability to create any sort of object, being, or power exclusively through art. Whether it's by sculpting, carving, painting, sketching, or origami, she is limited only by her imagination. Projects that require time and effort are more stable manifestations. Quick sketches or hastily formed mediums are often erratic with short life spans. She can use most surfaces for a canvas. Whatever the composition the canvas is (metal, wood, brick, paper, dirt, air, etc.) becomes the subject's overall framework. The structural integrity depends on her willpower and focus to maintain it as such. This is a very taxing ability when manipulating large/abstract constructs on the fly, and things of such magnitude don't often come to life as anticipated.
Skillset:
She really doesn't do much aside from art, but she is a jack-of-all-trades. Her favorite medium is sketch/graffiti illustration and clay sculpting.
Equipment:
A satchel full of various art supplies ranging from aerosol paint cans and markers, to stacks of sketchbooks and blocks of clay. She also keeps a gas mask handy for when she does graffiti. It helps protect her respiratory system from the solvent paint she uses. Her signature red ball cap actually belongs to Ruby. She gave it to Leelo as a parting gift before she left for the military. Leeloo is rarely seen without it.
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